Prelude ~The History~
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Posted 2/17/09 , edited 2/18/09


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The whole land was covered in absolute abyss and loneliness. Everywhere you look, there was nothingness that stretched .

One man set out in his travels. Along the way, he meets up with a pianist who played him a song. He was satisfied after hearing the song and left for his next destination afterwards. The same thing happened as he met the flutist, violinist and drummer.

One day, he came across a guitarist who played him a tune. As the man was about to leave for his next destination, the guitarist decided to come along with him.

They both travelled together for awhile now. One day, they both awoke to a sad song. They looked where that voice was coming from. When they found the voice, they noticed it belonged to a female singer. The guitarist couldn't help himself so he started to accompany the singer with her song. The man realized that everything has a sound. When 2 sounds are put together it makes another sound. Amazed at what he heard, he decided to gather the other musicians he met before.

He set up a city hiddedn in the forest. He used his powers to create a music barrier to protect it from the loneliness of the world. Those 6 musicians put the different sounds they have together to make a beautiful melody. This melody is supports the barrier. The man decided to name the City, Melodia Town after the melody which was found.

End of the prelude.
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Posted 2/18/09
WOW! great story! i wonder who that man is....
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Posted 2/19/09

d_ianne963 wrote:

WOW! great story! i wonder who that man is....


thanks.

Posted 2/21/09
I like the prelude...very interesting...i like the history behind the origination of melody..xDD
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Posted 2/21/09
Very unique and interesting plot, hope for the rest of the story
Posted 3/22/09
It's absolutely amazing. i love your writing skills ^^ I feel a real faker when I compare them to yours.
*bows with lots of recognision*
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Posted 3/27/09
WoW!! It's really amazing !!
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Posted 4/14/09
That was really good. Very interesting^^
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Posted 4/21/09
wow!!!i love the story.....~~~
Posted 5/5/09
It was beautiful.. i <3 luv it ^_^
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Posted 5/14/09
Interesting... Since the man was the one who made the city, it'soriginally the king of the city/kingdom then... So, the princess must be the descendant of that man... (that man is the princess' ancestor, probably)
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Posted 6/13/09
wow im interested to make a manga bout this~ XD but no, im not too capable to show my drawings to hime-sama coz its not good XD
Posted 7/19/09
woah, that's great! it's kind of melancholic in a way, a world without music until someone finds out, would make a great manga
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