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Revrebrent, You're really expressing
so much through those poems of yours...


I do write best when I'm extreamly happy or depresed. My poem reflects my mood the darker it is the more depresed I am. Out of the 2000 some poems I have writen less than 20 are happy ones. The only times I'm realy happy are when I'm not alone (aka. girlfriend) only having had a few (most of witch were using me to make there boyfriends jeliose or so that I buy the prom ticket then ditch me there) causing the vast majority of my time to be near or even falling into depresion. The first song I wrote "hearts of love" when i was in gradeschool was when I wandered the playground because noone wanted to play with me or want me around. It was one of my few happy poems/songs I realy didn't understand my own emotions enough at that time to reolize I was depressed. God thing though. I was still catholic and believing I would go to god after I die I probly woulda comited scuicide. ><
well still here so ya the more depresed I am or the happier I am I write better. I do hope I get a girlfriend though I miss writing happy poems and songs.
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i love writing i write poems all the time^^ i also do longer stuff though.

Sorrows in the sky

My black balloon
wants to fly,
and I grip it tight,
fearing the touch
of the cold ground
below

My balloon makes me soar
so why are my feet always sore?


Colourful, like the sky

I feel blue when the rain is pouring
I feel yellow when the sun is out
I feel turquoise when over the clouds I'm soaring
I feel black when the fire in my heart is out

Feel the colours within you, and let them shine...

I feel green when on the grass I'm tumbling
I feel grey when the night has passed
I feel red when my fingers are fumbling
I feel purple when the light has cast

Feel your heart within your soul, and let it fly...

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Posted 12/28/07
nice poems
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Posted 12/29/07
thx ^^
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the funny poems XD i wrote some 9, some is someone else wrote~it is meant to be a contiuation~coz i had a 'poem war with someone'~XD

my dear mera sis,
this is saddening indeed
something meant as a little playful banter,
was crumpled, and chucked into the waste paper bin.
the poor poem is lamenting very sadly,
and would have committed suicide gladly
for being rejected
and unfortunately deleted
so cries the depressed poem now lying in the bin,
o mighty monarch kindly forgive me please<---mi friend

My dear Xchaos sis
dealt the death penalty to the poem it might be
You forgot something so important
i guess you must have poor memory
You forgot that poems are a non-living things
Thus poems do not have any emotions
Or become someone as emo as you
I guess that if you can stop calling moi monarch
Would be a very helpful thing indeed<-- mi~

dear mera sis
i must disagree
when you tear a paper
didnt you hear it go "EEE"
this be the cry of the poor paper
being torn up and soon chucked into the corner
my dear sires, madams and aliens,
please everyone must agree with me,
that tearing paper is a sin
whoever does so SHOULD instead be chucked into the bin
but mera sis, im sorry i digressed,
and now you shall clearly see
that even papers have feelings too,
as true as you and i must poo?
that also means that poems cry,
and of course it can also die.
sadly it now lays in the crunchy bin,
waiting for the shredding to begin.
o mighty crunchybin, have mercy on him,
insulting and naughty it may seem.
"have no fear
randombug is here"
the other mascot of crunchyroll appears
they fight and punch and kick and yell
and finally crunchybin was thrown to hell
and so saves the day, our random hero
lets all welcome the new mascot of crunchyroll!!!<-- mi friend~

My dear xchaos sis
Still the laws of science
Must agree that poems and paper and non-living things
poems might convey emotions that the heart cannot ignore
but to the end they are still not alive
sadly that goes with paper too
It use to be alive a.k.a tree but still to the very end
Only magic may make it into a pet
too bad this magic dosen't exist
so scientists are glady supporting moi<--- mi

XD i think that's spamm tell mi if ya wanna knoe more~


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mera_flame wrote:

the funny poems XD i wrote some 9, some is someone else wrote~it is meant to be a contiuation~coz i had a 'poem war with someone'~XD

my dear mera sis,
this is saddening indeed
something meant as a little playful banter,
was crumpled, and chucked into the waste paper bin.
the poor poem is lamenting very sadly,
and would have committed suicide gladly
for being rejected
and unfortunately deleted
so cries the depressed poem now lying in the bin,
o mighty monarch kindly forgive me please<---mi friend

