Post Reply Cherish Your Love- Ch. 9
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COMMENTS IS A MUST!!
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Scene: At school in classroom before class starts

-Gui Gui, sitting next to Arron, didn't dare to look at him.

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GG POV:
Be brave Gui Gui!! Just tell him you didn't know what you were doing yesterday. Take a deep breath. -inhale, exhale- ok....GO!!
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YL: Can I talk to you privately?

GG: HUH?

-Gui Gui didn't expect Arron to take the first step, but she nodded. They went to the hallway.

YL: I want to talk about what happened yesterday.

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GG POV:
He's not going to ask me out, is he? Wait! Why am I so happy? Did I.... NO!!!!!!
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GG: What about yesterday do you want to talk about?

YL: After you left, I've been thinking about the past few weeks of how you were around me, more like stalking me.

GG: Uh-huh.

YL: I can consider those as memories.

GG: Yeah (is he really going to ask me out? My heart is beating so FAST!!!!)

YL: Those memories left me deep impressions, so after we present our project today, our relationship will officially.....

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GG POV:
There it comes!!
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YL: ........ end.

-Heart shatters

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now listen to this song while reading: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cU-ntesbbgM
DONT START UNTIL THE MUSIC STARTS!!
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GG: What?

YL: I want to be free. I want things to be the way it used to be. Nothing ever seems normal after you came.

GG: I-

YL: So, what I mean is, your business is none of mine. You eat, sleep, talk, walk, or die, it's none of my business. Clear?

-Gui Gui nodded. They walked back to the classroom.

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GG POV:
Why is everything so...... gray around me? My heart seems like it's not working, I feel dead.
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-She felt lifeless suddenly. She wasn't smiling at all. Ya Tou noticed she wasn't happy. After class ended, they walked to the cafe together.

SCENE: HALLWAY

YT: Gui Gui, what's wrong? Does it have anything to do with Arron?

GG: Why did you say the name Arron? I hate that name, I hate the letter "A", I'm not getting an "A" on my report card, I'm getting an "F"

YT: Calm down, Gui Gui! What happened?

GG: Nothing!!! Does it look like something happened?

YT: Yeah. Just tell me Gui Gui, I'm your best friend, aren't I?

GG: I'm sorry, Ya Tou. I don't know why I feel this way. It's only been a few weeks. I've known him for a few weeks only, I feel so... I don't know. It's just that-

???: Ah!
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A/N: STOP MUSIC!!
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-Gui Gui bumped into someone and knocked all her books down.

GG: I'm so sorry, let me help you.

-She helped her pick up all the books.

???: Thanks.

-The girl left

YT: That girl is probably new, she looks lost, but anyway, Gui Gui, tell me.

GG: ok..

-Gui Gui told her the whole "Arron" thing. Ya Tou felt bad and tried to comfort her.

Scene: Class time. They went to the next class.

Miss T: Class, today we have a new student, Rainie Yang.

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GG and YT POV:
It's her.
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-At this moment, Jiro, Wang Zi, and Hebe eyed at Arron.

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A/N: Jiro switched to Arron's class
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-Arron looked at the new classmate with disbelief. To him, this classmate wasn't new. Jiro and Wang Zi looked at each other.

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HB POV:
How could this be, didn't she go to America?
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DD POV:
Why is she here?
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WZ POV:
UH-OH!
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Miss T: Rainie, you can sit next to Ya Tou.

RN (Rainie): ok

-She walked to her seat with a smile, but suddenly stopped. Arron looked at her, and she looked at him. She looked scared. Gui Gui noticed their eye-contacts and wondered what happened. Rainie tried to ignore him and sat down. For the whole period, they took down notes and listened to the teacher talk about history. Finally, it was the last 5 mins.

Miss T: Ok class. You may now have free time.

YT: Hi Rainie, I'm Ya Tou.

GG: And I'm Gui Gui, the girl you bumped into earlier.

RN: Hi, I remember both of you. Today is my first day of school, so I was wondering if you guys can-

GG: Sure, but I'm also new, so I think Ya Tou can be more helpful.

YT: Yep.

RN: It's great to have 2 new best friends already the first day of school.

GG: Hey we're happy to meet new friends too.

~~~~~RING~~~~~~

GG: Do you need help going to your locker?

RN: No, I can go myself.

YT: Then we'll see you in the next class.

-Gui Gui and Ya Tou left.

RN: Can I talk to you for a few minutes?

-She walked towards Arron as she asked him. He ignored her and walked away, but she held his arm.

RN: Just one minute.

-He turned around to face her.

YL: What?

RN: Can we.... start over?

YL: Start over? After you said that you didn't like me anymore, you didn't feel secure when I'm with you, that I didn't care about you, left me and went to America for 5 years, and now you tell me you want to start over?

RN:I'm sorry, Arron. I'm really sorry. Please don't do this to me.

YL: No! YOU don't do this to me. Did you know how hurt I was? Now, if you would excuse me, I have to go.

-Arron left the room, leaving Rainie there, standing. But none of them knew there was a little ghost outside listening to their conversation, crying.

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GG POV:
Rainie and Arron dated each other? Is this the reason why Arron.....
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A LITTLE PREVIEW FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER:
start the song @ 2:29:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AbSTR3C2vHA
DONT START UNTIL THE SONG GETS TO 2:29. IDC IF UR COMPUTER HAS TO LET IT LOAD!! JUST WAIT FOR IT! (lolz, i sound mean, but i want to make the story and the atmosphere better)

SCENE 1:

GG: Rainie, do you really like Arron still?

RN: I love him.

SCENE 2:

RN: Please answer the phone.

-Arron looks at the phone.

SCENE 3:

GG: Rainie, what's wrong?

SCENE 4:

GG: ARRON!! COME QUICK!! RAINIE'S IN THE HOSPITAL!!

-Arron runs to the hospital.

SCENE 5:

RN (crying): Can you come back to me? I miss you.

-Arron hugs her tightly.

SCENE 6:

-Gui Gui bent down to cry.

GG: I wish you 2 happiness.
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END OF PREVIEW AND STORY!!!!!!

COMMENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AT LEAST 10!!!! anyways.. sorry to the people who dont like the way how i make you wait til the music comes before you continue readin (some probably just continued reading without listening) i just thought itd make a better scene and atmosphere. lolz.
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Posted 1/26/09
Aww how sad!
Cant wait for the next one now!!!
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Posted 1/26/09
i listened to the songs xDD.
awee i need next chap T__T,
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