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Posted 1/28/09

azn23 wrote:

ahhh good job
cant wait for the next part


waaaah~! thank yoU! *bow*
Posted 1/28/09

mochicocoa wrote:

heheh its getting good x3
cant wait<3
anyone left :o?


thank you! xD
aww... sori. everyone is already occupied.
But, maybe we could still add you up if you want to be with other JE. ^^
Posted 1/28/09

mae-chanchan wrote:

love the first chapter..
the girls are so funny~!!haha


ahahah! yeah! and they are SO weird. xD
thanks for reading! ^________^
Posted 1/28/09

rikkuluvsNewS wrote:

Can i be with Inoo keii? Ne?
Omg i luved it^^ so interesting^^
Ano...the kids have to pay! Scary...Kowaii


aw.. he's already taken. gomen ne. x(


Posted 1/28/09

xiaoqian94 wrote:


lizbeth_yao95 wrote:


xiaoqian94 wrote:

can i be wif kei???(:
onegai(:


ok! and thanks for reading! ^_________^


thx ne(:


no problem! >.<
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Posted 1/28/09

lizbeth_yao95 wrote:


mochicocoa wrote:

heheh its getting good x3
cant wait<3
anyone left :o?


thank you! xD
aww... sori. everyone is already occupied.
But, maybe we could still add you up if you want to be with other JE. ^^


heh anytime<3
aww~
can it be Kanata Hongo *-*?
xD
Posted 1/28/09

mochicocoa wrote:


lizbeth_yao95 wrote:


mochicocoa wrote:

heheh its getting good x3
cant wait<3
anyone left :o?


thank you! xD
aww... sori. everyone is already occupied.
But, maybe we could still add you up if you want to be with other JE. ^^


heh anytime<3
aww~
can it be Kanata Hongo *-*?
xD


i'll ask izza-chan about it ne? haha! xD
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Posted 1/28/09

lizbeth_yao95 wrote:


mochicocoa wrote:


lizbeth_yao95 wrote:


mochicocoa wrote:

heheh its getting good x3
cant wait<3
anyone left :o?


thank you! xD
aww... sori. everyone is already occupied.
But, maybe we could still add you up if you want to be with other JE. ^^


heh anytime<3
aww~
can it be Kanata Hongo *-*?
xD


i'll ask izza-chan about it ne? haha! xD


lmao~ mmkies xD
pl0x and thankies
Posted 1/28/09
yo minna!~ i here!~
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Posted 1/28/09

lizbeth_yao95 wrote:


rikkuluvsNewS wrote:

Can i be with Inoo keii? Ne?
Omg i luved it^^ so interesting^^
Ano...the kids have to pay! Scary...Kowaii


aw.. he's already taken. gomen ne. x(




hehe its okay^^ i dont mind^^ i just thought it would b fun 2 be in a fanfic^^
Posted 1/28/09

rikkuluvsNewS wrote:


lizbeth_yao95 wrote:


rikkuluvsNewS wrote:

Can i be with Inoo keii? Ne?
Omg i luved it^^ so interesting^^
Ano...the kids have to pay! Scary...Kowaii


aw.. he's already taken. gomen ne. x(




hehe its okay^^ i dont mind^^ i just thought it would b fun 2 be in a fanfic^^


uuhh.. ne! izza here.. if we need special guests, i'd definitely put ya on!~ so..ya
Posted 1/29/09

previous:
Hisa: Where is it? Her work?
Lawyer: In Tokyo.
Both: TOKYO?!!


::::CHAPTER 2::::


Lawyer: hai
Both: *jaw dropped*
Lawyer: Sorry. But i've got to go. *stood up *about to go out*
Hisa: Matte! Can't you help us?!
Lawyer: No, sorry. I'm just a lawyer.
Sayaka: Yes! You are a LAWYER! You make justice!
Lawyer: Sorry, but i can't pay a debt like that. *exits*
Both: A DEBT LIKE THAT?!
Hisa: Is it too BIG?!
Both: Ugh!! MOOOOM!!!

