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minna~!this is my first time to write a story(OS)...so please, enjoy reading it..arigatou!

Special thanks to chii-chan a.k.a blood_15 for helping me...domo arigatou gozaimasu!!muuuaahhhh!!

"Even if she brought me troubles a while ago it was worth it."

CHARACTERS:
Yoshioka Yui
Daiki Arioka



Winter
Train station
Tuesday, 8pm



"Mind if i sit next to you?"


That was her first suave line. Seated on a nearby bench, I gazed at her in amusement. She was waiting for my reply with a blank expression. I find it funny when I suddenly feel like blushing upon seeing her face. Her eyes we're dazzling, cheeks are proportioned with exquisite plum press, red lips we're thin and narrow, in line with her cute pointy nose. Noticing every detail of her face, I almost forgot to reply. She was half-smiling.



Daiki: *panics* Gomen. Yeah as you please. *stammer*
*girl smirks as she sits next to him*



I had my jacket on but coldness sinks in with in my bones. It feels chilling when she sat beside me. It was really weird. I endured not getting tempted to glance at her, she might find it suspicious. Demo, it surprised me a lot when she turns to face me, with a smile on her face.

Yui: We're you just force to let me sit beside you? Cause you're a bit awkward of the situation. I'll just go. *attempts to leave*


Daiki: No! Chotto Matte! *panics*
*girls turns to face him*
*Daiki blushed again, speechless*
*girl smiles*



Yui: I'm not wearing my uniform but i think we're almost the same age. It's not like i'm hitting on you or anything, don't be scared.


Daiki: No! I was not thinking that way. I was just...just...


Yui: *sits back* Okay stop it. You're really acting weird. *chuckles*


She sat back beside me, grinning. I was sure it was me, she was laughing because of my stupidity. Darn it! I glance at her again. she's now reading a thick book. I then noticed her get-up Rock star. It was obvious with the way she dressed but I was blinded by her undeniably angelic face. A guitar rested on her side, along with her backpack. She had a little touch of Gothic Lolita fashion but looked simpler.



: Yui!



We both glance at our right. I find it cute how our head movement synchronized. Yui, her name? Sounds sweet hearing her name. Demo, who's this guy anyway?



*man approaches*
*Yui stands up*


: *panting* We need to talk. You don't really have to do this. *eyes pleading*


Yui: *smirks* We're talking now. Say what you need to spill out before our train comes. *sways hands towards daiki*


: *confused, looks at innocent daiki, smiles* Oh, I forgot to tell everyone, *comes near Daiki and grabs his hand* My boyfriend. *leans at daiki's shoulders with comfortness.*

*daiki with cold sweat, numb*


Ehh?? Me?? When?? This girl's crazy! Is she planning to get me into trouble? This guy in front sure looks scary, and his stares, it's melting me halfway! What to do?! *panics*


: *disbelief, chuckles* This weakling? *points at Daiki, ready to punch him*
*Yui hides Daiki behind her*


Yui: Don't dare to touch him. he's mine. *cold stare at the man* Yours?!




I looked at her expression. Man! She was serious! What the hell's wrong with this day? I started the morning with loud sermons from my mom, got failing grades in my exams, dumped by my crush, and now, this? How many more miseries will I have to experience till midnight?!




: *serious* It's not funny Yui. You're dumping me for a high schooler?! And a weakling?! *disgusted*
*Daiki blushed of embarrassment, Yui holds tight of Daiki's hand


Yui: Don't you dare insult him! Yeah, I'm dumping for this guy over here. See this pretty face? *reaches out Daiki's face, show's it to her ex-boyfriend* You don't have this kind of freshness. And obviously, *smiles sweetly at Daiki* my looks and my age say's we're matched. *Daiki mesmerized*


*train comes*
*Daiki stunned of the happenings*
*Yui gets her things, still holding Daiki's hand.*


Yui: *pulls Daiki* Ja nah! *waves but bothers not to look at her ex.*
*Daiki gets dragged inside the train*
*man left alone, speechless*



Inside the train, I heard her laugh as we sit near the door. My heart leaped seeing her glow with her sound chuckles. She looked so cute and I was dumbfounded. What's wrong with me? I'm supposed to protest and question her actions a while ago, yet, here I am, enjoying this scenery of her happy face. She's really pretty. I continued staring at her face.


