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since i have seen spirits before but i can't see them anymore T.T


That is probably because u are an adult. I'm only 17. I'll be able to see them until October 2! (unless my seeing power is still very strong)
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OK here it is
my story is about "THE FOUR WIVES"
well this is just something that i made up and i like it

There was a rich man who had 4 wives....he loved the 4th wife the most and adored her with rich clothes and treated her with delicacies..he took great care of her and gave her nothing but the best...

He also love the 3rd wife very much.He's very proud and always wanted to show her off her to his friends.However the rich man is in great fear that she might run away with some other men

He too love the 2nd wife.She is a very considerate person always patient and in fact is the rich man's confidante.Whenever the rich man faced some problems, he always turned to his 2nd wife and she would always help him out and tide him through difficult times...

Now,the merchants 1st wife is a very loyal partner and has made great contributions in maintaining his wealth and business as well as taking care of the household..However the rich man did not love the 1st wife and although she loved him deeply,he hardly took notice of her.

One day,the rich man fell ill.Before long he knew that he was going to die soon.He thought of his luxurious life and told himself " now i have 4 wives with me.But when i die,Ill be all alone by myself.How lonely I will be~

And he ask the 4th wife."I love you the most, gave you the finest clothing and showered you with great care.Now I'm dying will you follow me and keep me company?" "No way!" was the answer of the 4th wife and she walked out without another word...

The answer of the 4th wife cut like a sharp knife right into the rich man's heart.the sad man then asked the 3rrd wife,"I have love you so much for all my life. Now that I"m dying will you follow me and keep me company?"..."Life is good over here..,I"m going to re-marry when you die!~"The rich man's heart sank and turned cold....

He then asked the 2nd wife "I'll always turned to you for help and you always helped me out .Now i need your help again..When i die will you follow me and keep me company?"..I'm sorry,I cant help you out this time " said the 2nd wife."At the very most,I can only send you to your grave"....The answer shook the man like a thunder bolt and the rich man was devastated...

Then a voice called out: I'll leave with you. I'll follow you no matter where you go." the rich man looked up and there was his 1st wife .She was so skinny almost like she suffered from malnutrition ..Greatly grieved the rich man said" I should taken much better care of you while i could have"

Well we all have 4 wives.

The 4th wife is our body.no matter how much time and effort we lavish in making it look good it will just leave us when we die

The 3rd wife is our possessions status and wealth when we die they will all go to other people..

The 2nd wife is our family and friends o matter how close they had been there for us when we're alive the furthest they can stay with us is up the grave..

The 1st wife is actually and in fact our soul/spirit ,always neglected in our pursuit of material wealth and sensual pleassure


oooo i love this story it has a very arabic feeling to it... i mean like 1001 and 1 nights stories do... anyways good job did you write it or was it something you are sharing?


it something im just sharing^^
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l_kirari_l wrote:

OK here it is
my story is about "THE FOUR WIVES"
well this is just something that i made up and i like it

There was a rich man who had 4 wives....he loved the 4th wife the most and adored her with rich clothes and treated her with delicacies..he took great care of her and gave her nothing but the best...

He also love the 3rd wife very much.He's very proud and always wanted to show her off her to his friends.However the rich man is in great fear that she might run away with some other men

He too love the 2nd wife.She is a very considerate person always patient and in fact is the rich man's confidante.Whenever the rich man faced some problems, he always turned to his 2nd wife and she would always help him out and tide him through difficult times...

Now,the merchants 1st wife is a very loyal partner and has made great contributions in maintaining his wealth and business as well as taking care of the household..However the rich man did not love the 1st wife and although she loved him deeply,he hardly took notice of her.

One day,the rich man fell ill.Before long he knew that he was going to die soon.He thought of his luxurious life and told himself " now i have 4 wives with me.But when i die,Ill be all alone by myself.How lonely I will be~

And he ask the 4th wife."I love you the most, gave you the finest clothing and showered you with great care.Now I'm dying will you follow me and keep me company?" "No way!" was the answer of the 4th wife and she walked out without another word...

The answer of the 4th wife cut like a sharp knife right into the rich man's heart.the sad man then asked the 3rrd wife,"I have love you so much for all my life. Now that I"m dying will you follow me and keep me company?"..."Life is good over here..,I"m going to re-marry when you die!~"The rich man's heart sank and turned cold....

