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Posted 1/25/09 , edited 2/6/09
SUMMERTIME
Author: enggar

Characters:
enggar as Enggar/ En-chan/ Enggar-chan
diruJUMP as Yuu/ Yuu-chan
All of NEWS members: Yamashita Tomohisa, Nishikido Ryo, Kato Shigeaki,Tegoshi Yuya, Masuda Takahisa, Koyama Keiichiro
Hey! Say! JUMP members: (all of them, when hey in the turnament, but only several members who often come out) Yamada Ryosuke, Nakajima Yuto, Chinen Yuuri
NB: if i wrote in bold + italic, it means POV
ano... this is my first fanfic.. i need you comment wether it's good or not.. hope you like this minna... enjoy!!

Part 1: summer
Theme song: NEWS-summertime

Summer is almost over. There is only 1 week left. Everybody have their own plan to spend their summer vacation. But, Yuto, Yamada, Yuu, and Enggar not think that way. They haven’t made the plan to spend the vacation yet. And after summer vacation, Yuu and Enggar have to go own countries. They just come back from Hokkaido with all Hey! Say! JUMP members because they have to finish their work in Hokkaido. They come back by Shinkansen to Tokyo; it took almost 2 hours to arrive in Tokyo. Just arrive in Tokyo, they have picked up by a big van with JE logo on that. In the van, Yuto, Yamada, Yuu, and Enggar talk together to make the schedule for the last 1 week of the summer vacation.

Yuto: “what will we do tomorrow?? Go to dream land?? Or go to beach again??”
Yamada: “May be we’ll go to Dream land….”
Yuu: “NO… last year we had to go there… we want to go to somewhere that we never know before in Japan…”
Enggar: *nod* “yeah…”
Yamada: “How if we go to Sapporo in Hokkaido??”
Yuto: “tsk…tsk…tsk… Yamada, we just came back from Hokkaido a while ago…. You forgot that??”
Yamada: “whoa!!! I’m confused… @[email protected]
Yuto: *hold his head* “ah….. Me too…..”

Because of the enjoyable chatting, suddenly they just arrived in JE office. Just get off from the van, all of the Johnny’s Jr come out from the buildings and challenge them to have a volley ball tournament tomorrow. All Hey! Say! JUMP members including Yuu and Enggar surprised to hear that. But, beside that Yamada and Yuto think something different.
Yuto: *look to Yamada*
Yamada: *look to Yuto and nod*
Yuto and Yamada: “we accept your challenge.”
HSJ members, Yuu and Enggar: *surprised* “Eh??????????????”

Suddenly Johnny is coming and he comes with his bodyguard behind him
Johnny: “hahahahaha… ok then, all of you will go tomorrow and you all will spend the last 1 week of this summer vacation in my villa ne…” *fake smile*
HSJ members: *surprised harder* “EEEEEHHHHHHHHH?????????”
Yuto: “we know, this must be your plan ne Jhonny-san…” *go near to Jhonny*
Yamada: “yeah… and we know that you will take us to your villa again…”
Johnny: “khu…khu…khu… you have know that ne…” *fake smile*
Yamada: “and Jhonny-san had to prepare all of the properties for us ne…”
Johnny: “yeah…. You really know that ne….” *fake smile*
HSJ members: *scream* “Whoa!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Scary!!!!!!!!!*
Johnny: “Bwahahahahaha… ok, then… now go to your home and prepare your vacation preparation...”
All: “HAI!!!!!!!!! Yes sir!!!”
Jhonny: “ah, almost forgot… all of you will go with NEWS members…”
NEWS: *come out* “hai!!!!! Yoroshiku onegaishimasu!!!!!!!!”
All: “hai!!!!!!!!! Onegaishimasu!!!!!!”
Johnny: “for Enggar and Yuu, there are a bonus for you two… you will go with them again and spend your beautiful summer vacation with them ne…” *smile*
Enggar and Yuu: “eh?? Hontou Jhonny-san?? Ah, Arigatou Gozaimasu!!!”
Johnny: “hahahaha… I know, you, are here for spending your summer vacation, right?? So, don’t think anything else, and go with them ne tomorrow…” *smile*
Enggar and Yuu: “hai!!! Hontou ni arigatou jhonny-san!!!” *go to near Jhonny and hug*
Johnny: “hahahaha… arigatou for your hug ne…”

Enggar and Yuu don’t think that their summer vacation will be more fun like this. They just can’t wait for tomorrow. Enggar and Yuu will spend their vacation with NEWS and Hey! Say! JUMP.
Posted 1/25/09
waah~! new fic! xD
and cool chap 1! ^^

can i be in it? please?please?please????
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can i be here too? with massu? pr if he;s not available anyone!!

