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My worst nightmare
By: deen22


this is a [OS] of my dream
gomen ne if its Ryosuke and Yuto that im paired
hahah i'm actually confused to my dream..
Why is it Ryosuke and Yuto? Not Daiki?
ohh well~ hehehehe
anyone can be my character here~!





@ edhen’s room

Yuto: hay! Change the looser ok?
Edhen: this is my PS2 so I can do what ever I want!
Yuto: hey! No fare! Change the looser ok?
Edhen: fine fine! [drowsed a bit and almost fell] whoa~
Yuto: You ok?
Ryosuke: Edhen your mom is calling you downstairs
Edhen: ok! Byebye cycle! [went down]
Yuto: do you really like her?
Ryosuke: of course!
Yuto: were best friends right? So why don’t you give her to me?!
Ryosuke: are you crazy?
Edhen: [heard what they’re talking]

After 15 minutes

Yuto: let’s go home~
Ryosuke: ok, Edhen! Were going home now!
Edhen: ok…

After they went home… 10 mins

Edhen: mom! The house is burning! [coughs]
E’s Mom: let’s go now! Pack your things before it went to us!
Edhen: ok! [packs her things]
E’s Mom: let’s leave now!
Edhen: ok!
[they already both left the house and went to a place far from their home]
Yuto: Ryosuke! Edhen’s house is on fire!
Ryosuke: What?! Come on!

@ edhen’s house

Yuto: Edhen!
Fire man: you cannot go here!
Ryosuke: but! Our friend!!! No!!! Edhen!!!!
Yuto: [tries to come inside but the fire man stops him] No!!! EDHEN!!!
Ryosuke: NO!

The house was burnt. Nothing was left.

Yuto: did they found Edhen?
Ryosuke: they haven’t! They said Edhen’s body wasn’t there and it may already become an ash!
Yuto: No… no… no! it cant be!!! They’re lying!

They thought Edhen was already dead.

@ Edhen’s side

Edhen: how… how can you know that there was a fire and already packed the things?!
E’s Mom: because… we have to move away from that place.
Edhen: just because of that? Don’t you know how much I love my friends?
E’s Mom: can’t you please not talk about your friends!
Edhen: [Remember the one Yuto and Ryosuke was talking about an hour ago] *maybe its best if I should just…. Leave them….*

@ the new house

Edhen: this is…. Much even bigger!
E’s Mom: see? I told you~
Edhen: wow! The other side is the beach! This is so nice!
E’s Mom: I knew you would be happy!
Edhen: mom… can I request something to you?
E’s Mom: Yeah?
Edhen: can you lend me some money… I want… to disguise. I don’t want Yuto and Ryosuke to notice me again.
E’s Mom: well sure dear.

Her eyes are now black-green. Her hair which was black before now became light-brown. They lips became reddish. Her cheeks became rosy. She wore dresses now that it was shorts before. And her name Edhen, now became Deen.

After 2 months

Deen: I love my new life now… no problems at all. Although I miss them. But it’s a good thing I left them. Coz they will also have a problem if I was there.

@ mall

Deen: [bumped into someone] ohh sorry! I wasn’t looking.
Ryosuke: ohh its ok… [picked her things]
Deen: Ryo-
Ryosuke: umm I’m sorry too.
Deen: *well I guess he didn’t noticed me* thanks for picking my things. Can I repay you or something?
Ryosuke: hmm… ok. Are you free tonight?
Deen: umm yeah.
Ryosuke: ok then. Can you have dinner with me?
Deen: really? I... I mean why?
Ryosuke: well my family is not in our house tonight so I guess I will just treat you so I can have someone to have dinner with.
Deen: oh all right. Sure!

@ Restaurant.

Ryosuke: thanks for accompanying me here.
Deen: ohh it’s no problem at all.
Ryosuke: anyway, you can order anything you want.
Waiter: what is your order sir, ma’am?
Deen: ok, I’ll have chicken teriyaki.
Ryosuke: ok. Fried tempura for me~
Waiter: drinks?
Deen: umm mango shake.
Ryosuke: strawberry shake.
Waiter: please wait for your order.
Ryosuke: sure.
Deen: *he’s been… kind of different. As if he’s so gentle man. But before he’s to naughty like Yuto* [saw Ryosuke staring at her] why’re you staring at me~?
Ryosuke: ohh hehehe sorry. You just… looked like my old best friend.
Deen: o… oh really?
Ryosuke: yeah… her name was Edhen.
Deen: oh… where do you live?
Ryosuke: ohh just 10 blocks away from here.
Deen: oh…
Waiter: your order is here now. Please enjoy the meal.
Both: itadaikimassu.
Deen: wow the food is delicious here.
Ryosuke: yeah.

After eating…

Deen: you can come visit my house sometimes if you want.
Ryosuke: sure thing. Ohh. I’ll drive you there.
Deen: ok.

@ Deen’s house

Deen: thanks. Ohh I forgot. What is your name?
Ryosuke: Ryosuke. Yamada Ryosuke. You?
Deen: E- Deen. Just call me Deen.
Ryosuke: ok bye.
Deen: bye.

