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FANFIC[MC]~~ Because There Is YOU..,
Posted 3/1/09 , edited 3/1/09
Because There Is You ..,
--__I made this last night..,so please like it..,please give comments..,__--

Because There Is You ..,
Chapter 1: Love Train..,??

current location/time - green
action/s - orange
sounds / sound effects - underlined

Arioka Daiki
Koshiba Kannah

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ARIOKA RESIDENCE
TUESDAY MORNING, 5:57 am

Daiki: *opens windows* Ah..,!!Ohayou, sora..,Ohayou, kinjuu.., *rushes downstairs, into the kitchen* Ohayou, Okaa-san.., *kisses her on her right cheek*
Mrs. A: Ohayou, Dai-chan..,Did you have a nice sleep..,??
Daiki: VERY..,!!

Yo...Arioka Daiki desu...18 sai desu...I'm in high school...I'm very much contented with my life...But sometimes...I feel like something's missing...anyway...I had a very nice sleep...I wonder what will happen today...Better hurry to find out...Wait...Am I supposed to meet JUMP today??...

++..AFTER TAKING A SHOWER..++

Daiki: I have to leave now, Okaa-san..,
Mrs. A: OK, Dai-chan..,You should hurry..,
Daiki: Un..,See you later..,
Mrs. A: Bye..,!!Ki o tsukete..,!!
Daiki: Bye bye..,!!Aishiteru.., *sends a flying kiss*

++..TRAIN STATION..++

((..CELL PHONE RINGS..))
Daiki: *picks up* Moshi moshi..,??
Ryosuke: Yo, Arioka-kun..,??Hurry..,Everyone's waiting..,
Daiki: Hai..,Where are we supposed to meet again..,??
Ryosuke: Star Bucks..,Star Bucks..,!!
Daiki: Ah..,
((..TRAIN HORNS..))
Ryosuke: I'm guessing that you're still in the train station.
Daiki: How did--..,??
Ryosuke: I heard a train horn from there and whenever we call you at times like this you're still there..,
Daiki: Ah..,You memorized..,Gomennasai..,Jya.., *hurries to the train*

++..TRAIN..++

Daiki: Seat # 00349..,00349..,Ah..,!!There it is..,

At that moment, I saw a girl that looked so mean...The girl was looking outside the window...I really got nervous...

Daiki: Ah..,Anou..,Excuse me..,

She blinked twice and didn't really bothered to take a look at me...I got really scared...It was very obvious that I was nervous...My voice was incredibly scared..,But I tried once again..,

Daiki: Anou..,Does somebody occupy this seat..,??

She looked at me...Her eyelashes were very long and very black...casting shadows on her cheeks...Her chocolate-brown eyes were very easy to point out...Her white skin were as white as milk...Her lips were cherry-pink...Her perfume was rose-scented...Obviously, everyone was able to smell the lovely scent...Wearing a black-pink rough-styled gothic lolita furred outfit made her look like a perfect doll...That made me not hear her response...

Daiki: Excuse me..,??
: I said..,No body is occupying the seat..,
Daiki: Ah..,Gomennasai..,
: Iie..,daijoubu.., *turns her head gently to her left*

Her hair swayed along as her head turns away...Her hair was cut like Ai Emma's...Black as midnight sky and sparkles like stars...Then...I suddenly woke up into reality and remembered that she hasn't answered my question yet...

Daiki: Anou..,Miss..,You haven't answered my question yet..,
: Yes, I have..,You asked if somebody occupied the seat..,You never asked me if you can occupy it..,

After she said that...I felt so stupid...And she had a point...So...I asked her...

Daiki: Anou..,Can I occupy this seat..,??
: What seat number is on your ticket..,??
Daiki: 00349..,/i]
: That's the seat..,You have all the liberty in the world to sit on it..,

This girl is really getting on my nerves...But again...She's right...So...I took the seat...

