[Fanfiction] Shugo chara! - Heartful Joy of Charas
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Posted 2/28/09 , edited 8/4/09
Shugo chara! - Heartful Joy of Charas
Summary:
Tsubasa Kairi, a girl whos depressed most of the time, to make it worst she had to move and transfer school in Tokyo, Kairi the next morning after she moved and came home fornt her new oddly school Kairi prays "Help me find my way, my would-be self, not this Mena looking girl poeple think i am" The next Moring Kairi finds 3 eggs in her bed.
The next moring the Cool&Spicy Hinamori Amu came to ask hows she goin but before she asked Amu saw teh eggs as Kairi opened her bag to fine a pencil, When AMu asked May i look in your bag, Kairi freaked and ran to hide behind the Royal Garden, Kairi the Shy girl started to panic when one of eggs cracked open, To her demise Hotori Tadase came up to Kairi and asked her to come to the Royal Garden as Kairi was twitching as she saw a king-like fairy thing floating next to Tadase
As each Egg cracked open Kairi got more adventures but also got a LOver But who?
How will this Turn out?
Kairi however is Kairi really impressed or more bothered then ever?


ME: ITS MY FIRST FANFIC YAY~
Amu: Ikuto in thsi one?
Me; Maybe..
Suu: hanhatnguyen does not own Shugo chara! ~desu


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Chapter1 EGGS?!?! EDITED



Chapter 2, Shugo charas?!?!? WHAT?!



Chapter 3 , Chari-nari? WHos MY LOVER???



Chapter 4, Records, Amzement, chara loving?



Chapter 5, Momoko and Nanako Lost and amu's stuck with Ikuto
NOTE: Ikuto appears but drunk?



Chapter 6, Momoko's Surprise
NOTE: THis si Momoko's Point of View and Nanako's Point of View but is includded as a Chapter
Momoko's P.O.V


Nanako's P.O.V


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Posted 3/3/09
Hmmm...sorry, I'm not really into these kind of storylines (it's not your fault. Please don't be discouraged...) but I can give you some advice ^^

More detail and information. It makes the chapters longer.
Spell check of course is always a handy tool

Are you going to write any more stories? And do you have a FanFic.net account? I'm really sorry, I would read this, but like I've said, I'm just not into the whole new character finding eggs scenario thing

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aimzstar24 wrote:

Hmmm...sorry, I'm not really into these kind of storylines (it's not your fault. Please don't be discouraged...) but I can give you some advice ^^

More detail and information. It makes the chapters longer.
Spell check of course is always a handy tool

Are you going to write any more stories? And do you have a FanFic.net account? I'm really sorry, I would read this, but like I've said, I'm just not into the whole new character finding eggs scenario thing



no i dont have a account on that webbie ill never will lol and thx dont worry i hardly ahve time to write more anyway cuz i have a ssignment Due tomarrow then i ahve to do a presentation then i ahve to do a poster @.@ Sure lol well its not really about finding Eggs its really about finding Love/ Aventures really but i really hate myself right now damn Assignment and i chsoe the worst subject in my whole life to wrote about @.@
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