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Okay, so while discussing some ideas I had with Yaidoll I was inspired to create this story. I can't guarantee how far I'll be able to take this, but I hope maybe I can keep this one going for a while... So I figured since I'm the Mod for Horror I should at least come up with a pretty decent Horror story. So yes, me and Yaidoll collaborated together and came up with a brand new nasty Monster. So I wanted to play around with this brand new monster in the bloodiest and nastiest way that I can try to come up with. So... I figured first I might try and make a preview first, and then work with the story more as I develop it better in my head. So I'll start with a preview or a sort of story spoiler and then add the actual first episode later when I have time to really put it up.

"Sweet Queen" Preview/Prologue



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Hey, wow, u really took it deeper then we talked about, that's great, I can see it will develop in to a great horror!
+ the descriptions of the sceenes added an extra touch to it. Great job Rezzy and let me know if u need anything, I'll b more than happy to help!
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Hey, wow, u really took it deeper then we talked about, that's great, I can see it will develop in to a great horror!
+ the descriptions of the sceenes added an extra touch to it. Great job Rezzy and let me know if u need anything, I'll b more than happy to help!


Sweet, well I do consider you being the co-creator, so pm me if you got some ideas or concepts.
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All right, thank u so much, I will if I get some ideas... most likely eventually I will, but right now the only thing I have in my head are psych consepts! lol
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All right, thank u so much, I will if I get some ideas... most likely eventually I will, but right now the only thing I have in my head are psych consepts! lol


lol Well feel free to draw up the characters if you want, cause I suck at drawing. That would be kind of cool so that People (as well as me) can get a better perspective on the characters. You don't have to if you don't want to though.
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All right, thank u so much, I will if I get some ideas... most likely eventually I will, but right now the only thing I have in my head are psych consepts! lol


lol Well feel free to draw up the characters if you want, cause I suck at drawing. That would be kind of cool so that People (as well as me) can get a better perspective on the characters. You don't have to if you don't want to though.


Awwww, I want to but... I can't right now, had a serious eye serjury and my stupid doc doesn't allow me to do any drawing yet.... it sucks so much!
But I will as soon as he gives me the green light.
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All right, thank u so much, I will if I get some ideas... most likely eventually I will, but right now the only thing I have in my head are psych consepts! lol


lol Well feel free to draw up the characters if you want, cause I suck at drawing. That would be kind of cool so that People (as well as me) can get a better perspective on the characters. You don't have to if you don't want to though.


Awwww, I want to but... I can't right now, had a serious eye serjury and my stupid doc doesn't allow me to do any drawing yet.... it sucks so much!
But I will as soon as he gives me the green light.


lol Okay that sounds cool. Sorry to hear about your surgery, what happened, are you okay?
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Rezzy64 wrote:


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All right, thank u so much, I will if I get some ideas... most likely eventually I will, but right now the only thing I have in my head are psych consepts! lol


lol Well feel free to draw up the characters if you want, cause I suck at drawing. That would be kind of cool so that People (as well as me) can get a better perspective on the characters. You don't have to if you don't want to though.


Awwww, I want to but... I can't right now, had a serious eye serjury and my stupid doc doesn't allow me to do any drawing yet.... it sucks so much!
But I will as soon as he gives me the green light.


lol Okay that sounds cool. Sorry to hear about your surgery, what happened, are you okay?


Haha, np, it was on october, due to a car crash. but m ok, just a long recovery process.
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Rezzy64 wrote:


yaidoll wrote:


Rezzy64 wrote:


yaidoll wrote:



All right, thank u so much, I will if I get some ideas... most likely eventually I will, but right now the only thing I have in my head are psych consepts! lol


lol Well feel free to draw up the characters if you want, cause I suck at drawing. That would be kind of cool so that People (as well as me) can get a better perspective on the characters. You don't have to if you don't want to though.


Awwww, I want to but... I can't right now, had a serious eye serjury and my stupid doc doesn't allow me to do any drawing yet.... it sucks so much!
But I will as soon as he gives me the green light.


lol Okay that sounds cool. Sorry to hear about your surgery, what happened, are you okay?


Haha, np, it was on october, due to a car crash. but m ok, just a long recovery process.


