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My 4th fanfic... considering sad fanfics are "IN"~
I guess mine would just be a "little" happier~ *harhar!* LoLz!
This is for all Yuto girls out there~~<3


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blue-Nakajima Yuto
red-Izumi Aoi
purple-conversation
italicized-lyrics


My Only You


It took one look
And forever laid out in front of me
One smile and I died
Only to be revived by you


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It's always your smiles that work me out in the morning.. nothing beats seeing your face in the shining sun. you knock me out of my breath.. you leave me no choice but to gaze at the wonderful sparkle that you trail behind along your ebony hair.. out in the open, I can still smell the fragrant scent you always wear.. I guessed it was something that always leave me dazed, no, it was YOU who always daze me..

Why beat me with all those stares from you?? Why see me from afar when you can always just say "hi" to me?? Do you know how much I melt for you?? Sometimes I wonder how it would be like if I'm in your arms holding me tightly.. how it would feel like when you hold my hand and entwine with yours.. how it would feel like if you touch my cheek and say "I Love You".. and how your lips woud taste beneath mine.. I know, I fantasize about you.. I really just can't help but be crazy all over you.. it might be silly but that's how the earth holds me, but the gravity is from you that my world revolves around..

There i was
Thought i had everything figured out
Goes to show just how much i know
'bout the way life plays out...


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There was this School Dance.. I can't wait to ask you! I was excited about it.. Because, I sought to it as my chance to hold your hands, feel your warmth.. It was a veil that was parted by the hands of God and it tells me that I might be the kind of guy you're looking for.. And so, I wrote you a letter..

Aoi,
can you please come to the rooftop after class??(=^_^=)
Yuto..

I just hope, that with this letter, I get to see even with just a fraction of a smile from you~


My heart fluttered out of joyfulness! How blessed I must be, that you asked me to meet you at the rooftop.. My soul leaps out of happiness! You even wrote such a cute face at the end, it must be a sign that you would say something good to me..I feel red flushes coming out of my face.. It's because I feel so grateful that I'm gonna see you after class, and just by the thought of it, my imagination ran wild.. I imagined you were to take my hand and look deep into my eyes.. How flattering it must be!
So I replied to you, saying:

Sure..
I would love to see you after class.. (=^o^=)!


I passed it onto you, hoping the teacher wouldn't see us.. I smiled at you once you've read my reply..then, you smiled back at me, you're eyes, it's sparkling! oh damn... How I fall so deep in your starry eyes.. That's one of the reason why I've always wanted to stare into your eyes always, It feels as if everything has stopped right before me..


I take one step away
But I find myself coming back to you
My one and only, one and only you... ooh...


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Alas~! the bell has rung! phew, I know I can do this... I just have to get all the nervousness out of me.. I peek behind my bangs to see your glowing face, and there you are, smiling brightly! How I wish I could also see that kind of smile later, once I have confessed my love to you..


whoa.. my heart is pounding so hard, as if wanting to jump out of my chest.. I couldn't help but smile hugely, the fact that once I walk up the rooftop, it would only be the two of us, alone and talking.. just thinking of that leaves me breathless.. the guy that caught me the moment I saw him..

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Now I know
That I know not a thing at all
Except the fact that I am yours
And that you are mine


breathe in, breathe out...sheeesh, I guess I'm too excited that I got to the rooftop earlier than I expected. She's not yet here.. hhmmm.. Now that I'm calm, I should think how can I confess without eating my words.. arrggghhh! I should have asked Keito for this kinds of things! He's so calm about everything.. hhmmm. I wonder, if I'm the only one suffering like this?? Well, I guess not, because it's not like I'm the only guy here on earth.. also, I'm not the only one "crushing" over Aoi. There's so many guys watching over her face, her every move, her silky hair.. and everything! But I know, that there's no one that could match up my whole LOVE for her. Guys can give her anything she wants, but they can never give her their love&soul just like I do..

