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Hey all! *ahem* This is .... uh .... my first time writing about something like this. I'm kinda nervous it'll give others the wrong impression about me. I do love romance novels, so i tried my hand at writing part of one.
So i do hope that you'll enjoy my writing. I hope to see many comments from everyone! XD


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~Urgent Kisses~

I wasn’t concentrating on his hands; all I knew was that he had just confessed what I wanted to hear for so long. His eyes pierced mine, studying my reaction. His brow furrowed in worry. I rubbed the lines on his forehead away with my thumb. I smiled weakly.
“I love you, too.”
He blinked. I could have slapped him and he wouldn’t have noticed. I let him think, resting my cold hand on his warm cheek. I giggled. He was blushing. I found myself blushing, too.
“And … and thank you,’ I whispered. “For today, I mean. I really did think … that I was a goner.”
He swallowed. Suddenly his far away gaze turned pained. His eyes became wet.
“Violet …” he whispered. His grip tightened on my waist. “Violet, don’t you ever do that to me again.”
I let my hand drop. “Do what?” I asked him. What had I done now? My stomach twisted into knots.
He sighed. He let go of my waist with one of his hands, leaving the empty space cold and naked, and used it to place my hand back on his cheek. His hand was so warm.
“Don’t make me think that I’ve lost you.” The pain in his voice stabbed at my heart.
I could feel them, the tears edging closer and closer to spilling over my cheeks. My eyes were beginning to blur and sting.
“Never again,” I croaked. I couldn’t look at his face. I let my gaze fall down to my feet. I felt Damien’s eyes on me. I concentrated on looking at the carpet.
“It wasn’t your fault,” I heard him rush in panic. “Violet, look at me! I never said that it was. Look at me, Violet!” And I could hear it in his voice, his worry, his forgiveness, his urgency. I took a peek at him.
His eyes were wide with shock. I returned my gaze to the carpet. I just couldn’t look at his pain.
“It is my fault,” I mumbled to the carpet. “I’m making you feel like this. I’m making you suffer. I’m the one who should be punished. So why aren’t you punishing me?” I asked in anger. “You’re too nice!”
I heard a small but definite snigger rise from his lips. I glared at him.
“Is your pain funny now?”
Damien's face softened, so that, for a second, it looked as if he had never felt pain before in his life, like he thought it was an interesting, strange thing. In the whole time i had been with him, i had never seen Damien look like this. It took me by such suprise that i stood, frozen, unable to move.
Though, as much as i wished it would not, that expression of total peace vanished, and worry and desire took its place. There was a smoldering desire behind Damien's eyes. I swallowed. So suddenly, he drew our faces close with his hands, and i hasd to blink as the intensity in his eyes swallowed everything else in the earth. Damien was so close, i could smell the faint traces of cologne that lingered on his neck and wrists.
“The only pain you’re making me feel right now,” he paused to slyly grin at me, “is the pain of not having my lips on yours.” He bent his head to brush his lips against my cheek. “And that pain can easily disappear,” he purred.
I had to remember to keep breathing.
His lips were warm on my cold skin. I shivered. A light groan escaped from his firm lips, and with his hands he guided my mouth to his. My heart stuttered; my breath caught in the back of my throat. Our lips met.
His kiss was more than sweet; it was excruciating. He melded into me with every soft kiss, teased me with his tongue and teeth, put me on the edge. Unconsciously, my arms wrapped around his neck. I heard another groan. It took me a moment to realize it was from me.
I wanted more of him. More than he was giving me. I didn’t want him to hold back anymore. I wanted him to give me what he wanted to give me all this time. My inexperience in this field didn’t bother me anymore; I went along with instinct. I crushed my lips against his. A rush of heat ran down my body. I grew more eager, quickening the pace of our kisses, twisting in his arms with pleasure.
His response was rapid; I liked that. He tightened his grip on me, breaking free from our kiss to lightly tease my neck. His breath tickled me, and I shivered, biting my lip as to not let out a giggle. Though, somewhere in my mind, through all the confusion and embarrassment and bliss, I knew that we should slow down. I tried to step away from Damien, control what had suddenly been lit.
‘Damien…’ I tried to say, but my voice came out in a hoarse whisper. He understood me, though, coming up and resting his lips against my cheek.
I sighed when Damien’s breath caught and his lips paused. He drew away from me. I didn’t have any power in my arms anymore, so they hung limply at my sides as I stared in agony into his warm, seducing green eyes. He smiled his amazing smile, his breathing still ragged. I felt my heart racing inside my chest before it gave an uncomfortable jolt.
“If only I could know what you were thinking …” Damien whispered, wrapping his arms around my waist and drawing me close so that he could whisper in my ear.
“I thought you didn’t want this. Not yet.”
I tried to find my voice. “I can change my mind if I want to.” I smiled. A sudden thought occurred to me. With it, all my confidence had disappeared, and I felt as if I wasn’t supposed to be here, in his arms, because I didn’t deserve it. More than that I felt, for the briefest moment, that he didn’t want this, anyway.
‘I thought … you didn’t want this either,’ I mumbled, looking to the floor.
Damien was the one who, though always letting his guard slip, tried to stay away from me. He would sometimes be so cold; I would have to wonder whether or not he hated me. But those times when he would smile and laugh and hang out with me; when he told me about his passions and goals, when he listened so intently to me, they changed my mind, and I would hold onto them with all my strength, never letting them go away.
Damien closed his eyes. I started to feel the steady rhythm of his hand moving up and down my waist. It felt pleasant. I controlled a sudden urge to jump on him.
“I’d be more controlled, you know,” Damien suddenly chuckled.
“Hmm?” I asked, dazed.
“I mean I wouldn’t be doing this right now,” he sighed. “If you didn’t nearly take yourself away from me today.” There it was; the pain again. I stood still and frowned at myself. Damien straightened himself up too his full height and looked down at me with his oh-so-gorgeous eyes.
“I’m not saying it was a good thing. It was agonizing. But if that hadn’t happened … if you hadn’t drowned at the lake today-“ I heard his voice crack at the word drowned, “I … don’t think I would have been able to … tell you all this.”
I tried to make a joke. “Well, maybe I should drown more often.”
He took the bait and chuckled. I smiled.
“And what about kissing?” He murmured, resting his hand on my neck. It hadn’t cooled down. “Should you do that more often?”
I found his lips with mine. “Yes,” I whispered.
He groaned before smoldering my concentration with his urgent kisses.


