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[FANFICTION] Can love be found?
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I really like your fanfiction, and it's really good so far! 8D
I'm totally stoked for more! x3
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OMG this is sooo cool!!! its soooo much like twilight!!!! r u gonna go through like all da books lolz...that would take a very long time
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thank u guyz for ur reviews!!!! i'll try to update as soon as possible!
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soooooooooooo awesome!!!!
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wow this is just like twilight!!!!!!!! awsome!!!!!!
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Posted 3/16/09
its awesome apupu-chiiii
please update whenever u have time *puppy eyes*
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me: hey everybody! sorry that i haven't updated in a while. i was on vacation and i just got back late sunday night. then the next day, i had to do this karate thing for 5 hours! i was sooo tired! i guess that's what you have to do if you're a second degree black belt. anyway, i happy to report that my leg is almost better! did u guys see the new episode?! ikuto confessed! but amu didn't believe him...
ikuto: it was kinda sad... she didn't believe me...
me: yeah... amu is kinda slow...
amu: hey guys! did u say my name?
me: no! no! i was just mumbling to myself! right ikuto?
ikuto: y-yeah!
amu: something fishy is going on here...
me: really! itz nothing! kusukusu do the disclaimer!
kusukusu: appu-chan dosen't own shugo chara!
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ikuto's p.o.v.

amu stood at the door, her eyes peircing into mine. " can i come in?", she asked.

"y-yeah", i said. she shut the door and walked upto my bed. she just stood there instead of sitting on the chair next to my bed. she was perfectly motionless and i was starting to feel uncomfortable under her peircing stare.

" you can sit down", i said.

"oh, yeah... i kinda forgot", she mumbled, laughing akwardly. she carefully sat down, still retaining some of her rigidness. " soo... are you alright Tsukiyomi?", she asked.

" call me ikuto and yeah, i'm fine.", i said," at least my leg dosn't hurt anymore. "that's good", she mumured softly. " so why did you come to visit", i asked.

" oh, no reason.", she said casually. she leaned back in her seat and crossed her legs. " i just wanted to make sure that you were okay."

" don't play dumb with me", i countered. i sat up, using my elbow for suppport. " i remember what happened. how did you stop the truck?"

" i have no idea what you are talking about. it's imposible for a person to stop a truck.", she said calmly.

" i said stop playing dumb with me! how did you stop the truck. who are- wait, i mean what are you?" she didn't answer, but i could see a ton of emotions going through her face. she tried to hide these but i could read her as eaisly as a book.

suprise, frustration, anger, sadness. all these emotions could be seen in her eyes. " i don't think you would want to know what i am...", she mumured softly.

" it's okay. you can tell me.", i promted softly. for a moment, i thought that i had won. i thought that finally all this madness would be explained. but i was wrong. she started to open her mouth. " i. am. a-" then she stopped.

defiance flashed in her eyes. she regained her stiff composure and smirked. i was quite suprised. her smirk could compare with mine. it made my arms all wobbly and i felt lost in her gaze. she stood up and leaned across the bed, still smirking. our faces were only a breath away now.

my breathing hitched and i slowly leaned in closer and closed my eyes. it was like my body was moving on its own.

" what do you think you're doing ikuto?", said a voice. " huh?", i said and opened my eyes. amu was back in her chair again. i felt really embarrased.

i leaned towards her again. "what were you doing amu ", i said, emphasizing her name. then i showed her my smirk that would have made girls faint. amu's eyes slowly widened. a look of pure confusement broke through her faquade. she remained completly still. memories seemed to be flashing through her eyes.

i got a little worried. "hey amu, what's wrong?", i said, "are you okay?" she didn't respond. i was starting to get a little worried. i leaned over the bed and tried to shake her shoulders. it was like trying to shake a statue. her body was rock hard. whoa, this was really weird.

then, amu seemed to snap out of it. "ikuto...", she whispered. "yeah?", i said. she slowly shook her head and her eyes and expression turned hard again. " never mind.", she said. she quickly got out of her seat and walked toward the door.

she gave me a parting glance and deliberatly said, " i won't tell you what i am but you can always guess." she flashed me a small smile and shut the door.

amu p.o.v.

i stood outside the door and thought about what happened. oh...my...god... right after he said my name, images of him started flashing through my mind. that horrible headache started again.

he was standing outside my balcony... he gave me something... candies... next to me were these three minature people ( what are they?)... now we're in a teacup... i'm laughing at him... next, he's holding my lock necklace... why was he holding it?...

that's when i snapped out of it and made a quick getaway. i glanced at my lock necklace around my neck. it was hidden deep under my clothes so you couldn't see the lock part.

why was he holding it in front of me? thinking about the necklace made me feel a tingly inside. when kaori found me, i was wearing it and i never took it off since then.

i needed to talk to my family about this.

(at amu's home)

my family and i lounged in the lliving room as i told them about all the weird things that were happening. " your headache is gone now, right amu-chan?", asked my over-concerned "mother" ai. ai had short black that hung as straight as a ruler to the blunt edge of her chin. it was usually parted neatly in the center.

"yeah i'm fine now", i said, "so what do you guys think is going on" " i think you're starting to remember things from your human life amu-chan", said kaori.

i just stared at him, shocked. " i knew those two people from my human life?! oh my god! what should i do?" suddenly, i felt a wave of calmness washing through me, erasing my panic. " kaito! stop it!", i shouted. "sorry...", he mumured.

"i think you should stay clam and wait and see what happens. you want to remember your human life, don't you?", kaori asked.

" i guess so...", i mummured. but i didn't know if i wanted to remember.
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me: since i have spring break right now, i'll be updating sooner.
amu: yay! i'm finally remembering stuff!
ikuto: yeah! i can't wait until you remember stuff about me.
me: *rolls her eyes at ikuto* anyway, please R&R and sorry about the late update!
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its awesome apupu-chiiii
please update whenever u have time *puppy eyes*


sorry i haven't updated in a while! the next chapter is up now!
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Posted 3/17/09
thanx its really awesome =D
i love it, so far its my fave fanfic
keep the hard work apuppu-chiii
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Posted 3/17/09
That was a cute chapter, althoug sometimes things wer a tad confusing.
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Posted 3/18/09 , edited 3/18/09
thankz for the reviews so far! if i get a few more reviews i'll update tommorow! p.s. sorry if it was a little confusing emo527. i looked over it and ur right, it was a little confusing...
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Posted 3/18/09
NYAAA I CANT WAIIT TIL TOMOROOW!!!!!!!!
ITS SOOO INTERESTIING!!! XD
I LOVE THE PART IN WHICH IKUTO WAS LEANING TO KISS HER AND THEN SHE SUDDENLY DISSAPPEARD XD LOL
i love ur fanfiiic *-*
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NYAAA I CANT WAIIT TIL TOMOROOW!!!!!!!!
ITS SOOO INTERESTIING!!! XD
I LOVE THE PART IN WHICH IKUTO WAS LEANING TO KISS HER AND THEN SHE SUDDENLY DISSAPPEARD XD LOL
i love ur fanfiiic *-*


ha ha! i thought that part was funny too! she was just kind of messing with him. itz like amu and ikuto switched roles for a minute. b.t.w. thatkz for all ur wonderful reviews! i'm soooo happy that you luv my fanfic!
Posted 3/19/09
ooh!! for a second there amu was the perv......*evil grin* i like!!
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