[Fanfic] Rejection
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Posted 2/4/09
Please read. First fanfic!
Posted 2/4/09
it was good but the problem is tat in the last pragraph u got off topic bout u narrating all of a sudden tadase is narrating u hav to b careful next time
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Posted 2/4/09
lol, i agree with shugodansen, the last part was off topic, but its a good fan fic~
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Posted 2/4/09
thanks. Its my first so its messed up
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