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Chapter One:



My story began; our story...
Everything started from something you'd call simple.
Yes, simple...
But who thought it will ruin everything?
I did.
But it was too late to change our future.
Yes, it's too late now.
Though our story is tragic, we never leave each other's side; we stay together all the time.
We were separated for quite some time, but we reunited when we were teenagers, and old enough to make our own choices...together.


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Somewhere, deep down in a magical forest that is located in the human world, stuck in between the vampire and witches' realms, eight year old girls play innocently...

Girl 1: Ahhhhh! Somebody help me! There's a spider on my head!

Girl 2: Ha! You're so funny sister! You're afraid of a tiny spider? *starts to laugh while walking*

Girl 1: Does that mean...you're not afraid of spiders? *throws the spider at her with an angry face*

Girl 2 : *screams* I'm gonna tell mom!

Girl 1: *shocked*

Girl 2: *puts both her hands to cover her mouth* I'm sorry Aine...

Aine: "starts crying" You're so mean to me! It was only a joke!

Miki: I know, I'm sorry. *looks around* Shouldn't we be getting back? I don't even know how we ended up in here...

Aine: How should I know? You're the older twin! I only followed you and then that spider fell on my head.

Miki: I know that...Let's try going this way! *runs deeper into the forest*

Aine: Hey, are you just going to leave me here?! *gets up* Wait for me, Miki!

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Miki: Aine! Didn't you follow me? Where did you go?! I don't like being in here by myself!

Aine: Somebody help me! Anyone here?!

Miki: Aine!

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Aine: *huff huff* Somebody help me! Ahh! *looks behind her* What was that thing?! Did I...lose him? I hope so...*thinks for a moment* Isn't that...where...?

Miki: Aine! Are you here?!

Aine: Is sombody screaming for me? I must be losing it...First, i trip while walking with Miki, then I lose my money, a spider jumps on my head, iI get lost because of my sister, something scary was chasing me out, now somebody is calling me in my mind...IS TODAY THE WORST DAY OR WHAT?!

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Miki: Aine!

Aine: *looks behind her* Miki! Where did you go?!

Miki: *runs toward her and hugs her tightly*

Aine:*shocked*

Aine and Miki : *cry*

Aine: I was scared! I thought I'd be lost forever!

Miki: Me too...I'm not sure what we should do.

Aine: Which way is home?

Miki: I don't really know...

Aine: I'm so sorry Miki...

Miki: What are you sorry for?

Aine: I knew you were scared to come into the forest, but I talked you into it because I wanted to see mommy...

Miki: *smile* It's okay. Ever since mom died last year, we haven't been able to see her because doesn't see her.

Aine: Thanks Miki! Here, daddy gave these to keep. They were mommy's. *hands Miki a gold chain*

Miki: What is it? *looks in her hand* It's...the gold lockets mommy said she would save for when we were ten years old. Why did daddy give you these?

Aine: I don't know, but look on the back! It says your name, and my name is carved on mine too!

Miki: Oh...

Aine: It's okay...*smile* Our mom is still in our hearts no matter what happens. No matter what happens I have mine too, so if we get lost, we'll find each other again. That's what daddy said.

Miki: Thank you Aine...I'll treasure it.

Aine: Don't worry, we'll find home. Let's go!
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I'd have to admit Lena-Tena-chan~!! ^^ It's pretty good~!! ^^ I'm gonna start on Chapter 2, but sicne u talked about their relationship and lockets, I'm gonna talk about the plot in Chapter 2~!! KK???
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Hikaru_Michi14 wrote:

I'd have to admit Lena-Tena-chan~!! ^^ It's pretty good~!! ^^ I'm gonna start on Chapter 2, but sicne u talked about their relationship and lockets, I'm gonna talk about the plot in Chapter 2~!! KK???


okies ~!!! ^^
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lol this is pretty good keep up the good work!!!!!
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sheska wrote:

lol this is pretty good keep up the good work!!!!!


