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[Fanfic] Strawberry Love
Posted 2/19/09
the story is kinda fast. ...maybe a filler or two will help. but even so.................................*squeel* amuto kiss!!!
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Posted 2/20/09
pllllzzzzzz update a little faster its so good
i cant wait for the next chii
Posted 2/21/09

Adriana13 wrote:


shugodansen wrote:


Adriana13 wrote:

It's alright.
Except they're a bit out of character . Good try though


wat do u mean


I mean that they aren't in their own character as in the whole storyline/plot of the anime and manga
But it's alright =]
I like your style of writing~




well in some fanfics amu is weak and in 1 i know she is strong but thanx for helpining it might work 4 chapter 5 there personality of the anime
Posted 2/21/09
Chapter 4

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Posted 12/21/11 , edited 12/21/11
ooo this is good can't wait for the rest
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Posted 12/24/11
that's cool
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