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put some post plz if not im not going to post the 2nd chapter and im already done with the 5th!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Cool! Although the grammar is kinda hard for me, so I don't follow too well.
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i will try to fix it im going to post chapter 2 now thanx karin ur the best |
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Okay =D and ur welcome n.n So, this is 4 years in the future?(from the current story now) |
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Chapter 2
Spoiler Alert! Click to show or hide Chapter 2: A Savior (Again) I can’t believe that Ikuto sings and good to. What happened to his violin anyway…. I missed that violin and how he played it. I think he just changed paths since that incident back then. Flashback “Ikuto why are you acting like this!?” This isn’t the Ikuto I know. Who is he? I want him back. Tears started coming down my eyes. “Amu-chan I think its time for me to………… Flashback End “So Amu how did you like the concert?” “It was okay, Ikuto what happened to your violin?” He looked like he was hurt. Did my question hurt him? “Ever since the mistake I made I vowed to never use that violin ever again so I wouldn’t hurt someone close to me.” Tears came out of his eyes. Who did he hurt anyway? My parents were backstage with Ami. My father was freaking out, “Amu why are you with this boy?!” “Relax honey, its an old friend of Amu’s, thank you Ikuto for the tickets.” Ikuto put his hand on top of my head. “Your welcome, anything for the mother of someone who took care of me at my time of need.” Wait he stills remember? What the hell is wrong with him? “IKUTO!” I heard Yuki’s voice. She came here all red in her face. “I don’t think I can sing, my voice is cracking up.” Her voice sounded so horse. “Amu why don’t you volunteer you do an amazing?” “NO!!!!!!!” I’ve already done that. He was pushing me to the stage. Oh great! The music of Circus started playing: there's only two types of people in the world the ones that entertain and the ones that observe well baby I'm a put-on-a-show kinda girl dont like the backseat gotta be first I'm like the ringleader I call the shots I'm like a fire cracker I make it hot when I put on a show I feel the adrenaline moving through my veins spotlight on me and I'm ready to break I'm like a performer, the dancefloor is my stage better be ready, hope that ya feel the same all eyes on me in the center of the ring just like a circus when I crack that whip, everybody gonna trip just like a circus don't stand there watching me follow me, show me what you can do everybody let go, we can make a dance floor just like a circus there's only two types of guys out there Ones that can hang with me and ones that are scared so baby, I hope that you came prepared I run a tight ship, so beware I'm like the ringleader I call the shots I'm like a fire cracker I make it hot when I put on a show I feel the adrenaline moving through my veins spotlight on me and I'm ready to break I'm like a performer, the dancefloor is my stage better be ready, hope that ya feel the same all eyes on me in the center of the ring just like a circus when I crack that whip, everybody gonna trip just like a circus don't stand there watching me follow me, show me what you can do everybody let go, we can make a dance floor just like a circus let's go let me see what you can do I'm running this (like,like a circus) yeah, like a what (like a circus) Chorus 2x “Onee-chan that was awesome!” My parents were hugging me and saying what an amazing voice I have and Ami was jumping up and down. Ikuto had a smile on his face and Yuki…..was gone. My mother told me to meet up with them at the French restaurant where Lulu’s dad works. “Ikuto so how come Utau isn’t here?” Ikuto told me she was with Kukai at a ski resort for the past week. “She and him seem super close like a couple.” He was smiling. I saw a white light. “Amu, LOOK OUT!” He pushed me. I got up and tried to see ywhere he was. Tears started coming out, did he die? “Yo Amu I’m over here, don’t start crying.” I saw him on top of the brick wall. He had a few minor cuts. I guess for saving my life I can invite him to dinner with us. “Ikuto for saving my life again you wanna come to dinner with us?” he looked happy. He headed toward me and hugged me. That must be a yes. We were walking then I saw this girl with Yuki. She had the same face has her. Are they sisters? |
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Karin55 wrote: Okay =D and ur welcome n.n So, this is 4 years in the future?(from the current story now) yup... i was thinking bout my coz who i havnt seen in four years and i thought tat would be a great way for the fanfic |
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Cool! XD
You like putting songs in stuff eh XD Also, I think this is the first fanfic I've seen that mentioned Lulu. |
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Nice Fanfic! Update Soon!
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Learning To Love Again.
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These are the characters i added in the story.
Some you will meet later on in the story in this group. Spoiler Alert! Click to show or hide Cross Yuki Yoko Emiko Sora Jun |
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Chapter 3
Spoiler Alert! Click to show or hide Chapter 3: A Surprise Attack “Amu-chii!” I only one person and one person only that calls me that and that is… “Yaya!” Instead of having pigtails, she had her hair loose with a ribbon clip. She had long ass hair, I wish I have that hair. Yaya started babbling about how she was in America. For some reason I felt someone was behind me. “Yaya I need to go back to my house, I left something.” She kinda looked confused, she still understood. “Ok she is gone you don’t have to hide anymore!” I felt a cold breath on my neck. It made me shake from the coldness. “Amu, want to be in a music video?” That husky voice, it was Ikuto. Why would he want me to be in a music video? “If your not sure here is the script.” He disappeared in an instance. The song was called “SEVETEEN FOREVER.” RING!!!!!!! “Hinamori-san want to walk together?” Tadase wants to walk with me!? The guy I had a crush on in elementary wants to walk with me! I was blushing red. “LOOK OUT!” I looked back and saw that a boy was running straight to me. He tripped on me and my books scattered everywhere on the floor. Tadase helped me picking up my books and paper. “Seventeen Forever by…… IKUTO TSUKIYOMI!” Holy mother of sons, he found out about the video. “Bye Hinamori-san.” He had tears coming out of his tears. What happened he seemed so calm until he reached the end of the book. I think I should she it. Let see: Spins to Ikuto until reaches his body. Turns around and KISSES HIM! ………………………… When I arrived home I showed it to my mother. “Oh honey, its fake your just going to be really close to his face.” Thank god my mother told me this before I was going to decline it. I dialed the number that was in back of the book into my cell phone. “Hello.” “Hello is this Ikuto?” “Yup, is this Amu……. What is your answer?” “Yes, just tell me I’m not going to put on skin showing clothes.” He hasn’t answered my question. But….. “Is a bikini ok with you?” What, well its just a bikini. “Sure.” “Perfect, see you tomorrow in rehearsal.” He hanged up. Wait do I have to bring a bikini? I’ll just bring it just in case. …………………………………………………………. (Day of the video) “Amu, are you ready?” The director made me put on a short dress with chains around it. “Yes, where is Ikuto?” The director smiled. Does he think I like Ikuto? Well I don’t. “I’m here Amu.” I heard his voice and I turned. He had a ripped tuxedo with messy hair. He was filled with fake blood on his arm. He started singing the song and I was in the middle with the rest of the girls. The spotlight came on me and Ikuto came towards me. When he reached to the end something surprised me………… HE KISSED ME. It was so passionate that even I enjoyed it. I hope that everyone I know isn’t seeing this, especially my dad and Tadase. |
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wow.....................
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It's alright.
Except they're a bit out of character . Good try though |
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wat do u mean |
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I mean that they aren't in their own character as in the whole storyline/plot of the anime and manga But it's alright =] I like your style of writing~ |
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