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Posted 1/31/09 , edited 1/31/09
Here goes nothing!



I need some feedback... I guess
Posted 1/31/09
It's quite intereting so far! I'm looking foward to the next chapter (If you're writing the next one but hopefully you do!). Go go go~!!!^-^
Posted 1/31/09 , edited 1/31/09

Strawbearii wrote:

Here goes nothing!



I need some feedback... I guess



oh its good so far! I wonder what the confession is!!
put there was one confusing part could u plz explain it to me?
umm.. who is yuri?? is it the person nana bumped into?? if it is then wouldnt nana know if its a girl or boy??

I'm sorry that I couldnt understand it!!
Posted 1/31/09

GakuenxAlice wrote:


Strawbearii wrote:

Here goes nothing!



I need some feedback... I guess



oh its good so far! I wonder what the confession is!!
put there was one confusing part could u plz explain it to me?
umm.. who is yuri?? is it the person nana bumped into?? if it is then wouldnt nana know if its a girl or boy??

I'm sorry that I couldnt understand it!!


Yuri is the person who Nana bumped into. Not if you're really good at disguising like Yuri is. I'm not good at explaining
Posted 1/31/09

Strawbearii wrote:


GakuenxAlice wrote:


Strawbearii wrote:

Here goes nothing!



I need some feedback... I guess



oh its good so far! I wonder what the confession is!!
put there was one confusing part could u plz explain it to me?
umm.. who is yuri?? is it the person nana bumped into?? if it is then wouldnt nana know if its a girl or boy??

I'm sorry that I couldnt understand it!!


Yuri is the person who Nana bumped into. Not if you're really good at disguising like Yuri is. I'm not good at explaining


oh thank you!!! I get it now!!! oh I'm waiting for the next part!!!

Posted 1/31/09

GakuenxAlice wrote:


Strawbearii wrote:


GakuenxAlice wrote:


Strawbearii wrote:

Here goes nothing!



I need some feedback... I guess



oh its good so far! I wonder what the confession is!!
put there was one confusing part could u plz explain it to me?
umm.. who is yuri?? is it the person nana bumped into?? if it is then wouldnt nana know if its a girl or boy??

I'm sorry that I couldnt understand it!!


Yuri is the person who Nana bumped into. Not if you're really good at disguising like Yuri is. I'm not good at explaining


oh thank you!!! I get it now!!! oh I'm waiting for the next part!!!



i'll get on it when i have time
Posted 3/15/09


>< I was waiting for feedback, but I got none... T^T this is what it turned to...
Posted 4/10/09
wahh!! no one reading?? and no feedback T^T me sads



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Posted 4/11/09
no offense, I didn't actually see the topic lol, hehe this is really good, keep going!
Posted 4/14/09
thank you!! ><
Posted 4/14/09 , edited 4/14/09
Posted 4/23/09


o: very short
Posted 4/23/09 , edited 4/28/09
Posted 4/29/09


Am I the only one active!?
Posted 4/30/09


Ah man, this is short too... XD I think I'm the only one active. And no one really is reading this either. XD haha
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