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(LoL xD sorry, i couldn't think of a good title)

Warning!: there's gonna be a lot of OOC-ness of the DBSK members. And a lot of horrible English. Read at your own risk.

PS leave a note if you want character introductions.

Short prologue-summary:
Sayu and Naomi are best friends, like sisters. They both went with their families to Japan for a vacation. Sayu bought 2 tickets for a Tohoshinki concert and convinced Naomi to come with her.

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Disclaimer: I DO own DBSK!
LSM: No you dont!
Me: Okay i dont.......but i'd probably take care of them better than you!
LSM: HEY!
Me: What? Everyone know how "well" you treat your artists!
DBSK: Don't talk to our dad that way!
Me: *sigh*

These are my characters:

But if you want them to look different, then thats fine~ Picture them however you want.

Chapter 1

Crap.. I muttered to myself. I’m gonna be late… I jump out of bed and rush to get myself ready. I stumbled on the way to my closet and fell, hurting my right leg in the progress. Aishh…you’ve got to be kidding me.. Rubbing the new bruise I grabbed the pile of clothes that I chose yesterday. Hurriedly I pull my shirt over my head and just as I got stuck, my phone rang. “Damnit!”after struggling for a while, I successfully put the shirt on and picked up the phone. “Naomi here..” “NAOMI YOU BRATT!!! WHERE THE HELL ARE YOU!! WE’RE GONNA BE LATE!!!”
“Geez. I know, that’s why I’m-”
“GET YOUR ASS DOWN HERE!”
“OK, OK. Just let me put on my-”
“HURRY!!!”
“Stop being such a spastic fan girl, I-”
*BEEP BEEP BEEP*
Blankly I stared at the phone. “Oh no she did NOT hang up on me!”.

I went to the rooms next to mine and said my goodbyes to my parents, my brother Yuuto and the annoying pest Megumi AKA my older sister.
“Make a LOT of photos ok??” “yeah, yeah..” “KYA~ I can’t believe you’re gonna meet Tohoshinki!!!” *sigh* You ran to your friends house. Well not her house but her aunt’s house. She was lucky enough to be able to spend her vacation with family. Whereas I had to stay in a hotel, and share a room with my sister. Did you know? Megumi means blessing……what a horrible name to describe my sis….’blessing’….pffff….she’s more like a ‘pain in the ass’

When I got there, exhausted like hell, Sayu glared at me and pushed me in the car. “Calm down Sayu! We’re right on time! Actually we are early, VERY early.” She turned so that I was facing the back of her head. “ God. Why am I going anyway, I’m clearly not wanted …” Her brother laughed: “That’s what you get when your best friend is in love with some pretty-faced-idols.” Sayu snapped and screamed at him. I was just staring out of the window, already used to the crazy fan girl VS jealous dude – fight. “YOU are just JEALOUS that you can never have as many girls adoring you as they have!” “Why the HELL would I be jealous of a bunch of GIRLY men who only have 13 year old crazy fan girls!”

Yep, those two lines sums up everything said in the argument. “Guys…I think we were not the only ones who had the idea of coming here early..” I said staring at the huuuuuuge line in front of the stadium.
The siblings finally shut up and stared at the line as well.
“Dude…. I told you only crazy fangirls would do that.”
“But this means we won’t be the first ones to talk with them, right!!”
“Nobody is able to talk with them.” I said. “Just look at the line! We probably can only see a glimpse of them at the fan meeting.” I looked at Sayu. “Aww crap, don’t CRY!” “I’M NOT CRYING!” she yelled back.

Sayu’s brother, Hikaru, went out in the city. Whereas Sayu and me waited in the long line, underneath the burning sun. “Sayu, I’m gonna go buy something to drink, okay?” She nodded, obviously too excited to care… She kept on staring at the entrance hall. “*sigh* be right back..”

I walked to the building, looking around for some water. The only place where I could buy it was inside. Unfortunately I wasn’t allowed to enter the stadium yet.. So I walked to the back entrance, hoping that it was open. “Found it!” Very slowly I opened the door and peeked to see if anyone was there. Quickly I went inside and ran to a hallway. I kept on walking fast, searching for a vending machine, but alas…. I didn’t really have a great sense of direction… So I managed to get lost…. in a friggen building!!

* note to self* Never go in new big places alone again… NEVER…

I heard people talk and coming my way. Fortunately there was a room right next to me, so I got in and locked the door. Unfortunately, I wasn’t the only one in the room.



A/N: okay! In the next chapter 'DBSK will make an appearance! *fangirls squeal* don't get too excited though *fangirls ask why* Why? because my stories aren't that "wow" XD

Please post your comments~
I've already finished chap. 2 btw..
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wah!!! !!!! ^_^ Saphy!!=D this is so nice! !=D ^_^ I love it!!=D ^_^
am i included in the DBSK's crazy fangirls here?^_^ hahahaha JOKE!!
i'm so excited!!..to read the next chapters of your fanfic!!!=D ^_^
AJA! Fighting! Ganbate!!
may i know if the 3 girls from the characters belong to a group of girls?
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rizza15mae wrote:

wah!!! !!!! ^_^ Saphy!!=D this is so nice! !=D ^_^ I love it!!=D ^_^
am i included in the DBSK's crazy fangirls here?^_^ hahahaha JOKE!!
i'm so excited!!..to read the next chapters of your fanfic!!!=D ^_^
AJA! Fighting! Ganbate!!
may i know if the 3 girls from the characters belong to a group of girls?


