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[FanFiction] The Four.
Posted 1/21/09
This...This...Sigh, a title my sister recommended for my for my new story...sigh...
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This...This...Sigh, a title my sister recommended for my for my new story...sigh...


Thanks everyone!
Wow...thats weird...what was your story going to be about??
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Posted 1/21/09

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The first chapter was okay, but Ikuto-kun seemed like a massive jerk...


Thanks so much for your review and comment.
And yeah, don't worry though about Ikuto! *WinkWink*


lol, okey dokes.
P.S. I also really like your descriptions and the plot line is really good. (I only said the first chapter was "okay" because I'm not a big fan of the beginning of stories because things normally start out slow. I get more into the story as it enters the middle and end)
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Posted 1/21/09 , edited 1/21/09

emo527 wrote:


paigegotkisses wrote:


emo527 wrote:

The first chapter was okay, but Ikuto-kun seemed like a massive jerk...


Thanks so much for your review and comment.
And yeah, don't worry though about Ikuto! *WinkWink*


lol, okey dokes.
P.S. I also really like your descriptions and the plot line is really good. (I only said the first chapter was "okay" because I'm not a big fan of the beginning of stories because things normally start out slow. I get more into the story as it enters the middle and end)



Oh, thanks alot! I apperciate your opinion!

OH, AND EVERYONE, CHAPTER 2 IS UP!
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Posted 1/21/09 , edited 1/22/09
Chapter 2- New

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Posted 1/22/09
Nice chapter! Update Soon!
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new story? nice.
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Posted 1/22/09
wow thats nice, i can't wait for ur next chapter:)
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Posted 1/22/09
pfft....pfft....pshessh...p-pfft...
I c-cant...h-hold...it a-any longerr!!!!!!
buahahahahahahhahahahhahahahhahahaha!!
-starts laughing madly-
amu and ikuto sharing a room?!
hehehehe...
its gonna get dramatic...
and evil.....
-grins evilly-
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Posted 1/22/09

paigegotkisses wrote:

Chapter 2- New



hahah NICE CHAP! *hug*
Posted 1/22/09

paigegotkisses wrote:


hotarusim989 wrote:

This...This...Sigh, a title my sister recommended for my for my new story...sigh...


Thanks everyone!
Wow...thats weird...what was your story going to be about??


Same as yours. For the elements I don't know. Ice, Thunder, Earth, fire. -weak smile-
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Posted 1/22/09

hotarusim989 wrote:


paigegotkisses wrote:


hotarusim989 wrote:

This...This...Sigh, a title my sister recommended for my for my new story...sigh...


Thanks everyone!
Wow...thats weird...what was your story going to be about??


Same as yours. For the elements I don't know. Ice, Thunder, Earth, fire. -weak smile-


Ok...now thats creepy.
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Posted 1/22/09 , edited 1/23/09

itchypeachy wrote:

pfft....pfft....pshessh...p-pfft...
I c-cant...h-hold...it a-any longerr!!!!!!
buahahahahahahhahahahhahahahhahahaha!!
-starts laughing madly-
amu and ikuto sharing a room?!
hehehehe...
its gonna get dramatic...
and evil.....
-grins evilly-


xD Lmao. Thanks, I know.
~_^
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Posted 1/22/09
ahhahaha!
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Posted 1/22/09 , edited 1/22/09

paigegotkisses wrote:


emo527 wrote:

The first chapter was okay, but Ikuto-kun seemed like a massive jerk...


Thanks so much for your review and comment.
And yeah, don't worry though about Ikuto! *WinkWink*


if u say not to worry about ikuto, i guess won't i'll just wait and see
hahaha this is great sharing not only a room but a bed haha haha i luv it!!! keep writting more!
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