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For Van-chan,

The song I used is You by KAT-TUN because this song reminds me of you. Because last year, that was the bg music of your profile so the song was kinda stuck in my mind for weeks. haha! anyway, dozo~!

CHARACTERS:
Nakajima Yuto
Vann-chan. :D
Jally. :lol: I just want to be here. can I?


You by KAT-TUN.

I wonder if it’s okay for me to live for you?
I wonder if it’s okay for me to fall in love with you?
I wanna be your lover


anata no tame ni ikite ii ka na?
anata wo suki ni natte ii ka na?
I wanna be your lover


"Van-chan!" Yuto greeted her from the back. "gah... it's him. I CAN SENSE IT!" van-chan said to Jally. "as usual..." Jally replied. Yuto never gave up on Van-chan. He was always with her even though Van wanted him to stay away from him. Yuto and Van had been friends since they were always in the same class since middle school. Yuto was a person who easily expresses his feelings that's why he's very open to everyone.

"What do you want?" Van asked coldly. "nothing. I just wanna greet you. :D" Yuto replied in a lively voice. "Ne, Yuto-kun, tell me, why are you so energetic every morning?" Jally asked. "Well... Do you want me to be emo? Fine. Then I'll be emo" Yuto said and left in an emo style. "I'm just kidding, yuto-kun! Be genki!" Jally said. Yuto suddenly turned his back and shouted, "GENKI DESU!" while doing the peace sign.



That transparent smile that I can seemingly reach if I stretch out my hand
it even twinkles, it’s so precious that I can’t take my eyes off you baby
These feelings are unable to betray you
even if I get hurt, I don’t mind I can only heatedly show you my heart


te wo nobaseba todokisou na sukitooru sono egao
mabataki sae oshii hodo I can’t take my eyes off you baby
kono kimochi wa uragirenai kizutsuite mo kamawanai sa
mune no uchi wo tsutaeru dake atsui uchi ni


"Yuto, could you please stop pestering me? I'm busy here, can't you see?" Van chan asked Yuto. Van was doing her project in some project. "Demo sa, demo sa, I want to help you finish immediately so we can go out!" Yuto answered Van in a childish way. "I never told you that we'll be going out. Now go away." "Demo, I wanna go out with you. Onegai?" He said with his irresistible puppy eyes. "Oh my Gosh, Yuto, stop staring at me with those eyes. I-it... It freaks me out, okay?" Van said and turned her face back. "So is it a yes?" "NO." "But!" "No more buts! Do you even know how a pain in the neck you are? now, get out of my sight! " Van shouted at him. Yuto was almost crying so he just went out slowly, as if he was doing a music video. Then Jally went to Van, "Ne, Van-chan, that wasn't nice. I think what you did was too much." "But he won't stop pestering me! Unless I shout at him, he wouldn't stop. What am I suppose to do?" Van-chan suddenly stood up. "M-Matte, where are you going?" Jally asked. "I'm going to talk to him." "What will you tell him?" She asked. "I don't know." and then she left.


I wonder if it’s okay for me to live for you?
I want to share just one dream with you
I wonder if it’s okay for me to fall in love with you?
I want to wrap you up softly and protect you


anata no tame ni ikite ii ka na?
tatta hitotsu no yume wo wake aitai
anata wo suki ni natte ii ka na?
sotto tsutsumi konde mamoritai yeah



"I'm sorry." Van murmured. "Pardon? sorry, I didn't hear you" Yuto said, innocently. "I said I'm sorry. I know I said too much but it's just that I was busy with our project so I got a bit rude so I shouted at you. I'm-" "It's okay van-chan. I know I was very annoying. and I was the one who was rude." Yuto humbly said and left. "I just wanted to be recognized by you" he uttered in his mind and left."
The next day, at school, Yuto ignored Van-chan. "What happened to him?" Van thought. So Van approached him and asked, "Ne, Daijoubu ka?" "Un!" he replied and smiled, "Jaa, I'll be going" and left. "Something is really weird." Van thought and left too.