lol maybe =P no no xD it's just that an anti fan said that dbsk is only popular because of girls crushing on their good looks =]
(we all know that that's not true. They are mega-talented)

and no the girls are just random celebs XD
the girl i chose for naomi is Aya Kamiki, a J-rock artist (lol not K-pop style at all XD)
"Megumi" is Emi Suzuki, an actress
"Sayuri" is Erika Sawajiri, also an actress ^^

thank you for your comment ^^
i'll post the next chapter now XD
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A/N: okay, i decided to put up chapter 2 since chapter 1 was a bit too short XD i didnt realize it XD and i''d like to know what you think about the story so far. oh and if you have some critisism for me, please don't be harsh >.<

Chapter 2

I heard people talk and coming my way. Fortunately there was a room right next to me, so I got in and locked the door. Unfortunately, I wasn’t the only one in the room.
“Ano….Who are you?” I stiffened and slowly turned around. I gasped when I saw 5 pairs of confused eyes.
*Tohoshinki. Here. In the same room. O god. Why. * I giggled nervously and waved like an idiot “H-hi?”. Yunho groaned “Another fan girl who sneaks in…” They all backed up and held something. You could easily knock someone out with…. My eyes widened. Wait… what?? They’re worried that I will do something to them?! What the hell do they think I am?? A rapist!??!?!

I was about to get out of the room but then I saw “Ah!! A vending machine!!” Happily I skipped towards it and got 2 bottles of water. Still smiling I turned around and glanced up. They were looking at me like I was crazy. I got all awkward again. “uh… I got to go.. bye” I tried to open the door and shook the door handle when it didn’t open. A hand appeared and unlocked the…lock. I looked up, Junsu was smiling at me “Here you go” Aish..why do I have to humiliate myself again.. I briefly checked the reactions of the other members. They were trying to hold their laughter, which clearly failed. “Arigatou..” The moment I was out of the room, I could hear them laughing and talking about me.

*Note to self* Whenever you come in this situation again, go out immediately. No need for more embarrassment.

While I was walking to Sayu I thought I should’ve made photographs. “What took you so long!!” “Eh? Umm, just-” “You got lost again.” She stated matter-of-factly. I blushed slightly and denied.

Finally the line started moving. Sayu got ecstatic. “We are gonna see TOHOSHINKI!!! Kya~!” O shit. I forgot I had to give Jaejoong a present from my sister. I hope they don’t recognize me………………….. Of course they will! How many retarded girls go in their dressing room and forget how to open a door! “What’s wrong Naomi?” “Oh nothing” mumbling I added “it’s just the worst day of my life..Thank you so much for dragging me with you..” I got even more nervous than Sayu was, when they got in sight. She chuckled “I thought you weren’t interested in Tohoshinki at all?” “Urusai!” we walked to the front, apparently we weren’t allowed to choose where we went. Some big buff guy pushed Sayu to Yoochun. “No~! I want to go to sexy leader-sshi!!” She cried dramatically. I laughed at her fangirly-ness. She always makes me laugh when I’m feeling down. Still smiling (whoa déjà vu) I was pushed to one of the members. Surprisingly I got the right person. Jaejoong smiled and as much as I hate to admit, I swooned. *he is absolutely gorgeous* “Hello again” He said. I blushed, “err.. yeah.. this is from my sister…bye” Even before the big buff guy could drag me out of the way, I turned around. Jaejoong shouted “Hey stalker!” *…..what?* “Matte yo!” *he couldn’t possibly mean me! Right?* I felt a hand on my arm and he twirled me around, so I could face him. He grinned and – again – I swooned. *Aish.. why do I act like a fan girl!*

He took my hand and shook it, “thank you” I felt a paper in my hand “for what?” I replied. He winked, “for the present of course!” *swoon~…..damn it! Stop dazzling me, you perfect bastard!* “it’s not mine, I told you it’s my sis’” “Su~re” He rolled his eyes. By now I had every girl in the room glaring at me. I decided it was time to go, ya know, before someone kills me. Sayu squealed. “You are so lucky!!! You TOUCHED him!!” “……you make me sound perverted!” She giggled “So what did he say??” That’s when I realized I still had the paper in my hand, “uh..thanks for the gift”

I told Sayu I needed to use the bathroom. I was too curious about what was on the paper. When I entered the bathroom some girls glared at me again. I didn’t even bother smiling and went straight to the little toilet-cubic. I stared at the paper. *A PHONE number?* Yet again my curiosity got the best of me and I dialed it. “*beep. beep. beep. bee- * call back later please” “Uhh” was all I could say after I heard that voice. It couldn’t have been Jaejoong. Impossible. I was determined to call again. Maybe just before the concert? Yep that will do.

~ Fast Forward ^^ ~

When all we were seated in the big ass stadium, *btw, we got front row seats!!*, I wanted to try calling again. “Me bathroom, right back.” Sayu looked at me suspiciously “Again? Mi, you hate public toilets!” “uh well, its that time, you know?” She giggled “U know, Yunho *giggles some more*” I rolled my eyes.