My dear Xchaos sis
dealt the death penalty to the poem it might be
You forgot something so important
i guess you must have poor memory
You forgot that poems are a non-living things
Thus poems do not have any emotions
Or become someone as emo as you
I guess that if you can stop calling moi monarch
Would be a very helpful thing indeed<-- mi~

dear mera sis
i must disagree
when you tear a paper
didnt you hear it go "EEE"
this be the cry of the poor paper
being torn up and soon chucked into the corner
my dear sires, madams and aliens,
please everyone must agree with me,
that tearing paper is a sin
whoever does so SHOULD instead be chucked into the bin
but mera sis, im sorry i digressed,
and now you shall clearly see
that even papers have feelings too,
as true as you and i must poo?
that also means that poems cry,
and of course it can also die.
sadly it now lays in the crunchy bin,
waiting for the shredding to begin.
o mighty crunchybin, have mercy on him,
insulting and naughty it may seem.
"have no fear
randombug is here"
the other mascot of crunchyroll appears
they fight and punch and kick and yell
and finally crunchybin was thrown to hell
and so saves the day, our random hero
lets all welcome the new mascot of crunchyroll!!!<-- mi friend~

My dear xchaos sis
Still the laws of science
Must agree that poems and paper and non-living things
poems might convey emotions that the heart cannot ignore
but to the end they are still not alive
sadly that goes with paper too
It use to be alive a.k.a tree but still to the very end
Only magic may make it into a pet
too bad this magic dosen't exist
so scientists are glady supporting moi<--- mi

XD i think that's spamm tell mi if ya wanna knoe more~




one was cute
two of em were funny
but there is a dispute
one was left out
oh it now may pout
for it was thrown out
which was cute
which were funny
that there is the dispute
witch one should have stayed mute
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hahas~~
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i tot poems r lines tat rhyme?(some of them do some dun..)
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i tot poems r lines tat rhyme?(some of them do some dun..)
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i keep double postin..GOMENASAI
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Why I ask

When I hurt I cry
When stabed I die
Why I ask
Are we mortal
Is it the sins of the past
Or the vanity of a God
For now we are mortal
For now we are flawed
Many seek a portal
To take them to the after life
And to bring them back
Oh vanity of man
Oh fear of death
They say if man can think
Man can do
So then why I ask
Nomater how it is I try
I cannot shed this mortality
So I will never die

by Revrebrent

As the crow travels

I travel far
I travel fast
I never sleep
I never Stop
I just keep flying
I just keep seeing
I just want it all
I just want it bad
I shall never possess
I shall never own
That which I seek
That which I sought
For now I stopped
For now I sleep

by Revrebrent

The Argument of the Sad and Happy

I can Live
I can die
I can Sing
I can cry
I can Dance
I can watch
I can Fly
I can crash
I can Run
I can fall
I can Protect
I can kill
I will Live
For I have died

by Revrebrent

Lol I just came up with all of those
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i cherish my memories
because i can not forget
i cry because of those memories
losing people...seeing them leave my side

Others memories will fade away
as time pass by
i will soon dissapear from their hearts
and memories

i will cry when that time comes
but soon i will stand up again
and the cycle repeats again...

by xXyuki202Xx
i just wrote this now...o i am not sure what the title is for this um poem...and i am not sure if it is good or not.....
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he he nice. was fun poems. ^^
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I dunno why but i'm better at insulting poems then expressive poems XD
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-_- the destruction of others work can be a form of "art" guess. those who cannot do something tend to destroy it. I'm phisicly incapable of wisling so when someone wisles it hurts my head. "sist in my jaw ate allot of the bone creating a cavity. jaw comes outa pace so i cant wisle and high pitch noises resonate n the cavity and hurt. ><"so i ask them to stop
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