There’s no need for decorated words
being strategic and such doesn’t suit me
there’s nothing that I’m hiding
I can’t take my eyes off you baby


kazari kotoba wa iranai
kakehiki nado niawanai
kakusu koto wa nani mo nai
I can’t take my eyes off you baby


Van investigated Yuto's behavior. She was really being ignored by him. She thought maybe there's another girl that he likes s o he gave up on van. She stalked Yuto until he reached home. When Yuto was near the gate of their house he lost his balance and he tripped. Van ran to him and helped him get up. "Daijoubu ka?" Yuto stood up. "W-why are you here?" "I don't understand why you always ignore me. So i came here to ask you again. Please answer me honestly. We've been classmates for a long time. You were not like this when we were still young. What happened to you?" Van asked with a shaky voice. She wanted to cry that moment but she stopped her tears "i don't like hanging out with you anymore." "stop lying! please be honest. I don't want to get hurt because of a lie. I'd rather live a painful and truthful life than live a good life but it's all a lie." and van-chan can't help but cry. " I'm sick."



There are no lies in these feelings
about the same as the blue of the sky
the beating of my heart from gazing at you now
I don’t want to run from it


kono kimochi ni uso wa nai sa
sora no ao to onaji gurai
ima mitsumeta tokimeki kara
nigetakunai


"y-you're sick? What's your sickness?" "I have cancer. I'll be living for around 3 months." "I just told you a while ago lying." Van said. "I'm already telling the truth. Now, can you go?" " No! I won't leave you, yuto. You won't leave us right?" Van asked him. "Why? Can you give me a reason to live on? I'm just a burden to you. You never understood my feelings. You were so bitter to me. I don't even think you'll fall for me someday. and you-" then Yuto suddenly felt Van's lips touch his. Yuto stood still for a long time, still won't accept the fact that Van kissed him. "that's not true. I love you." Van said and hugged him tightly. Van felt Yuto's arm wrap around her body. "I love you too" and he replied. They stayed in that position for a minute. " Don't leave me. please. I'm begging you. live on. You don't know how much you mean to me. Without you, my world will breakdown. I won't be the van you know. so please, stay." Van begged Yuto again and again. and finally, yuto replied, "Yes, of course I will. since it's for YOU." and kissed.



I don’t need anything else but you
no matter what kind of sadness, we can get through it
I want to be holding the person important to me
the heartbeat that starts from the two of us


anata no hoka ni nani mo iranai
donna kanashimi sae mo koeteyukeru
taisetsu na hito dakishimetetai
futari kara hajimaru kirameki wo yeah


The next day, Yuto and Van went to school together. When they arrived in their classroom, everyone was staring at them. "what's wrong?" she asked, then Jally touched Van's forehead, "are you sick?" she asked. "why would I get sick?" Van asked. You are holding hands with Yuto. Are you sure with what you're doing?" Jally asked. "Well, what's wrong with holding hands with yuto?" Van said to Jally. "well... nothing... I find it weird, you know. Jaa, sensei's here." and they sat on their respective seats.
After class, Van and yuto were together, Van was cheerful the whole time while Yuto is enduring the pain inside his heart. Yuto was hurt the whole time. He was hurt because someday, he'll be leaving. He wanted to cry that time, but of course, if he did, Van will be worried. On the other side, Van wanted to make Yuto happy as much as she can. not because he'll be leaving, but because she wants to express her love for him. Though it's really tough for Van, she had to accept the fact that Yuto is sick and will leave her anytime.


I wonder if it’s okay for me to live for you?
I want to share just one dream with you
I wonder if it’s okay for me to fall in love with you?
I want to wrap you up softly and protect you


anata no tame ni ikite ii ka na?
tatta hitotsu no yume wo wake aitai
anata wo suki ni natte ii ka na?
sotto tsutsumi konde mamoritai yeah


The following weeks was very memorable and unforgettable for the two. They both enjoyed every minute Yuto had. One day, Van noticed that Yuto wasn't in their classroom. He was the earliest student until now. Van suddenly grabbed her phone and called him. Van didn't hear the voice of Yuto so she suddenly grabbed her bag and rushed through the door. Jally blocked her and asked, "ne, ne, what's with the hurry?" She asked. "It's... something... " Van answered. " You can't go out now, sensei will be here any minute."
Van waited for time to pass by. She was very uneasy thinking of Yuto. "what if he was rushed tot he hospital? Is he doing well?" those questions kept ringing in her head. When it was their departure, she dashed again through their classroom. She went to the hospital and asked the nurse if one of their patient's name is "nakajima yuto". The nurse told Van the room number and rushed going to his room. When she opened it, Yuto was lying in his bed, with different tubes injecting his body. She also saw his parents by his side.
"You must be Van." his dad asked. " hai. Vania desu." she replied politely. "Jaa. We'll be leaving the two of you so you can talk for a while." his mom said and they left.
"Ne, why weren't you answering your phone?" she asked. "ah!! gomen! I left it at home!" he apologized. " It's okay. I was just kidding." "you shouldn't have bothered coming here." he said. "but I was really worried. you weren't answering your phone calls. how am I suppose to calm down?" "I'm sorry!" he apologized again.
"maaa.. it's been 2 months since you told me you were sick." Van didn't hear a reply from him. when she looked at Yuto, his eyes was closed. Van thought he was just sleeping so she decided to wake him up. She tried and tried, but he didn't wake up. She started calling the doctors ad nurses. The nurses entered his room and tried to revive him. Van was crying nonstop in front of Yuto, who as trying his best to live on.