I pressed the green button. “*Beep. Beep. Be-* Hello?” I gulped “umm may I know who this is?” I heard a chuckle. “Hero Jaejoong~ and I’m guessing you’re the stalker?” “yeah..wait what?! NO!” “Ne, stalker-san,” “Stalker janai!” “ u broke the vending machine~” “I- what?” “Yes, and our manager is really angry now. I hope u carry cash?” “You expect me to pay for…..I didn’t even break the damn vending machine! It worked perfectly fine!” “Ah sou, but I’m afraid we will have to tell manager-hyung that you were the one who broke it.” “I DIDN’T!” “Then why isn’t it working now? Bear with the consequences stalker-san~. Jaa ne! Our assistant will be waiting at the main entrance.” “But I-!” “*BEEP. BEEP. BEEP*”

I stared at my cell phone in awe. I knew something was wrong. There’s no way he would have given ME his number =_= He’s probably gonna change it too. I checked my wallet. Great. 5 bucks (I’m sorry! I don’t how much it is in Korea >.<). When I returned to my seat, Sayu was practically laying on both seats. “……….what are you doing?” She glared at the girls behind us. “Those bitches wanted to take your seat!” “Sou ka.” I sat down quietly. Suddenly there was a deafening sound of squealing. “Konnichiwa! Tohoshinki desu!” “KYAAA!!”. I covered my ears and tried to glare at the people behind me. But I knew it wasn’t going to work… there are too many fan girls!

~Jaejoong’s POV~

“Konnichiwa! Tohoshinki desu!”. I smiled at the amount of fans that came. Looking around, I notice the girl from this morning. I exchanged glances with the other members who were also laughing now. I wish I could make a picture of her face. Priceless. She sat there glaring and pouting with her hands pressed against her ears. What an interesting fan girl.

We started with some old songs like ‘rising sun’, ‘O jung.ban.hap.’ and ‘purple line’. Every time my eyes met hers, she just stared back. Not blushing, not smiling, not even glaring, just blank. To test it, I made eye contact with some other girl about 10 seats further. She squealed in delight and nearly fainted. I grinned at the reaction of the girls around her. So jealous. Then I focused on stalker-san again. I smiled my killer-smile, but still no reaction. Oh wait! She………………sighed? Not a good sigh, but a sigh of boredom! And she’s still staring back! What the hell was wrong with this girl!? She did swoon when I talked to her! Now what happened! I got irritated and looked away, focusing on nothing in particular, just staring into space.


~Back to Naomi~
God, now I remember why I hate fan girls. I’ll be hearing ringing in my ear for at least 2 weeks from now. Even though Megumi, my sister if ya’ll remember, asked me to take pictures, I’d rather just do nothing. Be lazy and watch the concert. So I gave the camera to Sayu and said to make lots of pictures of Jaejoong too. She was eager to snap the shots, and made a lot of Yunho photos. In the first minute…. (=.=”)

During their “O” performance I noticed Jaejoong looking at me quite often. *Why couldn’t he pay for the damn vending machine himself!? He’s RICH, I’m a commoner! Heartless bastard with an angelic appearance…Damn him and his voice! But I’d better not show any sign of hatred…or else I might end up being killed by fan girls or seen on the news as a crazy stalker*
He smiled now. *sigh* I wonder why it is so important… They could easily afford another one… While I was still thinking about the vending machine, Jaejoong frowned and turned his attention somewhere else. He didn’t smile throughout the rest of the performances.


~Time for some chatting (During the concert, kind of like a break)~
~oh and: Narrators POV~

All five, err, four members smiled and thanked the crowd. “Minna! How are you!” Junsu screamed. He got even louder screams back. Yunho and Yoochun talked a bit about…well….I don’t know… They just chatted. Right then Jaejoong walked into Naomi’s direction and asked the crowd if they were having a good time. Again the fans went wild. Then Jaejoong walked to Naomi and kneeled to be able to get the mic close to her. “And what about u, stal- umm- pretty girl?” She flushed bright red. Jaejoong smiled *Finally she shows some interest!* *Again with the stalker crap!* “umm. I guess...” ~Silence~ “O-okay then…” Jaejoong turned away mumbling something about not understanding girls. The other members glanced at each other, wondering why that fan girl was so interesting to him. Sure, she was cute, but probably insane. Why else would she sneak in and steal their drinks!

Naomi was getting tired and her behind hurt from sitting so long.
Random A/N:(I hate it when that happens =.= don’t you? Especially at school, they really need to buy chairs with cushions…………... Who’s with me? =D)
Now they were performing Wrong number. The last song of the evening. *How appropriate. Wrong Number.* Naomi thought. Jaejoong glanced at her again and chuckled a bit at the grimace on her face and the fact that she was staring at her cell phone.
The other members turned their heads simultaneously when Jaejoong laughed during his rap. *Yunho-hyung will surely yell at him for that* Changmin thought.
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aaaaawwwwwwwww... ......^_^ it's getting more interesting!! my imagination is getting (wild) while reading this chapter! ^_^ hahaha
naomi is so lucky!! wwwaaaahh..^_^.......i'm wandering if what will going to happen in the next chapters!!^_^
Aja!!Fighting!!=D Ganbate!=D ^_^
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rizza15mae wrote:

aaaaawwwwwwwww... ......^_^ it's getting more interesting!! my imagination is getting (wild) while reading this chapter! ^_^ hahaha
naomi is so lucky!! wwwaaaahh..^_^.......i'm wandering if what will going to happen in the next chapters!!^_^
Aja!!Fighting!!=D Ganbate!=D ^_^


