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I walk upon the shores of the great lake of knowledge just out of the waters reach. Aside to my left I am accompanied by a great many beasts and horrors. I step over the bones of those beasts and denizens that have past by this way before me.
Then by chance, in my absence of mind looked right, and for the first time I see the endless lake. I see my potential with just this tiny turn of the head and step just close enough for the water to touch my feet for the first time. I can see now the difference in the beasts and begin to name the beasts.
I turn back to the lake and begin to walk. The water rises and rises and the water strives to push me back beyond its briny depths. I can no longer touch the bottom and begin to try and swim. I now can feel the pressure crashing against my body as i swim away further from shore. With every stroke of my arm I learn more than I ever thought I could but with each stroke, my strength, is drained. I strive with all my might to reach the center of the endless lake of knowledge but fail to see the fathoms below.
Then as I raise my head to take a breath, I see I am no closer then when I started from the shore, only the endless expance greets my weary eyes. I lower my head to carry on and then by chance, I see my own futality for now the first time I look down and see the fathoms below me and a torrent of despair engulfs me.
The briny current then changes and gently begins to take me back to the gentle sands beyond the waters reach. I turn then to the shore and see it, but feet away and I then know the last lesson the lake teaches its trespassers. The last act I do before I rejoin the now nameless beasts as they tread allong the shore is name myself, humanity...
Poem Humanity by Revrebrent
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hehe it's pretty good!! do you love writing? =P... to be honest, i'm really sure i can't write as good as you =o
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I love writing. I have a book I wrote and several hundred poems, and a few songs
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Auro wrote:

Girls go to College to get more knowledge.

Boys go to Jupiter to get more stupider!!

Joke!! Just kidding


i was offended by that
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I realy hope someone can come up with something inteligent or I may loose faith i the inteligence of the anime camunity. T-T
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I look into your eyes
You just see a face
A face with billions of missunderstandings
You try to help out
But i push you away with millions of regrets as I am here standing
I hold on to the moment you have with
And I understand why you left me
We drift part for the first time
As I awaken alone in the new beggining and a new light
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this is a peom i wrote about Twilight by Stephnie Mayer the POV of Edward.


My Memories, My Love, My Mistake, My Sins...

My world was originally a realm of eternal darkness...


My family and I have been to too many places.

Meet many people.

But none of them gave me the impression

Like what you gave me on your first day of school

The thoughts I couldn’t block out from my head

Were all thoughts people thought of you?

I had the urge to snap their head the second they finish their ‘thoughts’

If you were here right now you would defiantly blush the

Beautiful scarlet red I love so much.


People thought my family was perfect

But they don’t even understand even a little thing about us.

Living in the dark.

Hiding in the dark.

Existing because of the dark.

Our life was a living hell...


Once I became the creature of the dark

My life was frozen hell

But I meet you and for that slight moment

When you were in my arms

Me humming that lullaby you love so much

I felt that you were my heaven

As long as you are by my side nothing matters


I know that is selfish of me to think that way

Because we creatures that only lives in the dark

Can never be in heaven

Live a happy life

Be happy


We creatures of the dark

Drink blood

To live

Kill

And become murders


I knew that if you stay with me any longer

You would be in grave danger

So the only thing I can do

Is to let you go...

It breaks my heart to see your tears flow down

As I said Goodbye...


I thought your life would be much better

Much happier

If I never exist...


Alice was worried and was using her ‘ability’ to check on you...

I knew you were strong

And you would forget me eventually

Because you are human...

But I was wrong

Dead wrong


I am now at a place I knew could

Grant me death...

I was here the minute

I heard from Rose that...that

You have jumped off a cliff

That was it...


God please punish me for my sins

Don’t have Bella suffer anymore

I know I may not have the right to ask for favors

But if you can...

Please take me and heal her broken heart...

-Edward C.

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xXyuki202Xx wrote:

this is a peom i wrote about Twilight by Stephnie Mayer the POV of Edward.


My Memories, My Love, My Mistake, My Sins...

My world was originally a realm of eternal darkness...


My family and I have been to too many places.

Meet many people.

But none of them gave me the impression

Like what you gave me on your first day of school

The thoughts I couldn’t block out from my head

Were all thoughts people thought of you?

I had the urge to snap their head the second they finish their ‘thoughts’

If you were here right now you would defiantly blush the

Beautiful scarlet red I love so much.


People thought my family was perfect

But they don’t even understand even a little thing about us.

Living in the dark.

Hiding in the dark.

Existing because of the dark.

Our life was a living hell...


Once I became the creature of the dark

My life was frozen hell

But I meet you and for that slight moment

When you were in my arms

Me humming that lullaby you love so much

I felt that you were my heaven

As long as you are by my side nothing matters


I know that is selfish of me to think that way

Because we creatures that only lives in the dark

Can never be in heaven

Live a happy life

Be happy


We creatures of the dark

Drink blood

To live

Kill

And become murders


I knew that if you stay with me any longer

You would be in grave danger

So the only thing I can do

Is to let you go...

It breaks my heart to see your tears flow down

As I said Goodbye...


I thought your life would be much better

Much happier

If I never exist...


