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-Gui Gui walked home slowly. Arron and Raine's conversation kept repeating in her head.

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GG POV:
What happened?
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Scene: In Gui Gui's House

GM: Hey Gui Gui, you're back. How was school?

GG: It was perfect!! (fake smile)

GM: Oh good! Go wash your hands, it's time for dinner.

-Gui Gui didn't know it was already 6 PM. After dinner, she took a long shower and went to bed.

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GG POV:
Gui Gui, forget about it. You might find someone better.
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-She didn't have a good sleep that night. She dreamt of Arron and Rainie getting married and she was just in the corner shouting "NO!! NO!! ARRON!! DON'T LEAVE ME!!"

SCENE: The next day in school (last period class)

YT: Gui Gui, you don't look happy all day, Rainie, you too. What's wrong with you 2?

GG and RN: Nothing.

YT: Come on guys! Smile. What about this, after school, we'll go shopping, ok?

RN: ok. (in a sad tone)

GG: Whatever you like.

SCENE: At the Mall (They've been there for about 30 minutes already)

YT: So tired holding all these bags. Let's go to the food court.

RN: Ok.

-They found a seat at the food court. When they sat, they noticed a few guys were looking at Rainie.

YT: Rainie, I'm so jealous of you, you're so pretty and popular with guys. Have you ever dated anyone before?

-That question caught Gui Gui's attention, who was quiet the whole time.

RN: Once.

YT: Really? How was he like? Was he nice? Cute? or ugly and mean?

RN: I'm not sure for now, but the him back then was really caring.

YT: Are you guys still dating?

RN: We broke up 5 years ago. It was my fault, I didn't cherish him.

YT: AWW!!

-Ya Tou suddenly noticed there was a cute gorgeous dress in one of the stores.

YT: OH MY GOD!! That dress is so gorgeous. Gui Gui, Rainie, do you guys wanna come?

RN: Nah. You can go.

YT: Alright, watch my stuffs you guys.

-Ya Tou walked hastily to that store.

GG: Rainie.

RN: Yeah?

GG: Was the guy you were talking about.... Arron?

RN: How did you know?

GG: I'm sorry. I accidentally overheard your conversation with him.

-Rainie kept silent.

GG: I'm sorry, I really didn't mean to.

RN: It's ok. I'm not mad.

GG: Can I ask why did you ... break up with him?

RN: It was my fault. I never knew how nice, caring and how much I needed him until I left him. We used to be so happy together. I remember how naughty I was. I wanted to skip school, so I dragged him along. That day, we went eating ice cream, we even bought a kitty cat from the pet store.

GG: A... cat?

RN: Yeah. The cat's name was Ding Ding. Ding Ding loved playing in the waters. Arron has a pool in his backyard, it was for Ding Ding. But I took Ding Ding away with me. Arron probably threw the pool away.

GG: Rainie, do you really like Arron, still?

RN: I love him.

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listen to music @ 2:48
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kOdAC_6FWFI&feature=related
DONT LISTEN UNTIL IT STARTS (BETTER ATMOSPHERE)
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GG: Rainie...... I believe ...... Arron still loves you.

RN: Really?

GG: I can tell. He still has the pool in the backyard. If he hates you, why would he he still have the pool with him. You really should go find him.

RN: But-

GG: GO!! NOW!!

-Gui Gui rushed her. Ya Tou came back.

YT: Where is Rainie going?

GG: She's going to look for happiness (sad tone, tears)

-Rainie was running to Arron's home, she took out her phone and called him.

RN: Please answer the phone.

-Arron (at home) looked at the phone and saw the name "Rainie". He rejected the call and continued his studying.

VOICE MESSAGE: Hi, it's Arron you're calling. Sorry I'm busy, so please leave a message after the beep.

RN: Arron, it's Rainie, I have something important to tell you, please pick up.

-She hopped into a taxi and went to Arron's house.
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STOP MUSIC (the music should end, i no it doesnt take that long to read down to here from where the music started, but if it was in a series, it should)
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~~~DING DING~~DING DONG~~DING DONG~~~

-Arron opened the door, when he saw Rainie, he frowned.