Hahahahaa XD would you mind telling me what you mean by "my imagination is getting (wild)" XD
What did your imagination think of?? =]


i'll be posting the next chapter soon (because i already typed chapter 6 XD)
I look forward to your reply XD
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Chapter 3

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Naomi snapped when she heard Jaejoong chuckle. Sure enough, he was laughing at her. She tried to glare with all her heart. But that just made Jaejoong laugh even more. *Jerk!* She thought. *and I still have to find the money for the damn vending machine.. Maybe Hikaru could lend me some* Then finally the concert ended. Naomi was deafened by the fan girl squeals again.

“That was AWESOME!!” Sayu beamed. Naomi smiled at her happy friend “Yeah, it was cool”. She turned on her the volume of her cell phone again. Expecting that snobby egoist to call. “Hey Sayu, I’m going to the toilets, OK? You wait at the entrance of the parking lot.” “Sure, sure. Just try to hurry! It’s scary here, when its dark.” Naomi went somewhere quiet and called Hikaru.

“Hey babe, I’ll be there in 5 minutes.”
“Hikaru! Can u lend me money?”
“Why?”
Naomi groaned “Don’t ask….”
“……..How much?”
“Uh, I don’t know, wait a sec. And don’t go to Sayu just yet! Wait for my call, ok?”
“As you wish, beautiful.”
“Thanks”

Naomi called JJ.
“Hello sunshine~”
Naomi made a face. “How much do I owe you.”
“ah just 500 bucks, I decided to pay for half of it myself.”
“Wow. How generous. *sarcasm* I’ll have your money in 10 minutes. Bye.”
“Oh you don-“ “BEEP. BEEP. BEEP” “-t have…….. to………. hurry?”

Jaejoong stared at his phone in amazement. “She hang up on me..” Yoochun laughed at him. “I guess she’s not that infatuated with you as you are with her!” Junsu: “She actually hung up?” Changmin: “I told you! She’s not interested.” JJ smirked. “She will be. Mark my words.” He put on a beanie and a large shawl to cover up the lower half of his face. He waved at the 4 members and headed to the entrance hall. They all watched him in silence. “It’s never gonna work. She’s into ME. Obviously.” Yunho said and went back to eating. The 3 members looked at him funny and shook their heads. *Baka* they all thought.

Naomi called Hikaru again. “Can I come yet?”
“Yeah, first meet me at the empty parking lot. And bring 500 bucks”
“What? Are you trying to seduce me? I must let you know, it’s working~” He chuckled.
“NO! Idiot…. Don’t tell Sayu about the money. I’ll repay you tomorrow. Hurry!”
“Okay.”
He got there faster than Naomi expected. “Here’s the money.” “Thanks, you can go to Sayu now.” She smiled at him and ran off to the entrance hall. When she got there some guy covering up his face walked up to her. *Ah! Creep!* Naomi quickly walked to a small group of girls but before she could reach them, the man grabbed her arm. “hi again, stalker-san” Naomi blinked dazed. “Jaejoong?!” The guy smiled “The one and only” Naomi sighed relieved. JJ misunderstood that, he smiled and pulled her to a more private spot. “Did you wait long?” He asked, still smiling. “No, I just got here.” Naomi smiled back *Maybe, just maybe, he isn’t the complete asshole I thought he was* Naomi got the 500 bucks and held it out for him. “Here” JJ shook his head, he folded my other hand around the money. ”You keep it. I can pay for it, if you want.” *Now I’m 75% sure he isn’t an asshole* Naomi smiled warmly “Thank you” She headed for the exit and added “It was nice meeting you Jaejoong-san” She waved and happily walked to Hikaru’s car.


Jaejoong stood there smiling like an idiot “She totally fell for me!” He stood there a while, talking to himself. “What a weird girl, I wish I can get to know her better.” “Who?” Junsu asked. Jaejoong did a double-take. “When did you guys come?!” Yunho stretched “You took so long and it’s time to head back to the hotel. We’re all tired.” Yoochun poked Jaejoong “Did you fall for her?” He smiled mischievously. JJ blushed “No! I just think she’s interesting.” “Oh she’s interesting all right. But should u really get involved with a girl now? Think about what your stalkers will do to her.” Changmin said while eating chips. JJ looked to the ground and then glared at his fellow members. “I did not – I repeat – did NOT fall for her!” “Yeah hyung is right! How can you fall in love with someone you don’t even know!” Junsu said. They all looked at him. “Didn’t you believe in love at first sight?” “No. it’s not real.” Junsu frowned and walked to their van. The 4 members exchanged glances. “Do you think he’s still not over her?” Yoochun asked. “That was a quite painful experience for him. I’m not surprised that it still bugs him.” Changmin said.