Thankies Sheska-chan~!! I'm gonna start on Chapter 2 soon, so check in when u have time~!! ^^
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sheska wrote:

lol this is pretty good keep up the good work!!!!!


Thankies Sheska-chan~!! I'm gonna start on Chapter 2 soon, so check in when u have time~!! ^^


ok!!!! I'll check it out!!! I can't wait!!!
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Hikaru_Michi14 wrote:

I'd have to admit Lena-Tena-chan~!! ^^ It's pretty good~!! ^^ I'm gonna start on Chapter 2, but sicne u talked about their relationship and lockets, I'm gonna talk about the plot in Chapter 2~!! KK???


no chapter 2 for 3 weekks ... hmmmmmmmmmm...
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hahahah~!!! i thought a ghost send that message xDDD 1!! HAHAHA!
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Hikaru_Michi14 wrote:

I'd have to admit Lena-Tena-chan~!! ^^ It's pretty good~!! ^^ I'm gonna start on Chapter 2, but sicne u talked about their relationship and lockets, I'm gonna talk about the plot in Chapter 2~!! KK???


no chapter 2 for 3 weekks ... hmmmmmmmmmm...


I'm so sorry Lena-chan...I haven't been able to write Chapter 2 for a while...I'm really sorry~!! >.< I'm just so busy writing my other stories that I completely forgot about it~!! *bows to Lena-chan's greatness* I'M SO SORRYYYY!!!!! *cries*
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Hikaru_Michi14 wrote:


TrueLoveMyGoddess wrote:


Hikaru_Michi14 wrote:

I'd have to admit Lena-Tena-chan~!! ^^ It's pretty good~!! ^^ I'm gonna start on Chapter 2, but sicne u talked about their relationship and lockets, I'm gonna talk about the plot in Chapter 2~!! KK???


no chapter 2 for 3 weekks ... hmmmmmmmmmm...


I'm so sorry Lena-chan...I haven't been able to write Chapter 2 for a while...I'm really sorry~!! >.< I'm just so busy writing my other stories that I completely forgot about it~!! *bows to Lena-chan's greatness* I'M SO SORRYYYY!!!!! *cries*


greatness xD , thats soo cute =D , lol don't worry about it , i haven't written my chapter 5 of the story for long time .. and i need to edit the whole story for my new idea ... >_<
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TrueLoveMyGoddess wrote:


Hikaru_Michi14 wrote:


TrueLoveMyGoddess wrote:


Hikaru_Michi14 wrote:

I'd have to admit Lena-Tena-chan~!! ^^ It's pretty good~!! ^^ I'm gonna start on Chapter 2, but sicne u talked about their relationship and lockets, I'm gonna talk about the plot in Chapter 2~!! KK???


no chapter 2 for 3 weekks ... hmmmmmmmmmm...


I'm so sorry Lena-chan...I haven't been able to write Chapter 2 for a while...I'm really sorry~!! >.< I'm just so busy writing my other stories that I completely forgot about it~!! *bows to Lena-chan's greatness* I'M SO SORRYYYY!!!!! *cries*


greatness xD , thats soo cute =D , lol don't worry about it , i haven't written my chapter 5 of the story for long time .. and i need to edit the whole story for my new idea ... >_<


U've already written Chapter 3???!!! Boy ur fast~!! I need to start writing outherwise I'm not good enough for Lena-chan's greatness~!! >.<
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Hikaru_Michi14 wrote:


TrueLoveMyGoddess wrote:


Hikaru_Michi14 wrote:


TrueLoveMyGoddess wrote:


Hikaru_Michi14 wrote:

I'd have to admit Lena-Tena-chan~!! ^^ It's pretty good~!! ^^ I'm gonna start on Chapter 2, but sicne u talked about their relationship and lockets, I'm gonna talk about the plot in Chapter 2~!! KK???


no chapter 2 for 3 weekks ... hmmmmmmmmmm...