He then asked the 2nd wife "I'll always turned to you for help and you always helped me out .Now i need your help again..When i die will you follow me and keep me company?"..I'm sorry,I cant help you out this time " said the 2nd wife."At the very most,I can only send you to your grave"....The answer shook the man like a thunder bolt and the rich man was devastated...

Then a voice called out: I'll leave with you. I'll follow you no matter where you go." the rich man looked up and there was his 1st wife .She was so skinny almost like she suffered from malnutrition ..Greatly grieved the rich man said" I should taken much better care of you while i could have"

Well we all have 4 wives.

The 4th wife is our body.no matter how much time and effort we lavish in making it look good it will just leave us when we die

The 3rd wife is our possessions status and wealth when we die they will all go to other people..

The 2nd wife is our family and friends o matter how close they had been there for us when we're alive the furthest they can stay with us is up the grave..

The 1st wife is actually and in fact our soul/spirit ,always neglected in our pursuit of material wealth and sensual pleassure


oooo i love this story it has a very arabic feeling to it... i mean like 1001 and 1 nights stories do... anyways good job did you write it or was it something you are sharing?


it something im just sharing^^

oh!!! please share more...if you can that is!
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can i use your story for a video?

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can i use your story for a video?



uhm...what video?
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Never Ending Story

You have probably heard of the Arabian Nights translated by Richard F. Burton. That story goes into a bunch of different stories. This is so Scheherazade, can not only heal the heart of Shahryar but live for another dad. Her story goes on for one thousand and one night. But this is my story. The one that I told every night for over two years.
1. Riddle
There once was a man who fell in love with a demon. At the time, humans were treated like slaves by the demons. Everyone thought this was the prettiest one in the world. Several men and demons asked for her hand.
To pick the perfect husband, the demon came up with an idea. She would give each suitor three riddles. The first to answer all three would become her husband. The losers would be executed. The man decide to take the test.
“Are you sure about this?” asked a council member. “If you answer even one wrong you will be beheaded.”
“She is worth it,” the man said.
“Very well,” the council member said. “You may begin.”
“I can be hot and cold at the same time. What am I?” the demon asked.
The man paused. “The Earth!”
“Explain!” the demon commanded.
“It is hot here while on the other side of the Earth is cold,” the man said.
“He's correct,” the demon said.
“He only got one right. Kill him!” the crowd yelled.
“Next riddle,” the demon said. “I'm only out when it is light. Darkness hides me. I am not an animal or a creature. What am I?”
The man thought for a minute. “A shadow.”
“That's correct,” the demon said.
“Kill the human!” the crowd yelled.
“Last one,” the demon said. “I am both beautiful and ugly at the same time. What am I?”
The man stood frozen. Then he whispered, “Love.”
.”What?” the crowd asked.
“Love is beautiful,” the man said. “It becomes ugly when jealousy is involved. But love is still beautiful.”
“that can't be right,” the crowd yelled.
“Princess?” the council member asked.
The demon smiled. “He is correct.”
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some how it feels like the story is not yet over yuki are you sure that is the end
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It is not! There will be more of it by Sunday! This is due to computer problems!
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Here is the second one!