“Hi~!” Naomi said, a bit too enthusiastic. “Where the hell have u been! I want to sleep.” Sayu complained. “Got lost AGAIN?” she added irritated. I blushed “No! I was-“ Naomi stopped, she didn’t want her to know “Yeah I got lost.” She smiled. “baka.” Hikaru looked at me worriedly. “What are you waiting for Hika-chan?” She raised my eyebrow. He turned around and silently drove to his house. First he was gonna drop off Sayu and then Naomi. After Hikaru brought Sayu back, he turned to Naomi.
“Why did you-“
“Here’s your money~” Naomi said smiling.
“You didn’t need it?”
“Nope ^_^”
“Why?”
“I broke something, but I didn’t have to pay for it ^_^”
He stared at her incredulously. “What? How-? Never mind. I don’t want to know.”
“Bye Hikaru!” Naomi waved at him before running to the elevator.
“Hold the elevator!!!” She yelled. “Eh?” Some guy replied. The doors were about to close when Naomi threw her bag between them. It opened again, fortunately. “Whew, I made it” She looked up relieved and her expression turned to horror when she found out she's sharing this elevator with…..


~Change to Junsu’s POV~
“Didn’t you believe in love at first sight?” “No. it’s not real.” I frowned thinking of that bitch again. I can’t believe I still have feelings for her. How stupid am I? I was silent the whole ride to our hotel. I knew the guys were watching me and trying to cheer me up. But I don’t really need that right now. I pulled out my wallet and looked at the picture. The memories made me smile. We were so happy that day. It was valentine’s day. She invited her closest friends to double- or triple date. I looked at the other people. I don’t remember much about them……Wait…….is that? I looked closer. “EHH!!??” I shrieked. The other guys turned to me immediately “what’s the matter Junsu?” My eyes widened as I remembered that girl. “Nothing. Nothing. I’m doing fine.” I replied absent mindedly. Stalker-san. That’s why she looked so familiar. She was the quiet one who left early.

The guys wanted to hang out more, but I wasn’t in the mood. I assured them that they can go and I stepped in an elevator. “HOLD THE ELEVATOR!!” I heard someone yell. “Eh??” When I reached for the button to open the doors, I saw a bag flying towards me. “Uwa!” It got stuck between the closing doors. Miraculously it succeeded to open the door. “Whew, I made it.” A girl said. My eyes widened when I saw her. “Stalker-san?!” She pouted. “Stalker janai!” She turned around. And the doors closed. She pushed the ‘open’ button. “awe come on! Open!!” The elevator moved. She froze. “Crap….just my luck” She muttered almost inaudible. “Ano…stalker-san?” She turned to glare at me. “Stalker-“ “janai.. wakatta. What’s your name then?” She blushed and stuttered “Na-Na-Naomi” I chuckled “Do you have multiple personality disorder?” “What?” “first you’re hostile, then fan girly and at the party you were depressed.” Oops….. I mentioned the party. She looked at me confused “What party?” Now it was my turn to blush. Suddenly the elevator shook and the lights flickered. With a little BANG, the elevator stopped and the lights slowly got bright again. She pushed the ‘open’ button, but nothing happened. She pressed it a few times more. Then she pushed the emergency button, again nothing happened. “What the?” “A-Are we stuck?” I asked. “Yeah…………... damn what a day..” Naomi sighed and kicked the elevator door. “ITTE!” She rubbed her foot. I couldn’t help but to think she was cute like this. Pouting and glaring at the doors.

She turned towards me “Before I forget: What party?” “What do you mean?” “You were talking about me being depressed at a party…” “O! that…” I was quiet for a while. “Yes. That. And I’d like an explanation.” I sighed. “It was last year’s Valentines day. Kumiko wanted to double date with her friends and invited 2 couples.” I remembered seeing Naomi with another girl. “I had no idea she knew a femaleXfemale couple…” She raised her eyebrow. “Kumiko? You know Kumiko?” She was silent for a while. “HEY! I’m not lesbian! I was just there with a mutual friend!” She was as red as a tomato. “Oh, I thought-“ “I don’t want to know. What I DO want to know, however, is how you know Kumiko? Wait. You just said double date. You 2 were dating?!?” “Well. Yeah. We were dating for 5 months until..” She was listening intently. “Until?” “Until she left without a word” Her eyes widened. “She robbed YOU to run off with some rock star wannabe?! That’s just insane..” “What do you mean ‘robbed’?” I looked at her frowning. She couldn’t possibly know about the money I gave Kumiko. And about the money she got for telling the media about our whereabouts. She practically sold us! Our houses were packed with people for weeks. My family got into an accident because of her!

She was noticeably getting nervous. Stuttering incomprehensible words for a short time and then she sighed. She looked at me with sad and guilty eyes. “Kumiko told me about her rich boyfriend and how she was gonna get his money. She didn’t want to marry him -err- you because she was in love with that wannabe. Everyone knows the fastest way to get people’s money is to get married and…” She trailed off and got embarrassed “Anyways, I told her not to do it. But that jerk said her plan was genius and that he needed money soon for some audition fees. I bet he just wanted to spend that money on clothes or something.” I looked at the ground and decided to tell her my side of the story. Tears were forming in her eyes as she listened to my messed up love story.

