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[FANFICTION] Can love be found?
Posted 2/19/09
it makes me wish i had read twilight. i cant read itcuz iv got exams cumin up.

but im finding it hard to imagine amu as..um..wats the word..... ........violent??or ....like..well this different!
i hope amuto moments cum out fast!!! how regularly do u upload??
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Posted 2/19/09

blue_flame wrote:

it makes me wish i had read twilight. i cant read itcuz iv got exams cumin up.

but im finding it hard to imagine amu as..um..wats the word..... ........violent??or ....like..well this different!
i hope amuto moments cum out fast!!! how regularly do u upload??


oh amu isn't a violent vampire. when she pushed ikuto, she just wanted him to get away from her because she was losing control of herself. i usually update every 1-3 days, depending on my mood.
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Posted 2/19/09 , edited 2/19/09
me: hi people! i feeling really bored today so i decided to update! b.t.w. did u guys notice how amu said that momo reminded her of somebody... i wonder who it was...
ikuto: i'm bored today...
me: then go bother amu.
ikuto: ok! amu!
amu: ahhhhhh!! ikuto you pervert!
ikuto: awwww! come back!!
amu: appu-chan! start the story and make me kill him!
me:...o...k...
amu: appu-chan dosen't own shugo chara! ahhhh! ikuto is back!! runs awayikuto p.o.v.

i walked slowly back to my dorm, thinking about today.

i glanced down at my arm, looking at the bruises that i got when she pushed me. at first, i was in total shock. the guys that i hit into were on the floor next to me, groaning.

everyone was asking each other why she pushed me. "w.o.w.! she's strong too!!", exclaimed everybody. what's the matter with everybody? she pushed me and nobody even seemed to care.

ryuu helped me up. " dude, we better avoid her", he said. "yeah...", i agreed.


i sighed. for some reason i wasen't mad at her. i was actually yearning for her after she left! ugh! what's wrong with me?!

it can't be love, could it?

(the next day)

i slowly walked into class, kind of wary about seeing amu again. but when i sat down, i didn't see her there.

she never came during the whole class. i just stared at her empty seat, feeling a strange throb in my chest.

(at lunch)

i walked to lunch, laughing about a joke that ryuu said. i glanced at the hananzo family table as i got my food and sat down. they were mumuring quietly to each other, thei plates of food untouched.

i realized that nobody was sitting with them and i kind of understood why. they let out a dark aura. every time you got close to them, you felt instantly scared. even if people asked if they could sit next to them, they refused. huh. what a strange family.

"hey ikuto!", all my friends greeted me. "yo", i said simply and i started eating my lunch.

"awww! i'm soo sad!", said my friend Jun. "why?", i asked.

"hananzo amu-san isn't here today!" i just rolled my eyes.

just then, a girl walked over to our table. "i-ikuto-san. please accept this letter.", she said to me, bowing.

i just stared at the confession letter with cold eyes. "go away. i don't want your stupid letter.", i said. you could almost feel the chill in the air.

the girl took the letter back and ran away, crying.

ryuu sighed. " ikuto! when will you get over that girl you used to like? you need a girlfriend man."

i clenched my teeth. "no.i.don't." ryuu rolled his eyes and went back to eating his food.

"moou!! i'm getting tired of it being cloudy and rainy all the time!", jun complained.

the town our college was in is very small and it is really rainy and cloudy. i can't even remember the last time the sun was out. i missed the sun a lot. in my old town where i grew up, i just to take naps all day, basking in the sun with yoru.

i felt a pang in my chest when i thought of yoru. he went back into my heart after i started college (a/n. i decided not to use shugo charas).

i finished my meal quickly and walked to my next class.

(the next day)

she wasn't here again. for some strange reason, i felt really sad when she left and i wanted her to come back. the day seemed to go my in a blur.

(the next day)

she's still not back.

(next week)

how long is she going to be gone?

(1 more week later)

i slowly walked into my class. i sat down in my seat and resigned my self to just staring at amu's empty seat.

suddenly, somebody sat down in that seat. i looked up, startled. my eyes moved slowly up to look at the person's face, not daring to believe that she was back.

i looked at the person's face. it was amu!

"hello!", she said to me, smiling sweetly.
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me: so... what do you think?
ikuto: my strawberry's back!! * goes and hugs amu*
amu: get off you pervert!
me: the amuto scenes are going to start soon! please R&R!!

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Posted 2/19/09
AMAZIINNG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted 2/19/09
AWSOME I LOVE LOVE IT! OMG LOVE IT! i want more! I was grounded and u updated 2 or 3 times scince then~ how many chapters is this gonna be !?!?!?! UPDATE SOOON PLEASe?!?!?!?!?
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Posted 2/19/09

animefangirl4ever wrote:

AWSOME I LOVE LOVE IT! OMG LOVE IT! i want more! I was grounded and u updated 2 or 3 times scince then~ how many chapters is this gonna be !?!?!?! UPDATE SOOON PLEASe?!?!?!?!?


thankz! there are gonna be a lot of chapters and i'm probally going to write a sequel after that. i'll try to update soon!
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Posted 2/19/09
wow! you weren't kidding when you said it was based off of Twilight!
LOL!! except Amu is Edward and Ikuto is Bella
....but it's hard to imagine Amu's DAD being a beautiful-too cool-graceful vampire
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Posted 2/19/09
This is a good story, I'm glad that even though it's very similar to Twilight that it still has its own original plotline. And Amu often says that she has two powers, one's super self-control, and have they named the other one yet? (I believe that she didn't but I'm just making sure in case I skipped it.)
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Posted 2/20/09
UPDATE PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
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Posted 2/20/09

Silly_Momo96 wrote:

wow! you weren't kidding when you said it was based off of Twilight!
LOL!! except Amu is Edward and Ikuto is Bella
....but it's hard to imagine Amu's DAD being a beautiful-too cool-graceful vampire


well... amu won't have the same dad as when she was human of course, because only she got turned into a vampire. her new dad will be graceful and everything.
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Posted 2/20/09

emo527 wrote:

This is a good story, I'm glad that even though it's very similar to Twilight that it still has its own original plotline. And Amu often says that she has two powers, one's super self-control, and have they named the other one yet? (I believe that she didn't but I'm just making sure in case I skipped it.)


yeah, i did mention her other power. she has the power of controling the element ice. that mean she can create ice and use it as an attack.
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Posted 2/20/09
haha i'm just reading twilight and i remember those scene's ^-^
what's you're favourite scene??
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Posted 2/20/09
omg!!!! dis is awesom!!!!! plz post da next chapter soon!!!! ^^

twilights my fav book n i've read it a million times!!!! i hope there will b a twist in da next chap!
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Posted 2/20/09
That was a good chapter. Poor Ikuto
I'm excited to read how the rest of the story will go. haha
<3 PLUR <3
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Posted 2/23/09
this is great plz write more
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