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Posted 1/22/09 , edited 2/12/10

Revenge Profiles

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Description: Your all for revenge. Your living for vengeance. Explain the purpose of your vengeance. Why are you after it? What happened to your past?
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Posted 1/22/09 , edited 4/24/09
OOHHHHH I WANT NUMBER FOOUUURRRR-nya!!!
Kitty .^^.

Okays...



Her name is Chloe. She's 5 years old (I'll explain in a bit; she DOES look like the picture, that age and all). She wants vengeance because her litter was killed by a cruel man. Well, I should explain a little more than that I guess... She used to be a new born kitten, and she had three sisters and a brother. Her brother had been the runt of the litter. Unfortunately, their mother died when they were all a month old. She'd been hit by a car...

And so they were left to fend for themselves. On the second day, they were all mewing with hunger, stumbling around, searching for the sweet scent of their mother's milk. And a man had seen them, all alone save for having each other. He'd had a grim smile on his face, and then grinned evilly. One by one, he'd picked up her siblings, and either choked them, drowned them, or simply snapped their fragile necks. And he'd saved her little brother, Max, for last. Mewing frightfully, Chloe had run away from the man, hiding under a car to get away. He'd eventually gone away, but she would never forget that man with bleach-blond hair and icy blue eyes. The man with a scar in the shape of a heart over his left eye.

And then after another day, she was starved and lonely, mewing mournfully for her mother and her brother and sisters. Her heart full of darkness, she did not die; instead, she became a demon. With ears, tail and senses of a cat, and the powers of a demon, she took up sword and set out after the man with a heart shaped scar. It has been five years since then, and she has learned much, but she hasn't found that wretched man... yet.


EDIT:: OMG... I was rereading this, and the song that came on was My Immortal by Evanescence T^T the music was on shuffle, too O.o Man, listening to that and reading this... just made meh saaaddd T^T
Posted 1/22/09
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oh woww~
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yea i know watchu mean wen i read meh stories they sound wayyy better wit songs as i read.
OHH IMA TRY LISTENIN TO MY IMMORTAL N READIN...hmm idk wut yet. =P
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((Koko-chan, if you want me to put it in a spoiler just say so ^^))

Okay!

Her name is Aimi. She is 16 years old. When she was little, Aimi was trained by her father to be a ninja, just like the rest of her family members. But one day he warned her that there were clans that hated their clan, the Karamiza clan, and that Aimi be careful in who her friends were. She nodded her head and agreed. Her father smiled and resumed her sword training.

When Aimi was 15, her father sent her to pick up a sword that had been newly forged for him. As she walked through the town with the newly made sword, she was admiring its beautiful engravings and bumped into a young man, about 16 years of age. He was wearing similar clothing and had bright orange hair. Aimi apologized for bumping into him. He caught a glimpse of the sword as Aimi sheathed it. "No problem," he said cooly. "Do you mind if I walk you home, it was my fault too you know." Aimi blushed as he took her hand and began walking. But then she was reminded of her fathers words of who she befriended. Drawing closer to her house Aimi let go of the man's hand and said, "Thanks, but this is as far as we can go." The man looked to where her house could be and looked back to her, "Okay," he said politely, "It was nice meeting you." As he walked away, he yelled out coldly, "and thanks." Aimi didn't know what he meant and paid no attention. Her father welcomed her at home and asked her if she talked to anyone in the town. Aimi described the young man and her father remained silent. "Why don't you go to the forest tonight to build your endurance," he suggested. Aimi never argued with her father, so that night she said goodbye and left. He watched her leaved and murmured, "You'll be safe their."

