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Time for another story =] Sorry if this one is similar to the one before. I run out of ideas xD
Mikan and Natsume were stuck together.'Stop moving!'(natsume) 'I'm trying not to!'(mikan)This is really annoying..(Mikan) 9:00: Mikan (still with natsume on her back) went to bed.First of all how Natsume got stuck on her back *Flash back*'This new powder will stick to anything for a day or 2 only 500 yen!' promoted a salesman. Kororo(mind reader guy) bought some to play around. He ended up spilling it on Natsume and Mikan *Flash back over* Sigh,went Mikan.'Good Night,' Mikan said softly.No reply.Mikan was too tired to care.Natsume saw over his shoulder and saw Mikan's sleeping face.He smiled.His crimson eyes slowly started to droop.Morning:Yawn.Mikan slowly woke up.When she opened her eyes however she sat up in a bolt.Natsume was missing.'He'll probably show up in class,' thought Mikan.'Morning!' Hotaru glanced across the room (=_=) <- Her expression. All of a sudden Mikan felt sleepy.She sat down.Her eyes slowly turned dark brown.'Mikan what's wrong?' Hotaru asked her.'N-o-t-h-i-n-g i-s w-r-o-n-g' replied Mikan in a robotic tone.She seemed to be in a trance.'See you later Hotaru,'Mikan walked away into a hallway.The empty hallway was only occupied by one person. Natsume.'Mikan?' Natsume said in his normal tone,'What's wrong?'. 'Nothin-' Mikan fainted.Natsume spotted a red bug flying away from her.Natsume didn't know what to do so he brought her to his room.He laid Mikan on his bed.He draped his soft blankets over her and put some water on her head.'I better get Ruka,' he thought. Ruka knew a lot of cures for these kinds of things.Ruka and Natsume rushed back to his room.Mikan was still asleep.'Where was she hit?' Ruka asked Natsume.'I dunno, a bug came out of her..' Natsume told him. Ruka tensed at these words.'It was probably..'

CLIFF HANGER =D
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'It was probably a Naskuran beetle,'' Ruka guessed, 'What color was it?'.'It was scarlet...' Mikan opened her eyes.They were still dark brown.'Mikan?' Natsume asked her,'What's wrong?'Mikan started to tilt out of bed,where she collapsed.Ruka helped her back in bed.'Stay in bed,Sakura,you're too weak,' Ruka told her.'Natsume watch over her,' Ruka asked Natsume.'But-' Ruka already left the room.'Damn you Ruka..'Natsume thought,but he continued to watch with a soften expression.'I need to use the bathroom,'Mikan(eyes slowly turning scarlet)slid out of bed.She tiptoed out of bed without any sound.The toilet flushed.Mikan ran out of the door silently.Natsume was back.He went to look at Mikan.Nothing was there.'Oh shit!' Natsume thought.(sorry xD)He dashed out the door.(Back to Mikan) She was leaning on the wall for support.Her eyes transformed back to light brown.'Why am i here?' Mikan thought.She headed back to her room.But something was occurring again in her eyes.Dark brown eyes.She started to walk towards the Forbidden Forest. Sorry Cliff Hanger xD
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wow thats really good, keep it going!
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Thanks I spent a lot of time thinking about it xD
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Slowly and quietly she went down deeper into the forest.There laid a beautiful deep lagoon.It would've been breathtaking for not of the dangerous aroma lurking in the air.But Mikan took no notice of this.Instead she walked unsteadily to the edge of the lagoon.(To Natsume)'RUKA!'he shouted down the hall.Ruka came out from the classroom.'What's wrong Natsume?' he asked.'MIKAN IS GONE!' Natsume had time to shout.'What do you mean?'Ruka said in a whisper.'She's gone,'Natsume whispered back,'I was using the bathroom when she suddenly left!'Ruka closed his eyes,apparently thinking.'Naskuran beetles usually head to forests so....,'realization fell over him,the Forbidden Forest.'Natsume!Mikan is in the Forbidden forest!' Ruka told him before he dashed towards the old forest.(Back to Mikan)Mikan lunged into the lagoon.Her eyes turned back to light brown.'What the..?' she had time to think before she lost her mind(a.k.a she fainted)Mikan slowly drifted to the edge of the lagoon.Little did she know that someone was watching her.
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*why doesn't anybody read it? T.T*
Posted 3/10/09
i read it!!
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When Mikan woke up, Rai was aside her, breathing softly.'Ohhh!' Mikan thought as she found his hand on her hip.''Hmm?'' Rai sighed
''Umm..'' Rai opened his eyes.''Oh!! Sorry!'' he said as he took his hand off her hip.Mikan tried to stand up but failed miserably because she was still so beat up.But as Rai looked closer at Mikan,her face was filled with slashes and her clothes were torn.''Do you want to borrow some of my clothes?'' Rai asked quietly, ''Umm..sure.'' Rai turned around to gather some of his clothes.''Here,'' as he handed Mikan his clothing. ''Can you--?,'' Mikan began ''Oh! sorry!'' said Rai as he turned around(blushing slightly).
Dashing around every hiding place , Natsume and Ruka came.''Mikan!'' they yelled.''Omg ! I just remembered!' Ruka suddenly announced,
''I can do the tracking technique! Lemme do it!'' Ruka pulled out a leaf and began to whistle.The leaf suddenly started to float in midair in the northwest direction.''Northwest!'' Ruka said to no one because Natsume dashed away out of sight.''Natsume wait!!'' Ruka shouted, but Natsume was too far to hear him.
''I'm sorry," Rai said before
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Yay! Update!
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When Mikan woke up, Rai was aside her, breathing softly.'Ohhh!' Mikan thought as she found his hand on her hip.''Hmm?'' Rai sighed
''Umm..'' Rai opened his eyes.''Oh!! Sorry!'' he said as he took his hand off her hip.Mikan tried to stand up but failed miserably because she was still so beat up.But as Rai looked closer at Mikan,her face was filled with slashes and her clothes were torn.''Do you want to borrow some of my clothes?'' Rai asked quietly, ''Umm..sure.'' Rai turned around to gather some of his clothes.''Here,'' as he handed Mikan his clothing. ''Can you--?,'' Mikan began ''Oh! sorry!'' said Rai as he turned around(blushing slightly).
Dashing around every hiding place , Natsume and Ruka came.''Mikan!'' they yelled.''Omg ! I just remembered!' Ruka suddenly announced,
''I can do the tracking technique! Lemme do it!'' Ruka pulled out a leaf and began to whistle.The leaf suddenly started to float in midair in the northwest direction.''Northwest!'' Ruka said to no one because Natsume dashed away out of sight.''Natsume wait!!'' Ruka shouted, but Natsume was too far to hear him.
''I'm sorry," Rai said before