*doki doki doki* My heart is starting to skip beats.. My head is spinning around with vivid images.. It feels like I'm up so high while walking up to the rooftop..

whoa.. opening the door I see the sunlight shining down on me, but it was your face that lit up the whole place.. you smiled so bright that I can't help but fall so deep into your pool of desire.. standing like the knight in shining armor you are~ Now I know why I could trade anything for you, it's because you are EVERYTHING to me..


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Ooh
They told me that this wouldn't be easy
And no
I'm not one to complain...

I take one step away
But I find myself coming back to you
My one and only, one and only you... ooh...


Yuto: Aoi-chan, I'm glad you came!

Aoi: ofcourse I would come, why shouldn't I??

Yuto: *smiles* ano~sa, I don't know how to actually put this through..

Aoi: uhmm... what are you gonna say anyway?? You know I could listen to you forever if you want *giggles*

Yuto: if you say you'd listen forever, would you stay with me forever too??

Aoi: huh~ what?? *what is he saying??*

Yuto: uhmm.. what I mean is... is that.. is that I'm... is that I'm in love with you~
See, the reason why I want to meet up with you here is that I can't help the fact that each time I hide my feelings, it just keeps on resurfacing at the edge of my entire being. It hurts when I see other boys falling over you and confessing while I'm stuck in this celebrity world full of celebrity girls I'm not even interested to be with.. They can't even catch my attention because, it's only you that revives me from the dull world, it's you that keeps my body move, it's you that keeps me alive.. It's YOU, that the strings of my life are attached.. the ONLY ONE, that my existence exists..

Aoi: Yuto, I-

Yuto: no, it's okay if you don't answer me right now.. because I know that this is all messed up that-

Aoi: Yuto, could you listen to what I want to-

Yuto: like I said, it's okay Aoi.. your answer is important to me but what you think of me is more important..

Aoi: oh please YUTO stop CUTTING into my sentences!
*suddenly kisses Yuto*


Your scent, your breath, your hands clinging onto my hair.. The way your lips move onto mine, it was so perfect! pieces of puzzles are put together.. How your taste frenzied me! I got you into my arms, I hugged you tightly to me.. The prize of my waiting, it's our -1st KISS-.. here and then on, I would protect and cherish you with all of ME..

You grabbed me from the waist, I clung onto you tighter.. this kiss, it means so much! I can hear our erratic heartbeats crossing over the line, breaking boundaries.. Your mouth against mine, it was so passionate! Full of caring, full of gentleness, full of Love! I opened my eyes, I saw you staring into me, I saw myself into your condescending eyes.. it was full of clear thoughts, that we will be TOGETHER..


I take one step away
But I find myself coming back to you
My one and only, one and only you... ooh...

You..


Intoxicated with LOVE, desired by LIFE, TOGETHER is FOREVER
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nice one Shie-chan!! .. weee~! THUMBS UP! .. i love this! .. hahahahahss... im gonna read it again! XD to comment more! .. ahhahaha ...
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HAPPY ENDING~ weeeee~!!! hahahahas. omedetto again Shie-chan!!! weee~!! .. hahaha.
this is really great! .. i can imagine it! weeeeeee.. haha. im so hyped! .. gomen. ja na~
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OMGosh!!
to tell you honestly..
I admire you for being such a great writer!! ^-^
it's just.. amazing how you make simple things look superb!!
this is so romantic!!
*4 thumbs up* <--- I've got 4 thumbs now!! ROFL
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OMGG,, yutoo OS! finnaly someonee makee thiss!
i've been waiting for yuto OS since lyk who knw whenn,,
andd,,
I LOVE THIS FANFIC SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!
THE STORYY IS PERFECT!
shiechann is a vryy good writerr (:
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emkyuu wrote:

HAPPY ENDING~ weeeee~!!! hahahahas. omedetto again Shie-chan!!! weee~!! .. hahaha.
this is really great! .. i can imagine it! weeeeeee.. haha. im so hyped! .. gomen. ja na~ :)


thanx thanx~! XD!
being hyper sure is great ~ne?! XD!
LoLz!


hsj9392 wrote:

OMGosh!!
to tell you honestly..
I admire you for being such a great writer!! ^-^
it's just.. amazing how you make simple things look superb!!
this is so romantic!!
*4 thumbs up* <--- I've got 4 thumbs now!! ROFL


