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[FANFICTION] Can love be found?
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Posted 2/5/09 , edited 2/8/09
me: okay guys, here is my first fanfiction!!!!
ikuto: is it amuto?
me: duh!
amu: nnooooooo!!!!
me: what? would you rather be with tadase?
amu: ...
me: okay! ran! it's your turn to do the disclaimer!
ran: appupuppu DOES NOT own shugo chara!!
me: do you have to stress the does not part...
p.s. the vampires are based on TWILIGHT!!
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ikuto p.o.v.
rriiinngggg!!!
I groaned slamed my hand down on the alarm. "Ikuto-nya!!! It's time for college-nya!!", yoru banters.

"Go away yoru", i mutter as i get up.

i slowly walk to the bathroom. as the hot water runs down my body, i think about the day that SHE disappered.

" Bye Ikuto". she calls after one of our random encounters.
it's getting dark and i wondered if i should go with her. But then I thought that she would be mad if she saw me following her so i slowly walked back home. i had a very bad feeling as i went into my room but i just shook it off.
The next day, i saw the gaurdians walk out of their school. i didn't see amu there so i decied to tease kiddy king and ask him where she was.
as i got closer, i saw that their faces are sad and grave. i jumped down from the tree and said, "hey kiddy king". "tyskomi ikuto!", he shouts.
i laugh mokingly at him and ask where amu is. his face suddenly turned grave and he said two words.
"she dissapered".


they never found her. to this day hinamori amu is still missing.

it felt as if my heart had shattered into a million pieces.

after she was gone, i rarely talked to anyone anymore.

then i made a new outside character. i pretended to be just the way i was before, holding in the pain and sadness.
i realized that i loved amu.

i sighed and turned of the water and quickly got dressed.

i live in a different part of japan now. the college that i'm going to is one of the top colleges in the country.

most people would have never thought that i was actually a genius.

"lets go yoru", i call as i grab my books and leave my dorm.

i sowly walked to my first class, taking my time and ignoring the fan-girl screams as i passed by them.

there was actually an ikuto fan club! that's soo stupid and i honestly think that the girls are wasting their time.

i would never go out with those stupid fan-girls.

my heart only longed for one person and that person had disappered.

i reached my classroom and slowly sat down in my seat.

"class!", said my teacher "a new family transfered here and all their kids are starting this college."

"one of their daughters has this class so i would like all of you to greet her properly."

"great! a new person", i think sarcastically.

all the students are mumuring excitedly. "i heard that the new family is mega rich and they live in a mansion!", a girl exclamed. " i also heard that they were supermodels!", a guy exclaimed.

i just sighed.

" class! let me introduce you to Hananzo Amu!"

everybody gasped. the girl in front of us was the most beautiful girl that i have ever seen! she was absoutely gorgeus!

she had waist-length pink hair and golden eyes. she also had the palest skin that i ever saw. her face was perfectly flawless and she had a stunning body. the only thing that marred her beauty were the purple shadows underneath her big eyes, as if she hadn't slept in a long time.

suddenly, a burst of recognision went through me.

"a-amu?!", i gasped.
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me: sooooo, what do you think? love it? hate it?don't care?
ikuto: i love it! i love it!
me: you only love it because it's amuto...
miki: anyway, READ AND REVIEW!!




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Posted 2/6/09 , edited 2/6/09
Haha. The idea of twilight really was in this.
Perfect features.
LOL! xD.
Uhm, some of the words are spelt wrongly yeah, but looking at your vocab your english is actually quite good. :3
update soon.
cool idea. lol.
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nice chapter! update soon!
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Whoa! Is Amu a......VAMPIRE!?!?~
This is awesome! Plz update soon! I can't wait 2 find out wat happens next!!!~ XD
This is a great chapter! Is this story on fanfiction.com? I would add it as a fav!~ ^_^
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kakoii!!!! ikutos point of view is great!! more more!!!
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woo~!! this is great ( for once, the girl is the frking vampire ^-^) though the saddest part is that i haven't seen twillight yet x(
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cutekatara wrote:

Whoa! Is Amu a......VAMPIRE!?!?~
This is awesome! Plz update soon! I can't wait 2 find out wat happens next!!!~ XD
This is a great chapter! Is this story on fanfiction.com? I would add it as a fav!~ ^_^


actually, i haven't put it on fanfiction.net yet. i'm probally going to though because i already have an account. i just wanted to test this story out and see if it was good enough to put on fanfiction. i'll tell u if i put it on there though! thankz soo much 4 ur review!
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-Hikari wrote:

Haha. The idea of twilight really was in this.
Perfect features.
LOL! xD.
Uhm, some of the words are spelt wrongly yeah, but looking at your vocab your english is actually quite good. :3
update soon.
cool idea. lol.


