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[FANFICTION] Can love be found?
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Posted 2/24/09

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emo527 wrote:

This is a good story, I'm glad that even though it's very similar to Twilight that it still has its own original plotline. And Amu often says that she has two powers, one's super self-control, and have they named the other one yet? (I believe that she didn't but I'm just making sure in case I skipped it.)


yeah, i did mention her other power. she has the power of controling the element ice. that mean she can create ice and use it as an attack.


Oh, okay. I must've missed that, hehe...
Any who, I'm totally stoked for the next chapter! ^___^
Good luck~!
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sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry that i haven't updated in so long!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please forgive me guys!! i'm just really stressed about school and i hav this HUGE essay due in english, a project in science, and a big math test tommorow! i promise that i will update tommorow no matter what happens!!! sorry again!
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sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry that i haven't updated in so long!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please forgive me guys!! i'm just really stressed about school and i hav this HUGE essay due in english, a project in science, and a big math test tommorow! i promise that i will update tommorow no matter what happens!!! sorry again!


its ok you can finish it when ever you want its your fanfic and people should stop stressing other people because they probably dont know how it feels like to be stressed with so much stuff
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sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry that i haven't updated in so long!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please forgive me guys!! i'm just really stressed about school and i hav this HUGE essay due in english, a project in science, and a big math test tommorow! i promise that i will update tommorow no matter what happens!!! sorry again!


It's all right, do your best! I also had a big math test yesterday and it took me like... 7 hours to study for it, so I can understand how you feel! Please take your time because if you take your time then everyone wins because you get to take your time and not stress about it while we get better quality fanfiction 83!
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me: sorry everyone for the long wait!! thankz for being so understanding amuto_neko and emo527!
amu: appu-chan! i have a suprise for you!
me: what??? what is it??
edward cullen: it's me!
me: OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ITZ EDWARD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *hugs him like crazy* I LOVE YOU!!!!
edward: wow! you're pretty strong for a human...
bella: get away from edward! he's mine!
me: whatever. go to jacob or something!
renesmee(did i spell it right?): mommy! jacob's mine!
* a big fight starts between everyone*
ikuto: ...your suprise didn't work out well...
amu: ...yeah... ummm appu-chan dosen't own shugo chara...
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ikuto p.o.v.

did she actually talk to me? and with no glaring? a thousand questions went through my head while part of me was just admiring her.

she was wearing a short dark blue mini-skirt with black leggings and a white off-the-shoulder shirt with a big black skull in the middle. she was also wearing big black sunglasses that were so dark that you couldn't see her eyes through them.

her hair was tied back in a loose side ponytail with an x-clip band. i could see why she was called cool and spicy. a wave of deja-vu went through me as i realized that this was just how hinamori amu had dressed.

i let out a slight shudder as she stared at me with her head tilted slightly to the side. i remembered that she was waiting for me to greet her back.

"h-hey", i said as i tilted my head down to cover up the blush that was forming on my face. wait a minute, i was blushing!? i tsukiyomi ikuto had never blushed in my whole life!

"you know, i wasn't glaring at you during the class so i did have a reason to push you at the cafeteria. sorry if you got hurt.", amu said emotionlessly.

i just nodded like i was mute. i was sure that she was glaring at me, but i guess i was mistaken. i peeked at her from the corner of my eye. her face had on an expression of frustration that she was trying to cover up.

"class, pay attention! today we are going to watch a video about the cell cycle.(a/n, i know that it's kind of stupid but i don't know what they teach in college)", said our sensai (teacher). he rolled out huge flat t.v that looked like it just came out of the box.

i wasn't suprised. this was, after all, an elite college. my mind wandered off as the sensai set up the video. it was all thanks to hinamori amu that i had a chance to go to college.

if she and her friends hadn't defeated easter, i would have still been stuck there, a mere puppet.

the embryo was still never found and i wasn't suprised. after all, easter always came up with the stupidest plans to capture the embryo.

i was espically happy because my sister, utau, was completly freed from easter. she had finally got over her brother complex and she and kuukai have been dating ever since.

i was jerked back into the present time when the movie started playing. the first step to the cell cycle is... prophase is when you can see the chromosomes...the final step is cytoknesis... i was only half paying attention beacuse i already knew about this stuff.

suddenly, as if by an invisible force, i felt a burning desire to touch amu's hand that was just a few inches away from mine. it was if my hand was moving by its own.

5 inches... 4 inches... 3 inches... 2 inches... 1 inch...

i fingers made contact with her hand. it felt as if i was touching ice! her hand was so ice cold, it felt like touching the inside of a freezer.

at the same time, i felt an immediate rush of desire. i never wanted to let go of her hand, however cold it may be. she jerked her hand back way too soon and her mouth was turned into a frown.

"sorry", i muttered and tried to turn my attention back to the t.v. i clenched my hand around my desk, fighting the desire yet again. this time i noticed that amu's hand as curled into a tight fist too.

so she was feeling the desire too. it felt as if the movie was a million years long.

(after the movie)
i sighed with relief as the movie finally ended.

as class was dismissed, i noticed that amu was the first one out yet again.

(after college)

i groaned when i thought about all the homework that i had today. ryuu and jun were next to me complaining about how college was so hard.

" at least hananzo-san was back today!", said the love-struck (just like every other guy in our college) ryuu.

" i heard that she went to visit some relatives", said jun. " you know, now that i think about it, the hananzo family is one of the very few families who actually have a house and live in this town. most of us just live in dorms."

