nerd x nerd beautiful x beautiful
Posted 2/18/09 , edited 2/18/09
lisa_kong: hi guys. i can't get my microsoft to work so don't mind the spelling and the chapters might be a little short and not as detailed cause it's my first fanition.Oh and dis is gonna be amuto or eles I might change it into Ikutau (Ikutau is a name i made up for Ikuto x Utau and they aren't siblings in MY fanition.) so if u don't like to bad. They r 14 then they turn to 17. Oh and one more thing i don't like doing paragrahs when people r talking so JUST READ IT THE WAY I WRITE IT OKS.Oh and pls read and comment

Amu: Ikuto stop it lisa is right there.

lisa_kong: hmph people these days.

First chapter. Meeting Another One of Me

Ikuto's POV

I got up early and put on my glasses.It was more like I didn't even want to get up.

Flashback.

"Everybody to ur seats." said Nikaido-sensei."We're having a new student u may come in." I walked in. I heard mumbleings. "This isTsukiyomi Ikuto. Be nice to him." Naikaido-sensei said smiling. "Ur seat is over there. I saw Naikaido-sensei point to a empty chair. I walked slowly to the seat hoping nothing will wil happen but it did! KUPLANK!!!! I felt flat on the ground. "Oh sorry about dat." a guy with gray hair said. I picked my self off the ground. As I started to walk agian I heard him say "Four Eyes." Walking to my seat was only about ten step but it felt like one thousand miles. When i got to my seat I putted my head on my desk.

AFTER SCHOOL

It was after school and I had to get home fast. I walked out the frount gate until.SPLASH. "HAHAHAHAHA LOOK AT DAT NERD GET WET!!HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!" I was soaked head to toe. I started walking again.Dis time taking the long way home. When i got home my mom was shocked. "WHO DID DIS TO U???!!!!" My mom yelled. I thought for a moment if my eardrums were still in shape."I triped and fell in the river when i was crossing the brigde mom." I said trying to sound okay and not hurt. "Oh.Well go take a bath and come down to dinner okay." I only nodded. After dinner i went to my room thinking of wat happened after school.Finally i stopped thinking."I have to get some sleep or mom is going to kill me." I said taking of my glasses and I doze off to sleep.

End of Flashback

"Huuuh." I sigh. I finished breakfest and walked to school.As usual murmurings about me."EVERYONE TO UR SEATS." shouted Naikaido-sensei."U guys may come in." Four students came in."This is Rima." said naikaido-sensei.(I don't knoe some peoples last name sorry.) Rima was a short girl but she was cute.She had long wavy hair and golden brown eyes."Dis is Hoshia Utau." (Utau and Ikuto r not siblings in my faniction just to remind u again.) Utau looked mature and beautiful..She had long yellow hair tied up in two ponytails on the sides of her head. One to the right and one to the left. She had dark purple eyes. "This is Souma Kunkai."The Souma dude lokked like a sports guy. He had light brown hair and light green eyes. "Dis is the last new student Hinamori Amu." I was shocked by her apperence...
Posted 2/18/09
itz good the only problem iz tat itz too short u hav to make them longer and bout kukai dont judge a book by its cover, which means dont think tat kukai is a sport guy my looking at him, just describe how he looks (i know kukai is a sport guy, but amu is kinda punk but she is grly inside)
Posted 2/18/09
think about dis shugodansen it's ikuto who thinks like dat cause he doesn't knoe about them yet and did u even READ the top part it said it's my first so it might be SHORT.
Posted 2/18/09

lisa_kong wrote:

think about dis shugodansen it's ikuto who thinks like dat cause he doesn't knoe about them yet and did u even READ the top part it said it's my first so it might be SHORT.


sorry i didnt remember lolz sometimez i can b a airhead
Posted 2/19/09
lisa:Just so u guys knoe I hate doing flashback of the previous chp so I'm not going to do any.

A pink hair girl with a cute smirk and a Blue hair boy with a cute blush

Ikuto's POV
SHE.... WAS A NERD WITH PINK HAIR!!!!!! I was soooooo shocked I didn't even notice my jaw almost touch the ground.I closed my mouth before anyone could see me but.. someone did see it.

Amu's POV
I heard murmurings but I didn't care about them.I was looking around the room when I saw a blue hair guy 's jaw was about to touch the ground.I coulnd't help but smirk.I thought for a moment if he saw me smirk.?? "Hinamori-san ur desk is over there."I look at the chair the four eyes teach was pointing to.It was next to the blue hair nerd guy.I started to walk to my desk and I looked down.I saw a foot stick out.The foot belonged to a gray hair boy.He was going to tripp me.I couldn't help but step on his foot. It was his fault for trying to tripp me. "OUCH." He screanm like a girl." Is anything wrong Trisaki-san??" the four eyes teach asked him. No was all he could say."I have to go somewhere for a moment so u guys be good." said the four eyes teach leaving.I finnally reached my desk.I sat down and turned my head to the four eye guy siting next to me.He also turned his head and face me.

Ikuto's PO V
The pink hair girl sat down next to me.i turned my head facing her."Hi.I will be sitting next to u.I'm Hinamori Amu." she said. " Hhhh..iii." I replied nervously.I saw she smirked.I blushed.She looked sooooo cute when she smirked or smile.Finishing my sentence I said "I'm Tsukiyomi Ikuto.Nice to meet you Hinamori-san." "Amu is okay Ikuto."I blush again when she said my first name."Hey Ikuto?" "Wat?" I replied. "U look cute when u blush." I blushed even harder."Ummm... Amu-chan?" "Yeah??" she asked. "Ummm. U look cute when u smirk or smile.."

Amu's POV

I blushed hard when I heard these words from him.No one has ever say I was cute before."Thx." I said looking down on my desk still blushing hard."I guess u do have some girly side after all Amu." I blushed even harder. "Well well." I started to say and I stop blushing."U do have some manly side to Ikuto." The door opened and....

lisa_kong:So how was dat??I tried to wrote longer but I have to go cook.See ya guyz in the next chp.
Posted 2/20/09
No comments accept mines and shugodansen
Posted 2/20/09
Hmmm...well, it's ok I guess. The spelling mistakes bother me, but since you explained why I guess i'll let it slide. Can I suggest more detail though? Other than that, it's ok ^^
Posted 2/21/09
thank u 4 ur comments.I'm gonna quit doing dis faniction.I suck.I don't have time to write too sooo bye.
Posted 2/21/09

lisa_kong wrote:

thank u 4 ur comments.I'm gonna quit doing dis faniction.I suck.I don't have time to write too sooo bye.


just bcuz of one bad fanfic alot of ppl here made so many fanfics dat nobody hav even read and itz ur first dont give up i will tell u the truth in this in my first fanfic i posted nobody even read it no comments at all yet u do and im doing one right now and not alot of ppl r reading it but its better than last time dont give
Posted 2/23/09
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