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Posted 1/24/09 , edited 12/28/09
Ok...here I go..this is my very first fanfiction so I might suck at it, but please try to enjoy!^_^

My One True Love

Writer (Typer) : animeluver001
Fictional Characters: None
Pairing: Tadamu, Amuto

~Preface~
Hinamori Amu just got through moving from Kyoto, Japan to Tokyo, Japan because of her parents jobs. Amu at first hated the idea of leaving all her precious friends back at home, but she decided to stay optimistic about her moving, and decided to take this new chance of moving as a new beginning, after all, she wasn't leaving all her friends at home, she still had her shugo charas, Ran, Miki, Suu, and Dia. After successfully moving and getting enrolled into Seiyo Gakuen, Amu begins her new journey. But her new journey doesn't begins as she hopes it does....she wakes up only to find out she is running late!!!!

~Chapter 1~

"AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! It's only gonna be my first day and im going to be late!!!!! Ran, Miki, Suu, Dia, why didnt you guys wake me!!!!" exclaimed Amu while she quickly got dressed and cleaned up.

"Omg, omg, omg!! I'm late!!! bye mom, bye dad, bye ami!!! Gotta run!!!!" Amu races out of the house and after a few minutes of running, she stops and realizes she has no idea of where she was going! She forgot her directions on the counter and does not want to run back all the way home! She has noo idea of what to do, so she just decides to run around town and maybe get a view of the school totally forgetting she could've easily transformed with Ran to get a good view. As she runs around town she runs into a dead end!!

"Omg! You have to be kidding me!!!" thought Amu. "This cannot be happening!!!" shouted Amu disturbing a peacefully sleeping Ikuto. Of course with all the racket Amu was doing Ikuto could no longer sleep so he decides to check it out.

"Oi! What are you doing little kid? Keep quiet! Can't you see I'm trying to sleep here?!" said Ikuto.

"Hey! Who are you calling a little kid? And why would you be sleeping?! You look like an average high-schooler!" yelled Amu.

"Ok fine whatever, but what about you? Huh?You certainly aren't in school either." questioned Ikuto.

" I'm new here and got lost on my way to school!" said Amu

" Heeeh....so I see. Well I would never in my life help a little kid like you but since you're new I'll make an exception. What school are you supposed to be in? Is it Seiyo?" said Ikuto.

"Yes I go to Seiyo. That would be VERY helpful considering I'm already 4 minutes late. And stop calling me little kid! I have a name and its Amu!!! Hinamori Amu!!!" said Amu.

" Ok..whatever you say AMU..*emphasizes on Amu*" Ikuto said ans her scooped her up in his arms and carried her to Seiyo.

"Hey!!! What do you think you are doing suddenly carrying me like this!! Let me go!!!" protested Amu.

"Hey! Hold still!!I might drop you if you move too much! I'm taking you to Seiyo!!" replied Ikuto as he carried her. This surprised Amu a lot suddenly being carried like this causing her to blush looking very cute and innocent. Realizing this, Ikuto decided to tease her.

'' Hey look, when you are talking and yelling so much you can actually look cute! Especially blushing like that, I just might reconsider about taking you to Seiyo!" teased Ikuto half-heartedly meaning some of it.

"H-h-hey! I-I-I need to get to school ok?'' said Amu blushing even more.

" Ha ha ha! Sure, and look we are already here!" said Ikuto as he gently landed putting Amu on her own two feet again.

"Umm...thank you very much...." said Amu.

"Don't mention it" replied Ikuto as he turned to head off.

"Umm....bye!" said Amu since she saw him leaving. Ikuto replied by just waving. Somewhere in her heart, she wanted to stay in his arms just a little longer....ok...a lot longer, but what could she do? So she decided to just hurry along and get to the office to get her classroom number. Then a sudden thought came to her head "OMG!!! I didnt get his name!" quickly she turns around only to see he was no where to be seen..."Aww...well...maybe I can somehow meet him again if fate decides to let us" thought Amu while she went down to the office. "He is so mysterious, funny, a little annoying, but hes also handsome and quite sexy..." she smiled at this thought. Amu had just fallen in love by what you call it....love at first sight.

"Amu!!! We saw it all!!" said Ran.

"Yep yep!!Amu is i loove" shouted Miki.

'' Heh heh..Amu-chan just moved into this new place and has already fallen in love!" said Suu.

" Amu just got carried like a princess...ahhh..how romantic!", said Dia. They all started to tease Amu and she couldnt hold it in anymore so she said

" Shut it you guys!!! He was just helping me out!!! Thats all!! Man!! You guys are such a pain!!!!"

" Riiiight!!!! Sure...whatever you say Amu!!" replied them all in unison. But they decided to keep quiet throughout the day just in case. After a while, Amu got her classroom number and a pass as to why she is late. She runs to classroom 27, knocks on the door having it get opened by the teacher, and hands him the note.

" Ahhhh!!! A new student! How exciting!" he smiles at Amu and beckons her to come into the classroom.

"Everyone! Stop what you are doing! We have a new student that just transferred! Ok introduce yourself miss." said the teacher.