2. The Woman and the Apple Tree
At this, the crowd started a riot. They jumped on the stage and started beating the man. The princess cried out in fear and ran to her castle. She left the man to be beaten to death by the other demons. The council member told the princess what had happened. She was so shocked that she decided to leave the country.
She started out with only one horse, some food, and some water. No one came with her. It was so hot that she kept drinking her water every five minutes. She had forgotten to bring enough to last her at least a week. She ran out of water about half way through the desert. It had only been three days.
She began to cry out in pain when she saw a huge apple tree. There she drank form the surrounding lake and ate an apple from the tree. All of a sudden, a god appeared. As soon as he did, she remembered the story of Adam and Eve. She never believed the story until she was the one who ate the apple.
“Who are you?” she cried.
“I am called many things,” the god said. “Some call me Satan. Others call me Hades. But I prefer to be called Lucifer. I am the King of the Underworld.”
“Am I going to be killed?” the princess asked.
“Like the man you left behind?” Lucifer said.
“How do you know about that?” the princess asked.
“I'm the King of the Underworld of course I'd know,” Lucifer said. “What you did was just plain cold. But that is not the problem here. You ate an apple off of this apple tree.”
“Yes, I did,” the princess said. “I also drank from the lake. I was hungry and thirsty. What else could I do?”
“This tree is sacred,” Lucifer said. “No one is allowed to eat from it without permission.”
“How was I suppose to know?” the princess complained. “I'm sorry. I'll repay you.”
“It's not me you must repay,” Lucifer said.
“Then who?” the princess asked.
“Me,” a woman said from behind the tree. “I am the human who planted this tree. Because I planted it here, at a sacred place, I can never leave the tree. For every apple taken from my tree, I loose a year of my life.”
“I'm sorry,” the princess said. “If I had known, I never would have eaten the apple. Please forgive me.” She bowed.
“I will, if you pass the test,” the woman said.
“What test?” the princess asked.
“The one I failed,” the woman said. “I you fail, you will forever be stuck here in my place.”
“Ok,” the princess said. “What's the test?”
“I will ask you some questions,” the woman said. “But first you must promise that everything you say is a promise that can't be broken.”
“Ok,” the princess said. “I always keep my promises.” The woman smiled and looked at Lucifer. He nodded and the questioning began.
“What is the King of the Underworld's name?” the woman asked. “The name he wishes to be called.”
“That's easy,” the princess said. “His name is Lucifer.”
“What's my name?” the woman asked.
“You never told me,” the princess said.
“Oh, that's right,” the woman said. “I forgot my name anyways. Did you eat an apple from my tree?”
“Yes,” the princess said.
“I Lucifer also called Satan and Hades?”
“Yes.”
“Is he the King of the Underworld?”
“Yes.”
“Did you abandon your country?”
“Y-yes.”
“Did the man answer all the riddles correct?”
“Yes. What's the point of these yes or no questions?'
“It's the test. Do you understand English?”
“Yes, I'm speaking it aren't I?”
“You also drank from this lake?”
“Yes. I'm done answering these questions.”
“One last question. You are going to take my position at this tree?”
“Yes.” The woman laughed. “Wait, no! I have to go.”
“A promise is a promise,” the woman said. “Lucifer, our contract has been fulfilled. She is now the one who must trade places with another.”
“Indeed,” Lucifer said. “I agreed to let you go if you found someone to replace you.” He took out a parchment. It set aflame and turned into ashes. “You may leave. Now you,” he turned to the princess. “You will have the same contract.”
“I can't believe I fell for that trick,” the princess said.
“That's what you get for not being careful,” the woman laughed. “I was tricked myself. But now I'm free.”
“May you never fall for a trick again,” the princess said sarcastically.
“I won't,” the woman said leaving the princess with Lucifer and headed out towards River Ville.
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is that the end of the story?
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No, but u can read more of it on my profile page, the never ending story.
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chapter 4 the advice

