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Posted 1/25/09
my very first fanfic seriously not jk
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4806410/1/
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20 / F / In the jaws of a...
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Posted 2/13/09
Hm... I suggest you don't put the dialogue in bold, and give more detail and more... explanation. Amu should be more describing; she wasn't very much in your story, and it was pretty hard for me to imagine what was going on. But, either way, it was a pretty good start at your first fan-fic, and you should continue to learn and progress so your story will do the same as well. ^^
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20 / F / in L`s office eat...
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Posted 7/25/10 , edited 7/25/10
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6029845/1/Voices_that_hate_Voices_that_love
Dis is my first fanfic
its a lemon though!
Tell me what chu think!
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