" Yo! My name is Hinamori Amu, and I just moved from Kyoto....nice to meet you all and uhh... hope to get along...." said Amu acting as her usual, Cool-and-Spicy self.

"Ok...Umm...thank you for your introduction....Im your teacher, Nikaidou-sensei, and your seat will be.....hmm....ah! Over there by Tadase! Tadase!!! Raise your hand so Hinamori-san"ll know who you are!" said Nikaidou-sensei.

" Haaai!!! (other way to say "yes") Over here!" said Tadase, looking at him made Amu's heart flutter as she went to get seated.

" Hi! Im, Tadase! Hotori Tadase, nice to meet you Hinamori-san!" introduced Tadase."Gosh! he is soo cute! His voice makes me melt! Im soo lucky to be able to sit next to him!" thought Amu.

" Uh..yeah sure same here!" replied Amu. "Gosh! he is soo cute! His voice makes me melt! Im soo lucky to be able to sit next to him!" thought Amu. Then a sudden flashback of Ikuto started going in her head..."Wait! I thought I liked that one mysterious boy!" quickly thought Amu again. "Oh no! No no no no!! Please dont tell me I like them both....no thats not possible!!! I dont even know them yet! Right! Thats not possible!! i barely know them and here i go frolicking about liking them! How foolish! Once I get to know them better, then I'll decide! Right!" thought Amu as Nikaidou-sensei was giving out lessons.
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~End of Chapter One~ Wow its long!!! xD Well we saw how Ikuto and Amu bonded, so the next chapter goes to Tadase and Amu! Watch as Amu bonds with them both but in the end only gets to choose one(doesnt mean its all ending in the nxt chapter)...>_< Well tell me what you think! And please! stay tuned!!~
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AMUTO SHALL WIN IN THE END!!! MWUAHAHAHA.!!!

hheee...okay so ya im an amuto fan:) omg omgomgomg your good at writing...maybe i'll write my own fanfic too...
aND you do NOT suck alrite?! GAMBATENE! GaMBETENEE!! *ran pops out and takes out her pompoms*!!!!!

Posted 1/25/09 , edited 3/7/09
okies!!! here we go w ch two!!! (im not gonna write lyk how we do in school anymore xD)

Last time we were here~

" Uh..yeah sure same here!" replied Amu. "Gosh! he is soo cute! His voice makes me melt! Im soo lucky to be able to sit next to him!" thought Amu. Then a sudden flashback of Ikuto started going in her head..."Wait! I thought I liked Ikuto!" quickly thought Amu again. "Oh no! No no no no!! Please dont tell me I like them both....no thats not possible!!! I dont even know them yet! Right! Thats not possible!! i barely know them and here i go frolicking about liking them! How foolish! Once I get to know them better, then I'll decide! Right!" thought Amu as Nikaidou-sensei was giving out lessons.

~Chapter 2~


throughout class amu was pondering in her mind about that mysterious and sexy highschooler an her new partner the very princely Hotori Tadase-kun. she thought they were both very cute and didnt know who was cuter or anything. she thought about how both were just opposites yet she thought they were both so cute! amu was sooo busy and deep in thought that she didnt even realize class was over.

"Amu!!!!" said Ran

"Amu lets go hoome!!!" yelled Miki

"Amu wat r u still thinking about? maybe that one guy from this morning?" said Suu

"Amu-chan please stop thinkin bout them two boys and come back to our world please!!! joke Dia. just as Amus shugo charas were joking around w her and she was yeling at them, Tadase came in. he was very surprised to see that the new student had shgo charas and even more four of them!

" anno...hinamori-san....u hav shugo charas?" questioned Tadase. at this Amu jumped cuz she thought evry one was long gone and was even more surprised that Tadase saw them.

"h-hai....anno..do u see em?" said Amu.

"well u see...i hav one too!" said Tadase as he showe her Kiseki.

"Ahhh!!! Kawaii!!!! ur shugo chara is sooo cute!! hes just like a king!! and he looks just lyk u too!!!" said Amu as she was playing around w Kiseki.

"Oi!!! u commoner! u r in no position to touch some1 so powerful and kingly like me!! get lost! and i AM a king! i am NOT LIKE a king ok?" yelled Kiseki

"Kiseki!! thats rude wat did i tell u bout ur manners??" said Tadase. "sorry bout that ok hinamori-san"

"huh? oh dont mention it! anywayz i shud introduce my charas. this is Ran,Miki, Suu, and Dia.!" said Amu.

"Nice to meet u Hotori-kun and Kiseki!" greeted Amu's charas in unison.

"oi! u hav to say Kiseki-SAMA!! were r ur manners! u r talkin to a KING here!! but anyways nice to meet u! muahahaha now i hav even MORE commoners to complete my wish!!" said Kiseki

"Nice to meet you all too!" said Tadase.

"hey umm...Hotori-kun wat did Kiseki- sama mean by wish? and more?" questioned Amu.

"huh? oh...umm...well...u see here there r more ppl w shugo charas and we r all part of the royal garden and since u had some too..i was wondering if u wud consider joining us! we wu all be vry glad to hav a new member! and about the wish...um..i tell u da details 2morrow.ok?" replied Tadase.