“I’m so sorry junsu-san! I should have stopped her. You really loved her. I’m so sorry!” She tried not to let her tears fall but when she looked in my eyes she started sobbing. I could see the hurt and the guilt she was feeling. That moment I stopped thinking and held her close to my chest. “It’s not your fault.” I told her over and over again. She calmed down pretty quickly, I felt her face heat up. So I let go. “Thank you” She said smiling awkwardly. How cute. “You’re welcome” I replied. We were quiet for a while. I cleared my throat hoping to get her attention. It worked. “So….Naomi..*pause*…uh… why were you depressed at the valentines party?” She sighed. “Basically, my first love turned out to be a total player.” She scoffed “That asshole. I cant believe I fell for a brainless flirt.” She glared at the ground, after a few minutes she realized I was there too. She looked away blushing and embarrassed.

I laughed and sat next to her. “Thank god you are nothing like Kumiko” “Thank god” She agreed nodding. We talked like this for hours, like 6 hours or so. Finally someone called out to us. “Hello?” We both ran to the ‘emergency’ button. “HELLO!” We said loudly. “Don’t panic! We will have someone send to help you. They should arrive in a minute.” We sighed in relief. “That took ‘em long enough!” She said. After 3 minutes, they arrived and freed us. “We’re terribly sorry for the inconvenience we’ve caused you Junsu-san.” “It’s ok. I didn’t think it was unpleasant at all.” I smiled at Naomi, who was obviously insulted by the helpers. After they left I gave Naomi my phone and room number. “Whenever you want to talk, just call me or stop by.” She reluctantly accepted the paper. “O-o-k.” She stared at the paper. “Now you give me your number.” She looked at me with a shocked expression. “What?” “Your number. Phone number. And room number. That makes it easier for me to find you when I want to see you.” “You? You want MY number?” “Yes, so hurry up and write it down. I’m tired, I want to sleep.” I said irritated. She reached for a pen and dropped it twice. She wrote down her phone number and shoved the paper in my hand before walking away hastily. “HEY! You didn’t write your room number!” “I KNOW!” she shouted back. She ran to the staircase.


A/N: i dont know how the button is called xD But you guys get what i'm talking about right??
anyways..........please let me know what you think,
and if the chapters should be shorter, or if the length is ok.

Some random comments about my "banner": i tried to do a black/white thing, making the differences between them obvious...
as you can see.....i failed.....XD
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haha ^^ great story so far.
does junsu like naomi too? lol, if he does jj might get mad.
btw i like da banner, it looks awesome
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haha ^^ great story so far.
does junsu like naomi too? lol, if he does jj might get mad.
btw i like da banner, it looks awesome


aww thank you ^^ =3
hahaha maybe xD
ah, who doesn't like love-triangles? =P

lol i'm a n00b when it comes to editing pictures xD so i'm happy that you like it =D
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My imagination is getting (wild) because of Jaejoong's killer smile! i imagined that he's smiling at me! and also the other members!
wow!!^_^ you're so amazing! that's so fast! i'll read chapter 3..because you already finished chapter 3!
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wwwwwwwwaaaaaaaaahhhhh!!!!!!! the flow of the story is getting too shocking!!
i can't believe that junsu and naomi had met before..and i did'nt expect that junsu was the guy inside the elevator when naomi hurried to enter it...it is too nice when you combined the two scenes aaaaaaaawwwww......JUNSU vs. JAEJOONG!!
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this is soOoOoOoOo nice!! saphy!!you're the best!! Ganbatte!!
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RizzaMae-chan, Thanks for reviewing ^^

hehehe wouldn't we all just faint if Jaejoong(or anyone else) smiled like that at us xD
Thanks again for reading ! ^^
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Chapter 4

“HEY! You didn’t write your room number!” “I KNOW!” she shouted back. She ran to the staircase.

~fast forward~
When I got to my room, the other members were all sitting facing the door. “Where the hell have u been? It’s almost morning!” Jaejoong said. “I was stuck in the elevator.” *gasp* “Were there any witnesses?” Yunho asked. “Witnesses? We’re not talking about a crime scene here Yunho!” Jaejoong retorted angrily. “I know! But if any fan girls saw us here, we’d have to move.” Jaejoong nodded thoughtfully. “So did anyone see you?” “Yes. The people who got us-ME out of there..” Shit.. I hope they didn’t notice the word ‘us’. They al raised their left eyebrows and said “Us? What do you mean?”
I cringed at their perfect timing and synchronization. It was creepy. “Uh, someone else was stuck there too.” Yunho groaned “Great. Now we have to move again!” Jaejoong kept looking at me “Who?” I looked straight back at him “How are you so sure you know her?” I mentally slapped myself “…OR HIM!” I added quickly. Jaejoong smirked “So it is a girl I know?” “No.” I said looking at the floor. “Look me in the eyes and say that again” I did what he asked. But then I gulped. Shit…I have to work on my lying-skills. “AHAH! *point* So it IS a girl I know! *point point*” Jaejoong pointed at me happily. “Who was she?” He leaned in closer. I sighed in defeat. “stalker-san.” The whole room went quiet.