RN: Arron, I-

YL: What more do you want?

RN: I want to start over, please Arron.

YL: Some things can't start over.

RN: But-

YL: This is how people learn, by making mistakes. If you think what you did 5 yrs ago was a mistake, don't ever do that again when you meet your next boyfriend. There's no way we can start over. Nothing is going to be the same.

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-2CagzsFdCo&feature=related
START MUSIC FROM BEGINNING!!
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-Arron closed the door, leaving Rainie in the cold. She turned around slowly, tears rolled her cheeks. She started walking home. Arron saw her, through the windows, walking. He went back to his studies. He was sad, he wondered if he was too harsh to here just a minute ago. Rainie continued walking, slowly, home. The words "There's no way we can start over. Nothing is going to be the same." echoed in her head. Suddenly, it started to rain, she looked up in the sky.

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FLASHBACKS:
RN: What are you doing? Come back in here, it's raining!

YL: That's what I like about it. It's RAINIE.

-Arron kissed her on the cheeks.

---another scene---

RN: Arron, my tummy aches.

YL: Really? Come here bao bei, I'll make you feel better.

RN: Whose your bao bei? (blushes)

YL: Admit it, you want to be my bao bei.

-starts tickling her.

RN: AHH! STOP!! AHH!! (laughs)

---switches scene---

RN: Arron, if one day, I die, will you miss me??

YL: No.

RN: (shock) WHY?!?!

YL: Because I'll die with you.

RN: NO! Don't die with me. I won't allow you, I'll be sad.

YL: Dummy, how will you be sad with me around?

---switches scene---

-through the phone

RN: Arron, sorry. I can't come.

YL: Why?

RN: I'm sick.

YL: Really? How are you feeling now??

RN: A little better.

YL: Well, see you in school tomorrow.

RN: OK, bye.

~~the next day~~

YL: Rainie

RN: Arron!

YL: These are for you.

-gives her a sack of roses.

RN: They're so pretty.

YL: Sorry I wasn't here when you're sick yesterday.

RN: It's ok ~~muah~~ (kissed him on the cheeks)
END OF FLASHBACK
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RN POV:

All the happy memories...... they've come back. But...Arron.. he doesn't love me anymore. Why didn't I cherish him? Why??
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-While Raine was on the way home (walking), she bumped into Gui Gui.

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stop music DON'T CLOSE BECAUSE YOU WILL HAVE TO CONITNUE LATER
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-Gui Gui didn't look, so she didn't know it was Rainie.

GG: I'm sor... RAINIE!

-Rainie looks at Gui Gui.

GG: Rainie, what's wrong?

RN: Everything... it's too late.

GG: Huh? (in a sad, comforting tone) How could.... but Rainie, Arron, he ...RAINIE!

-Rainie ignored her and continued to walk.

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A/N: Just to let you guys know, Rainie is really depressed. So imagine her like she's lost in the world, don't care what happens. Just like Ariel in ISWAK when she thought Joe was living with another girl.
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CONTINUE MUSIC
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-Rainie finally got home. She walked slowly to the kitchen, and grabbed a knife. Then, slowly, she walked to the bathroom, and sat next to the bathtub. She took the knife and cut through her bloodstream on her wrist.

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RN POV: looking at her hand
I will always remember you in my heart, Arron.
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-She sat there, slowly closing her eyes, and went to 'sleep'.

--MEANWHILE--

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GG POV:
There is something wrong with Rainie. Wait! Didn't she went to see Arron? Let me call him
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-She took out her phone and called Arron.

--THROUGH PHONE--

GG: Arron!!

YL: What!?

GG: What did you tell Rainie?

YL: This is none of your busi-

GG: TELL ME NOW!!

YL: -sigh- I told her we couldn't start over.

--BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP--

-Gui Gui hung up and quickly ran to Rainie's house.

YL: What's wrong with her?

SCENE: AT RAINIE'S HOUSE

GG: -KNOCKS ON THE DOOR- RAINIE!! OPEN THE DOOR!! RAINIE!! -continues to knock-

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GG POV:
I've been knocking for so long, but how come nobody's coming? .... OH MY GOD!!
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GG: RAINIE!!!!!!!!! OPEN UP!!! WHAT ARE YOU DOING!?!!