"heeeh? mor ppl w shugo charas? interesting and umm...sure..why not...i wud like to join plz" said Amu.

"ok great! u will meet the othr members tomorrow along w der charas but for now lets go home..ok?" said Tadase.

"hmm...ok...sure" said Amu.

"here ill walk you home!" suggested Tadase.

"no no no no i cudnt ill be ok by myself!dont wrry bout it!" said Amu.

"no its ok..i want to"said Tadase. Amu didnt know it, but Tadase, for the first time, kinda took a liking towards her. so they walked home together and learned more about eachother. and they even found out they didnt live that far frum eachothr!

"umm..hotori-san...thank you 4 walkin me home....umm...see you 2morrow..." said Amu.

" ur welcome and yes see u 2morrow!'' said Tadase. now that they knew eachother even better they started liking eachother a little more. Amu thought about that mysterious guy as she walked in.."where is he? and wat is he doing right now?" she questioned in her mind.

"mama..papa..im back and imma go to my room ok?" said amu.

"ok amu welcome back!" said mama and papa.

"onee-chan okairinasai!" greete ami

"hey ami tadaima!" greeted amu as she ruffled ami's hair. and went to her room. wen she was in her room she plopped onto her bed and went deep in thought about the two boys she met. she liked tadase even more now that she knew about him and she even pictured them together as a couple. at this she blushed. she was so excited about seeing him tomorrow! she went to go shower and got dressed in her pj's and went to bed.

"amu-chan!wake-up! its time for skool!!"said mama.

"hai!!" yawned amu. she got up, got dressed and cleaned up and went downstairs.

"mama papa onee-chans boyfriend is here to pick her up!" sai ami

"BOYFRIEND!?!?!" shouted papa as his soul went out of his body.

"boyfriend? well then amu u shud get going? i nvr knew yuu wud move on this quick" winked mama

" hey! hes not my boyfriend! hes ust a friend!" said Amu as she blushed.

''really!!! ok then!" said papa as his soul came back to his body.

"ok sure amu! watevr u say" said mama sarcastically. amu quickly ran to the door and saw tadase standing there.

"hotori- kun? umm....why r u here?" said amu

"umm..i wanted to walk with u" said tadase.

"huh? o-ok...." said amu as she blushed. then they walked to skool together..and as they walked to skool they saw a girl w a X-egg and amu knew just wat to do.

''Tadase umm...theres a x-egg rite there ill be back" said amu.

"huh? i see it but umm we (meaning the royal garden group) havent rlly found a quick way to extinguish it..we usually take hours and we dont hav thatmuch time'' said Tadase.

"dont wrry ill take just seconds!" smirked amu."atashi no kokoro- unrokku" said amu as she did a chara-nari with Ran "Amulet Heart!". at this Tadase was very surprised. he has never seen a chara-nari before! well of course only frum that troublesome cat. but this was amazing! but he knew wat came next, amu wud have to break the egg. but he was wrong!

"negative heart, lock on!open heart!!"said amu as she purified the egg. Tadase was sooo surprised!! he has never seen that before! wen amu finished purifying the egg she went back to Tadase and said:

''toldja! done in seconds!"

'' u can chara-nari and purify eggs?'' said Tadase looking very confused.

"umm..yeah! cant everybody?" said amu also very confused.

"no only certain ppl like u, masshiro rima, and that tsukiyomi ikuto! but 4get about him!'' said tadase

''oh..i didnt know that..but we should quickly go to skool!! lets go!!" said amu

''huh? oh yeah! lets go!'' said tadase.tadase and amu made it to skool surprisingly a few mins b4 the bell so they still had time to kill. tadase took this opportunity to intoduce amu to the gang.

"hinamori-san here lets go introduce u to the members of the royal garden!" said Tadase and he tooj her hand.

''o-o-ok..''said amu blushing cuz he took her hand. tadase quickly led her to the gang not realizing hes been holding her hand. wen they got there he was still holding her hand till one of the members whistled.

"o-o-oh!srry hinamori-san'' said Tadase blushing at his "bold" act.

''i-i-its ok'' said amu also blushing.

"hey!!minna!!! tadase brought over a new girlfriend and he brought her over to meet us!!" said a very baby-ish and cute girl.

"yuiki-san!" said Tadase flustered and tomato red now."sh-sh-shes not my g-g-girlfriend!! sh-shes just a friend!! and actually *ahem* i brought her because shes a new member of us, the guardians!''

''heey!! isnt she that new student?" questioned a middle-schooler guy with a different uniform.

''ah! right about that! hinamori-san let me introdu....." tadase was surprised at the look of amus face! she was RED really RED."omg....he held my hand....and evry1 thought he was my bf.......omg..but wait! "new"?"thought amu.

"hinamori-san?" said Tadase breaking into amus thoughts.

"huh?!" said amu

''umm..so..introductions..." said Tadase

''oh! right!!'' said amu

"ok this is yuiki yaya our ace chair"

''atashi yuiki yaya~desu!yoroshiku!u can just call me yaya!" said yaya

"masshiro rima, our new queens chair''

''umm..masshiro rima~desu..yoroshiku...rima de wa ii desu(u can call me rima)" said rima

''this is our new jacks chair fujisaki nagihiko"

''fujisaki nagihiko, yoroshiku, u can just call me nagihiko" said nagihiko

"and this is our old jacks chair that visits us at times, souma kukai''

"yo! souma kukai, yoroshiku, u can just call me kukai" said kukai

"and ery1 this is our new joker, hinamori amu!"