to be continued...
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wow jally-chan this is so cool cant wait for more(:
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waah! this is soo good!
demo yuto kun!...huhu..i hope he can survive in the end..waah!
twins will really cry once she read this...
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damn...>__<!!!

another fic for me to cry on~!!

why, why OH WHY?!

Yuto's too young to be killed by this fanfic~!
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xiaoqian94 wrote:

wow jally-chan this is so cool cant wait for more(:


yay! thanks, xiaogian-san! I'm still waiting for van-chan to go online.. hope she likes it.
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waah! this is soo good!
demo yuto kun!...huhu..i hope he can survive in the end..waah!
twins will really cry once she read this...


awwww... thanks you, geh-chan! well, I hope so too. :X
I hope she'd like this! :O I just made it last year and I forgot to continue and post it. XD
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damn...>__<!!!

another fic for me to cry on~!!

why, why OH WHY?!

Yuto's too young to be killed by this fanfic~!


waaaaa! don't cry, shie-chan! T_T

hmmm... we'll see if he's going to die or not. :)) remember, there's still a "to be continued" line in the end. haha! XD
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OMG OMG OMG,,
jallychan!~ thanks for making me this oneshot!
this oneshot is superr wonderful!
the story and the character! i lovee them all.
i hope you could post the continue soon.
cos cos cos
i couldn't get enough with this
i need moreee ><"
anwyay, great job Jallychan and can't wait for the next
(:
arigato for making me this oneshot. i promise i'll post urs soon (:
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ahhhhh cant wait for the next part
i hope yuto can live on ... this is sadd
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WOAH. I haven't updated myself for like 1 month and a half. so yeah. here's the continuation.

We don’t need to pretend or anything
because there’s a tomorrow
take out your courage
it can become freedom


kako nado iranai
asu ga aru kara
yuuki wo dashina yo
jiyuu ni nareru



Van waited for Yuto outside the emergency room. She kept on praying for Yuto to survive his illness and she was begging for a miracle. She waited and waited, until his parents and the doctor came out of the room. His mom was crying on the shoulders if his husband. Van suddenly cried and thought he's really dead. His mom and dad, told Van the Yuto didn't survive, according to the doctor. They were all crying when suddenly, the nurse called for the doctor. The doctor rushed inside to room. "I'm sorry about that. We detected a heartbeat of your son. We're really sorry." and the doctor bowed. "So, does that mean... He's alive?" His mom asked the doctor while crying. " Yes ma'am! And we will really do our best now!" the doctor said and left immediately. They were all in tears and hugged each other. The operation lasted a day, and van already went home. When Yuto was put into a private room, his parents hugged him tightly.



Getting past solitude, I’ve finally come across
a miracle that’s being called out by angels
recognize my caring, allow my love
unfasten your heart and come to me


kodoku wo koete yatto deaeta
tenshi ga sasou kiseki ni yeah
aibu mitomete ai wo yurushite
kokoro wo hodoite come to me, yeah



