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[Fanfic] Strawberry Love
Posted 2/16/09
put some post plz if not im not going to post the 2nd chapter and im already done with the 5th!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted 2/16/09
Cool! Although the grammar is kinda hard for me, so I don't follow too well.
Posted 2/16/09

Karin55 wrote:

Cool! Although the grammar is kinda hard for me, so I don't follow too well.


i will try to fix it im going to post chapter 2 now thanx karin ur the best
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Posted 2/16/09

shugodansen wrote:


Karin55 wrote:

Cool! Although the grammar is kinda hard for me, so I don't follow too well.


i will try to fix it im going to post chapter 2 now thanx karin ur the best


Okay =D and ur welcome n.n
So, this is 4 years in the future?(from the current story now)
Posted 2/16/09 , edited 2/16/09
Chapter 2

Posted 2/16/09

Karin55 wrote:


shugodansen wrote:


Karin55 wrote:

Cool! Although the grammar is kinda hard for me, so I don't follow too well.


i will try to fix it im going to post chapter 2 now thanx karin ur the best


Okay =D and ur welcome n.n
So, this is 4 years in the future?(from the current story now)


yup... i was thinking bout my coz who i havnt seen in four years and i thought tat would be a great way for the fanfic
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Posted 2/16/09
Cool! XD
You like putting songs in stuff eh XD
Also, I think this is the first fanfic I've seen that mentioned Lulu.
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Posted 2/16/09
Nice Fanfic! Update Soon!
Posted 2/17/09

candygirl95 wrote:

Nice Fanfic! Update Soon!


thanx got the 3rd chapter already
Posted 2/17/09
These are the characters i added in the story.
Some you will meet later on in the story in this group.

Posted 2/17/09
Chapter 3

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Posted 2/17/09
wow.....................
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Posted 2/17/09
It's alright.
Except they're a bit out of character . Good try though
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It's alright.
Except they're a bit out of character . Good try though


wat do u mean
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Posted 2/18/09

shugodansen wrote:


Adriana13 wrote:

It's alright.
Except they're a bit out of character . Good try though


wat do u mean


I mean that they aren't in their own character as in the whole storyline/plot of the anime and manga
But it's alright =]
I like your style of writing~


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