''hi-hinamori amu ~desu..yoroshiku....amu de wa ii~desu" said amu

''this is kukai's shugo chara, daichi, rima's kusu-kusu, yaya's pepe, and nagihikos rhythm and temari, because nagi used to be a girl...well...umm....he used to be our queens chair..i guess u cu say he crossed-dressed'' said Tadase ''and im the kings chair and u dont hav to call me"hotori-kun" u can just call me tadase and every one big news!! amu can chara-nari! oh yeah! talking bout amu here r her shugo charas''

"ran~desu, amus sporty naritai jibun" said ran

''miki, amus artistic naritai jibun'' said miki

''suu, amus cooking naritai jibun." said suu

"and im dia, amu-chan no kagayaki( amus shine)'' said dia.

''WOWOWOWOW!!!!! FOUR SHUGO CHARAS!!!!!" shouted all the members in unison.

''yes" replied tadase and amu in unison.

"wow! this is gonna be vry interesting!! we all approve of this new member!" said all guardians in unison.thus amu became the jokers chair and a member of the guardians.

''see they approve'' said tadase

''hehe yeah now im an official member!" said amu. both their eyes met and they both blushed! evry1 saw an they got teased again. but then rima said something very surprising!

"Tadase! dont forget about your current girlfriend! you are going out with yamabuki saaya remember!?" reminded rima.
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~End of Chapter 2~and THIS is the end of chapter 2! ch three will be written either later, tomorrow..or..i dunno...xD
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me no support tadamu >_>

haahaa BUT ur a great writer so i really dont care that much (as long as you put mroe amuto moments :P)

LMFAOO saaya and tadase? niceee. they deserve each other. XD ( i hate them both...well not so much tadase....i jus want tadase to die so ikuto and amu can be together!!
Posted 2/14/09
sorry!!! i hav been REALLY busy with school!!!i havnt had time to write at all!!! but heres chapter 3!

*quick note* < > means they r thinking it (ex. <omg wat shud i do!>)

Last Time We Were~
"wow! this is gonna be vry interesting!! we all approve of this new member!" said all guardians in unison.thus amu became the jokers chair and a member of the guardians.

''see they approve'' said tadase

''hehe yeah now im an official member!" said amu. both their eyes met and they both blushed! evry1 saw an they got teased again. but then rima said something very surprising!

"Tadase! dont forget about your current girlfriend! you are going out with yamabuki saaya remember!?" reminded rima.


~Chapter 3~

Amu's POV (hehe figured POVs wud be easier to wrk with)

<omg....he...he...he has a gf?>

"huh?....tadase...ha...has a gf?"

"yes he does" quickly replied rima. amu glances to tadase only to find him giving her a sympathetic and apologetic face.

<wh...what? if he had a gf why......why wud he...lead me on so much?......ugh! no im gonna cry!!>

"uhh...i see....umm.....ill be right back...ok?" and with that said amu dashed out of the royal garden,crying, feeling VERY hurt and VERY
surprised.

"HINAMORI-SAN!!!!" said tadase as he chased for her. she heard him chasing and calling her so she did a chara-change with ran. and with that she went to the park. she went to sit on the benches. she was very sad..<ho...how cud he do this to me...>and then she burst into tears.

"amu...cheer upp...plz" said miki

"amu...plz dont cry.." said suu

"amu-chan.....dont cry over someone like him...cheer up" said dia

"amu....smile..smile!!!" said ran and she tried to make her smile by making a silly face. but it didnt work..after crying for a while..amu quieted down and took a deep breath and sighed.

"oh well no use going back to school.....we'll be mega late and i dont want to sit through boring useless lectures." said amu. so she decided to ditch school and take a nap on the benches.

Ikutos POV

ikuto and yoru were taking a stroll in the park wen ikuto sudenly sees a girl with pink hair..<hey...isnt that that one girl? hmm...imma go check it out> and with that he headed toward her.<heeh? skipping skool and sleeping on a park bench...>thought ikuto as he smiled.he decided to "teach" her a lesson and said,

"OIII!!!! AMUU!!!! WAKE UPP!!!"

"HAI!!!!!" shouted amu..

"hahahahahaha!!!!! wat a weird reaction!!!" laughed ikuto.

"huh?" said amu still kinda woozy from her nap.

"dont u remember me?"

"AHH!!!! UUU!!! that perverted-high-school-kid!!!!" shouted amu.

"whos perverted?"said ikuto as he leaned towards her."you know..you shouldnt sleep here....there are a lot of perverts around. who knows what they will do if they find a little girl sleeping on a park bench"

"haaaa??? heh...look whos talking! the only per i see is U!" said amu.

"heh? so..im the pervert huh?..."said ikuto leaning even closer.."pervert this pervert that...would u like to see wat a REAL perert would do?" teased ikuto only 1 inch away from amus face.