---------------TRAIN STATION-------------

Hisa: *carrying 4 big bags* This is SO heavy!
Sayaka: Just bear with it. You don't know how to handle our money anyways.
Hisa: *sigh* I know. *dropped the bags* How did mom managed to work at Tokyo then come home everyday as if Tokyo is so near.
Sayaka: *looking at the train directory* Maybe she got powers.
Hisa: *dumb eyes* she got powers?!
Sayaka: OMG! You're so stupid!

They bought a ticket and rode the train. While they were still in the train, Hisa forcefully made their things fit in 2 bags even if almost all of the passengers are staring at her. Sayaka just slept the whole way. When they reached Tokyo, they immediately went out and different kinds of reactions came up tp them.

Sayaka: *surprised* THIS IS TOKYO?!
Hisa: Wow! Is it?
Sayaka: Wow! Are you seeing what I'm seeing?
Hisa: see what?
Sayaka: There's a bishounen! OMG! I LOVE Tokyo! *grin*
Hisa: *sigh* I can't believe you're my sister.
Sayaka: O'yeah, where's the address? Gimme *let out hand*
Hisa: What?! I don't have the address!!!!
Sayaka: WHAT?!! He didn't gave it to you?!
Hisa: NO!
Sayaka: Gosh! I can't believe lawyers are... DUMB!

Then suddenly, 2 guys in black suits came riding on their bikes and stopped in front of the 2 girls.

Both: Hey! Get out of the way!
Guy1: Are you the replacement maids for the Yamada Residence?
Sayaka: [is it the Yamada Residence?] uh.... ha-i?
Guy1 and 2: Ride on.
Hisa: uh.. hello, you're riding a bike!
Guy2: Yah!. Ride on. Bikes are for you maids.
Sayaka: Huh?! So, the house is near here? Because you're on bike right?
Guy2: Nope. It's 12km away.
Both: WHAT?!
Guy1: *got off the bike* Have a blast *about to go*
Hisa: Hey! Where are you going! We don't know which way to go!
Guy2: You're going to follow our motorcycle *rode a parked motorcycle*
Sayaka and Hisa: *rode the bike*
Sayaka: Gosh! I might fall off! WAAA!!

---------------While Riding--------------
Hisa: Wa! Left! Left!
Sayaka: Why are you instructing me?! You have your own bike!
Hisa: They're going left!
Sayaka: I know!

While they were riding their bikes, a limousine followed. It was about to make an overtake and it caught the girls' attention. Hisa saw a slightly opened window and she noticed that there was a man looking at her. She only managed to see his eyes so she don't care much. After a few moment the man looked away and the limousine passed before them.

Hisa: What's with him?
Sayaka: huh? Did you said something?
Hisa: Uh.. nothing.

*SPLASH!
btoh: Eeew! *mud all-over*
Syaka: Hey! *referring to the limo*
>>after 10 more minutes>>>
Guy1: *stopped* We're here.. What happened to both of you?
Sayaka: Nothing! *smile* *mud on teeth* blehh!!!
Guy2: o'well, come on. *pressed the doorbell*

*toot.toot*
Hisa: Hey. What's that sound?
Guy1: It's the security device.
Security[techno voice] - You reached a private residence - please place your thumb on the scanner - and mention your names -
The guys did what the security instructed.
Security[techno voice] - Welcome to Yamada Residence -
*toot*

The door opened. All of them entered the gates, the first thing they saw was a big lot and cars parked everywhere. There is a big garden that looks like leading to the head house and also can lead you to different places like golf courses, swimming pool, entertainment house, and many more. There are also gardeners, maids and guys in black suits doing their own jobs. For short, this residence is humongous.

Both girls: WOOOOAAHHH! SUGEE~!


to be continued...


Posted 1/29/09



u changed some terms?~
Posted 1/29/09
chap.2 pstd
Posted 1/29/09

izza00t wrote:




u changed some terms?~


yep. a little. is it so many?
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