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I know Valentines just passed but well I made a fic.. I didn't actually made it but my friend gave this story to me. She's not the one who did it though so in other words, we both have forgotten where we got this story from.

Anyway, pls do read it! once again, belated happy valentines!!!

CHARACTERS:

Reiku - [anyone can be this girl! ]
Akanishi Jin

OPENING AND CLOSING THEME=> JIN - Care


I have a guy friend who grew up with me. His name is Akanishi Jin. He's strange but gifted with good features and fame. Still, I always thought of him as a friend until last year, when we went to a trip from a club. I found that I fell in love with him. I don't know why but it all happened with just a snap of a finger. Probably because the way he acts or the way he smiles makes my heart melt. He really had a great change. NO wonder why most of the girls like him.

Before that trip was over, I took a step and confessed my love for him. Surprisingly he smiled.

Jin: Ne~can we start again from the beginning? This time it's my turn to do the confession
Reiku: Ah hai! =]
Jin: Well, can you go out with me?

His confession was way different from mines that I start to fret but good thing he didn't notice it. I nodded and soon, we became a pair of lovers, but we loved each other in different ways. I always concentrated on him only, but by his side, there were so many other girls. So many beautiful girls than me. To me, he was the only one, but to him, maybe I was just another girl…

One time, I grabbed the opportunity to ask him out.
Reiku: Jin, do you want to go watch a movie?”
Jin: I can’t
Reiku: Why? You need to study at home?” I felt disappointment upon hearing that.
Jin: No… I am going to meet a friend.

He just gave me a peck in my cheek and walked away. He was always like that. He met girls in front of me, like it was nothing. To him, I was just a girlfriend. The word ‘love’ only came out from my mouth. Since I knew him, I had never heard him say ‘I love you’ before. To us, there weren’t any anniversaries at all. He didn’t say anything from the first day and it continued till 100 days…200days…

Everyday, before we say goodbye, he would just hand me a doll, everyday, without fail. I don’t know why. Then one day…

Reiku: Um, Jin, I …
Jin: What! Don’t drag, just say it.
Reiku: I love you.
Jin: Oh sou~...you….um, just take this doll and go home.

That was how he ignored my ‘three words’ and handed me the doll. Then he disappeared, like he was running away. The dolls I received from him everyday, filled my room, one by one. There were many…One day came, my 15th year old birthday. When I got up in the morning, I pictured a party with him, and stranded myself in my room, waiting for his call. But lunch passed, dinner passed… and soon the sky was dark… he still didn’t call. It was already tiring to look at the phone anymore. Then around 2am in the morning, he suddenly called me and woke me from my sleep. He told me to come out of the house. Still, I felt joy and I ran out happily.

Reiku: Jin…
Jin: Ora…take this…

Again, he handed me a little doll.

Reiku: What’s this?
Jin: I didn’t give it to you yesterday, so I am giving it to you now. Anyway, I’m going home now, ja naa~
Reiku: Wait, wait! Do you know what today is?
Jin: Today? Eh?

I felt so sad, I thought he would remember my birthday. He sighed, turned around and walked away like nothing had happen. Then I shouted…

Reiku: Wait!Tell me, tell me you love me…onegai
Jin: What?!

I put my pathetic self behind and clung on to him. But he just said simple cold words, remove my grip slowly from him and left.

Jin: I don’t want to say…that I love someone so easily, if you are desperate to hear it, then find someone else.

That was what he said. Then he ran off. My legs felt numb. I started crying so much that I collapsed to the ground. He didn’t want to say it easily. How could he! I felt that maybe he is not the right guy for me. After that day, I stranded myself at home crying, just crying. He didn’t call me, although I was waiting. He just continued handing me a little doll every morning outside my house. That’s how those dolls piled up in my room everyday. After a month, I got myself together and went to school. But what made the pain resurface was that I saw him on a street with another girl. He had a smile on his face, one that he never showed me as he touched the doll. I ran straight back home and looked at the dolls in my room, and tears fell. Those dolls are probably picked out by some other girls. In a fit of anger, I threw the dolls around. Then suddenly, the phone rang. It was him. He told me to come out to the bus stop outside my house. I tried to calm myself down and walked to the bus stop. I kept reminding myself that I am going to forget him, that… it’s going to end. Then he came into my sight, holding a big doll.

Jin: Reiku, I thought you were pissed, you really came?

I couldn’t help hating him, acting like nothing had happen and joking around. Soon, he held out the doll as usual.

Reiku: I don’t need it.
Jin: What….why?

I grabbed the doll from his hands and threw it on the road.

Reiku: I don’t need this doll, I don’t need it anymore!! I don’t want to see a person like you again! I want to forget you for the rest of my life.

I spitted out all the words that were inside me. But unlike other days, his eyes very shaking.

Jin: I’m sorry.
He apologized in a tiny voice. He then walked over to the road to pick up the doll…

Reiku: You stupid! Why are you picking up the doll?! Just throw it away!!!

But he ignored me and just went to pick the doll. Then…
Honk~ Honk~

With a loud honk, a big truck was heading towards him.
Reiku: Jin! Move! Move away!” I shouted.

But he didn’t hear me, he squatted down and picked up the doll.
Reiku: Jin, move!
HONK~!!
Boom! That sound, so terrifying.