Amus POV

<too close!!!!>

"what r u doing?!" said amu as she shoved ikuto away from her.

"teaching u wat a real pervet does" said ikuto with a smirk

"w...well dont.." said amu as she walked away from him. ikuto suddenly grabs her hand and says"lets go hav some fun! u look down...i can tell...i just tried to make u feel better...but i guess it didnt work....here i'll treat u correctly" said ikuto. and with that they headed towards the shopping center.

Narrators POV

while ikuto and amu were going out tadase was still in class feeling VERY guilty...

Tadases POV

<ugh! i feel horrible.....wat did do?....hinamori-san..where are u?> tadase looks at the clock..<oh god! 1 hour and 45 more mins of class...hinamori san....> *RING* <lunch break...where is she?..THERE!>

"umm....yamabuki san.."

"no! say saaya!"

"saaya...umm..hey come over here" said tadase as her grabbed her hand and took her over to a quieter place with less ppl.

<omg!! is he gonna kiss me??he has to i mean look where we r going!!> thought saaya

"yama....saaya....uhh....im srry....but i wanna break up..."

"WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!" said saaya(rather screamed saaya)

''uhh..yea..im srry...but uhh..i wanna break up...so...bye.." said tadase turning and walking away.

"wait! tadase!" said saaya...but he didnt..saaya...was very...hurt..and sad....she burst into tears..but of course..with her kind of ego...she quickly recovered and went her own way.

<ok....thats done...but i feel horrible.....hinamori-san wait for me...>

Amus POV

<omg...wat?>

"huh? where r we going?"

"you'll see" said ikuto as he smiled.

"shopping center?"

"dont girls like shopping?" asked ikuto bewildered

<wow...he CAN actually be nice...but wait i still dont know his name...>

"uhh..its kinda late but wats ur name? i nvr got a chance to ask...and i dont wanna keep caling u "hey!" or "perverted-high-school-kid"

"haha..its ikuto...tsukiyomi ikuto..."

<ikuto? where hav i heard that?? oh well..>

"then...tsukiyomi-kun? right?"

"bzzz! wrong! u can just call me ikuto k?"

"o..ok.."said amu blushing.

<heh...she looks cute wen she blushes..>thought ikuto.

"so lets go hav fun!!! well..first lets get you out of that uniform!" said ikuto leading her towards a clothing store.

"huh??ok"

"hmm lets see....this and this and this and this and this an this and ah! this! ok amu go try it on! amu?"

she was covere in the clothes.

<wow..who knew he liked shoping so much..>

Narrators POV

they spend 10 mins shopping for something for amu to wear.and finally! the perfect outfit!



JUST KIDDING!!!!

Amus POV

"th..th..this?? ikuto...are you sure??"

"yes yes now hurry up! come out i wanna see...unless...u want me to come in there??" said ikuto teasingly.

''NO!! i'll come out...ju..just wait a sec....ok here" amu went out and ikuto was blown away.

"ka....kawaii..."unknowingly said ikuto...

"huh?!" said amu surprised

<he...he called me "kawaii"...whoa!>

"ahem...it matches u...perfectly...."said ikuto while he was blushing.

<oh wow! he looks so cute wen blushing!!!!>

*authors note~wanna see her outfit?? here:



lol jus imagine it without the jacket~

Narrators POV~

so they bought the outfit and had a ton of fun together! they went from the clothing store to window shopping to cosplaying and then more window shopping then video games (ikuto won, 5 to3) and finally *GRUMBLE*

"wat was that?"said ikuto

"ahaha...idk" *grumble*

"haha ur hungry? why didnt u say so?" said ikuto."lets go eat"

"ok.."said amu quietly following him very embarrassed.

"gosh! u r so slow!! come on!" said ikuto grabbing her hand. once again amus heart skipped a beat....she was falling for him....

"ok we r here!! lets get a seat!" said ikuto. after 20 mins at the restaurant they came out.

Amus POV

<wow..i just realized..isnt this like a date?!?!>

"ikuto....umm....thnx..4 today.."

"oi! you cudnt possibly think im done rite?its only 3:45! lets go for a stroll in the park to let the food settle in"

"ok..." and again he grabs my hand.....my heart starts beating fast..again....can i possibly be falling..in..love..with him?as i ponder in my thoughts about him...he swoops me up and......WAIT! SWOOPS ME UP!?!?! WHAT!?

"what r u doing? i thought we were going to the park!"

"heh we are.....we r just taking a shortcut to get there!" said ikuto.and so we get there in a flash...

"so amu...uhh...why were you feelin down in the morning?"

"huh?oh nothing much..."

"it cant be nothin much i mean u skipped skool!"

"no really its nuthin...but wat about u..why arent you in skool?"

"huh?no reason"

"oh come on. skipping skool and saying oh no reason? yeah sure!"

"ok fine idk personal stuff ok?

"oh..ok..srry."

"theres no need"

"but.."

"its ok..ok?" he smiles to me and before i know it we are holding hands...face to face...only inches away from eachother...closing the distance between ourselves....and then...............
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~End Of Chapter 3~This is the end of chapter 3! WHOA! What happens next?! Find out wat happens in the next ch!
Posted 3/7/09
i'll try doing better w my uploads!but understand im busy w skool. and 4 those of u who've read my fan-fic thnx 4 reading and i hope u hav lyked it so far!

