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[FANFICTION] Can love be found?
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ok guys... i'll (hopefully) be updating tommorow!


wow this is a great fan fic appu-chan ^^ keep up the great work


thankz! i'm sorry that i didn't update even though i said i'd update on friday! so on friday i was climbing a tree in my backyard and i fell down. i thought that i broke my leg but it turns out i just sprained it (ow!). so with the doctor and everything i didn't have time to update. i'm sorry! i'll try really hard to update on monday!
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its ok and i hope your leg gets better!!! XD ^^
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its ok and i hope your leg gets better!!! XD ^^


thankies!
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amulet_neko wrote:


appupuppu wrote:

ok guys... i'll (hopefully) be updating tommorow!


wow this is a great fan fic appu-chan ^^ keep up the great work


thankz! i'm sorry that i didn't update even though i said i'd update on friday! so on friday i was climbing a tree in my backyard and i fell down. i thought that i broke my leg but it turns out i just sprained it (ow!). so with the doctor and everything i didn't have time to update. i'm sorry! i'll try really hard to update on monday!


Do your best, and I hope that your leg gets better! ^__^
Wait...
I know what you were doing on that tree!
You were trying to pull an Ikuto, weren't ya?
All right, I gotcha! ;D
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awwww i always fall down while climbing trees too XD
hope ur leg getz better
Posted 3/8/09

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appupuppu wrote:


amulet_neko wrote:


appupuppu wrote:

ok guys... i'll (hopefully) be updating tommorow!


wow this is a great fan fic appu-chan ^^ keep up the great work


thankz! i'm sorry that i didn't update even though i said i'd update on friday! so on friday i was climbing a tree in my backyard and i fell down. i thought that i broke my leg but it turns out i just sprained it (ow!). so with the doctor and everything i didn't have time to update. i'm sorry! i'll try really hard to update on monday!


Do your best, and I hope that your leg gets better! ^__^
Wait...
I know what you were doing on that tree!
You were trying to pull an Ikuto, weren't ya?
All right, I gotcha! ;D


lmao! i once tried climbing a tree wen visiting my cousin. he thought i was gonna fall and PULLED me down.......we both ended up a heap under the tree!!
i might try that again if ikuto catches me....though he and my cousin bro are both 17, his coordination is better!!!
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appupuppu wrote:


amulet_neko wrote:


appupuppu wrote:

ok guys... i'll (hopefully) be updating tommorow!


wow this is a great fan fic appu-chan ^^ keep up the great work


thankz! i'm sorry that i didn't update even though i said i'd update on friday! so on friday i was climbing a tree in my backyard and i fell down. i thought that i broke my leg but it turns out i just sprained it (ow!). so with the doctor and everything i didn't have time to update. i'm sorry! i'll try really hard to update on monday!


oh hope your leg gets better ^^ its ok if you didn't update on friday you had a really good reason not to
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me: aloha people!!!
ikuto: aloha?...
me: yeah! thatz how they say hi in hawaii! i just felt like saying that today. anyway, i think most of u guys know the reason why i didn't update in a while but just in case u don't i'll tell you. so on friday i was climbing a tree in my backyard and i fell down. i thought that i broke my leg but it turns out i just sprained it (ow!). so with the doctor and everything i didn't have time to update.
amu: did it hurt?
me: yeah! a lot! now my parents don't want me to climb trees any more. they're so evil... i usually climb trees to look for ikuto (lol emo527).
ikuto: you look for me?
me: yeah but i can NEVER find you!
amu: o...k... rima! do the disclamer!
rima (pops out of nowhere): appu-chan doesn't own shugo chara.
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( a/n. this part is amu's p.o.v. of the last chapter)

i watched, horrified, as the cement truck was coming at the little brown-haired girl. then, out of the corner of my eye, i saw Tsukiyomi running toward her.

"idiot!", i said aloud. " i have to go and save them."

"no!", exclaimed momo, " you can't just stop a cement truck without anyone noticing! if someone sees you, they will start asking questions and we would have to move again."

" but their lives are in danger!", i exclaimed. i clenched my hands. " they're just humans...", said momo.

" you were a human once too momo!"

momo just stared at me, thinking. finally she just barely nodded her head.