Alice was worried and was using her ‘ability’ to check on you...

I knew you were strong

And you would forget me eventually

Because you are human...

But I was wrong

Dead wrong


I am now at a place I knew could

Grant me death...

I was here the minute

I heard from Rose that...that

You have jumped off a cliff

That was it...


God please punish me for my sins

Don’t have Bella suffer anymore

I know I may not have the right to ask for favors

But if you can...

Please take me and heal her broken heart...

-Edward C.



a lovers tragity
that was no doubt
of light and dark
oh lost love lost serenity
my mind crys and calls out
hark, hark I now bourd the ark
to take me down back from the light to my place in the dark
so the dark may sarender her back to the light
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Posted 12/23/07
nice...
Otaku
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Posted 12/23/07
he he I know
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My Memories, My Love, My Mistake, My Sins...

My world was originally a realm of eternal darkness...
My family and I have been to too many places.
Meet many people.
But none of them gave me the impression
Like what you gave me on your first day of school
The thoughts I couldn’t block out from my head
Were all thoughts people thought of you?
I had the urge to snap their head the second they finish their ‘thoughts’
If you were here right now you would definatly blush the
Beautiful scarlet red I love so much.
People thought my family was perfect
But they don’t even understand even the tiniest thing about our life.
Living in the dark.
Hiding in the dark.
Existing because of the dark.
Our life was a sentient hell...
Once I became a creature of the dark
My life was stagnant torture
But I meet you and for that slight moment
When you were in my arms
Me humming that lullaby you love so much
I felt that you were my heaven
As long as you were by my side nothing mattered
I know that was selfish of me to think that way
Because we creatures that only live in the dark
Are forever bound to hell
Covet the happy lives of others
And morn for they are beyond our reach
We creatures of the dark
Drink blood
To live
To exist
We Kill
I knew that if you stay with me any longer
The Heaven I loved would become another hell
So the only thing I can do
Is to let you go...
It breaks my heart to see your tears flow down
As I said Goodbye...
I thought your life would be much better
Much happier
Much longer
If I never exist...
Alice was worried and watched silently from afar...
I knew you were strong
And you would forget me eventually
Because you are human...
But I was wrong
Dead wrong
For the talon of darkness had already struck
I am now at a place I know can
Grant me death...
I was here the minute
I heard from teary Rose that life's pulse had faded
For you have jumped off a cliff
For I was a creature of the dark so to the darkness she plunged
With arms outstrached and heart that cried
Into the rocky serf where she died
That was it...
God please punish me for my sins
Don’t have her suffer anymore
I know I not have the grace to ask for favors
From light most pure
But if you can...
Please take me and heal her broken heart...
Hark Hark I now bourd the ark
To take me down back from the light where she took me
Back to my place in the dark
So the dark may surrender her back to the light

-Edward C.


by xXyuki202Xx and Revrebrent
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Revrebrent wrote:

My Memories, My Love, My Mistake, My Sins...

My world was originally a realm of eternal darkness...
My family and I have been to too many places.
Meet many people.
But none of them gave me the impression
Like what you gave me on your first day of school
The thoughts I couldn’t block out from my head
Were all thoughts people thought of you?
I had the urge to snap their head the second they finish their ‘thoughts’
If you were here right now you would defiantly blush the
Beautiful scarlet red I love so much.
People thought my family was perfect
But they don’t even understand even a tiniest thing about our life.
Living in the dark.
Hiding in the dark.
Existing because of the dark.
Our life was a sentient hell...
Once I became the creature of the dark
My life was stagnent torture
But I meet you and for that slight moment
When you were in my arms
Me humming that lullaby you love so much
I felt that you were my heaven
As long as you where by my side nothing mattered
I know that was selfish of me to think that way
Because we creatures that only lives in the dark
Are forever bound to hell
Covet the happy lives of others
And morn for they are beyond our reach
We creatures of the dark
Drink blood
To live
To exsist
We Kill
I knew that if you stay with me any longer
The Heaven I loved would becme another hell
So the only thing I can do
Is to let you go...
It breaks my heart to see your tears flow down
As I said Goodbye...
I thought your life would be much better
Much happier
Much longer
If I never exist...
Alice was worried and watched silently from afar...
I knew you were strong
And you would forget me eventually
Because you are human...
But I was wrong
Dead wrong
For the talen of darkness had already struck
I am now at a place I know can
Grant me death...
I was here the minute
I heard from teary Rose that life's pulse had faded
For you have jumped off a cliff
For I was a creature of the dark so to the darkness she plunged
With arms outstrached and heart that cried
Into the rocky serf where she died
That was it...
God please punish me for my sins
Don’t have her suffer anymore
I know I not have the grace to ask for favors
From light most pure
But if you can...
Please take me and heal her broken heart...
Hark Hark I now bourd the ark
To take me down back from the light where she took me
Back to my place in the dark
So the dark may sarender her back to the light

-Edward C.


by xXyuki202Xx and Revrebrent


this is GREAT!!!!!!!!!
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^-^ thought ya would like it.
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Posted 12/23/07
woah i cant even write a poem hehe
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lol I'm sure you could if you realy tried
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