Yunho got a bit angry “HER?! Now we definitely have to move! That STALKER is in OUR HOTEL! PACK YOUR BAGS!” “She won’t say anything! And she’s not a stalker. And she’s even not OUR fan girl. She likes Big Bang.” His eyes narrowed “How do you know that?” “We were stuck in a elevator. We talked to kill time...duh.” I said drily. He continued looking at me suspiciously. “Why?” “Why what?” “Did you guys talk.” I looked at him like –> =.= WTF? “I JUST TOLD YOU!”
“Isn’t THAT!!” Jaejoong yelled out behind me. “You’re right! It IS her!!” Changmin said surprised.. I looked at the thing they were holding. “O crap!” I tried to jump and grab the picture of the valentine party, but they quickly moved out of the way and I landed flat on my face. “Yunho! Yunho! Look!” Jaejoong said excited like a little boy. Yunho’s face went from annoyed to shocked to blank to angry again. “You KNEW?!” He shouted at me. “You KNEW she knows that bitch Kumiko and still you have a friendly conversation with her?! Unbelievable! After all you’ve been through, you still try to seek contact with these low-lifes?!”

Everyone gasped when I yelled at his face. “She is not like Kumiko! take back what you said about Naomi” He looked at me incredulously “Since when are you so close with her?” I mentally slapped myself again. Why the hell did I do that? He’s right. I barely even know the girl. “Sorry hyung, I was way out of line. But she really is nothing like Kumiko. She feels incredibly guilty about what her cousin did to me.” “COUSIN?” “Yes, now can we please stop talking about Kumiko. I closed that chapter a long time ago, I really want to move on.” Everyone looked at me sympathetically. “We understand, Su. Sorry.” Yoochun patted me on my back. “Now, who wants to talk with stalker san?” I asked grinning. Jaejoong reached for the phone but ended up falling from his chair.
A/N: Wow there’s a lot of falling in this story…. Or is it just me?

“Are you sure you want to keep in touch with this girl?” Yunho asked me, while Yoochun and Jaejoong were fighting for the phone. “I don’t know. But I do think she’s a nice girl. Plus, she makes great entertainment. Remember how she walked in our dressing room and tried to get out?” Yunho en Changmin chuckled. “Yeah, she really is a weird one.” I smiled thinking about our conversation in the elevator. Maybe, just maybe, I like her. I shook my head. No, I don’t even know her! I can’t like her!

~Naomi~

I ran to the staircase blushing like mad. “That did not just happen. It was just a dream.” I looked at my hand. “Ahh!!! The paper is there!!” I quickly ran to my room, which was a couple of floors down. “MI!! WHERE THE HELL HAVE YOU BEEN!!” My sister angrily whispered. “the elevator got stuck. It was not my fault!” I whispered back. My sister sighed “Yeah with your luck, you could even get stuck on a doormat.” I thought of the possibility. “Ha ha Very funny… FYI that is impossible. Are mom and dad pissed?” I asked. There’s one thing I learned from my sister: never get mom and dad angry. NEVER. They’ll shout, hit and then ignore you. Can you imagine, not getting any cooked meals for months. Mom really holds grudges. Dad is even worse. He’ll pretend nothing happened and somehow make you feel super guilty and ashamed. My sister did a V-sign “No, I told them you got back right on time and went to sleep.” “thanks!!” I hugged her and she was laughing like this: . I froze instantly. That meant she was gonna blackmail me. I was sure of it. She wasn’t good at hiding her intentions. I pulled away “What do you want?” “Oh nothing.” “Homework and chores again?” She smiled. “You know it^^”.

After that I went to shower and went to bed. Just as I closed my eyes, my phone rang. I groaned and turned around. After a minute, my sister threw her pillow at me and yelled that I should pick up the phone. I pressed her pillow against my ear. Ah, silence ^^. Suddenly my blanket was pulled away. “Get the damn phone!” She took her pillow and went back to sleep. Angrily I picked up my blanket off the ground and answered the phone. “What.” I said annoyed. “Uhh, hi?” A surprised voice said on the other line. “Who?” I asked yawning. “eh….Junsu?” The person said. “Junsu?” I asked yawning again. “wait.. JUNSU!!?!?!” I nearly yelled. My sister threw a smaller pillow at me. “Shhh!! Only wake me up for Jaejoong.” I hid under my blanket, even if that is totally unnecessary. “Yeah, did I wake you up?” “No, you didn’t” He sighed relieved “Yokatta..” “because I didn’t sleep yet.” “Oh! Were you trying to sleep?” I tried to calm myself down. This was getting annoying, and I was getting angry. “Yes. So please, hang up. I want to sleep.” “I understand, mata ne?” He asked hopeful. “Mata.” I hung up and turned my phone off. Nothing will keep me from sleeping now! I smiled and closed my eyes.

“RISE AND SHINEE!!” My brother yelled in my ear. I smacked his cheek hard. I could still feel the stinging in my hand. “AAAAA! ITTE!” he rubbed his cheek. I looked at the clock. I slept for only 3 hours?!@$%%#@@!!!!!!! “Stand up, stand up, everybody wake up, wake u~p!” My brother loved putting K-artists or their songs in his jokes. “Seriously now, dad has something to say, so get your lazy bums there immediately!” I groaned and stumbled to his room. Everyone was looking so gloomy. “Did we loose our passports?” I asked annoyed. I’m not much of a morning person. Bad temper. “No dear, sit down.” My mom said as gentle as ever. My dad sighed: “I got transferred.” Me and my sister blinked a couple of times. “But isn’t that good?” She asked. “no, I’ve got a job that pays even less now. I’m afraid, we’d have to move to a much smaller place in” he was silent. “In?” I said. “In Korea.” I fell off my seat. “Ko-ko-korea???” My sister was just as shocked as me.