" thank you.", i whispered. then i turned toward the road and skipped 50 feet to the road in one second.

i made it just in time. i stretched out my hand and braced my self for the impact. the truck made a loud crunching as it rammed into my hand.

the truck was nothing compared to my unwavering form. i blew at a lock of pink hair that was covering my eyes.

i turned back around to check if Tsukiyomi and the little girl were okay.

as i looked at the girl, something ticked in my head. suddenly, an intense burst of pain went through me. it was like a headache but intensified a hundred times.

it took all it had in me to prevent myself from doubling back in pain. why was this happening? vampires don't get headaches. we rarely even feel pain unless attacked by another vampire. other vampires are the only things that inflict pain on us.

they're the only things that are a threat.

suddenly, images started flashing though my mind.

a small laughing girl... now she holding my hand and we're walking to a carnival... she is talking to me while jumping on my bed and i'm laughing at her... she is posing as she's getting her picture taken... hundreds and thousands of images of her went flashing through my mind.

ami... ami... ami... those three letters kept on going through my mind. then, as if my mouth was moving automatically, i said one word.

"ami"

she looked at me. "onee-chan?", she whispered.

i wanted to take a step toward her. i wanted to hold her in my arms and i don't even know why!

just as i was going to take a step toward her, someting stopped me right in my tracks.

it was the smell of blood. warm, delicious blood that smelled so sweet that it could make my mouth water. i only knew of one person whose blood could make me feel this way.

i glanced down at Tsukiyomi. uh oh! he had a huge gash on his knee and pouring out of it was a pool of blood. i quickly stopped breathing.

this was all becoming too much. the horrible headache, the scent of the most delicious blood. this was WAY too much.

in 1/16 of a second, i was back to where momo was.

"wow! that was fast! you could even challenge kaito!", momo yelled, back to her old hyper self.

"we. need. to. get. out. of. here. NOW!",i gritted through my teeth. momo could tell that something was wrong.

i threw my car keys to her and she quickly got in my car, turned on the engine, and we were out of here.

i quickly explained what happened to her.

"woah! that's really weird! do you still have that "headache"?", she asked.

"no", i said, " after i left that place, my "headache" went away".

" we HAVE to talk with our family about this", she said. "yeah...", i mumured.

she started driving home, but i said no, "lets go to the hospital. i can question Tsukiyomi and make sure that he didn't see me."

we reached the hospital and i went up to the desk. " i need to see my father. his name is hananzo kaori."

" oh sure!", the woman behind the counter said with hearts in her eyes. i rolled my eyes. my "dad" was unbelivebaly hansome and all the nurses were in love with him even though he was married.

momo and i patiently waited for kaori. he came, looking absoutly perfect as usual, and asked us what was wrong.

" i need to see Tsukiyomi-san. i'll explain later", i said.

"o...k...", he said and then we went to the room he was staying in. kaori knocked in the door and told him that he had a visitor. kaori opened the door a little bit wider and now i was staring into the eyes of Tsukiyomi.
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me: i made this chapter a little longer because i haven't updated in a while.
amu: please R&R! remember the more reviews she gets, the faster she updates!
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awwww i always fall down while climbing trees too XD
hope ur leg getz better


ha ha you're just like me! any, way the next chapter is up!
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emo527 wrote:


appupuppu wrote:


amulet_neko wrote:


appupuppu wrote:

ok guys... i'll (hopefully) be updating tommorow!


wow this is a great fan fic appu-chan ^^ keep up the great work


thankz! i'm sorry that i didn't update even though i said i'd update on friday! so on friday i was climbing a tree in my backyard and i fell down. i thought that i broke my leg but it turns out i just sprained it (ow!). so with the doctor and everything i didn't have time to update. i'm sorry! i'll try really hard to update on monday!


Do your best, and I hope that your leg gets better! ^__^
Wait...
I know what you were doing on that tree!
You were trying to pull an Ikuto, weren't ya?
All right, I gotcha! ;D


lmao! i once tried climbing a tree wen visiting my cousin. he thought i was gonna fall and PULLED me down.......we both ended up a heap under the tree!!
i might try that again if ikuto catches me....though he and my cousin bro are both 17, his coordination is better!!!


ha ha thatz funny! i hope u were ok though! also, the next chappy is up!
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OMG I TOTALLY LOVED IT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
XD hahaha and yeah im falling of the trees usually >.< ........well watheva
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I LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT L0OVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT TOTALLY LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT
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kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!
Oooo i love it omG cant wait for the rest!!
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thankz for the reviews so far guys but i still need a few more to update the next chapter! so review review review!
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please update!!!!
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