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Posted 3/2/09
To be honest I'm not much a fan of war stories i like peace.
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Me too ^^'
But I've already said that...
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There is already romance in it.
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25 / F / In my own little...
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But, it's still a military epic...
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I know that.
I'm just asking for any suggestions so that I can fix any problems in it.
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So, any suggestions to the story?
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Posted 3/2/09
Well...
The morning scenes with the breakfast and showers are a bit repetitious ^^'
It's always the same thing... maybe you could change things around a little?
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ember1116 wrote:

Well...
The morning scenes with the breakfast and showers are a bit repetitious ^^'
It's always the same thing... maybe you could change things around a little?


Anything else asides from that?
Posted 3/7/09
ONE:

SUSTAIN FROM USIN BIG WORDS WE WILL FOR SHURE NOT UNDERSTANDD D:
AND MAKE IT A LITTLE HAPPY AT TIMES >W<
NOT ALL SERIOUS..YA KNOE :3
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ay_bay_bay wrote:

ONE:

SUSTAIN FROM USIN BIG WORDS WE WILL FOR SHURE NOT UNDERSTANDD D:
AND MAKE IT A LITTLE HAPPY AT TIMES >W<
NOT ALL SERIOUS..YA KNOE :3


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Posted 3/7/09
and as for tha romance...i think its lackin..O_o
add a little....PAZAAZ!
lmao idonteven knoe =_=''
XD
and don't jus constantly make Loraine or tha main chara "blush",
i mean, thats gonna get pretty old eh?
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ay_bay_bay wrote:

and as for tha romance...i think its lackin..O_o
add a little....PAZAAZ!
lmao idonteven knoe =_=''
XD
and don't jus constantly make Loraine or tha main chara "blush",
i mean, thats gonna get pretty old eh?


Ok, I'm working on the suggestions, don't worry. :)
However, this is going to be difficult, as I have no romantic bone in my body!
Posted 3/7/09
= =''
OK......
:P ^^
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^^'
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ay_bay_bay wrote:

= =''
OK......
:P ^^


You're funny.
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