Nana came home to her host family, ran to her room and fluing herself onto the bed. Daiskay was almost squished by the process and he wasn’t too happy about that. Down stairs her foster mother yelled “dinner will be ready soon, so wash up and come down here!” Nana took daiskay in her hands and held him in arms length, “whow, what are you doing to me!” he said uncertianly, now she was taking his toy form serously he thought with distaste. He didn’t like the whole situation and wanted her to turn him back! Nana put down when ryo rubbed against her leg, “are you in love with him now that he is a toy?” ryo joked. Nana got annoyed and went down starts slaming the door behind her, leaving diaskay and ryo alone. “what’s up with her?” diaskay asked, ryo sighed “she is worried that the host family will kick her out this time, you might have guessed this by now but this isn’t the first time nana has done something like this and brought the aftermath home with her."
Daiskay thought about this, he couldn’t understand how a person that clumsy and scattered can become anything let alone a witch with all that power. It frightened him that he would be in her care and that even worse she didn’t have the best track record in town. He was a good student, he was good good person why did this happen to him? What could he do, well the body that couldn’t bleed and couldn’t feel pain wasn’t that bad, fire was the biggest concern and since he could move and talk he was sure he was pretty safe as long as nana didn’t do anything worse.
Nana was in the dining room setting up the table, as her host mother was cooking. “how was school, have you gotten used to the human world yet?” came from the kitchen. “not bad” nana came the monotone reply. Rushing out of the kitchen the host mom whipping her hands on a towel, looked worried at Nana “did something happen? Your usually so happy Nana, what did you get into today?” Nana looked away, not looking at the host mom. “Mrs. Zanchii I swear I didn’t want anything to happen!” she wailed. The host mother clutched the towel to her heart, “what happened?” mrs. Zanchii whispered. “I…..I turned a human into a doll” Nana cried, “oh lord, how is the person?” mrs. Zanchii asked worried even more by the crying. “he…he” Nana said through sobs “is upstairs and I don’t know how to turn him back” mrs. Zanchii sighed in relief “so he is alive, thank heavens “so what have you done with the poor boy have you taken him home? Did you talk to your teacher..hmmm” nana stopped crying and smiled “he is with me the teacher said that till he turns back into a human no one will remember he is gone and that he is under my care.” Mrs. Zanchii looked at nana and wondered what the teacher was thinking that girl was nothing but trouble, but since he was a human, maybe just maybe he will talk some sense into her thought mrs. Zanchii.
Nana came up after dinner happily after the talk with her host family. Swinging the door open,” ryo the host family want to meet him they want to meet him!!” quickly grabbing Daiskay and running down the stairs before anyone could even utter a sound of protest. ryo slowly came down the stairs after her coming into the well furnished living room as Nana happily explained how everything happened and the faces of the young couple looked at Daiskay in concern. Mrs. Zanchii was holding Daiskay as if made out of glass about to break. she kept glancing from the boy/doll to Nana. Ryo sat in the doorway and started to clean himself, "well Nana, I am scared to say this but the fact that he is alive or still here is a blessing, but dear i'm sure he would rather be human again." Mrs. Zanchii said. "that is true i want to be human again but the teacher guy said it was me that, wahhh!" said Daiskay as Mrs. Zanchii dropped him. Mr. Zanchii picked him up "are you alright lad?" he said and daiskay nodded, "well continue boy, do you feel pain? what did the teacher say?" daiskay told them everything and mrs. Zanchii slowly regained the color to her face. "well you can be part of the family till you get turned back, Daiskay dear. if you need anything just tell me." Mrs. Zanchii said sincerely.
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chapter 5 "realization"

an annoying buzzing sound filled Daiskays ears as he took the covers and put them over his head to quiet it down, a crash and hurried racket was so loud that daiskay flung the covers aside and saw a huge figure looming in front of him and coming for him. yelling he fell off the window sill and landed on the floor with a thud. barely able to see anything but shadows he panicked and started to flail around. "calm down! Ryo i think he forgot about yesterday ryo." he heard a familiar voice but the panic he was feeling wasn't helping him to think of who. "i think he is turning into a doll, try the spell from yesterday." a male voice, daiskay was now a hostage!?! "but they don't like me using it in the house remember last time?" she said "hurry up don't waste anymore time, that was the problem last time." he retorted and daiskay was blinded.
"i think it worked" Nana chirped " he isn't isn't flailing anymore"
"yeah you may have just killed him for good this time" ryo replyed sarcasticly
"no! i did not" she whined and started to shake daiskay, "wake up! wake up! you aren't dead!"
daiskay woke up to being shaked, he didn't feel pain but it still didn't feel the best in the world "what are you doing to me stop that!" he yelled Nana sighed in relief and smiled at him and hugged his doll form.
Daiskay didn't understand anything of what was happening, he was shaken awake and then hugged, by a stranger then slowly everything came back to him. growning he looked around, this wasn't his room it was wallpapered with cream colored wallpaper with little faded red roses on it. Nana was getting ready as he looked around the room. everything looked so big to him since he was only a foot tall, he was startled by ryo's angry call to Nana "go get changed in the bathroom stupid!" as daiskay turned to look all he saw was a flushed nana running past half naked. he looked away and blushed "oh so you can blush in that body too" ryo said sneaking to him in the fluid motion that is that of cats "interesting"
Nana carried Daiskay with her to school with her " i can leave you in the second year class room in the back and you can still study and stuff" she proposed as ryo slept on her shoulder
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I can't wait for chapter 6!
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