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What will you feel if you got this timid sister who wanted to be stuck in her own room and never comes out to play with anyone from the outside world?

Lake, 22, along side with his parents, got themselves drowned of Sabre's abnormal lifestyle. He thought of some ways in making his sister want to come out of their mansion and enjoy what's in store for her outside. But there was no trick that can lure the witty and smart unica hija of the Fukuhara household.They needed a more critical plans to taker her out of her creepy room. There was one idea that gave Lake and his parents hope of seeing Sabre glowing under the heat of the sun, that is....tell her SHE'S DYING! Eghh???!

This fiction is a mix of comedy, drama, to the highest level of romance and cheesiness and other sorts. The boys characters are all based on the attitudes portrayed by the following JE members..hope everyone will patiently read the story..




Characters:

Fukuhara Household


Fukuhara Sabre (you can assume this character is you,yourself)
- youngest child of the Fukuhara Household
- intellectual snob and prefers to stay in her room
- never attended to school since primary years
- 17 yrs.old
- creator of online games, well known to many virtual
buddies by the name " THE RIPPER"



Fukuhara Lake ----->(Kamenashi Kazuya of KAT-TUN)
- 22 yrs.old certified head turner
- caring and loving elder brother to Sabre
- smart and handsome

Fukuhara Renko (your mom, maybe?)
- Sabre and Lake's gorgeous mom
- owns a chain of hotels all over japan
- hates Sabre's attitude that's completely
the opposite of what she possess when she
was at her age

Fukuhara Seiji (your dad)
- Sabre and Lake's understanding dad
- spoils Sabre most of the time
- one of the well known business tycoon
in the entire Japan



Chapter 1: CRIME SKETCH

Fukuhara Mansion



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hi there!...this is a nice story demo
what JE group are you going to present in here?
keep up the good work btw..
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blood_15 wrote:


Geh-san wrote:

hi there!...this is a nice story demo
what JE group are you going to present in here?
keep up the good work btw..


mix of young ones and the pros...
hehe..i hope you enjoyed reading




eh?..ano what do you mean young ones and pros?
ano..i meant JE group like: KAT-TUN, HEY SAY JUMP, ARASHI..etc+
hehe...

of course i enjoyed reading it...
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Chapter 2: First Encounter


----> SHIN and RYUU



----> SHIN


New characters:

Kaname Shinosuke-----> (Inoo Kei of HSJ)
- 17 yrs.old
- a guy who possess a pretty face
- often mistaken to be a girl and is
popular to girls
- his pleasing personality and child-like
attitude attracts lots of trouble
- best friends with Ryuutaro
- son of a famous doctor
- smiling and hyper

----> RYUU

Hirai Ryuutaro----> (Morimoto Ryuutaro of HSJ) (think of him older as he is right now)
- 17 yrs. old
- he only utters a maximum of 50 words
per day
- handsome lad, a face of innocence
- scary during riots and is feared by
fellow schoolmates
- 2x popular to girls
- youngest son of one of the richest
business tycoon in Japan

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blood_15 wrote:


Geh-san wrote:


blood_15 wrote:


Geh-san wrote:

hi there!...this is a nice story demo
what JE group are you going to present in here?
keep up the good work btw..


mix of young ones and the pros...
hehe..i hope you enjoyed reading




eh?..ano what do you mean young ones and pros?
ano..i meant JE group like: KAT-TUN, HEY SAY JUMP, ARASHI..etc+
hehe...

of course i enjoyed reading it...


the young ones, HSJ for sure...the pros, KAT-TUN, NEWS,etc.



ooh ima i see..hehe..
arigatou again for posting in our group! =D
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Posted 1/29/09 , edited 2/24/09
CHAPTER 3: Sabre’s First day of School


New characters:


Kazuna Mina (vacant)
- girly yet sadist
- obsessed with Ryuutaro
- a nemesis to Sabre



Takagi Kure[/b]i-----> ( Daiki Arioka of HSJ)
- a smart and vibrant classmate
of Sabre
- simple and caring to Sabre
- Sabre's crush

Aikawa Fujiko
- section 3c's homeroom teacher
- fond of Sabre
- a sharp tongued sensei
- pretty and energetic

Hiyama Mahiko(G)
Masato Mia (G) ---- -------->classmates
Ikagara Keiko (G)


Suzuki Yamato (B) -----> (Yabu Kota)

(others are soon to be mentioned)






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Posted 1/29/09 , edited 2/9/09
CHAPTER 4: HE RESCUED ME...AGAIN???!

SAKURAI ACADEMY

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uwaaa~!
this fic is good! i really like the part of kame being the big bro! haaha! next chap please! kshishishi. *evil giggle*
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post the next chap as fast as you can~
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thanks for entrusting your fic here in this group!!
btw.. I haven't read it yet demo I'll find time to..
I edited the character part since you double posted this topic.. and you didn't put Kamenashi Kazuya as the big bro here.. ^^
I also quoted the comments given to you on the other forum..
i hope you don't mind..
but I'll lock the other one okay?? ^-^
Posted 1/29/09
uwaaa~! thanks for editing! xD

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thanks for entrusting your fic here in this group!!
btw.. I haven't read it yet demo I'll find time to..
I edited the character part since you double posted this topic.. and you didn't put Kamenashi Kazuya as the big bro here.. ^^
I also quoted the comments given to you on the other forum..
i hope you don't mind..
but I'll lock the other one okay?? ^-^


it's fine...Im even glad you did..
hehehe...i'm off to encode chap 5 and 6

and changed some of the JE characters.. I have thought of it last night, and I think Inno Kei fits the Shin character and Daiki as Kurei. Other characters are soon to be mentioned..
I Know it'll be a spoiler but Yamapi and Akanishi will take part in the story, Chaps 10 onwards...hehe
just keep on reading guys..
thank you very much
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Posted 1/29/09 , edited 4/3/09
CHAPTER 5 : THE VERY FIRST FRIEND

NEW CHARACTERS:

Tomoka Hikari
-Sabre’s long lost friend since nursery
-weak in appearance in spite the fact that she’s
pretty and fair
-meek and caring

SAKURAI ACADEMY

Posted 1/30/09
i'm finished reading chapter 2 and 3. uwaa~! they're long but interesting! haahha! xD
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Posted 1/30/09 , edited 2/8/09
CHAPTER 6: MYSTERIOUS SABRE















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