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haha i thought its NEWS fic coz of sumemr time!
can i be wif Daiki Onegaishimasu?!! [puppy eyes]
hehehe~
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sugoi!!! .. nice fic!! .. ne~ can i be in it? is it ok if my partner is yama-chan? if he's taken then tegoshi-kun! .. haha ,, onegaishimasu!!! .. if they're both taken then i'll take any! .. heheheheh ..
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Waah this is just too cute!!
can i be in here as well???
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Can I be in it too? Can I be yamada partner if he's not taken or chinen partner?
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kyaaa~ can i also be in it too?
If Yuri-pyun's not taken yet, can i be his partner o.o?
if not then....anyone :D?
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Posted 1/26/09 , edited 1/27/09

lizbeth_yao95 wrote:

waah~! new fic! xD
and cool chap 1! ^^

can i be in it? please?please?please????





deen22 wrote:

can i be here too? with massu? pr if he;s not available anyone!!

EDITED

haha i thought its NEWS fic coz of sumemr time!
can i be wif Daiki Onegaishimasu?!! [puppy eyes]
hehehe~





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sugoi!!! .. nice fic!! .. ne~ can i be in it? is it ok if my partner is yama-chan? if he's taken then tegoshi-kun! .. haha ,, onegaishimasu!!! .. if they're both taken then i'll take any! .. heheheheh .. :D





Geh-san wrote:

Waah this is just too cute!!
can i be in here as well???





azn23 wrote:

Can I be in it too? Can I be yamada partner if he's not taken or chinen partner?





mochicocoa wrote:

kyaaa~ can i also be in it too?
If Yuri-pyun's not taken yet, can i be his partner o.o?
if not then....anyone :D?


ne minna... may be i'll put just two or three of you...
and may be i'll put you when the tournament over...
so, this is like competition.. the first two people answer this will be in my fic.. ^^
name do you want:
partner:
from US, Japan, or Indonesian?:
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Part 2: sweet night… ^^

Theme song: Tegomass Maruichikara

Yuu and Enggar are preparing their preparation for tomorrow. Suddenly, yuu’s cell phone ringing, but they not heard that because they are in their room in the apartment. Luckily, Yuu’s mom knows that and gives it to Yuu. “Yuu, there is someone calling you…” she said. “Ah, thank you mom” yuu takes her cell phone from her mom with enggar. “Hello?” she start “yo~! Still remembering me right?? This Yuto!” he answer “of course, why you asking that??” yuu said with embarrassed sound “hehe… ah, I calling you for asking you want to go with us or not.” “Eh?? Where you want to go??” “To department store, if you want to go there we will wait you on lobby at 07.00 pm... don’t be late ne!! Ah, you go with Enggar..” “Ok!! Bye!” she answered then she closes the cell phone. Enggar looking at Yuu, then she ask “yuu-chan?? Who was calling you??” “Ah, that was Yuto… he wants to invite us to go to department store with the other Hey! Say! JUMP members…” she answers “ah, souka…” “enggar-chan, you want to go there with us??” yuu asking “of course!!” “ok, then. We ewill go to lobby at 07.00… so, let’s take a bath!!” yuu said.

On the lobby, at 07.10. Yuu and Enggar have been waiting already for ten minutes. Then, not longer time yuto, yamada, and chi come out to lobby. “osu!!” yuto said “yo~! You have late for 10 minutes… what are you doing?? Make up??” yuu said with fake face “hahahaha… gomenasai… Ok, all already here. Let’s go to department store!!” Yuto said.

