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Posted 4/1/09 , edited 5/1/09
Last Update To The Story :: May 1 :D

So yeah... I'ma write a vampire story, since Koko-chan wants me to :3

haha, I kinda just made up names on the spot O.o


Characters ::
Nathaniel Borren
Age :: 16
Hair :: light brown, wavy
Eyes :: icy blue


Chris Ebonor
Age :: 599
Hair :: red, very long. Normally held back in a ponytail
Eyes :: hazel


Jane Borren
Age :: 10
Hair :: dark brown, shoulder length
Eyes :: drak brown





Preface

As Chris sat in that little park, she thought about what she was about to do. She knew she would get in trouble for it... But it had to be done.
There was no other option.
No other way to right the wrongs...
She took a deep breath, and stood up, checking her stance before setting out. Her hazel eyes shone even in the dim light of the overcast day.

She seemed to move on a different plane from everyone else. They moved around her, but as if she weren't there at all.
Maybe it was because of what she was. Then again, maybe she was just uninteresting.
But anyone who thinks that is obviously wrong, she thought. Her ego was almost as big as her dedication to duty.

But she was stopped suddenly when a young girl rammed into her side. She looked down at the girl, now splayed on the ground, remembered what humans would expect of her, and fell down just in time. There was a slight delay in the reaction...
She rubbed her elbow for show, and said in a calm voice, "Are you okay, child?"
The little girl looked up at her, eyes wide and wondrous. She didn't say anything.

A boy pushed his way through the crowd, and stood panting in front of Chris, his hands on his knees as he caught his breath.
"Gomen!" He panted. Chris blinked, and thought about what to say.
"It's alright. You didn't do a thing to me. It was the girl." She turned to the girl again.

The little girl shook her head to clear it and remembered herself. "I'm really sorry, nee-san!"
Chris nodded, and stood up gracefully. "It's alright, just watch where you're going next time." She bowed slightly to the two children, and turned to continue on her journey.
But a voice behind her stopped her. "Wait, have I seen you somewhere before?" It was the boy.

Chris tilted her head, and then shook it. "I don't think so, child."
The boy looked shocked, and said, "Child?! Sounds pretty arrogant, coming from a kid like you!"

Crap, I forgot! Chris looked like a kid, didn't she? Right now, that is. She had chosen to occupy the age of 13 for the time being.
Hoping to regain some of her credibility, she bowed again and said, "Gomen, onii-san."
The boy just looked oddly at her, still wondering if he'd seen her somewhere before.

It was then that Chris twitched slightly, and her eyes seemed to flash for a fraction of a second. She looked around, and hastily excused herself from the two children.
She ducked off of the path, and into the forest. Now is NOT the time for this!




Chapter 1

Chris ran through the woods for more than half an hour, and when she was sure that the children were well away from her, she stopped, and leapt up a tree. Her eyes flashed again, and a shiver went through her body. After a few minutes of the painful conversion, she looked up. Her eyes were still hazel -sort of. There was a slight red tint to them now. She stood a full foot taller than she had been a bit ago, and her hair was down to her knees. She scowled, and pulled it up at the back of her head, into a long ponytail.

She looked down at the ripped shirt she'd been wearing. She really had been quite small. She sighed, and out of a bag around her shoulder, took a new shirt, more her size now.
She put it on, after glancing around wearily.
And now she would have to hide out here until she could muster enough strength to change back.
"What a bothersome thing..." She sighed and jumped down from the tree she sat in, and over to a pond, where she looked at herself.
And then she remembered. "I've been around humans far too long." She scowled at the absence of her reflection, and her stomach growled.

And then her eyes flashed again.
NO! I have to stay here until night time! By then I'll be able to get something ELSE. She had been quite good at keeping her oath. The oath she made to the only person she'd ever loved...
He died so long ago...
But she had promise him. No more human blood.

She looked down, and sighed. It would never have worked anyway. Different families. Different values. Different diets....

She was startled out of her sad reverie by the sound of bushes being pushed aside.
She looked around hastily, and saw the little girl from before, staring at her wide eyed.

"What are you doing here?" Chris asked the girl, backing up a step closer to the pond. That little girl is in grave danger!

The girl looked up at her, and said, "I- I- I..." The cold terror was clear in her eyes. Maybe now she saw Chris for what she truly was...

"You followed me here?" Chris knew what her eyes must look like... she hadn't eaten for too long...
The little girl nodded slowly.
"Why would you do that?" Chris' voice was now cold.

The little girl was terrified... "I... I wanted to... to see.... wh--"
She stopped talking and looked up when she heard it. "Jane! Jane where are you?!"

The little girl looked up, hope brimming in her eyes. "Onii-chan!" She called into the air.
After a few seconds longer, the boy from earlier plowed through the bushes and fell on his little sister with a tight embrace.
"Sheesh, Jane! Don't go running off like that!" He looked almost as scared as she had a few seconds ago.

He cares for his sister... But they're both in danger! Even as Chris thought this, she could feel herself losing the control she'd painstakingly built and maintained for so long. It was crumbling like an old brick wall after hundreds of years of unuse.

The boy seemed to realize he was not alone here, and looked up at Chris. For a moment, his eyes clouded with confusion, as if he were trying to remember something but couldn't. "Who are you?" He asked.

With a slight shudder, Chris opened her mouth to speak. But with that came that intoxicating scent... She fought harder. "Nothing you should be concerned with. Leave at once!" She let the words lash out like a whip. Those two needed to get away... She wasn't sure how long she could last...

The boy hesitated a fraction of a second too long. But the time he'd decided to do as she wished, she snapped. He turned to go, holding onto his sister's shoulders, but he blinked. And when his eyes opened again, Chris was in front of him, her fangs glistening in the light of the forest.



More Comin' Soooooonn O___O



Posted 4/1/09 , edited 4/1/09
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COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL <333
chris's age is 599!!?!??! =O


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lol yup :3
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LOLOLOL =P
its funny cusz nathaniel's age was 16....
then chris' "599!!!!!!" xPP
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lol, yup >;3
I make a lot of people feel like that. Like they were hit in tha face with a really confusing or surprising thing.... like a cake... or a cat O.o
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LOL O.o"
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WHO THRU A CAT AT ME!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!?!??!
(good story!)
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no one mentioned throwin a cat at yu........
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well some1 thru a cat at me.......
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no, they didnt.
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must of been someone IRL. .
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ME:WHY IS THERE CAT NIP ON MY FACE?!!?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!??!!?!?!?!!?
ICHUGO:oopses........................^-^''
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Catnip on your face...?
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