Around one in the morning, Aimi saw smoke and a bright light. She ran back to her house to see that it was burning and other ninjas were ambushing her clan. Aimi reached for her weapon but was stopped when throwing knives hit her arms. She looked up and saw the man with orange hair. "Why?" She said pulling the knives out. He grinned viciously and pointed at her house, "So I could find where you lived and kill off you and your clan. They are much too strong and need to be eliminated. Now my clan will be the superiors." Aimi ran to attack him. He man pulled out more throwing knives and hit her with all of them. Aimi fell to the ground and blacked out. When she woke up, feeling weak, and pulled out the knives, "I hate these things." She stood up and looked for her father. "Papa?" She yelled. Everyone around her was dead; people from both her clan and the orange haired mans clan. Finally she reached her house. The walls were covered in blood. There were many of the enemies men dead in various rooms. When Aimi reached her fathers room she saw him sitting in a corner. "Papa!" She yelled running to him. "Ai...mi...." he said smiling. "Are you okay?" "I'm fine," he said petting her head. Her father explained to her that the young man that she met was the son of the leader in the Hariolin clan, the clan who was just under theirs. Ever since he was born the son of the Hariolin clan wanted to have the strongest and most dominant in the country, but the Karamiza clan stood in their way. So by seeing her fathers sword the young man knew what clan Aimi was part of and find their location by deceiving her. Her fathers breathing became heavy. Tears ran down Aimi's face as her father said to her, "Be safe and be strong, always." Aimi cried out in grief as her father died, leaving her alone. That day Aimi gathered a few belongings and two short blades which she uses for battle. Before she left home, Aimi took her fathers sword; she vowed to kill the young man with orange hair with it sword and rebuild the Karamiza clan.

((Hehehe this is really long sorry ^^'))
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[I WANT NUMBER 3<3 :] this is just gonna be in 1st person~ cuz i can think more :]] XD]

Hello, name's Aka [Ah-kah] Cherri. Desu, that wasn't my real name, but with the people I've seen and killed, I have the right to be called that. How I became like this? I'll tell you the story.

"She's beautiful dear." My mother said, placed her finger on my palm. "Yes she is." My father agreed, smiling, leaning against my mother. I smiled cheerily as I grasped onto my mother's finger. "But we need to get out of here once they find out.." My brother, Daiko said, sighing a bit. "I know, Daiko. We'll be out of here, before then." My mother reassured with a smile. That was the last of their smiles and their sweet voices into my ears.

"DAIKO-ONII!" I cried as he smirked, and left, leaving the murderer coming closer to me. "Daiko-onii's...a liar?" I whispered, as I felt strong hands on my neck, choking me. "GET OFF ME!" I screamed, as I bit he's hand, landing on the ground gracefully. My eyes shaking from a blue color into a hazel color. "Daiko-onii...lied..." I whispered, as I ran and grabbed my mom's spear. "Die." I whispered, as I charged at the murderer, killing him right there. Blood splattered everywhere, as I stood there, a smile placed on my face. I suddenly felt handcuffs onto my arms as I ws held tightly onto my back. I only smirked as they threw me into the back of the police car. "Idiots." I said, looking at them, my hands breaking out of the handcuffs imediantly, and broke the car's door. "See yah, losers!" I shouted, giving them a salute bye, and ran off, disappearing. That was the day I never really thought of happening. I never thought I'd be a criminal that kills people. My job now, was to find my brother, and kill him. That was the only reason I ever became like this. But there's something I've wanted to know. "What will happen after I kill him?"

My story may seem a bit terrifing, or a bit strange. But It's the truth, all these years I've been alive and escaped death, I have always had a hated feeling in my heart. "I hate you..."

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Posted 1/23/09

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((Koko-chan, if you want me to put it in a spoiler just say so ^^))

Okay!

Her name is Aimi. She is 16 years old. When she was little, Aimi was trained by her father to be a ninja, just like the rest of her family members. But one day he warned her that their were clans that hated their clan, the Karamiza clan, and that Aimi be careful in who her friends were. She nodded her head and agreed. Her father smiled and resumed her sword training.