Daiki: Anou..,Arioka Daiki desu.., *offers to shake hands with her*
Kannah: *looks at Daiki's hand* Koshiba..,Koshiba Kannah.., *shakes Daiki's hand*

She softly raised her hand to ear-level and pulled her hair back...Her nails were polished black and had pink spirals and designs that really amazed me...She was also wearing fishnet gloves that didn't reach her fingers only her palm...It ended 2 inches away from her elbows with pink fur again...

((..CELL PHONE RINGS..))
Kannah: Yo~..,Koshiba Kannah on the line..,Ah..,Kumiko Nee-chan..,
Kumiko: Where are you..,??
Kannah: On the train..,
Kumiko: Hurry..,We're waiting..,Everybody's becoming impatient...
Kumiko: Where are you..,??
Kannah: Well tell them to wait..,Jya.., *looks at Daiki*
Daiki: *turns red*

She looked at me with those chocolate brown eyes...Her mouth was covered by her furred hood...

Kannah: Nani..,??
Daiki: Betsuni..,

She reached out for her black pink-skulled bag and got 3 sheets pf papers...She looked at her watch and looked at papers...Then she started to sing softly...

Kannah: ♫♪♫ I thought I had the whole thing figured out 'til I found you ♫♪♫

The lyrics were English..So...I wasn't able to understand...Demo...Her voice was very angelic...It echoed inside my head...I couldn't control myself...With the help of her sweet scent, I unexpectedly fell asleep...

++..After 1 1/2 hours..++

Kannah: Daiki-kun..,?? *shaking Daiki* Daiki-kun..,!!
Daiki: Huh..,??Nani..,?? *falls back asleep*

He has such a lovely sleeping face...He also has cute bangs...I like the way he dresses..,

Daiki: *leans onto Kannah*
Kannah: Daiki-kun..,
♦♦..LOVEY DOVEY FEEL IN THE ATMOSPHERE..♦♦
Daiki: Hai..,??
Kannah: Please don't sleep on me..,
Daiki: Ah.., *moves away, panicking* Gomennasai..,
Kannah: Daijoubu.., *opens a bag of chips* Do you want some..,??
Daiki: Ah..,Sure.., *gets some chips* Arigatou..,
Kannah: Dou itashi mashite..,

When she offered me some chips...I felt very happy...In a weird kind of way...

Kannah: Would you like some more..,??
Daiki: Hai..,But I think I can manage..,
Kannah: That's good..,

She smiled gently but immediately looked nervous...

Daiki: What's wrong..,?? Kannah-san..,??
Kannah: Betsuni..,

Upon hearing her say it...It was easy to observe that she was denying...Obviously...She doesn't know how to lie...

Daiki: Tell me..,
Kannah: ...

She didn't say a word...She hesitated to tell...So I touched her right hand...But then...She slipped her hands away after looking at me with her sad chocolate-brown eyes...

Kannah: It's not something you can help me with..,Gomennasai..,

Her hands were as cold as ice...I wonder if that was natural...

Daiki: Oh..,Maa..,Ganbatte..,!!
Kannah: Arigatou..,I have to go now..,This is my stop..,
Daiki: This is my stop too..,Tokyo..,Let's go..,
Kannah: *smiles* Doumo arigatou gozaimashita..,

++..OUTSIDE THE TRAINSTATION..++

Daiki: I'm going to Star Bucks..,
Kannah: I'll be going this way..,
Daiki: We're friends right..,??
Kannah: Hai.., *knods*
Daiki: Can I have your number..,??
Kannah: Here.., *offers a bussiness card*
Daiki: That was fast..,
Kannah: I have so many made by my manager..,So don't worry..,Jya ne..,
Daiki: Hai..,Jya..,
Kannah: *takes a last look at Daiki, waves goodbye*
Daiki: *blushes, smiles, waves goodbye*
Kannah: *leaves*
Ryosuke: Yo, Dai-chan..,!!
Daiki: Ryo-kun..,Konnichiwa..,
Ryosuke: Who was that..,??
Daiki: Koshiba Kannah-san..,My new friend
Ryosuke: You mean girlfriend..,!!Let's go..,/i]

That new friend of mine...She doesn't have respect for me...Her eyes...At her last glance at me were really sad...I wonder why...I wonder...Of all the places...Why in the train??...Of all the time and day...Why today...??Of all the people to meet...Why her??...Her sad voice still echoes in my head...When she put on that checkered black & pink puffy hat and walked away in the sea of people...I wondered...Will I be able to see her again??...