Last time we were~
"its ok..ok?" he smiles to me and before i know it we are holding hands...face to face...only inches away from eachother...closing the distance between ourselves....and then...............

~Chapter 4~

Amu's POV

<omg...he is gonna kiss me!>

Ikuto's POV

<ok...i guess this is it...i'll make sure to properly ask her to be my gf after this...>

Narrato's POV

ohhhh!!!! wats gonna happen!? oohhh!!! they r gona kiss!!!!

"TSUKIYOMI IKUTO!!!DONT U DARE LAY A HAND ON HINAMORI-SAN!!!!! " screamed Tadase wen he saw wat was about to happen..

Amu's POV

<omg...wat is HE doing here? why did he ruin my perfect moment....is that his goal in life? to RUIN my life....b-cuz 1st he leads me on and now he disrupts my kiss?!how dare he!>

"aww great!!!! why did u ruin OUR moment u kiddy king!" said Ikuto. Tadase runs in front of amu and puts his arms out in front of her.

"Tsukiyomi Ikuto! wat were u going to do to her?" said tadase.

"wat WE were going to do is none of ur business! GET LOST!" i suddenly shouted.

"h-hinamori-san?" said tadase looking at me confused as i walked up to ikuto's side."h-hinamori-san...wat do u mean? wat r u doing?"

"im doing exactly wat u see im doing!" i said to tadase."now that u see....just run along to your YAMABUKI SAAYA"

"huh? if thats the problem i..i..i already broke up w/ her..."said tadase.

"heeeh...so THAT was the problem huh? U were the one who did this to amu! U broke her heart...U made her CRY...and U HURT her"said ikuto with the coldest glare ive ever seen...

<wow....i didnt know ikuto wud care that much>

Ikuto's POV

<so it was THAT jerks fault.....OHHH!!! i wanna punch his lights out rite now!!!>

"hinamori-san? i did that? im...im soo srry...i-i-i i didnt mean to....please underst-"pleaded the kiddy-king.

"i understand" interrupted amu.

"amu? wat do u mean" i questioned.

<was she just gonna accept his apology so easily lyk that?plz amu...dont...wat about today..>

"i understand very well how srry u r so now u can go and leave US alone" icingly said amu.

<whoa....BURN!>

Tadase's POV

i...i...i dont understand.....doesnt she know that the person she choosing is TSUKIYOMI IKUTO?wat is she thinking?i dont want her to get hurt while w/ him.....

"hinamori-san...please...understand that wat u r doing is....foolish..."

"huh? f-foolish??wh-why?"said hinamori-san. i dont want to tell...but...this is so she doesnt get hurt..again.

"b-cuz...maybe u havnt realized..but we HATE eachother...and hes just doing this to try to be better than me and hes just using u..."i tried to tell her.

"*scoff* u r trying to tell me that hes just USING me?? r u serious??" said hinamori-san.

"hard to believe, but yes...please believe me....." i pleaded.

Amu's POV

huh...is he serious....hes pleading me and is serious..i think...but ikuto wud never do that right??i mean...he..he tried to kiss me..and we spent the day together...rite??

"ikuto?" i said...hoping he wud tell me its a lie....there was a long pause.....he hasnt said anything.....come on!!!.....

"i-ikuto?" i said looking him in the eye pleading him to tell me its a lie...but..his face is blank.....i guess...i guess it IS true...omg...wat am i gonna do now....

"RAN CHARA NARI NOW!!...."ugh! i cant take it anymore!!!! as we chara nari..i run away from them..i want to go back...back to kyoto.....i..i want to leave this place...i..i wanna go somewhere...anywhere but here.....
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~End Of Chapter 4~ OMG!! Whats wrong with Ikuto?!?!?!Ikuto!!! Why didn't u say anything?!?! Well find out what happens in the next ch!!
Posted 3/11/09 , edited 3/11/09
Nice story. I like it so far ^^
Posted 3/14/09
yaaay!!! a comment!!! thnx!!!^^

Last time we were here~

Amu's POV

huh...is he serious....hes pleading me and is serious..i think...but ikuto wud never do that right??i mean...he..he tried to kiss me..and we spent the day together...rite??

"ikuto?" i said...hoping he wud tell me its a lie....there was a long pause.....he hasnt said anything.....come on!!!.....

"i-ikuto?" i said looking him in the eye pleading him to tell me its a lie...but..his face is blank.....i guess...i guess it IS true...omg...wat am i gonna do now....

"RAN CHARA NARI NOW!!...."ugh! i cant take it anymore!!!! as we chara nari..i run away from them..i want to go back...back to kyoto.....i..i want to leave this place...i..i wanna go somewhere...anywhere but here.....

Chapter 5

Ikuto's POV(before Amu left)

"Ikuto?" she questioned me....i feel...as if i have been stabbed by a million daggers...right in my heart...i couldnt believe wat i was hearing

"I-Ikuto?" she asked...looking into my eyes as if pleading me to tell her it was a lie...*Ikuto's face goes blank*i cant believe her...she still believes Tadase....even AFTER wat had happened today.....