Wow... You really are a bad driver aren't you? lol
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Rezzy64 wrote:


yaidoll wrote:


Rezzy64 wrote:


yaidoll wrote:



All right, thank u so much, I will if I get some ideas... most likely eventually I will, but right now the only thing I have in my head are psych consepts! lol


lol Well feel free to draw up the characters if you want, cause I suck at drawing. That would be kind of cool so that People (as well as me) can get a better perspective on the characters. You don't have to if you don't want to though.


Awwww, I want to but... I can't right now, had a serious eye serjury and my stupid doc doesn't allow me to do any drawing yet.... it sucks so much!
But I will as soon as he gives me the green light.


lol Okay that sounds cool. Sorry to hear about your surgery, what happened, are you okay?


Haha, np, it was on october, due to a car crash. but m ok, just a long recovery process.


Wow... You really are a bad driver aren't you? lol


Hahah, actually, m a good driver... it wasn't my fault... it was some other idiots who weren't paying attention to the road.
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Rezzy64 wrote:


yaidoll wrote:


Rezzy64 wrote:


yaidoll wrote:


Rezzy64 wrote:


yaidoll wrote:



All right, thank u so much, I will if I get some ideas... most likely eventually I will, but right now the only thing I have in my head are psych consepts! lol


lol Well feel free to draw up the characters if you want, cause I suck at drawing. That would be kind of cool so that People (as well as me) can get a better perspective on the characters. You don't have to if you don't want to though.


Awwww, I want to but... I can't right now, had a serious eye serjury and my stupid doc doesn't allow me to do any drawing yet.... it sucks so much!
But I will as soon as he gives me the green light.


lol Okay that sounds cool. Sorry to hear about your surgery, what happened, are you okay?


Haha, np, it was on october, due to a car crash. but m ok, just a long recovery process.


Wow... You really are a bad driver aren't you? lol


Hahah, actually, m a good driver... it wasn't my fault... it was some other idiots who weren't paying attention to the road.


Wow... That's pretty lame.You should of shot the guy in the face with a gun. O_O
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yaidoll wrote:


Rezzy64 wrote:


yaidoll wrote:


Rezzy64 wrote:


yaidoll wrote:



All right, thank u so much, I will if I get some ideas... most likely eventually I will, but right now the only thing I have in my head are psych consepts! lol


lol Well feel free to draw up the characters if you want, cause I suck at drawing. That would be kind of cool so that People (as well as me) can get a better perspective on the characters. You don't have to if you don't want to though.


Awwww, I want to but... I can't right now, had a serious eye serjury and my stupid doc doesn't allow me to do any drawing yet.... it sucks so much!
But I will as soon as he gives me the green light.


lol Okay that sounds cool. Sorry to hear about your surgery, what happened, are you okay?


Haha, np, it was on october, due to a car crash. but m ok, just a long recovery process.


Wow... You really are a bad driver aren't you? lol


Hahah, actually, m a good driver... it wasn't my fault... it was some other idiots who weren't paying attention to the road.


Wow... That's pretty lame.You should of shot the guy in the face with a gun. O_O


Nope, I should have cut his head, if only I could have been able to get out of my car, but was sandwished between 4 others.
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Nope, I should have cut his head, if only I could have been able to get out of my car, but was sandwished between 4 others.


Okay so anyways back to my story which I'm currently writing, I set it up so that this part I wrote first is in fact the prologue. So it's important to read that. You like how messy and bloody I made the beginning?
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Nope, I should have cut his head, if only I could have been able to get out of my car, but was sandwished between 4 others.


Okay so anyways back to my story which I'm currently writing, I set it up so that this part I wrote first is in fact the prologue. So it's important to read that. You like how messy and bloody I made the beginning? :D


yeap, the mess and blood r a key factor... so yea, I liked it a lot, the fact that there was a lot of it and descriptions of the setting made it even better.
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Rezzy64 wrote:


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Nope, I should have cut his head, if only I could have been able to get out of my car, but was sandwished between 4 others.


Okay so anyways back to my story which I'm currently writing, I set it up so that this part I wrote first is in fact the prologue. So it's important to read that. You like how messy and bloody I made the beginning? :D


yeap, the mess and blood r a key factor... so yea, I liked it a lot, the fact that there was a lot of it and descriptions of the setting made it even better.


Yay!!! I feel so happy about my bloody nasty mess!
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