@ Deen’s Room

Deen: I’m so glad to see him again! Aww I wish I also saw Yuto… how I miss him so much. His cuteness, his naughtiness, his… I just wanna see him again…

@ Ryosuke’s room

Ryosuke: why is she… so close to me… I mean… as if I know her from a long time ago. I wont hesitate anymore…

Ryosuke Courted Deen. And after 1 week.

Elijah: you cousin! Join us~
Deen: join? Join where?
Elijah: no more questions. [dragged Deen]

@ Restaurant

Deen: so this is where we are going.
Elijah: yeah… I just wanted to meet you my friend. Don’t worry I’ll call you Deen not Edhen.
Deen: yeah right. [Deen saw the Yuto on the table and was shock]
Elijah: Yuto this is-
Yuto: Edhen?
Deen: edhen?
Yuto: oh… sorry. I thought… you were my friend before…
Deen: its… its ok… no big deal.
Elijah: this is Deen my cousin.
Yuto: hi I’m Yuto. Nakajima Yuto.
Deen: *I am so glad to see him! He’s now handsome! And so manly! My gosh! How long has it been?* Nice to meet you Nakajima-san.
Yuto: ohh just call me Yuto.
Deen: yu- Yuto… [smiles]

They talked. They laughed. They enjoyed that night. They met again for 2 months.

Yuto: here is my address [hands the address]
Deen: eh~ you just live 1 block away from My friend:
Yuto: eh? who? I may know him.
Deen: he’s Yamada Ryosuke.
Yuto: Ryosuke? He’s my best friend.
Deen: really?
Yuto: yeah… maybe you’re the one he’s been talking about. Is he… courting you?
Deen: err… yeah… kinda…
Yuto: oh… *ryosuke was right… she looked like Edhen* you know… he liked you becaue you really looked like our friend from before…
Deen: friend? Who?
Yuto: Edhen.
Deen: oh! He mentioned her to me. What was she like?
Yuto: she’s very beautiful, gorgeous, wonderful! Everything! She’s kind, generous playful, not boring, fun~ you cant even say a single word that says bad to her.
Deen: re…. Really? Do you… liked her?
Yuto: well… yeah… I love her…
Deen: *OH MY GOSH!* where is she now?
Yuto: she’s dead…
Deen: *what?! They thought I’m dead??* oh… sorry for hearing that….
Yuto: it’s ok… even Ryosuke loved her.
Deen: really? But.. you also liked her?
Yuto: we even fought. Nah~ lets just... not talk about her anymore ne~
Deen: su… sure~
Yuto: so will you accept Ryosuke to be your Boy friend?
Deen: well… I… I think so… he’s a kind person, sweet… you know…
Yuto: yeah… He’s lucky to have you.
Deen: thanks~ ohh Elijah~ I think we have to go now.
Elijah: okay~
Yuto: bye~
Deen: byebye cycle~
Yuto: *Edhen?* bye… bye…

After 3 days…

@ Deen’s house

Ryosuke: [door bell]
Deen: yes~ [opens the door]
Ryosuke & Yuto: hello!
Deen: oh… Ryo… Ryosuke.. Yuto…
E’s Mom: Ryosuke? Yuto?
Ryosuke: Edhen’s Mom?
Deen: ah.. She’s my… Aunt
Yuto: ahh. so you must have known Edhen?
Deen: well I just heard about her to you guys…
Ryosuke: ohh…
Deen: let’s go out side~
Both: sure~

Outside…

Ryosuke: its nice here ne?~
Yuto: nice breeze~
Deen: [laughs] yes it is~ I miss my old days… *OOOPS!*
Yuto: old days?
Deen: etto… I was… from the other country before. I just came 2 months ago.
Ryosuke: ahh…

Elijah came and saw Deen

Elijah: Edhen!
Ryosuke & Yuto: Edhen?
Deen: [starts to panic] huh.. ah…. Geez! [ran away from them]
Ryosuke: Edhen? She’s Edhen?
Yuto & Ryosuke: [catches deen]
Elijah: oopppss…..
Deen: [ran unto the road] huh… [heard a beep beep and saw a light towards her]


There's a Sequel Next to this~

Credits to Jesse-chan for the ideas~! and for the ideas on the sequel for Helping me~
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really nice....
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haha~ nee... sooo love it~ mwaa!!
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really nice....
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haha~ nee... sooo love it~ mwaa!!
cant wait for the next part....^^


wa tlga lng ha!
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wee!!
as promised..
I'm going to comment on this..
your dream is so cool!!
YamaJima's there for you!!
so lucky!!
anyway..can't wait for the sequel!!
I know it would be soOoo cool!!
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OMG this is so cool(: haha(:
Love this man(:
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hsj9392 wrote:

wee!!
as promised..
I'm going to comment on this..
your dream is so cool!!
YamaJima's there for you!!
so lucky!!
anyway..can't wait for the sequel!!
I know it would be soOoo cool!!


waaa!! hahah thanks!


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OMG this is so cool(: haha(:
Love this man(:


hahahaha thanks!
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OMGGGGG AHHHH
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can't wait for the next part...
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