-she started to hit the door with her shoulder, causing her left side of her arm to hurt. She hit the door a several times but it didn't open. She tried it one more time, with all her strength then...... BAM!!! But she didn't expect the door to open so when she flew in, she twisted her ankle.

GG: Rainie, where are you!?

-she checked the rooms, and lastly, the bathroom and found her.

GG: RAINIE!!

-she saw Rainie's hand, so she took some toilet paper and stopped the blood. Then she pulled Rainie up and piggybacked her, diregarding her twisted ankle. Unfortunately, there was no taxi and it was raining outside. Gui Gui decided to piggyback her all the way to the hospital. It was hard to see in the heavy rain. Suddenly, Gui Gui heard a car horn honking, but she doesn't know which side was it coming from, so she quickly pushed Rainie to the sidewalk so she won't get hit, but 5 4 3 2 1 CRASH!!! The driver got out of the car.

Driver: I'm sorry, Miss, are you okay, do I have to bring you to the hopsital?

GG: Yes!! PLEASE BRING MY FRIEND TO THE HOSPITAL NOW!!

SCENE: AT THE HOSPITAL!

GG: DOCTOR!! DOCTOR!! (piggybacking Rainie)

-Doctors and nurses rushed to Gui Gui.

Doctor: What happened?

GG: She wanted to commit suicide, pealse save her!

Doctor: Alright (helped Rainie off Gui Gui and handed her to another doctor). But I meant what happened to you?

GG: Nothing happened to me. My friend is what happened! She cut herself, is she losing blood? Does she need any blood? you can take mine!! Is she going to die??

-She took out her phone and called Arron.

YL: What now!?! I have to-

GG: ARRON!! COME QUICK!! RAINIE'S IN THE HOSPITAL!!

-Arron, whose shocked, quickly ran to the hospital.

Doctor: Miss, what happened to you?

GG: NOTHING!! JUST GO SAVE MY FRIE-

-At that moment, Gui Gui passed out. Of course, for a girl who bruised her left arm, twisted her ankle, walked in the rain while piggybacking someone, and got hit by a car is not going to be okay. When she woke up, she quickly asked to nurse.

GG: How's my friend, Rainie Yang!

Nurse: She needs a lot of blood.

GG: Really?? I can give her mine, what type?

Nurse: It's B negative.

GG: B negative!?! I'm B negative, you can take mine.

Nurse: But Miss, your body is not in a good condition yourself, even if you are qualified to donate yours, you won't feel well afterward. You might get long-term effect.

GG: I don't care. She's my friend, and I'm donating my blood.

Nurse: Alright, I'll be right back.

---30 mins later---

YL: Excuse me, is there a patient named Rainie Yang?

Nurse: Yeah, she's in the regular patients room.

YL: Thanks.

-By the time he got there, Rainie was already awake.

YL: Are you okay? (worried)

RN: Arron (crying).... Can you come back to me? I miss you.

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start @ 2:52
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QSCB49jfLt4&feature=related
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-Arron, quickly runs to her, and hugs her tightly.

YL: I'm sorry.

-Neither of them knew Gui Gui was looking from the outside. She bent down, crying.

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GG POV:
I wish you 2 happiness
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-she left. A few minutes later, the nurse came in.

Nurse: How are you feeling?

RN: I little better. May I ask who brought me in the hospital.

YL: Wasn't it Gui Gui?? She called me.

Nurse: Oh yeah, she's in the Special Patients Room #520. Not in a good condition.

YL: (worried) What happened?

Nurse: She wasn't in a good condition when she came in. She piggybacked Miss Rainie to the hospital in the rain. She also twisted her ankle, has a few scrapes. Seems like she has a cold. The worse part is, she got hit by-

-Another nurse came in.

Nurse 2: The patient from room #520 is missing.

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How sad this made me cry!! :(
but it was really good at the same time
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omg i love this chap so much i want to cry so badly plea write down more chap pleaaaaaaaaaa
i hope gui gui and yalun will be together
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