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kyagghhh.... love it ^_^

love the story you made....

go daiki....

poor kannah......

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whoa...

nice intro you got here~
*hehe*

I'll look forward to the next chapter onegaishimasu~!
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DAIKI-KUNNNNN~
Aww, they like eachother!!
I like this story! Good job!
I can't wait for more~
Posted 3/2/09
ah..,

doumo arigatou gozaimashita , Minna-san ..,!!

arigatou for liking my 1st fanfict..,

Posted 5/17/09


!!!ANNOUNCEMENT!!!


,..I WON'T BE CONTINUING THIS STORY..,


,..GOMENNASAI..,


,..m(_ _)m..,
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What a nice story!
I somehow imagined Kannah's fashion and it looks
kakkoi..although she was wearing something pink..
RN[Reader's note: Pink is my disliked color LOL]

I would so be looking forward on the next part.
Kyaa~ yamachan is addicted in going to starbucks here!
and I hope Daiki would see her again


eeeeeeeh>???????????!!!!! why won't you continue this?!!!*sobs*
Posted 5/18/09

Geh-san wrote:

What a nice story!
I somehow imagined Kannah's fashion and it looks
kakkoi..although she was wearing something pink..
RN[Reader's note: Pink is my disliked color LOL]

I would so be looking forward on the next part.
Kyaa~ yamachan is addicted in going to starbucks here!
and I hope Daiki would see her again


eeeeeeeh>???????????!!!!! why won't you continue this?!!!*sobs*


**tilts head**
do you want me to continue this story, Geh-chan??
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Posted 5/18/09

zashnie wrote:


Geh-san wrote:

What a nice story!
I somehow imagined Kannah's fashion and it looks
kakkoi..although she was wearing something pink..
RN[Reader's note: Pink is my disliked color LOL]

I would so be looking forward on the next part.
Kyaa~ yamachan is addicted in going to starbucks here!
and I hope Daiki would see her again


eeeeeeeh>???????????!!!!! why won't you continue this?!!!*sobs*


**tilts head**
do you want me to continue this story, Geh-chan??


well, I do want you to continue it.. for everyone of course^^~
Onegai!!~
Posted 5/18/09

DanceMistress wrote:


zashnie wrote:


Geh-san wrote:

What a nice story!
I somehow imagined Kannah's fashion and it looks
kakkoi..although she was wearing something pink..
RN[Reader's note: Pink is my disliked color LOL]

I would so be looking forward on the next part.
Kyaa~ yamachan is addicted in going to starbucks here!
and I hope Daiki would see her again


eeeeeeeh>???????????!!!!! why won't you continue this?!!!*sobs*


**tilts head**
do you want me to continue this story, Geh-chan??


well, I do want you to continue it.. for everyone of course^^~
Onegai!!~


ok then..,
I'll try to continue..,
^__^..,
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Arigatou Gozaimasu!!!~

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Arigatou Gozaimasu!!!~



no problem..,
^__^..,
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zashnie wrote:


DanceMistress wrote:



Arigatou Gozaimasu!!!~



no problem..,
^__^..,


tnx alot... i'll look forward to it^^~
by the way.. have you read my fic?? its LOVE ro Revenge...
hope you'll like it^^~
Posted 5/18/09

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zashnie wrote:


DanceMistress wrote:



Arigatou Gozaimasu!!!~



no problem..,
^__^..,


tnx alot... i'll look forward to it^^~



please do wait for it..,
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anou, will you still continue this? if not, i have to lock this
dahil madaming maxadong fanfic na na iistock lang d2 sa pages eh~
kea i nid confirmation kng 22loy mo 2 or hindi ^^
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