The following morning, when yuto woke up, he saw all of his classmates surrounding him. "He's awake!" Jally called out. Then his classmates and friends crowded his bed. "Daijoubu ka?" Jally asked. "Yeah... I think... Where's Vann?" he asked right away. "She's still at home, resting. She was with your parents while waiting for you." Jally explained. "oh.. really?" Yuto said...
They all chatted about school and some of his classmates teased him for Vann. They were all happy when someone suddenly opened the door. It was Vann. "Oh... the other love bird has arrived! Let's leave them alone." Jally teased. "No, you really don't have to leave. You can stay." Vann said. " No... It's you're bonding time. and besides, we've talked to him already. I bet his sick of us already. anyway, WE SHALL RETURN!" Jally shouted and left with her other classamates. "Jally's so jolly." Van said, while dropping her bag in the sofa. "Lol. yeah." he said and laughed. "So, how are you?" She asked. "I'm doing good." he replied." Really? that's good." she said and gave him a smile. "and also because you're here." He added and smiled. When they both realized that they're staring at each other, they laughed. "I guess you're okay. I'll be calling them back." Vann said and went to the door."No. not yet. Let's talk for a little more." "oh.. okay. sure." Van went back to her seat
"The doctor told me that I won't be in school for a while. Since it was a miracle that I was alive. I need to be more careful about myself." Yuto said. "oh... okay! sure! then, I'll be taking care of you and -" van happily said. "but the thing is... I'll be home schooled." yuto said. " It's okay. then I'll be coming to your house everyday." " Are you sure about that? You would always struggle to go to our house. You don't really have to. It's okay." He asked.
"I already told you. It's okay. Can't you just allow me to do what I want to do to you? I've opened my heart for you. just you. and it's really a big miracle for me. Just give me a chance to prove myself to you. please?"



I don’t need anything else but you
no matter what kind of sadness, we can get through it
I want to be holding the person important to me


anata no hoka ni nani mo iranai
donna kanashimi sae mo koeteyukeru
taisetsu na hito dakishimetetai


Yuto went back to the school. It was a saturday morning. and no one was around the school. He walked along the corridors alone. He was getting all of his school stuff because he'll be studying at home. After getting his things under his desk. He went straight to his locker. When he opened it, he was so shocked because it was filled with confetti everywhere. When he removed all of the confetti inside his locker, he saw a lot of photos of him with his friends. His picture during their field trip, school festival, their dance night, and when he digged into it, he saw a picture of him, with Vann, snobbing him, while he was on his knees. He laughed and carried all his things. when he looked back, he saw Vann staring at him. "What are you doing?" she asked, helping him carry his things. " I'm getting my things." "oh... that's a bad idea. our classmates will hate you." she teased. "I don't really like seeing crying faces when I leave." he said. "Geez. You're so conceited! " she teased again and laughed. "I didn't mean it that way, I mean, I don't really like people missing me because, I'll be the one who's missing them more." he explained. "oh.. really? Jaa. Let's go." they held hands and went to the playground. "Ah... I remember when we were still in kinder." She said and sighed. "Sou... Time's so fast. I can't believe we're in this stage in life already." he said and also sighed. They were both staring at the sky when Vann looked at him and kissed him on the cheek. "Thanks. thanks for everything." she said. He held her hands, and hugged her.


owari!


Thanks to all who bothered to read this OS even though it took 1 month and a half to update the last part. haha!

I hope you like it, vann-chan!
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uwaaaa !
this OS is soooo good <3
i love this a lot.
thanks !
ofcourse i like it a lot !
hehe, =)
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uwaaaa !
this OS is soooo good <3
i love this a lot.
thanks !
ofcourse i like it a lot !
hehe, =)


thanks, vann-chan! haha! I'm sorry if the end wasn't that good. I just don't know how to end it. :))
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jally23 wrote:


vanialestari wrote:

uwaaaa !
this OS is soooo good <3
i love this a lot.
thanks !
ofcourse i like it a lot !
hehe, =)


thanks, vann-chan! haha! I'm sorry if the end wasn't that good. I just don't know how to end it. :))


hehe the ending was great ! :D
lovee it a lot :)
:) :) :)
ten thumbs up ! x]

*oops, did i hv that muchh?
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vanialestari wrote:


jally23 wrote:


vanialestari wrote:

uwaaaa !
this OS is soooo good <3
i love this a lot.
thanks !
ofcourse i like it a lot !
hehe, =)


thanks, vann-chan! haha! I'm sorry if the end wasn't that good. I just don't know how to end it. :))


hehe the ending was great ! :D
lovee it a lot :)
:) :) :)
ten thumbs up ! x]

*oops, did i hv that muchh? :D


lols! where did you get the other 8 thumbs? :))
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jally23 wrote:


vanialestari wrote:


jally23 wrote:


vanialestari wrote:

uwaaaa !
this OS is soooo good <3
i love this a lot.
thanks !
ofcourse i like it a lot !
hehe, =)


thanks, vann-chan! haha! I'm sorry if the end wasn't that good. I just don't know how to end it. :))


hehe the ending was great ! :D
lovee it a lot :)
:) :) :)
ten thumbs up ! x]

*oops, did i hv that muchh? :D


lols! where did you get the other 8 thumbs? :))


well, i'll ask yuto, yama-chan, yamapi, and tegoshi to help me!

theree.

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