"RAN CHARA NARI NOW!!!!" she shouts... then she just leaves.....i know i should chase her...but...why should i? after today....after spending time with her...honestly telling her my feelings..almost kissing..... she still believes in that dumb Kiddy King..instead of me.....why?

"Yoru...lets go...." i say...

"i-ikuto? shouldnt we go after amu~nya?" says yoru

"no...lets leave her alone..."

"but why~nya?"

"because....just drop it....if u are so worried..u go after her....." i say....i dont want to remember anymore.......

"ikuto wats wrong~nya?"

"nothing...lets just go.." i say as we leave the park...

Tadase's POV

"Hinamori-san?" why did she leave?.....what did i do?...where is she?....

"Tsukiyomi Iku....." hes not here....where is he? where did they go??

"Kiseki.....lets go look for hinamori-san"

"No tadase...its better if we leave her alone....."kiseki says...

"wh-why? we have to find her!" i plead

" no tadase...at a time like this...amu wants to be alone...lets just go home..." kiseki says as he drifts off towards home....i then too go home

Ikuto's POV

MAN! Why am I here of all places....at Hinamori Amu's house.....i wonder if shes at home already...

"Ikuto! why are we here? didnt you say u wanted to leave her alone?~nya"

"Shut up yoru!" Damn that yoru! well i am going to climb up the trees to see if shes home....

" not here....the rooms pitch dark....." well then....i cant believe im about to do this...but...here goes nothing!

~5 mins pass~

*ding dong*

"ahhhh!!!!!! totemo kakkoi onii-chan!!!(a very cool older brother)" says a cute little girl...which...i guess is Amu's little sister...

"MAMA!!!PAPA!!!!!!ONEE-CHAN NO BOYFRIEND DAIYO!!!!!(its amus boyfriend)" she says...really REALLY loud...how cute!

"ara! a different boy this time!!"says a lady which...i guess is amu's mom....

"ANOTHER BOYFRIEND!?" says a man...who seems to ber amu's father...

"umm...."i start to say.....

"ah! where are my manners!? i am Midori Hinamori! Amus mother. this is Tsumugu Hinamori amus father..." she introduces

" AND I AM AMI!!!! AMI HINAMORI!!!!! AMU NO IMOUTO!!!!(amus lil sis)" says the little one

"i am ikuto...Tsukiyomi Ikuto! Nice to meet you all" i say..trying to sound very polite,"umm...have you seen amu?"

"huh? amu? oh..no....actually we were hoping she was with you...but if not....i dont know....gosh! she should know not to stay out this long!"says her mom

"umm...well..when she comes back kcan u tell her i dropped by and i really need to see her? please" i say

"sure thing! wat was it again? Tsukiyomi Ikuto?" she asks

"yes..." i reply "well then...um..bye..."

"yes...bye!" WHERE is she?! Think ikuto think! where would she go?! shes new right! so she shouldnt really know her way...wat if that idiot runs into dangerous ppl?

Tadase's POV

i am at home...but i feel really uncomfortable....did hinamori-san already go back home? ugh! ill go check

"kiseki..im going out for a bit..."

"ok let me come too" kiseki says. "where are you going at a time like this Tadase?"

"hinamori-sans place to check if shes home

"wh-what!?"

"u heard me if u dont wanna come along go back home then!" i say. ah! yes! we r here! ok....*takes a breath*

*ding dong*

"yes?-ah! you again! from this morning! wats wrong? i am sorry if this sounds rude but can you make it quick please!" says her mom

"um..konnichiwa! um...has hinamori-san come home yet by any chance?" i ask

"huh?! oh no! i dont know wat she would do out so late! she is in so much trouble wen she gets home! gosh! that grl! um..why?'' her mom asks

"oh...uh...umm...just wanted to check...but i guess not..uh...tell her i came by..." i say as i run off to look for hinamori-san.....where would she go? i dont think she knows any one....wat if she runs into perverts or gangsters!? oh gosh!

"HINAMORI-SAN!!!!!!! WHERE ARE YOU!!!!????!?!?!?!" i shout as loud as possible....TSUKIYOMI IKUTO......this is all HIS fault......

Ikuto's POV

where would she go? ive been running around for hours!! ugh! that KIDDY KING!!!! ill KILL him if thats the last thing ill do!!! why did he hav to go and confuse her and all!!! and AMU!!! why...how...did she just believe him!?!?

"AMU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU IDIOT WHERE ARE YOU!?!?!?!?!?!?!?" i say...desparate to find her...
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~End of chapter 5~ OMG!!!!! WHERE DID AMU GO?????? well...find out in the next chapter!!!!!
Posted 3/15/09
For some reason, when Ikuto was introducing himself to Amu's family, I thought of the James Bond movies...you know, when he's like "I'm Bond, James Bond." lol
good chapter. I don't care who Amu ends up with in this. I hope Ikuto and Tadase put aside this rivalry at the end though. They should run into each other in the next chapter lol ^^
Posted 4/4/09 , edited 4/4/09
lmao! james bond! xDDD anyways! here we go!!! last time we were here

"HINAMORI-SAN!!!!!!! WHERE ARE YOU!!!!????!?!?!?!" i shout as loud as possible....TSUKIYOMI IKUTO......this is all HIS fault......