~Fast Forward~

After our last vacation, we headed over to our new place in Korea. The company helped us move our stuff. Now the whole living room and bedroom were stuffed with boxes. We had to throw away ¾ of our things! We sold them all via internet. The only good thing in this mess is that Junsu called often, he even asked if they should come and help us get rid of our junk. I honestly don’t understand why he is so friendly to ME.

“Yah! I refuse to share MY room with some college student!” My sister yelled at my brother. “YOUR room?! I’m the eldest! I am the only boy! I believe it’s quite clear that this room is MINE!” I stepped in between. “Actually, this one’s mine.” They both frowned at me. “No way! It’s mine!” My mother, who got tired of this endless fighting, slammed the door shut. We all looked at her frightened. “Stop arguing! It’s hard enough already! If you want to live alone then go rent your own apartment! We only have 2 rooms! You three are sharing the big room. End of discussion!” She walked away gracefully and whistling. “Dude….” My brother whispered. “I know…” Megumi added. Megumi, Yuuto and I were always able to tell what the other was thinking. “Well, I’m dumping my stuff near the window.” I said. “And I’m taking the spot next to the closet.” Megumi began to arrange her things. “What do I have left?!” My brother cried. He settled for the opposite wall. The rest of the day was not very interesting.

The next day, however, was dreadful. “Naomi will come with me then, after Korean lessons, Megumi and Yuuto will go with your mother.” I groaned “Why do we all have to work?!” “Because we need the money” My father shot back at me. “But why can’t Yuuto go with you and I with mom?” “Because you are the one who’s the most fitted for this job.” Megumi and Yuuto laughed. “I’m most fitted to be a CLEANER!? Thanks dad for the confidence boost. What a great way of saying: you’re going nowhere with your dreams, give up and go clean toilets.” My dad frowned at me with a you’d-better-behave-young-lady!-look. “FINE! I’ll come.”

After my horrid Korean lessons, (I got yelled at by the teacher) , I went to my new job. I stared at the building. Is that what I think it is? My dad waved and told me to hurry up. I walked to him and a guy in a suit. I stared at the letters on the wall behind him. My mouth fell open. Now I know why I’m the only one who could do this job. “Welcome to SM entertainment! We expect you to…” blah blah blah. He explained what we were supposed to do today and when we ought to be finished. He escorted us to the section we had to clean. “This is it for today, tomorrow you’ll get a proper tour.”

“SM Entertainment? You were transferred to be a cleaner at SM Ent.?” I asked. My dad nodded ashamed. “From a manager to a cleaner. Weird, huh? Most people start as a cleaner and end up as a manager.” He laughed without humor. “It’ll be fine dad. I don’t really have to go to university, I can just-“ “NO!” My dad interrupted “Don’t you think we can’t afford your education! We WILL send you to university and you WILL do…………………...what you want to do…………” “……You still don’t know what I want to be, right?......” My dad grinned sheepishly “I always forget” I laughed with him. We went to our third room.

“Okay! Listen up! We still have time to learn the special dance! Don’t pay attention to the people cleaning, but don’t make it hard for them either” The person, who I think is a dance instructor, said. I looked to see who these people were. I mean, who the hell goes to the ONE room were people are cleaning. My eyes widened. Junsu had the exact same expression. Jaejoong was surprised but then smiled and waved. The rest just looked at me like o-m-g-the-stalker-is-here-again. “We still miss 3 dancers!” The dance instructor complained. Then he looked at me, eying me from head to toe. “hmm…she’s a bit chubby…but we’ll get rid of that. Hey you!” He skipped towards me. “Come up and dance.” My dad translated what he said “No.” I said firmly. He looked shocked and turned to my father. Surprisingly dad said yes. He was always against any type of dance that required me to dance with a boy. My dad helped me up.


This chapter sucked xD the next one will be more interesting ^^ i promise =P
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I'll have Chapter 4 up when i have 3 comments or when i feel that it's taking way too long for you guys to comment xD jk jk =P
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RizzaMae-chan, Thanks for reviewing ^^

hehehe wouldn't we all just faint if Jaejoong(or anyone else) smiled like that at us xD
Thanks again for reading ! ^^
And thanks for the picture! i LOVE it =D






oh! douitashimashitte=D ^_^
hahaha....yeah! just because of their KILLER SMILE!! hahahaha
i enjoyed reading your fanfic!
hehehe...=D i am really not good in editing pictures! but i'm happy that you
love it!
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i forgot to tell you that you did a nice banner!=D i LOVE it too!!
i noticed in these two pictures that Jaejoong and Naomi look alike
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woah!!!
from japan to korea!!....=D naomi can dance?! omo! if she will be 1 of the dancers of DBSK,,,then..she will be very close with DBSK!! (Junsu and Jaejoong) it's awesome saphy-chan!!.. my friends and i are looking forward for the next chpaters!
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