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I was the king of all
and all was mine
I claimed all
from Asia
to Europe
to the tip of Africa.
Then word came of a new land
a land more vast then all I held
I must have this I thought
I gatherd my army vast and proud
two million strong upon the ground
a hunded thousand by see
I took this world and all it held
I now held it all and all was mine
I grew old and then declined
for I learned all was mine
save the one thing I needed most
Lost was my time...
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Sigh I write best when depressed but right now I'm to depressed to write.
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Yunneko wrote:

Revrebrent u r awesome!!! Sugoii, ne?? I wish I could write poems like you.. well here is one I made up. Enjoy!!

*Underneath the moon

__my sorrow and cries come out
__and as much as I try
__I just can get out
__from this doubt
__from this drought
__of tears.
__I try to run and get rid of this feeling
__but my mind doesn't sense any healing.
__ As I fall to the ground, I start to hear a sound
__ Will someone come save me?
__ Will someone cure this wound?
__ Left without consciousness, there I lie
__Wondering if someone will hear my cry*


I glide allong the forest floor
Like a wraith bairly disturbing the fallen leaves
Like a gental breaze I approch the somber tears of the sleeping maden
I pick her head up into my arms
whipe away her tears, and carress her hair
I carry her to the place she belongs
I kiss her sweat lips as she stirs from trubled sleep to tender day
I depart then taking with me her sarrow and pain
To seek the next who has fallen and to bear thier burden
As I walk the lone road of the loveing wind
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nice.
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Posted 1/5/08
nice poems^^ too bad i cant write like that since i am bad at literary arts...
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i remember it like it was yesterday
when 3 little ninja's went astray,

into the forrest of death theyve gone
so i have to find them one by one,

in the middle of nowhere, thers one i see
what luck its one of the 3,

and with no lie or alibi
i told him"if you want power come to my side"

he said "no" then boy swung his dagger
he aimed for my head
i assumed that he wants me dead...

..so i hastefuly bit him in neck
then poor boy crashed down into a wreck,

when his friends found him, he was turning blue
but they dont know what to do,

and so the poor boy whom was bitten
though he
survived the tragedy
but found a new discovery...

he wanted power more power
to kill his older brother..

...and so his thirts for power had set his mind away
and there no reason for him to stay,

his mind is in a dark never ending trance
power
secrets and most of all
VENGEANCE!!!!

by: orochimaru




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I cannot see for my eyes are closed
I cannot hear for my ears are coverd
I cannot speak for my mouth is closed
I cannot be heard for I refuse to speak
I cannot understand for I refue to think
I cannot write for I will not pick up the pen
Otaku
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thats my answer for those who can't write
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Posted 1/5/08

Yunneko wrote:


Revrebrent wrote:


Yunneko wrote:


*Underneath the moon

__my sorrow and cries come out
__and as much as I try
__I just can get out
__from this doubt
__from this drought
__of tears.
__I try to run and get rid of this feeling
__but my mind doesn't sense any healing.
__ As I fall to the ground, I start to hear a sound
__ Will someone come save me?
__ Will someone cure this wound?
__ Left without consciousness, there I lie
__Wondering if someone will hear my cry*


I glide allong the forest floor
Like a wraith bairly disturbing the fallen leaves
Like a gental breaze I approch the somber tears of the sleeping maden
I pick her head up into my arms
whipe away her tears, and carress her hair
I carry her to the place she belongs
I kiss her sweat lips as she stirs from trubled sleep to tender day
I depart then taking with me her sarrow and pain
To seek the next who has fallen and to bear thier burden
As I walk the lone road of the loveing wind


I open my eyes to notice I'm home
how did I get here on my own??
Somehow, I can feel the taste of some sweet lips
but I don't know to who they belong
Realizing I was calm ever since,
I wondered who was my sweet prince..




~A Haiku for the Passing Year!~

Snow onto my heart
Leaves falling by my two eyes
A year has gone by


~A New Year Haiku By: Chee7Nou~
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Heres another one I found while i was cleaning up my room:

~A Questionaire Poem~"The Thing I Wonder"

Why do Time never stop and rest but keeps going and going?
Why is someone born when that person will inevitably die?
Why is it so hard to for people to stop hiding secrets and don't want it to be showing?
Why is it that you can't erase this world of lies?

I bet there is many form of answer to these
but I sure you none of them is the perfect answer at least
thats why I'll never be at ease
Until I find the Answer that will set my heart of wonder free

~Written by: Chee7nou~
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nice poems, both of you. ^_^
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Yunneko wrote:

Cool poem Chee7nou..
Here's one I wrote long ago, when I saw my nee-chan crying:

...........Sad Smile.............


__Please, my girl, don't be sad
__If you look at the world, it's not that bad

__Eventhoug there are hard days,
__there are fun days too
__But I'm always looking forward
__if I can play with you

__Look at that ribbon that you are picking with your hand
__I'ts bright pink color continues to the end
__As bright as the ribbon I want you to be
__Spread your wings and let yourself be free


Your poem touched me deep...
Otaku
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Revrebrent wrote:

nice poems, both of you. ^_^


Thanx
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Truth of Why

If to live is to cry
And die is to make others cry
What is the point of being born
Your family dies you begin to cry
Others leave one by one as new ones come
Each one crying while they carry thier burden
Then one gives up and dies
Thier burden dosn't dissapear
Its mearly carred on by someone else
This cycle goes on for as long as life
Each new member shall cry
Take on the burden of those past
And give thiers to the next
I can see why we always cry
Why the pain builds
And understand why we die
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;DD i will try to make one , but dont laugh at me if i did badly ... since my English is kinda bad ;PP

people call me optimistic
people call me cheerful
so do i really am

i thought he would know
but he choose to ignore
he decide to believe the fake me
yet he wanted to know the real me

i get depressed
i get sad
and that's the real me

to be hurt
is what i am afraid
and now i am really hurt

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