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so bored and feeling lonely
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its not the greatest work but meh who cares its something and im bored

why?

why do i love?
why do i care?
what are these feelings i speak of?
why do i have them it doesn't seem fair,
weither its the peace of the dove,
or the feeling of joy when i touch your hair.

why do i cry?
why do i hurt?
what is it that brings water to my eye?
what is it that makes me feel lower then dirt?
why am i always just that guy,
who cant bring you joy or happiness like earnie and bert?

why do i bleed?
why shouldn't i die?
what is it that you need,
if it is the stars id reach to the sky,
but here i sit without a lead,
just sitting here covered in blood wondering why.

where can i go what can i do?
all i ever think of is you!
i don't know when ill ever feel happy or glad,
since i know my living has only made you mad.
if i should die before i wake,
then all will be happy for a break.......
Posted 1/22/09

aytchmadden wrote:

its not the greatest work but meh who cares its something and im bored

why?

why do i love?
why do i care?
what are these feelings i speak of?
why do i have them it doesn't seem fair,
weither its the peace of the dove,
or the feeling of joy when i touch your hair.

why do i cry?
why do i hurt?
what is it that brings water to my eye?
what is it that makes me feel lower then dirt?
why am i always just that guy,
who cant bring you joy or happiness like earnie and bert?

why do i bleed?
why shouldn't i die?
what is it that you need,
if it is the stars id reach to the sky,
but here i sit without a lead,
just sitting here covered in blood wondering why.

where can i go what can i do?
all i ever think of is you!
i don't know when ill ever feel happy or glad,
since i know my living has only made you mad.
if i should die before i wake,
then all will be happy for a break.......


Let's inflict more pain to you, shall we.

Watch this:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bXxMEvpDWzo&feature=channel_page

Rickroll is so 2008.
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well at least you read it
Posted 1/22/09
So what do you wanted to ask ?? My opinion on the poem ? Or do I feel lonely ? Or what make me feel lonely ???
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Posted 1/22/09
not asking anything. point was im bored and lonely so i wrote a poem and posted it
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Posted 1/22/09
just go make love to her already.
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Posted 1/22/09
there is no "her" its the oppsosite sex in general
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Posted 1/22/09

marysong05 wrote:

So what do you wanted to ask ?? My opinion on the poem ? Or do I feel lonely ? Or what make me feel lonely ???


---------> lol... yeah right..
Posted 1/22/09

aytchmadden wrote:

not asking anything. point was im bored and lonely so i wrote a poem and posted it


Oh , so when you were bore and make this thread , what do you hope people will react ?
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Posted 1/22/09
I predict incoming flames within 24 hours.
Posted 1/22/09 , edited 1/22/09

aytchmadden wrote:

well at least you read it


Still lonely?

How about a dodolook: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mgRpY6r4ewE&feature=channel_page

She's 25.
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Posted 1/22/09
Solution: Go to bed.
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Posted 1/22/09

marysong05 wrote:


aytchmadden wrote:

not asking anything. point was im bored and lonely so i wrote a poem and posted it


Oh , so when you were bore and make this thread , what do you hope people will react ?


i don't hope for anything i was bored so i posted a poem i just wrote... if don't like it then don't like it its in the general section so not like its wrong section sorry its not about a 92 year old having babies which seems to be most popular topic ATM some people just like to share what they do with others no matter if they like it or not. not like if you say you hate it or think its a waste im gonna go cry myself to sleep and never write again. so take from it what you desire
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Posted 1/22/09
No dont do that i like it ^^
Posted 1/22/09

aytchmadden wrote:


marysong05 wrote:


aytchmadden wrote:

not asking anything. point was im bored and lonely so i wrote a poem and posted it


Oh , so when you were bore and make this thread , what do you hope people will react ?


i don't hope for anything i was bored so i posted a poem i just wrote... if don't like it then don't like it its in the general section so not like its wrong section sorry its not about a 92 year old having babies which seems to be most popular topic ATM some people just like to share what they do with others no matter if they like it or not. not like if you say you hate it or think its a waste im gonna go cry myself to sleep and never write again. so take from it what you desire


Good answer , I didn't hate it . Beside : "nice poem" I'm a person enjoyed quotes , books , and poems .
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