Ikuto's POV

where would she go? ive been running around for hours!! ugh! that KIDDY KING!!!! ill KILL him if thats the last thing ill do!!! why did he hav to go and confuse her and all!!! and AMU!!! why...how...did she just believe him!?!?

"AMU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU IDIOT WHERE ARE YOU!?!?!?!?!?!?!?" i say...desparate to find her...

~Chapter 6~

a little girl, about 6 years old was wondering around kyoto and found a real beautiful place with a great view of the town. at times of depression or wen she just simply felt like it she came. one day, when she went to her secret place, she say a boy there...she thought he was really cute. dark hair, dark dreamy eyes, a lovely smile and he had a violin in his hand....he saw her come and just waved. she of course waved back..then he said in a sweet, melodic, mezmerizing voice,

"shall i play for you?" it was right then and there he had captivated her heart....the first time she had ever felt that way...she said

"sure" and with that, the boy played his violin. the melody was beautiful and sounded very complicated to play. the little girl was amazed that the boy could play such a challenging and complicated music piece

"uwaaa....suteki!!!!!" she said and smiled. her smile was so cute that wen the boy saw he blushed. he too liked her. it was love at first sight for them. from then on they always played with eachother at their secret place. but of course, as always, there is always an ending to happy times and fun times...one day, wen the little girl went to their secret place, the boy looked very very sad....the little girl wanted to know wat was wrong, so she asked

"whats wrong?" the boy answered

''today......my...my family...is moving out....." the little girl was heart broken.....he was leaving.......forever? she didnt know......she wanted to ask...but was afraid of the answer.....the boy continued

"i have to go early in the morning tomorrow...i dont think ill be coming back here..but it was real fun playing and spending time with you.....so...lets play till our hearts content today...ok?'' the little girl tried to hold back the tears and smile...but couldnt...she broke out into tears and said

"why do you have to leave? why cant you stay here...with me?" she was still crying, the boy ran and hugged her...he was only 11(or 12) but it seems set his heart on her

''i have to go because my parents have to move out...i dont want to go, but have to....im sorry..." she sniffed and said

"so theres no chance of you staying?" the boy shook his head....

"ok then...lets spend the day together till our hearts content then....." the little girl smiled....they spent the whole day together......until it was getting dark and they both had to leave....the little girl then said

"when your older. promise to come back for me...." the boy looked at her, surprised...but then smiled

"of course" he said

"pinky promise?"the little girl said....

"pinky promise!'' and with that they made a promise....then the boy said

"i have something for you..."

"what is it?" the little girl asked

"a present...so that wen i come back..i can find you again....put out your hand" the little girl did as she was told. and he put a beautiful bracelet around her arm.....it was golden....with a heart charm that said....."my one and only soulmate~ T.I."

"whats T.I. mean?" the little girl asked(lol r&b singer!!!!! jkjk)

"my initials......."

"whats you name? i never asked....."

"its ...................." (the reason it isnt there is because the little girl forgot it)then the little girl introduces herself

"i know we've only had a little time together.....but....i love you...and always will....no matter what and i will definitely come back for you and find you" and with that...he gave her a kiss.....the little girl was shocked and speechless. she just stared....then finally

"i like you too...and ill be waiting.....always......." and with that they parted their ways.......can you guess who the little girl and boy is?

both ikuto and tadase desperately search for amu...but where is she? where did she go?she went to the only place she felt comfortable. where? that u are soon to find out.....

ikutos pov

ok i think ive pretty much searched the whole city....and she is no where to be found! unless......

tadase pov

hinamori san.....where did you go?i think ive already seen every part of town with you not in it....where would u go? would you be.....

amus pov

"i cant believe wat a crybabay and sissy i am....running away..it is so not lyk me...i wonder if theyre searching for me......well...its not lyk they will ever find me....only me and a special boy know it..." i whisper

"im sure they are" says suu

"yeah amu they are"says miki

"im gonna undo our chara nari now....and why did u run away?" says ran

"i dont know" i say "maybe i was just really shocked"

"but that ikuto...i dont think he was using you...he was real sincere and and kind to you..." said dia

"well then why didnt he answer me?" i say

"maybe because he was just shocked you didnt believe him so he was dumbstuck...u never kno..." says dia then it hit me...maybe that was the case....thats why his face went blank.....but ...it too late now.....

"hey...who was the other person who knew of this place?" said ran. haha she really caught on huh?

"i dunno...." i say

"EH!!!!!???" my charas say to me. "DONT LIE TO US!!!"

"really...i dont....but hes probably long gone....." i say remembering the precious memory...the memory...of the little girl and the boy......me...and...and whoever he is......hah....im an idiot for not forgetting.........im pretty sure he has forgotten all about me.......*sigh* oh well.....
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~End of Chapter 6~ OHHHH!!!! so...we hear amus memories....but she is still hidden and not found...both boys say "unless..."and "would you be......." what does that mean?next ch!!!look forward to it!!! ^^


Posted 4/12/09
Ah, so Amu's met Ikuto before. How cute ^^
Update soon
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