That’s how he went away from me without even opening his eyes to say one word to me. After that day, I had to go through everyday with guiltiness and the sadness of losing him…After spending two months like a crazy person… I took out the dolls. Those were the only gifts he left me since the day we started going out. I remembered the days I spent with him and started to count the days when we were in love. “One…two… three…”

That was how… I started to count the dolls until I reached. “Four hundred and eighty four… four hundred and eighty five…” It all ended with 485 dolls. I then started to cry again, with a doll in my arms. I hugged it tightly, then suddenly…“I love you~, I love you~ I dropped the dolls,shocked of what I just heard.
I….lo..ve…you??
I picked up the dolls and pressed its stomach.
“I love you~ I love you~”
It can’t be! I pressed all the dolls’ stomach as it piled on the side. “I love you~” “I love you~” “I love you~”
Those words came out non-stop. I love you. Why didn’t I realize that? That his heart was always by my side, protecting me. Why didn’t I realize that he love me this much… I took out the doll under the bed and pressed it’s stomach, that was the last doll, the one that fell on the road. It had his blood stain on it. The voice came out, the one that I was missing so much…

JIN: "Other 486 days. Do you know what 486 is? I couldn’t say I love you. Um… since I was too shy… If you forgive me and take this doll, I will say that I love you everyday till the day I die, Reiku. Aishiteru.”

The tears came flowing out of me. Why? Why? I asked God, why do I only know about all this now? He can’t be by my side, but he loved me until his last minute. For that reason to me… it became a courage

to live a beautiful life without regrets.
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T_______T. GEh-chaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan! i missed ya!

oh woooow. this fic is soo soo sooo sad T_____T. Aishiteruuuuuuuuuuuu!
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omg TT^TT
so sad ;~;
aishiteru TT^TT
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T_T
my heart is crying...
i cant control my tears in my eyes....

ahhhh geh-san....
u 're alwys makin my heart cry with all those OS....
i love you for making it..
but i also hate u to add more addiction in my body to fics
and making me cry(:
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T^T huhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhu



love it so much !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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This is amazing!!
I've got goosebumps reading through this!!
I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT!!
I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU!
kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!
this is uber sad!!
I even programmed myself to enjoy and have fun reading this..
but no matter how much I tried to hold my tears.. I JUST CAN'T!!
TTTTTTT.TTTTTTT
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HOLY XET~!!!
*huhu!*

I know this story~~
it's from an e-mail~~

every time I read it, it just makes me want to cry...
really, Yaji-chan, you always want to make us CRY~!!!

this is how complicated LOVE is..
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Cherrilly17 wrote:

T_______T. GEh-chaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan! i missed ya!

oh woooow. this fic is soo soo sooo sad T_____T. Aishiteruuuuuuuuuuuu!


uwaaaa!!cherrilly chaaaan! where were you?!!o_O
i missed you too!!!waah! *hugggss*

aww...arigatou for reading it...=]
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Kyaaaa!~ It's so sad... but it's beautiful at the same time!
Waah, i can't top crying TT.TT But like i said it makes me feel better haha
I love your OS! *___*
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omg TT^TT
so sad ;~;
aishiteru TT^TT


waaah gomen airi chan!..i made you sad...=[
kedo sankyuu for reading it!
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xiaoqian94 wrote:

T_T
my heart is crying...
i cant control my tears in my eyes....

ahhhh geh-san....
u 're alwys makin my heart cry with all those OS....
i love you for making it..
but i also hate u to add more addiction in my body to fics
and making me cry(:


waah gomen...for making you cry!..huhu..
ILU too!!!*hugss*...

aww pls don't hate me...*shows puppy eyes*
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teekim wrote:

T^T huhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhu



love it so much !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


arigatou teekii chan for reading it!..waah i'm now feeling guilty!

most of you cried...
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hsj9392 wrote:

This is amazing!!
I've got goosebumps reading through this!!
I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT!!
I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU!
kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!
this is uber sad!!
I even programmed myself to enjoy and have fun reading this..
but no matter how much I tried to hold my tears.. I JUST CAN'T!!
TTTTTTT.TTTTTTT


waah hnto?...hehe..

kyaa sankyuu emi chan for reading...i'm really sorry for making you cry as well..
waah...btw did you try listening to his song care while reading this?..

i tried reading it again and it matches..
of course i cried...waah
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shieLdembLem wrote:

HOLY XET~!!!
*huhu!*

I know this story~~
it's from an e-mail~~

every time I read it, it just makes me want to cry...
really, Yaji-chan, you always want to make us CRY~!!!

this is how complicated LOVE is..


now that answers my question...
so this is from an email ne~?hmmm

demo gomene i didn't mean to make you all cry...hontoni! gomenasai everyone...*bows*
*huggs sheito chan*

for some reason it's reallly difficult to make a funny fic naa~...huhu
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Geh-san wrote:


hsj9392 wrote:

This is amazing!!
I've got goosebumps reading through this!!
I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT!!
I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU!
kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!
this is uber sad!!
I even programmed myself to enjoy and have fun reading this..
but no matter how much I tried to hold my tears.. I JUST CAN'T!!
TTTTTTT.TTTTTTT


waah hnto?...hehe..

kyaa sankyuu emi chan for reading...i'm really sorry for making you cry as well..
waah...btw did you try listening to his song care while reading this?..

i tried reading it again and it matches..
of course i cried...waah




woah!!
I would have to try that when I read it again!!
demo.. wouldn't it be more dramatic for me?? xDD
anyway..
I UBER LOVE IT!!
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