Sorry the last sentence didn't make sense! To make it up I'll update again XD
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" I'm sorry," Rai said before he hit Mikan on the neck. Mikan stayed limp like a doll. Rai called HQ to get a helicopter. "Boss, can you get
a helicopter in Alice Academy in the Forbidden Forest?" he spoke into the phone, " Yes, all is according to plan,". As the helicopter was being sent, Rai whispered in Mikan's ear, "Sorry, that you're going to die.." then he kissed her. Not of love, but of pity. Rai felt horrible.He felt like he wanted to crawl in a hole and stay there forever. "I'm gonna take over now!" said a bold voice in his head. "No! Get out!" said his voice out loud , trying to fight back in his head. " I will lead you to great power! Kill the girl!" purred the voice. But the voice now had taken control of his body. Rai(mesmerized) took a knife and headed towards Mikan.
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Ahhhh! Update Please! *is quietly scared*
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Ok lol ^_^ and sorry it's so short >.< Enjoy!
Slowly Rai pulled down Mikan's shirt to reveal her slender neck. "One move and it'll all be over," Rai heard his mouth hiss. "Stop Rai..." echoed a voice. Rai turned around. "B-boss! What are you doing here?" asked Rai clearly frightened.He had now dropped the knife which landed with a clunk. " You have failed me Rai! Now get out of my sight!" yelled the person called Boss. Rai dashed out of the cave, more ashamed than he was. " Now, girl come here.." hissed Boss. Mikan stood up,eyes glowing scarlet, then said in a sharp voice , "Yes?" .
"Good you're awaken Kiri Kobashi, welcome back."

"Lemme get some fresh air"

"Yes, Ma'am"
Kiri (in Mikan's body) went far away from the cave back into the lagoon."Memories, memories," she crooned.
"Sakura?"
"Who's there?" Kiri shouted fiercely
"It's me! Ruka!"
Ruka came running into view. "Sakura!" he shouted with a grin and a warm hug. "Where have you been?"
"Get your dirty hands off me"
"What?"
" I said get your dirty hands off me!"
"Wait!"
"Wha---?"
Ruka told all his animal friends to knock Mikan out but not hurt her too much.Then he did the tracking song again. "Show me Natsume!"
, the leaf still pointed to the northwest. "Guys carry Mikan over here!" Ruka directed them into a small grass bed where Mikan looked like
Snow White. The leaves around her body were like flowers while her head rested on a small bush." Watch over her!"
Ruka ran towards the northwest directio, but then he crashed into something. "Ruka!" said a familiar voice. "Natsume! Come quick I found Mikan!" They did sprints until they went on the familiar path to the lagoon. There Mikan laid, like a angel in slumber."Mikan!" shouted Natsume excitedly as he shook her.Mikan moaned.A minute later, her golden brown eyes opened. They looked at Ruka and Natsume with puzzlement. "Who are you?"
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