" that is weird...", i replied. i noticed the hananzos walking back to their cars and boy did they have expensive cars!

convertables, porshes, b.m.w.s... wow! amu stood by her black b.m.w., talking to momo-chan.

" oh my god! look!", someone screamed. a little girl was crossing the street and a semi truck was coming straight at her!

i glimpsed amu's horrified face as the semi neared the girl.
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me: ha ha! cliffhanger!
amu: i hope the little girl dosen't die!
me: you'll figure out if you read and review everybody!
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Posted 2/27/09

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appupuppu wrote:

sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry that i haven't updated in so long!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please forgive me guys!! i'm just really stressed about school and i hav this HUGE essay due in english, a project in science, and a big math test tommorow! i promise that i will update tommorow no matter what happens!!! sorry again!


its ok you can finish it when ever you want its your fanfic and people should stop stressing other people because they probably dont know how it feels like to be stressed with so much stuff





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appupuppu wrote:

sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry that i haven't updated in so long!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please forgive me guys!! i'm just really stressed about school and i hav this HUGE essay due in english, a project in science, and a big math test tommorow! i promise that i will update tommorow no matter what happens!!! sorry again!


It's all right, do your best! I also had a big math test yesterday and it took me like... 7 hours to study for it, so I can understand how you feel! Please take your time because if you take your time then everyone wins because you get to take your time and not stress about it while we get better quality fanfiction 83!


thanks you guys for being so understanding! u guys are so nice! the next chapter is up but i'm sorry if it's a little bit short. i still have lots of homework.
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Posted 2/27/09

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amulet_neko wrote:


appupuppu wrote:

sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry that i haven't updated in so long!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please forgive me guys!! i'm just really stressed about school and i hav this HUGE essay due in english, a project in science, and a big math test tommorow! i promise that i will update tommorow no matter what happens!!! sorry again!


its ok you can finish it when ever you want its your fanfic and people should stop stressing other people because they probably dont know how it feels like to be stressed with so much stuff





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appupuppu wrote:

sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry that i haven't updated in so long!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please forgive me guys!! i'm just really stressed about school and i hav this HUGE essay due in english, a project in science, and a big math test tommorow! i promise that i will update tommorow no matter what happens!!! sorry again!


It's all right, do your best! I also had a big math test yesterday and it took me like... 7 hours to study for it, so I can understand how you feel! Please take your time because if you take your time then everyone wins because you get to take your time and not stress about it while we get better quality fanfiction 83!


thanks you guys for being so understanding! u guys are so nice! the next chapter is up but i'm sorry if it's a little bit short. i still have lots of homework.


No problem! It was a good chapter! 83
Good luck with your homework, sometimes I get a lot of homework and it stops me from writing (which makes my friends impatient, lol), so I know how much it sucks.
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Posted 2/27/09

appupuppu wrote:


amulet_neko wrote:


appupuppu wrote:

sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry that i haven't updated in so long!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please forgive me guys!! i'm just really stressed about school and i hav this HUGE essay due in english, a project in science, and a big math test tommorow! i promise that i will update tommorow no matter what happens!!! sorry again!


its ok you can finish it when ever you want its your fanfic and people should stop stressing other people because they probably dont know how it feels like to be stressed with so much stuff





emo527 wrote:


appupuppu wrote:

sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry that i haven't updated in so long!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please forgive me guys!! i'm just really stressed about school and i hav this HUGE essay due in english, a project in science, and a big math test tommorow! i promise that i will update tommorow no matter what happens!!! sorry again!


It's all right, do your best! I also had a big math test yesterday and it took me like... 7 hours to study for it, so I can understand how you feel! Please take your time because if you take your time then everyone wins because you get to take your time and not stress about it while we get better quality fanfiction 83!


thanks you guys for being so understanding! u guys are so nice! the next chapter is up but i'm sorry if it's a little bit short. i still have lots of homework.


I know how you feel but some people need to close there mouth's about saying i'm going to die please write more or else.....anyways they should say wow good job and awesome chapter or something like that .your fanfic is awsome appu-chan ( if thats ok? ) keep the hard work up =]
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Posted 2/28/09 , edited 2/28/09
I LOVEE IT!!!!!!!!!! <3 COMPLETELY LOVE IT
and if u allow me to give u a tip: even thouhg this is based on twilight u can put on the story line some surprises........... things that werent in the plot ;D it would make it more interesting..........but oh well...........nevermind if u dont feel like doing it............
ITS A REALLY GOOD STORY!!! =D
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plz keep writing this story i luv it ♥♥♥♥♥ plz plz plz plz plz and thnx thnx thnx thnx thnx!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD
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I LOVEE IT!!!!!!!!!! <3 COMPLETELY LOVE IT
and if u allow me to give u a tip: even thouhg this is based on twilight u can put on the story line some surprises........... things that werent in the plot ;D it would make it more interesting..........but oh well...........nevermind if u dont feel like doing it............
ITS A REALLY GOOD STORY!!! =D


sure! i'll put in some suprises. it will be different from twilight starting from the next chapter and you'll see why when i post the next chapter. thankz for the advice!
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Posted 3/1/09
Ikuto is Bella *giggle/snort*
I like it so far...
But you could really work on your spelling
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Ikuto is Bella *giggle/snort*
I like it so far...
But you could really work on your spelling


ha ha! that is funny how ikuto is bella! yeah i know i have horrible spelling ! very very very sorry! mabye i'll start typing on word and use the spell check...
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Posted 3/3/09
i love ur story =D
please dont stop writting it >.<
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hahahahaha THAT IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO TWILIGHT THEMED. LMFAO.
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