Yui: *noticed* Something wrong? *Daiki regains himself*


Daiki: Ughhh...Betsuni. *avoids her look* *train runs*

-SILENCE-


She was still holding my hand. I hope she won't notice and just let it be cause i like the warmth I feel with our hands clasp, so smooth and tiny. Suddenly,



Yui: Namae wa?


Daiki: *surprised* A-Arioka D-Daiki desu. You?*stammers*


Yui: *nods* Yoshioka Yui desu. *smiles gently*


Ohh..that smile, I Can't resist it! I wanna pinch her cheeks till I get enough of it's cuteness. Kawaii~! *paused* Eghh?? Yoshioka Yui??!


When i turned to see her face, she wore the same confused expression. She did remember! Crap!


D/Y: You??! *both looked surprised*
*Yui laughs more*


Daiki: *panics* It was not me Yoshioka-san. I was just force to write that letetr because my friend told me so! *defensive*


Yui: *chuckles* Embarrased neh? *taps Daiki's shoulders * I had fun reading your love letter. *laughs again* I was not expecting to see you around here.



Darn it! She's having fun teasing me! Yeah, thanks to my good friends, I ended up getting myself embarrassed in front of this young female rock star whose become famous to teens nowadays. She's the same age as me, studying at an all girls private highschool few blocks away from Shounan high, my school. I knew everything of about her, but never knew she's this pretty in person. The loveletter! Kyahhh! How am I supposed to explain this properly?


Everything was due to my clumsiness. *sighs* If i wasn't bullied by Hikaru and Inoo, I woudn't be writing that loveletter.No! It doesn't even deserve to be called one, useless piece of paper, that's it. All the boys have crush on Yoshioka Yui, the famous Rock star blessed with an angelic face. Demo, I never saw her face until now. They would chat everything about her, and even went to see her performance. Hikaru was so head over heels obsessed of Yui that he even force me to write a love letter for her. And because of my irritation and piled grudge towards Hikaru, i wrote funny statements with in that letter. I had one evil goal, to embarrassed him over Yui. Demo, the overwhelming excitement caused me to carelessly put my own name below. BAKA! Without reading it again, I sealed the letter and hand it to the impatient Hikaru. Stupid as I am, the guy was so excited that he didn't have tiled to read what was written. I was too late to notice and remember what i just carelessly did! How stupid of me!!



Yui:*chuckles* Looking at you right now, it seems like, the love letter tells me it was really you. *having fun*


Daiki: *shakes his head* It was a misunderstanding. I was---


Yui: Gomene. I drag you into difficult situation between me and my ex-boyfriend.* cutting Daiki's statement, apologetic*
*daiki stares at her in silence*


Daiki: *sighs* I'm used to getting bullied. Don't worry. At least, i brought relief on your part.
*Yui amused*

-SILENCE-

*train stops at the next station*


Yui: *stands up* I'm off. I hope to see you again, Daiki-kun. Ja! *waves with a smile*
* daiki hesitantly waves back with a half smile*
*Yui, eventually leaves*
*Daiki gazes at his hand.*



Yokatta!! That was the longest time I ever get to hold hands with a girl, a very beautiful girl! Even if she brought me troubles awhile ago, it was worthwhile. I'm going home with a smile painted on my face. But, wait! *checks on his current location* Kyahhh!!!! I ride the wrong train!! Ka-chan!!!!!!!!


