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[FANFICTION] Can love be found?
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me: hi guys...
amu: you seem kinda down today.
me: i'm just haing this killer headache but i wanted to update because i haven't updated in a while.
ikuto: so you finally got over emo day after edward left.
me: yeah but i'm going to bring him back!
amu: and just how are you going to do that?
me: i have my ways...
amu: ohh... scary...
ikuto: appu-chan dosen't own shugo chara.
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ikuto p.o.v.

the last thing that i saw was amu's horrified face before i started running towards the girl. "ikuto! what are you doing!? get back here!", jun shouted.

i just ignored him and and kept on running. it was a good thing that i was right next to the road because i had to save the girl! i sprinted across the road and grabbed the little girl.

but right as i grabbed her, i tripped over a banana peel (a/n. ha ha! i just had to do that!) and my knee smashed into a rock.

i winced in pain, realizing that i broke my kneecap. i wasn't able to move. each tiny movement sent me withering in agony. all i could do is watch helplessly as the the semi truck approached us.

time seemed to go by in slow motion. faces started popping in my head: mother, utau, father, my friends, even the gaurdians, and lastly the most important face, hinamori amu.

she was smiling, her golden eyes glowing and her pink locks swaying. then the image was pushed aside and hananzo amu's face came into my mind. why was her face there? then, hananzo amu's and hinamori amu's faces came together and morphed into one face.

i then shut my eyes and waited for the truck to hit me, for everything to be gone in one big flash of pain.

one second... two seconds... three seconds...

why didn't the truck hit me yet? i tentavely opened one eye. the first thing that i saw was a flash of pink.

hananzo amu stood in front of me, her hand streached out. the truck was right in front of her but it stopped moving.

huh? why didn't the truck hit her?

when i looked closer, i saw that the truck had hit her. it smashed into her hand, and her hand had left a huge 2 feet deep dent into the truck.

what?! how could she have stopped a cement truck going 50 miles per hour and not have died?! and how did she get here so fast!? she was all the way on the other side of the huge parking lot!

in a flash, she turned arond and looked at me and the little girl.

i gasped in shock. there wasn't even a single cut on her! she looked perfectly fine! only her clothes had little rips in them from the flying peices of the truck, but her skin wasn't affected at all. this was impossible!

her eyes turned from me to look at the little girl. the girl had curly light brown hair and looked about seven or eight.

amu's golden eyes widened, her mouth opened and closed like a fish and she said one word.

"ami."
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me: i know this is really really short but this was only half the chapter. i'm going to update the next half tommorow. the point where i ended seemed like a perfect ending point to me and i'm really busy today and i still have that killer headache that i was talking about.
amu: (speechless)
ikuto: well this was a big suprise!
me: yeah... R&R!

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WOOOOOO!

I want MORE!
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ah i cant wait till tomorrow!!! XD
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That was a really good chapter, I'm really excited for the next one! And as for insane headaches, I'm totally on the same page with you there. ^__^"

Good luck!
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wow i really like these they r really cool and interesting to read. i havent read twilight but this has made me want to read it! cant wait for next part of chapter keep up the good up and hope ur headache gets better!
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hope u get better.......THIS IS AWESOME!!!!!!
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me: hi hi!!! i'm all better now and i'm really hyper again!!
ikuto: i kinda liked it when she had a headache...
me: WHAT DID YOU SAY!?!?!?
ikuto: NOTHING!!!
me: i know you said something!
ikuto: no i didn't!
*arguing so loudly that everyone plugs their ears*
me: seriously amu, how do you like him?
amu: *blusing furiously* no i don't!
ikuto: awww amu how could you say that!
amu: whatever! here's the rest of the chapter and appu-chan dosen't own shugo chara.
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ikuto p.o.v.

did she just say ami? that name seems familar... oh yeah, that was hinamori amu's sister.

wait, what? how did she know ami? something really weird was going on here. first i see amu stop a cement truck going 50 miles per hour and then she somehow knows ami. did i hit my head along with my knee?

ami also stared at amu in amazement. " onee-chan (big sister)?", she whispered.

i glanced back at amu again and i saw that her hand was outstretched and she had a confused experssion on her face. she stared for a moment longer.

then she diasppered.

poof! she was standing in front of me a millisecond ago and now she diasppered into thin air! i thought i heard a faint "i'm sorry" before she was gone. i thought that i saw a faint blur of a figure going back to the parking lot.

ok, now i definatly know that i hit my head. but somehow i wasn't suprised or even shocked that she just disappered. it felt like i was somehow expecting something like this from her. after all, i was living in a world full of unexpected things, with shugo charas and all.

i tilted my body to the side, wincing in pain, and i looked past the truck and saw a crowd of people coming toward me.

"ikuto! iluto, man are you alright!", sobbed jun and ryuu.

i also saw hinamori amu's parents. i only saw them one time before when i stayed at amu's house when i was sick. at first i was suprised and then i remembered that the girl that i was holding was ami.

"ami! ami!", they were sobbing. the crowd ran past the truck and stared at us in amazement.

"oh my god! they're alive!", a girl screamed. just then, i was overwhelmed by a crowd of people hugging us and asking us if they were alright.

" oh my god ami! you're alive! thank god!", ami's parents screamed as they hugged ami.

"how are you alive?", people started asking me. i just shrugged and cringed as another wave of pain went through me.

the paremedics came and told everybody to get back and then they put me in the ambulence.

(at the hospital)

the nurses put me on a bed and than a doctor rushed in.

he was very breath-takingly handsome with he had dark hair and golden brown eyes."hi, i'm doctor hananzo and i'll get you fixed up very quickly!", he said.

mu eyebrows shot up in suprise. so he was amu's father. well, more like a foster father since amu's adopted.

he looked at my knee and glanced at me simpetically. "i think you shattered your knee", he said. " you probally won't be able to walk on it for a few weeks,but at least you didn't die."

"by the way, how did you survive? that truck was coming straight at you." i just shrugged.

(after the cast was put on)

i leaned my head back against my pillows and sighed in contentment. doctor hananzo kept my leg in a cast and i didn't feel the pain anymore. a bunch of visitors, mainly all the fangirls, tried to come into my hospital room but i told the doctor to not let them in.

now i could think about what happened. did amu really stop the truck then disapper or was that just my imagination? i decided that i had to ask amu myself.

just then, somebody knocked on my door. doctor hananzo stuck his face in, his mouth turned down in a tiny frown. " ikuto-kun, you have a visitor."

he opened the door wider. it was hananzo amu!
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me: it turned out longer than i expected... oh well! please R&R!!




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WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!


AWESOME CHAPPIE!
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Glad that you're feeling better!
That was an intersting chapter! I'm totally stoked for the next one! ^__^
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yay im glad you are better and *gasp* that was kewl!!! XD

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ok guys... i'll (hopefully) be updating tommorow!
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please update!
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AWESOOMEE I LOVE THAT AMI WAS THERE!!! (im not her fan or anything but in this case its much interesing =D)
OMGGG I CANT WAIT TILL...............hmmm today? XD
I COMPLETELY LOVEEE THISS CHAPTERRR
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yay i hope so to!!! XD
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ok guys... i'll (hopefully) be updating tommorow!


wow this is a great fan fic appu-chan ^^ keep up the great work
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