Post Reply the trials prologe part 1
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Posted 3/12/09
Three people walked quickly down the narrow road. The leader stopped, turned, took off his coat and handed it to the boy behind him."We don't want you to get sick now we're so close", the other boy just nodded. As they continued one of them stopped and stood completely still. "Lime", the leader turned at his name. " You found it Roki" the boy, Roki, nodded swiftly revealing his wolf ears.
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Nanashi_M wrote:

Three people walked quickly down the narrow road. The leader stopped, turned, took off his coat and handed it to the boy behind him."We don't want you to get sick now we're so close", the other boy just nodded. As they continued one of them stopped and stood completely still. "Lime", the leader turned at his name. " You found it Roki" the boy, Roki, nodded swiftly revealing his wolf ears.


Well honestly its okay it just needs to develop more but yeah its sounds interesting. Not bad
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