*haha!* LoLz!
now you've got 4 thumbs to show~
*touched*
thanx for saying that to me~~


vanialestari wrote:

OMGG,, yutoo OS! finnaly someonee makee thiss!
i've been waiting for yuto OS since lyk who knw whenn,,
andd,,
I LOVE THIS FANFIC SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!
THE STORYY IS PERFECT!
shiechann is a vryy good writerr (:


*nyaha!*
Yuto really fits a sweet character, that's why I used him in here~
arigatou for reading it van-chan~!!
>>I know you're a Yuto girl *winks*
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uwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!
gomen for my late reply!!
kyAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!
hahahah its soooooo sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet!!!!
Posted 1/31/09
NICE ONE SHIE CHAN!~
it's a happy ending this time round!
i like the way how you put evrything together,
seriously it's TOTALLY SWEET(:

ahahaha i'm kinda getting hyper now


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wwoooo~~~~ nice fanfic............................................................. the song was sang by Parokya ni Edgar right??.......
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emkyuu wrote:

HAPPY ENDING~ weeeee~!!! hahahahas. omedetto again Shie-chan!!! weee~!! .. hahaha.
this is really great! .. i can imagine it! weeeeeee.. haha. im so hyped! .. gomen. ja na~ :)


thanx thanx~! XD!
being hyper sure is great ~ne?! XD!
LoLz!


hsj9392 wrote:

OMGosh!!
to tell you honestly..
I admire you for being such a great writer!! ^-^
it's just.. amazing how you make simple things look superb!!
this is so romantic!!
*4 thumbs up* <--- I've got 4 thumbs now!! ROFL


*haha!* LoLz!
now you've got 4 thumbs to show~
*touched*
thanx for saying that to me~~


vanialestari wrote:

OMGG,, yutoo OS! finnaly someonee makee thiss!
i've been waiting for yuto OS since lyk who knw whenn,,
andd,,
I LOVE THIS FANFIC SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!
THE STORYY IS PERFECT!
shiechann is a vryy good writerr (:


*nyaha!*
Yuto really fits a sweet character, that's why I used him in here~
arigatou for reading it van-chan~!!
>>I know you're a Yuto girl *winks*


your welcome~! haha... yeah. it is.! im hyper until now! how about u? hahas. XD
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uwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!
gomen for my late reply!!
kyAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!
hahahah its soooooo sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet!!!!


*haha!*
as I promised, I would write a sweet fanfic for all of you~!


preppygothika wrote:

NICE ONE SHIE CHAN!~
it's a happy ending this time round!
i like the way how you put evrything together,
seriously it's TOTALLY SWEET(:

ahahaha i'm kinda getting hyper now




*haha!*
I bet hyper-ness is getting all over your body~XDD!
*woohoo!*


prettydiane_owws09 wrote:

wwoooo~~~~ nice fanfic............................................................. the song was sang by Parokya ni Edgar right??.......


yep~~
it's a song by parokya ni edgar~
it kinda matches up the fic that's why I used it here..
thanx for reading it~!
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great choice of words.. Love the runway of this story,it was cute..And you even featured Parokya's song..

haha..they're my fave band ever since i started listening to music..
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great choice of words.. Love the runway of this story,it was cute..And you even featured Parokya's song..

haha..they're my fave band ever since i started listening to music..


thanx thanx~!
well, PNE is one of the coolest bands I kinda know~

and the song really fits perfectly for the story~~
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kyaaaa! i'm reading ur OS sheito chan..datte..i read this before from your pages
and i really love it!!!
you're such a great great great writer!!!
sugoi!!!
excellent job!!!!
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Geh-san wrote:

kyaaaa! i'm reading ur OS sheito chan..datte..i read this before from your pages
and i really love it!!!
you're such a great great great writer!!!
sugoi!!!
excellent job!!!!


*uuwwwaaa!* *hugz you*

I'm missing you yaji-chan~!!! 'coz whenever you're on, i'm not... -__-;;
nyweix,
thanx thanx for reading this fic~ XDD!
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