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Posted 1/27/09 , edited 3/3/09


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THE SUMMARY:

there were 2 girls who was having a hard time with their mother. Their mother worked far away from them so they had a tough relationship . One time, their mother died because of an accident . And they can't do anything but to stare at her dead body. Then one day, a lawyer came to their house. They were glad but there is something that the lawyer want to say , their mother's total debts will be passed to them and they need to work where their mother worked so it could be paid off. And then, they met this guy, his annoying family and their unpredictable life. Can the two girls survive to their new environment ? read and find out!!


NOTE::: there will be a few twists so there will be 2 major roles and the rest are minors.



CHARACTERS!
yamada ryosuke----------------aizawa sayaka "izza00t"
chinen yuri-----------------------aizawa hisa " lizbeth_yao95"
Yuto nakajima-------------------Yamada Mika( yamada's sis) "mitchy_yuuto"
Okamoto keito------------------katsumoto Naomi "hsj9392"
Morimoto ryutaro---------------hirano rai "chiiakii"
Arioka Daiki---------------------ishino taka " preppygothika"
Yabu kota----------------------- Jonouchi umeko "Geh-san"
Inoo kei--------------------------misako yumi "xiaoqian94"
yaotome hikaru-----------------hirota ami "deen22"
takaki yuya----------------------koshino sumi " yamada_yuuki83"

mother of yamada- yamada iva
father of yamada- yamada kisho
mom of sayaka and hisa- aizawa leiko

[NOTE: TELL US IF U WANT A ROLE.... first one! first served.. XD]


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CHAPPIE o1
CHAPPIE o2
CHAPPIE o3
CHAPPIE 04
Posted 1/27/09
" the debt is ours" chapter 1 is now posted!!!!
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^_^ nice chapter 1!!
hehehe~ ^_^
ohh well since daiki is taken....guest~ =P
or.. .pwede ndin si ami hahaha
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whee~~ luve this ficcy :D
can i be with takaki? koshino sumi??
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nice chap.1~! cant wait for the next part.^^
lol.. ganbatte ne,
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CHAPPIE o1

In a mountainous place, there lived a simple family . We don't know if thy are happy or not. it's up to you find out.

Girl1- * kkkkkyyyyyyyyyyyyyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa`~~~~~~~~*
lady1- don't scream like that young lady!
girl2- you never have time for us!!!
Lady1- i got no choice!! i have to work!~
Girl1- THEN GO BACK TO YOUR PLACE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Lady1- *shocked* you'll regret it when i'll come back.
girl 1&2- we won't regret it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! * bblleehh*

--------the next day-------------

In the dining room ..................
Girl2- *eat eat* sayaka, the food you cook is good.... as usual! *smile*
Sayaka- thanks, hisa
Lady1- *open the door*im going to work now,
Sayaka& Hisa- ok. ja.
Lady1- *exits the door*

AFTER A FEW SECOND.....................

BBAAM!
Hisa- what was that?
Sayaka- *already infront of the door* i don't know...

the 2 girls went out of the house then a surprising event happened.
Sayaka- oh my gosh!
Hisa- *went near* *poke* okay! she's dead!
both- *JUMP* yes!! we are free!! yay!~
[ NOTE: THEY ARE WIERD]
guy- *ehem* IM SO SORRY I BUMPED HER!!!!
hisa- oh.. you did? with what~?
guy- a.... a... bus.. GOMEN! do you know her?
both- yah, she's our mom..
guy- WWAA!~ GOMEN!
sayaka- it's okay! wanna eat inside?
hisa- oh yah, remember to put out the body *smile*
guy- you won't sue me?!
sayaka- nah!~ we are happy!
guy- really?cause you know she'd go to heaven?
Hisa- nope. cause she's dead,
Sayaka- *caught hisa's attention* don't say that....
Hisa- uuhh.. gomen! *started to cry* wah!~ i'll miss her!
guy- honto ni gomen ne?! i need to go now and prepare her funeral.
sayaka- ok!

>>NEXT WEEK<<

*knock knock*
sayaka- *opened the door* yes?
guy- hi . are you the daughter of mrs. aizawa leiko?
sayaka- hai! im aizawa sayaka
guy- oh. can i come in? i've got an important matter to discuss
sayaka- ok. demo.. who are you?
guy- im a lawyer...
Sayaka- [he's a lawyer! maybe he'll give me money!] ok! enter!

-after 2o mins-
both- WWWWWWWHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTT??????????!!!!!!!!!!! DEBT?!
lawyer- hai. you've got to pay the debt.
Both- *Bammed the table* WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT?! WE ARE KIDS!!
lawyer- yeah. but you're the only relatives of Mrs. aizawa-san.
sayaka- oohh!! that woman!
Hisa- how are we gonna repay it?!
lawyer- you're going to do her work instead.
Hisa- whats her work?
Lawyer- she's a responsible maid.
Sayaka- ah. ok, hisa! it's your specialty* smile*
lawyer- and we need you both to have thre equal strength she give off.
Sayaka- *frowned* what?!
Hisa- where is it? her work?
Lawyer- in tokyo..
Bopth- TOKYO?!

------------------------------To be CONTINUED!------------------------------
Posted 1/27/09

deen22 wrote:

^_^ nice chapter 1!!
hehehe~ ^_^
ohh well since daiki is taken....guest~ =P
or.. .pwede ndin si ami hahaha


sureXD
Posted 1/27/09

Yamada_Yuuki83 wrote:

whee~~ luve this ficcy :D
can i be with takaki? koshino sumi??


yuppiee! sure!
Posted 1/27/09

chiiakii wrote:

nice chap.1~! cant wait for the next part.^^
lol.. ganbatte ne,


yay!~ thnks!
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izza00t wrote:


chiiakii wrote:

nice chap.1~! cant wait for the next part.^^
lol.. ganbatte ne,


yay!~ thnks!


ne ne,, can i be with ryutaro?? lol...
Posted 1/27/09

chiiakii wrote:


izza00t wrote:


chiiakii wrote:

nice chap.1~! cant wait for the next part.^^
lol.. ganbatte ne,


yay!~ thnks!


ne ne,, can i be with ryutaro?? lol...


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weeeeeeeeeeee!!
I wonder what will happen next!!
kyaaaaaaaaa!! xDD
also wonder how will they meet the boys!! OMGawsh!!! ^-^
Posted 1/27/09

hsj9392 wrote:

weeeeeeeeeeee!!
I wonder what will happen next!!
kyaaaaaaaaa!! xDD
also wonder how will they meet the boys!! OMGawsh!!! ^-^


hihi!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thankie!!! yur wit keito..!
Posted 1/27/09
HEY MINNA.. KEITO IS ALREADY TAKEN TO0..........................
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hsj9392 wrote:

weeeeeeeeeeee!!
I wonder what will happen next!!
kyaaaaaaaaa!! xDD
also wonder how will they meet the boys!! OMGawsh!!! ^-^


hihi!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thankie!!! yur wit keito..!




yay!! thankies!! ^^
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