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Posted 2/4/09

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Nope, I should have cut his head, if only I could have been able to get out of my car, but was sandwished between 4 others.


Okay so anyways back to my story which I'm currently writing, I set it up so that this part I wrote first is in fact the prologue. So it's important to read that. You like how messy and bloody I made the beginning? :D


yeap, the mess and blood r a key factor... so yea, I liked it a lot, the fact that there was a lot of it and descriptions of the setting made it even better.


Yay!!! I feel so happy about my bloody nasty mess! :D


Hahah, u should after all the hard work u put in to it!
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Posted 2/4/09

yaidoll wrote:


Rezzy64 wrote:


yaidoll wrote:


Rezzy64 wrote:


yaidoll wrote:

Nope, I should have cut his head, if only I could have been able to get out of my car, but was sandwished between 4 others.


Okay so anyways back to my story which I'm currently writing, I set it up so that this part I wrote first is in fact the prologue. So it's important to read that. You like how messy and bloody I made the beginning? :D


yeap, the mess and blood r a key factor... so yea, I liked it a lot, the fact that there was a lot of it and descriptions of the setting made it even better.


Yay!!! I feel so happy about my bloody nasty mess! :D


Hahah, u should after all the hard work u put in to it!


I still thank you for sparking my idea!
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Posted 2/4/09

Rezzy64 wrote:


yaidoll wrote:


Rezzy64 wrote:


yaidoll wrote:


Rezzy64 wrote:


yaidoll wrote:

Nope, I should have cut his head, if only I could have been able to get out of my car, but was sandwished between 4 others.


Okay so anyways back to my story which I'm currently writing, I set it up so that this part I wrote first is in fact the prologue. So it's important to read that. You like how messy and bloody I made the beginning? :D


yeap, the mess and blood r a key factor... so yea, I liked it a lot, the fact that there was a lot of it and descriptions of the setting made it even better.


Yay!!! I feel so happy about my bloody nasty mess! :D


Hahah, u should after all the hard work u put in to it!


I still thank you for sparking my idea!


Haha, it was nothing, u did most of the thinking!
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Forgive me for not going into great detail on this, but I feel like I'd rather wait until after episode one. I do like what I've seen so far.
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yay, blood and gore! it's really horror, from the mass murder to the creepy little girl. i just wished that you didn't reveal her true personality so early, or at least made that revealing more dramatic (like smiling at the man with her fingers clutched around the neck of stuffed toy and a little smile).
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yay, blood and gore! it's really horror, from the mass murder to the creepy little girl. i just wished that you didn't reveal her true personality so early, or at least made that revealing more dramatic (like smiling at the man with her fingers clutched around the neck of stuffed toy and a little smile). :D


Well, I didn't exactly tell a lot about the girl at all. There are so many fun things that I'm going to do with that girl, you have no idea what kind of fun little dark twisted things are going to go on here... All I got for you currently is a nasty massacre and a suspicious sweet loving girl. (Que evil laughter.)
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