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[FanFiction] The Four.
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Hello everyone, and welcome to my next fanfiction, this one may seem a bit weird, but I guarantee you it'll be better than my previous FanFiction, "Who To Choose?" So read the summary, and tell me what you think! Then read chapter one! Now! Thanks, and don't forget-REVIEW! Thanks! ^_^

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Hinamori Amu is a 16-year old girl. She attends Seiyo accademy. But- she has a secret. She's actually the princess of ice with magical powers. Later on, a new student enters the class, with the name of Tsukiyomi Ikuto. His seat is seated next to Amu in every class, and they do not get along. Later, Amu is kidnapped and brought to a secret room. A professor under the name of Genkai, knows about them. Thats right, theres 3 other people that have powers, and abilities to transform-just like Amu. Genkai talks to them all on a T.V- there all in different rooms. Genkai then informs them that she knows about their powers, and that she got permission from everyones parents to work with them, and form a group to protect the citizens. They all then come into the center of the building and meet each other. Amu, then sees Ikuto as one of the people, that are like her. The other 3 people, are boys. They all are supose to share a huge dorm together, and in that dorm, there are 2 rooms. So Genkai assigns 2 people to a room. Amu and Ikuto get paired up together, and theres only one bed in each room. Which means they have to share- a bed. Now, what will happen as they all live together? What will happen between Amu and Ikuto? Who will find out about their secret? Continue reading to all find out!~
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Wow its kinda of random but its iteresting at the same time XD hope to see the first chapter~
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wow it is random!!! xDD lalw but its cool. x)
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Chapter 1- The New Kid

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Gafoogleshankerz wrote:
Wow its kinda of random but its iteresting at the same time XD hope to see the first chapter~


Ok, well its out! Thank you!
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Its pretty good,and I cant find any grammar and puncuation mistakes XD im a grammar nazi lolz
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awesome!
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please.write.more!!!!!
or else......
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The first chapter was okay, but Ikuto-kun seemed like a massive jerk...
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emo527 wrote:

The first chapter was okay, but Ikuto-kun seemed like a massive jerk...


Thanks so much for your review and comment.
And yeah, don't worry though about Ikuto! *WinkWink*
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I like it! Please write more!
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paigegotkisses wrote:

Chapter 1- The New Kid



NICE STARTING!^^ *hug*
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wow ! nice chapter! update soon!
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Wow! Your 1st was good-But this is better!
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RAWRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!
IF YOU DONT WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER, YOU WILL BECOME MINCED MEAT!!
-wields a chopper in hand-
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