I'm so sorry Lena-chan...I haven't been able to write Chapter 2 for a while...I'm really sorry~!! >.< I'm just so busy writing my other stories that I completely forgot about it~!! *bows to Lena-chan's greatness* I'M SO SORRYYYY!!!!! *cries*


greatness xD , thats soo cute =D , lol don't worry about it , i haven't written my chapter 5 of the story for long time .. and i need to edit the whole story for my new idea ... >_<


U've already written Chapter 3???!!! Boy ur fast~!! I need to start writing outherwise I'm not good enough for Lena-chan's greatness~!! >.<


chapter 3 and 4 , but i think my story is just tooo simple .. , because of my english that is .. so i don't really know .... , i want her to transform and other .. but i can't find the right words ..
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so yeah ... !!! but i have to be happy *starts to slap herself* HAHA !! ok now i can smile XD
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TrueLoveMyGoddess wrote:


Hikaru_Michi14 wrote:


TrueLoveMyGoddess wrote:


Hikaru_Michi14 wrote:


TrueLoveMyGoddess wrote:


Hikaru_Michi14 wrote:

I'd have to admit Lena-Tena-chan~!! ^^ It's pretty good~!! ^^ I'm gonna start on Chapter 2, but sicne u talked about their relationship and lockets, I'm gonna talk about the plot in Chapter 2~!! KK???


no chapter 2 for 3 weekks ... hmmmmmmmmmm...


I'm so sorry Lena-chan...I haven't been able to write Chapter 2 for a while...I'm really sorry~!! >.< I'm just so busy writing my other stories that I completely forgot about it~!! *bows to Lena-chan's greatness* I'M SO SORRYYYY!!!!! *cries*


greatness xD , thats soo cute =D , lol don't worry about it , i haven't written my chapter 5 of the story for long time .. and i need to edit the whole story for my new idea ... >_<


U've already written Chapter 3???!!! Boy ur fast~!! I need to start writing outherwise I'm not good enough for Lena-chan's greatness~!! >.<


chapter 3 and 4 , but i think my story is just tooo simple .. , because of my english that is .. so i don't really know .... , i want her to transform and other .. but i can't find the right words ..


Hmmmm...I need to think of some parts for our story...Like explain some transformation moments and summaries in unique words to satisfy the readers to read on...but I need to think more about the concept of the villain and find ways to explain the problems...sorry~!! I sound like an English teacher who is boring her students to death~!! >.<
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Hikaru_Michi14 wrote:


TrueLoveMyGoddess wrote:


Hikaru_Michi14 wrote:


TrueLoveMyGoddess wrote:


Hikaru_Michi14 wrote:


TrueLoveMyGoddess wrote:


Hikaru_Michi14 wrote:

I'd have to admit Lena-Tena-chan~!! ^^ It's pretty good~!! ^^ I'm gonna start on Chapter 2, but sicne u talked about their relationship and lockets, I'm gonna talk about the plot in Chapter 2~!! KK???


no chapter 2 for 3 weekks ... hmmmmmmmmmm...


I'm so sorry Lena-chan...I haven't been able to write Chapter 2 for a while...I'm really sorry~!! >.< I'm just so busy writing my other stories that I completely forgot about it~!! *bows to Lena-chan's greatness* I'M SO SORRYYYY!!!!! *cries*


greatness xD , thats soo cute =D , lol don't worry about it , i haven't written my chapter 5 of the story for long time .. and i need to edit the whole story for my new idea ... >_<


U've already written Chapter 3???!!! Boy ur fast~!! I need to start writing outherwise I'm not good enough for Lena-chan's greatness~!! >.<


chapter 3 and 4 , but i think my story is just tooo simple .. , because of my english that is .. so i don't really know .... , i want her to transform and other .. but i can't find the right words ..


Hmmmm...I need to think of some parts for our story...Like explain some transformation moments and summaries in unique words to satisfy the readers to read on...but I need to think more about the concept of the villain and find ways to explain the problems...sorry~!! I sound like an English teacher who is boring her students to death~!! >.<



lol why is that !! xDD i need to learn from xD big sis ~!

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