When Aimi was 15, her father sent her to pick up a sword that had been newly forged for him. As she walked through the town with the newly made sword, she was admiring its beautiful engravings and bumped into a young man, about 16 years of age. He was wearing similar clothing and had bright orange hair. Aimi apologized for bumping into him. He caught a glimpse of the sword as Aimi sheathed it. "No problem," he said cooly. "Do you mind if I walk you home, it was my fault too you know." Aimi blushed as he took her hand and began walking. But then she was reminded of her fathers words of who she befriended. Drawing closer to her house Aimi let go of the man's hand and said, "Thanks, but this is as far as we can go." The man looked to where her house could be and looked back to her, "Okay," he said politely, "It was nice meeting you." As he walked away, he yelled out coldly, "and thanks." Aimi didn't know what he meant and paid no attention. Her father welcomed her at home and asked her if she talked to anyone in the town. Aimi described the young man and her father remained silent. "Why don't you go to the forest tonight to build your endurance," he suggested. Aimi never argued with her father, so that night she said goodbye and left. He watched her leaved and murmured, "You'll be safe their."

Around one in the morning, Aimi saw smoke and a bright light. She ran back to her house to see that it was burning and other ninjas were ambushing her clan. Aimi reached for her weapon but was stopped when throwing knives hit her arms. She looked up and saw the man with orange hair. "Why?" She said pulling the knives out. He grinned viciously and pointed at her house, "So I could find where you lived and kill off you and your clan. They are much too strong and need to be eliminated. Now my clan will be the superiors." Aimi ran to attack him. He man pulled out more throwing knives and hit her with all of them. Aimi fell to the ground and blacked out. When she woke up, feeling weak, and pulled out the knives, "I hate these things." She stood up and looked for her father. "Papa?" She yelled. Everyone around her was dead; people from both her clan and the orange haired mans clan. Finally she reached her house. The walls were covered in blood. There were many of the enemies men dead in various rooms. When Aimi reached her fathers room she saw him sitting in a corner. "Papa!" She yelled running to him. "Ai...mi...." he said smiling. "Are you okay?" "I'm fine," he said petting her head. Her father explained to her that the young man that she met was the son of the leader in the Hariolin clan, the clan who was just under theirs. Ever since he was born the son of the Hariolin clan wanted to have the strongest and most dominant in the country, but the Karamiza clan stood in their way. So by seeing her fathers sword the young man knew what clan Aimi was part of and find their location by deceiving her. Her fathers breathing became heavy. Tears ran down Aimi's face as her father said to her, "Be safe and be strong, always." Aimi cried out in grief as her father died, leaving her alone. That day Aimi gathered a few belongings and two short blades which she uses for battle. Before she left home, Aimi took her fathers sword; she vowed to kill the young man with orange hair with it sword and rebuild the Karamiza clan.

((Hehehe this is really long sorry ^^'))




WHOAA ~^^
that sound pretty goood!!
it need to be turned into a STORY not RPG :]
cuz its THATT GOOD >:]
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WHOAA ~^^
that sound pretty goood!!
it need to be turned into a STORY not RPG :]
cuz its THATT GOOD >:]
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Ohhh, I second that!
I hadn't thought about that until just now, but that would be an awesome story, Wolfie-chan

Posted 1/23/09 , edited 2/12/10
[UN CO FOR NEW REVENGE STORY XD...]
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Posted 1/23/09
Ohhh, Kinnie, yours is good .^^.
And Koko-chan, yours is great too!
I can't wait to start this RP =D It'll be fun!!
Posted 1/23/09
yeahhh!!=D
ima jus wait a little more.. :D
so ppls can add their chara n stuff ^^
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Posted 1/23/09
Good idea ^^
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yupp~
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Posted 1/25/09
Very cool Koko-chan! Kinnie, yours is awesome too^^ This is going to be fun!
Posted 1/28/09
tmrw i will start tha..RP I GUESS..
stilll thinkin of ideas n such
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Cool!!! I can't wait for it to start ^^
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