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eh??? this so wad's the ending is there a sequel?
cos there isn't anythin to state that they were in a BGR..
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xiaoqian94 wrote:

eh??? this so wad's the ending is there a sequel?
cos there isn't anythin to state that they were in a BGR..


hai!!
there is...
*winks*

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aw that was really cute!!
especially imagining Daiki screaming "ka-chan!" in the end!!
i thought he's so adorable!! ^^

btw.. I hope there's a sequel!!
I would love to see more from Daiki and Yui!! xDD
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k-pop wrote:


xiaoqian94 wrote:

eh??? this so wad's the ending is there a sequel?
cos there isn't anythin to state that they were in a BGR..


hai!!
there is...
*winks*



oh i see so when will it be up?(:
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xiaoqian94 wrote:


k-pop wrote:


xiaoqian94 wrote:

eh??? this so wad's the ending is there a sequel?
cos there isn't anythin to state that they were in a BGR..


hai!!
there is...
*winks*



oh i see so when will it be up?(:


uhmm..maybe by the next day??
after my exams..
gomen..

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aw that was really cute!!
especially imagining Daiki screaming "ka-chan!" in the end!!
i thought he's so adorable!! ^^

btw.. I hope there's a sequel!!
I would love to see more from Daiki and Yui!! xDD



domo arigatou for reading my OS...
yeahh..
there will be a sequel...
because i love their team up...
btw, i want to make a banner for sabre's memories sequel..
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k-pop wrote:


hsj9392 wrote:

aw that was really cute!!
especially imagining Daiki screaming "ka-chan!" in the end!!
i thought he's so adorable!! ^^

btw.. I hope there's a sequel!!
I would love to see more from Daiki and Yui!! xDD



domo arigatou for reading my OS...
yeahh..
there will be a sequel...
because i love their team up...
btw, i want to make a banner for sabre's memories sequel..



really??
love it too!!
btw..
about the banner..
that would be cool!! ^^
demo.. i think you have to ask cynthia-ane about that ^^
she's the boss xDD
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hsj9392 wrote:


k-pop wrote:


hsj9392 wrote:

aw that was really cute!!
especially imagining Daiki screaming "ka-chan!" in the end!!
i thought he's so adorable!! ^^

btw.. I hope there's a sequel!!
I would love to see more from Daiki and Yui!! xDD



domo arigatou for reading my OS...
yeahh..
there will be a sequel...
because i love their team up...
btw, i want to make a banner for sabre's memories sequel..



really??
love it too!!
btw..
about the banner..
that would be cool!! ^^
demo.. i think you have to ask cynthia-ane about that ^^
she's the boss xDD



yeahh..
she told me to do a banner....
anou,
a bit scared because i'm not good in making a banner..
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k-pop wrote:


hsj9392 wrote:


k-pop wrote:


hsj9392 wrote:

aw that was really cute!!
especially imagining Daiki screaming "ka-chan!" in the end!!
i thought he's so adorable!! ^^

btw.. I hope there's a sequel!!
I would love to see more from Daiki and Yui!! xDD



domo arigatou for reading my OS...
yeahh..
there will be a sequel...
because i love their team up...
btw, i want to make a banner for sabre's memories sequel..



really??
love it too!!
btw..
about the banner..
that would be cool!! ^^
demo.. i think you have to ask cynthia-ane about that ^^
she's the boss xDD



yeahh..
she told me to do a banner....
anou,
a bit scared because i'm not good in making a banner..



but if you made your own avii..
then that one's a pro!!
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OMG, i love this fanfic. Daiki is sooo cutee :D
i'm w8ing for the next 1 :]
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OMG, i love this fanfic. Daiki is sooo cutee :D
i'm w8ing for the next 1 :]



domo arigatou!!!*bows*
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kyaa! this needs a sequel!
kawaii daiki!..
and i just can't believe that yui's the same age as daiki?!O_O..

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Sequel please...
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kyagghhhhh *shouts loudly*


love it heheheheheh (*i'm being childish again* )



the last part was fuuny


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