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[Story] Grand Theft Chara
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Posted 2/13/09 , edited 8/7/10
This is a Made up Story I Wrote and Possibly the BEST STORY EVER and The FIRST STORY i've Ever Wrote But First Let Me tell the details of What The Story is actually About:

The Story Begins 2 Years Later After Amu and The Guardians Capture The Embryo and the Wish is Un-Yet Told but lost their Guardian Chara's after the wish of the embryo is made never to be seen again. At the End of the year, Amu Told everyone News at the End of New Years 2 years Ago About She Going Away to Another Country in America Because of Papa New Job as a Photagrapher But Mama Stayed Behind at the House with Her Sister Ami and Amu Chose To leave with her Papa, which she Thought Might Not Able to see Her Fellow Guardian Friends again. So After Her Good-byes in the airport, Ikuto comes out unexpectally and Gives Her a Letter and A Lip Kiss Between and Disappears without saying a Good-Bye. Amu Then Open Ikuto Letter and Said "Dear Amu, Im Sorry Of What i've Done in the Past and Heard You That You Leaving Town and We Might Not See Each Other again So I've Decided That I will Give You this Letter Saying That if you Are Left Alone and Someday want to Comeback Someday, I'll Be Waiting For You and Always Thinking About you So Take Care. - Ikuto P.S. Sorry About saying a Good-Bye Utau been looking for me Again trying to Get Me to do her Dirty Work with her Stupid erron and if i've she sees me by you, she'll kick my ass and hook me in the bed again and do More Work so Sorry!!. Amu Felt Happy on Ikuto Letter and Then kept it for the rest of her life.
2 Years Has Passed and The Story Resumes as Now Amu Hinamori, 16, Returns and Will Face More Danger, Missions, and Unexpected Surprises. This is Her Story...


12 Chapters Completed, Note the Story Kinda has Small Letters and Some are Hard to Read So Take your time and Let Your Mind Read

Also check out My Latest Forum that tells your Day if its Lucky or Un-Lucky so check it its a pretty Awesome website that its gonna blow you away with questions and its the ONLY FORUM UPDATES EVERYDAY:

http://www.crunchyroll.com/forumtopic-576737/what-is-your-fortune-november-edition-plus/#28452573

Total Of 12 Chapters

Chapter 1- Hinamori Returns [Published: Feb 13, 2009] [Re-Publish July 24, 2009]



Chapter 2- Ikuto [Published: July 4, 2009]



Chapter 3- Dreams or Memories [Published: July 18, 2009]



Chapter 4- Dreams or Memories: Battle at Easter [Published: August 1, 2009]



Chapter 5- The Surprise [Published; Aug 15, 2009]



Chapter 6- The Assualt [Published: Aug 29, 2009]



Click Below to Continue On from Chapter 7-12

http://www.crunchyroll.com/forumtopic-578540/storyfan-fic-grand-theft-chara/
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Posted 2/13/09
Nice chapter! Update Soon!
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Posted 2/14/09
You should probably make spaces, tabs and paragraphs so it's easier to read.
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Posted 2/18/09
It's looks good, but I found it hard to read. Perhaps you could please use paragraphs and spacing?
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Posted 2/20/09
The story was nice.
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Posted 2/20/09
aw its amuto T^T
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nice story actually ^^
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Posted 2/20/09
It was awesome. I'm looking forward to the next chapter
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Posted 2/20/09
Ladies and Gentleman I present to you Chapter 2 of the series and I've Made the paragraphs short bit-long but easy to read and some spaces so you won't get confused so Many Thanxs to those who Gave me some Advice couldn't done it without you so Do Enjoy My stories im looking forward good comments here. ^^
Posted 2/21/09
Wow, this is just an amazing series. Your grammar in some sentences are a bit off, but it's alright. Nice story. I cannot wait for chapter 3!
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Posted 2/21/09
Nice story! Can't wait for ch3 ^^
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Posted 2/25/09
Great chapter really amazing. I didn't noticed that you posted it
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Posted 2/27/09
Chapter 3 is Up Now so Enjoy it took me awhile to get it right so i hope u enjoyed it ^^
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Great Chapter! Its really thrilling
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Posted 3/3/09 , edited 3/5/09
Attention: Chapter 3 has gone missing and i have to re-write the story again cause for some reason it got deleted and i don't have the actual copy of it so i have to re-write the story again but don't worry its gonna be like the one like i posted but its gotta be more like a filler then the actual story so think of it as an add on when it comes out. BTW chapter 3 re-write will be publish again by this friday so be patients im working on it and make sure it won't happen again. Sorry Guys ^^;
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