yeah, i do have sume spelling mistakes... ha ha! i've always been super bad at spelling at school! anyway, next chapter, i'll try not to make any spellling mistakes! thankz for your review!
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me: hi everyone!! thanks for all the awesome reviews!!! i feel so happath and hyper inside!! anyway, there will be a lot of amu's p.o.v. in this chapter!
amu: yay! i finally show up!
ikuto: so you are excited about seeing me.
amu: a-am not! *glares at ikuto*
me: *sigh* oh yeah, sorry about not putting too much of the shugo charas in the first chapter. there probally won't be too much of the shugo charas. by the way, amu won't have her shugo charas anymore. anyway... on with the show! ha ha...
dia: appupupppu dosen't own shugo chara (although she wishes that she did)
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amu's p.o.v.

i waited outside the door, taking in a deep breath and holding it. i didn't want to be too overwhelmed with all the scents of the warm, delicious blood pulsating under their skin... the delicious taste...

ugh! "control yourself!", i told myself mentally. i didn't get the power of super self control for nothing! i directed my thoughts away from the warm blood and tried to concentrate on something else.

if anyone had looked at me while i was having this internal war, they wouldn't have noticed anything at all.

my face would have looked expressionless and i would have looked like a statue.

suddenly the teacher came and gasped at me. he stared at my beautiful face while his mouth opened and closed like a fish. finally, when he could say coherant words, he told me to come in. i walked quickly in, getting annoyed at the slow pace at which he, and all other humans, walked.

i turned and assesed the humans that i would have to spend a year with, my face expressionless.

all of them stared at me, their eyes bulging out of thier sockets. a boy actually fell out of his chair.

i almost laughed. almost. instead i just smirked at the class.

three other boys fell out of their chairs. i turned my attention away from them and glanced at the rest of the class. all of them were pretty unremarkable and normal except for a guy with midnight blue hair and dark blue eyes.

that guy was staring at me with the weirdest expression on his face. then his mouth opened and he said, "a-amu".

i just stared at him with one perfect eyebrow raised and said, " whaddya want?". he just kept staring at me.

the teacher said," so hananzo-san, would you tell us a little about yourself?".

whoops! i used up my oxygen supply talking to that weird guy. i tightened my muscles and took in a breath just as the kid next to the blue-hair guy slammed his folder down, sending the blue-haired guy's scent towards me.

it was like breathing in a fist full of flames. i instantly half-crouched down in an attack stance. that guy's scent was the most delicious scent that i have ever breathed in my life.

all my super self-control power washed away after taking a breath of that guy's scent. my eyes darted around the room, judging the best attack position.

yes i ,hananzo amu, am a vampire.

ikuto p.o.v.

as i stared at amu longer, i realized that this couldn't be amu. she is supposed to be in high school for pete's sake!

her face was also completly different. i sighed, my hopes dashed.

the teacher asked amu to tell us more about herself. the guy sitting next to me who,for some reason, is always in a bad mood, slammed his folder down for no reason.

suddenly that girl ,amu, turned herself towards me so fast that i didn't even see her turn.

she suddenly shifted into a half-crouch and glared at me.

i could see the fire behind her eyes and suddenly a wave of fear washed through me. it looked as if she wanted to kill me!
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me: oh i love cliff hangers!!
ikuto: is amu really going to kill me?
me: mabye...
amu: woah! i'm a vampire?!
me: i know! i'm getting tired of ikuto always being the vampire so i made u a vampire!!
me: please R&R!!






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Okies!~ XD
This is a great chapter too! But is this Amu the same as Hinamori Amu or a different version of Amu?~ ^_^
Plz update soon! I can't wait 2 find out wat Amu is about 2 do 2 Ikuto...~ o.0
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omg i luv it i can't wait wat will happen 2 ikuto i wonder ps. plezz uplode soon ?????
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Okies!~ XD
This is a great chapter too! But is this Amu the same as Hinamori Amu or a different version of Amu?~ ^_^
Plz update soon! I can't wait 2 find out wat Amu is about 2 do 2 Ikuto...~ o.0


no. itz the same amu but she might be different because she's a vampire. you'll figure out why she didn't reconize ikuto in the next chapter! its a secret!
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lilfary wrote:

omg i luv it i can't wait wat will happen 2 ikuto i wonder ps. plezz uplode soon ?????


don't worry! nothing too bad will happen to ikuto! mabye...
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cutekatara wrote:


Okies!~ XD
This is a great chapter too! But is this Amu the same as Hinamori Amu or a different version of Amu?~ ^_^
Plz update soon! I can't wait 2 find out wat Amu is about 2 do 2 Ikuto...~ o.0


no. itz the same amu but she might be different because she's a vampire. you'll figure out why she didn't reconize ikuto in the next chapter! its a secret!


Awww...well, i guess i gotta wait...~ ^_^
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ok guys, i'm gonna try to put up the next chapter up today! mabye...
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