The department store is not far from their apartment, so they can walk to go there. They walk through the shopping road. “weeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!! We go to department store!!!” chi said with very happy voice and hold Yuu and Enggar hands. “hahahaha…. You love to go there ne chi-chan!!” enggar said “yeah!!! I love to go there!!! >w<b how about you two?? Yuu-chan and Enggar-chii??” he asks “of course we like it… ^^” Enggar answer. Yuto look to chi then he see chi’s hand’s holding yuu’s hand, he reflex to reach yuu’s hand and holding yuu’s hand. Yuu was surprised and said “hey!!! What are you doing??” “ah, just saving your hand from Chi’s hand” Yuto answer it with blushing face. “ah, I know… you are jealous with chi right?? Ne Yuto??” Enggar suddenly cut. “……” yuto just keep silent with his blushing face. “eh?? Is that right??” yuu asks to yuto. “……..” Yuto still keep silent. “hahahaha… that’s ok… just forget it then…” Enggar said again with smile on his face.
“ahhh……….. where we going to now??” Yamada said when they have been arriving on department store. “how adbout we eat first?? I’m hungry… ne yuu??” Yuto said dramatically and he pokes Yuu’s back. “OI!!!!!!!! It’s hurt!!!” Yuu said embarrassedly and pokes Yuto back. “hahahaha… gomenasai… I thought you don’t have any hurt response… hehehe… just kidding yo~!” Yuto said. “so, where are we going?? Eat??” Yamada cut the conversation between Yuu and Yuto. “yes!!!!!!!!!!!!” Chi shouts with very loud voice and his childhood face.

Then they go to family restaurant in that department store. Every one orders their favourite menu. Chi order very very big parfait, Yuto order strawberry shortcake, Yamada order vanilla ice cream, Yuu order big chocolate ice cream, and Enggar just order watermelon juice. “Enggar-chan… Why you just order juice??” Yuto asking nicely, and Enggar said that she have a diet. “uwaa!!!! Poor Enggar-chi…. Want some of mine??” Chi shout and offering Enggar his half eaten parfait “ah, arigatou ne Chi-chan… I can’t… gomenasai… just eat that ne… I’m alright…” Enggar said with smile on her face “ok, then if you said that.. I’ll eat this again…” chi starts to eat his parfait. “chi!!! May I have some?? May i?? may i???” yuto shouted to chi with his puppy eyes “NO WAY!!!” chi shouted more loud than yuto and protecting his parfait. “Come on…. Chi… just give me some… you have a lot right??” yuto said again “NO!!!!!!!!” chi shouted and still protects his parfait. Then Yuto come to near chi and stole some of chi’s parfait. “Yuto!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” chi shouted to Yuto and start to get mad with Yuto. “ah, ok..ok… I’ll change it with mine…” yuto said. “No!!” chi shouted again “ah, how about I’ll lend you my teddy bear tonight…” yuto said, and his face turning red, the all who heard that are sureprised and suddenly laugh. “ehhhhh????? Yuto has teddy bear???????? Are you serious?? Mwahahahahahahahahaha!!!” yuu said with loud voice. “hmm…” yuto nodding and his face turning sooo red “what’s wrong with that?? It’s great for bed… right chi??”yuto said again “hai!!!!” chi answering. “buh.. hahahhahaha.. ok.. ok…” yuu said and still can’t stop her laugh. “hey! It’s getting darker, let’s go up before late!!” yamada cut the conversation. “hai!! Let’s go!!”

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Ash .. i cant think of a last name..
Yamada Ryosuke
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Awesomeee chaptersss
cant wait for the next chapter
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Ash .. i cant think of a last name..
Yamada Ryosuke
U.S

Awesomeee chaptersss
cant wait for the next chapter


arigatou!! >w<
hehehe... your name... you want to be asian name or US name?
because i can't think any... gomen... >_<""
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Posted 1/26/09 , edited 1/26/09

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azn23 wrote:



Ash .. i cant think of a last name..
Yamada Ryosuke
U.S

Awesomeee chaptersss
cant wait for the next chapter


arigatou!! >w<
hehehe... your name... you want to be asian name or US name?
because i can't think any... gomen... >_<""


lmfao i think i will like to have a US name. Well doesn't matter whichever one is easy for you
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lmfao i think i will like to have a US name. Well doesn't matter whichever one is easy for you


aaaahhh... sou ne... how about the first name is asian, but the family name is US name?
but i don't know which family name you like... gomen ne...
my brain is too small... >_<"""
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Posted 1/26/09 , edited 1/26/09
Name: Sawae Mio 沢江 美央 (was I supposed to write what kind of name I wanted?)
Partner: Yamada
From: Japan (do you believe me?)
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Name: Sawae Mio 沢江 美央 (was I supposed to write what kind of name I wanted?)
Partner: Yamada
From: Japan (do you believe me?)


yup!!
eh? you're really from Japan? sugoi ne!!! >w<
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