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... is it not good or something? I mean, i really did think that i did well, seeing as i've never written something like this before. I mean, no one seems to be bothering to read it ...
Did i really do that bad?
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you need to give other people time, also i think most of the core people of this group are quite busy for the moment. When I have time, maybe i will read it. I not that into romance though.Writing Romance is a challenge I think. XD
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That was really awesome! Although, I think you should've put more descriptions on it than dialogue. You had a wee bit too much dialogue. Other than that, it was great! You are very talented! Keep up the good work and try to put less dialogue in your stories!
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Hello Sakura Senin, Long time no seen!! Miss your story of fanfiction of shugo chara , XD
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ligersay wrote:

Hello Sakura Senin, Long time no seen!! Miss your story of fanfiction of shugo chara , XD


:D I have more on fanfiction.net of Shugo Chara! fanfiction. People enjoy my fanfictions very much. It's also one of many reasons causing my absence from the Blue Rose Story Circle. xD
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ligersay wrote:

you need to give other people time, also i think most of the core people of this group are quite busy for the moment. When I have time, maybe i will read it. I not that into romance though.Writing Romance is a challenge I think. XD


Tell me about it. That's why i waited till now to write something with the slightest inkling in that direction. Thanks, i'm just very impatient XD And where i am now, it's the school holidays, so i have a lot of free time on my hands and with no busyness whatsoever XD I put my hand out to those who are busy and stresses.
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SakuraSenin wrote:

That was really awesome! Although, I think you should've put more descriptions on it than dialogue. You had a wee bit too much dialogue. Other than that, it was great! You are very talented! Keep up the good work and try to put less dialogue in your stories! :D


Well, dialogues never been a problem for me. See what trying to write romance does? *sigh*
Well, practise makes perfect! I'll take your assumption into account and see if i can uncover some more descriptive work. Thanks!
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Kujin-jump wrote:


SakuraSenin wrote:

That was really awesome! Although, I think you should've put more descriptions on it than dialogue. You had a wee bit too much dialogue. Other than that, it was great! You are very talented! Keep up the good work and try to put less dialogue in your stories! :D


Well, dialogues never been a problem for me. See what trying to write romance does? *sigh*
Well, practise makes perfect! I'll take your assumption into account and see if i can uncover some more descriptive work. Thanks!


:D Looking forward to it.
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oh ... god .. wow
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YAYdudette123 wrote:

oh ... god .. wow


>/////////< Ahem, i take that as a compliment, right? I'm glad it was good, caus' i've never actually written romance like that before ..... DX Thanks for reading, dudette XD
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