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Posted 4/6/09

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hehe, i dunno?! wahehe, seriously...


Ooh >w< Okaaay xDD
GoodJob on the awesome reviews in Tatta Hitotsu Omoi, btw :]
I'm looking forward to reading episode 2 :D


hehe! thanks!
i'm having an idea stagnation, though... wahehe, my ideas are already for the last chapter...!
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hehe! thanks!
i'm having an idea stagnation, though... wahehe, my ideas are already for the last chapter...!


Ooh >w< Just do your best then ne~ :]
Anou. I'm really looking forward to editing again >w<
I mean if it's alright with you ne?
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triccian wrote:

hehe! thanks!
i'm having an idea stagnation, though... wahehe, my ideas are already for the last chapter...!


Ooh >w< Just do your best then ne~ :]
Anou. I'm really looking forward to editing again >w<
I mean if it's alright with you ne?


of course! i'm really happy that you're helping me... hehehe!
Posted 4/6/09

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of course! i'm really happy that you're helping me... hehehe!


Uwaa. Thank you ne~ *huuug*
Anou. Just send me the next parts I'll edit them ASAP xDD
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triccian wrote:

of course! i'm really happy that you're helping me... hehehe!


Uwaa. Thank you ne~ *huuug*
Anou. Just send me the next parts I'll edit them ASAP xDD


okay! no problem!
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Posted 4/6/09 , edited 4/6/09

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ICHIKAWA KEITO, 17: A half-breed (is this for dogs only?) who magically learned weird English words when he was a baby, Keito is the kindest and most level-headed of all the brothers. However, nobody knows (but now you will know) that he is a repressed guy who doesn’t know how to show his real feelings and emotions because of dot dot dot. Ayii… they wanna know…


HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! *evil laugh*
I already know... i already know... i already know...

BUT i can't say it. XD



sabi ko sayo eh magpanggap kang hindi alam!


*uuuwwaaaa!*

me ish wanna know~!
pwetty pwetty pwease?!
*puppy eyes*
yeah I know puppy eyes only work for Chinen..
*stupid Chinen*

well, I'll just guess it then!
*harhar!*
*evil laugh*
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Posted 4/6/09

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*uuuwwaaaa!*

me ish wanna know~!
pwetty pwetty pwease?!
*puppy eyes*
yeah I know puppy eyes only work for Chinen..
*stupid Chinen*

well, I'll just guess it then!
*harhar!*
*evil laugh*


what's your guess?
hmmm.... but then, you won't know it by now, ne?
hehe!
woah? stupid chinen?
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Posted 4/7/09

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shieLdembLem wrote:
*uuuwwaaaa!*

me ish wanna know~!
pwetty pwetty pwease?!
*puppy eyes*
yeah I know puppy eyes only work for Chinen..
*stupid Chinen*

well, I'll just guess it then!
*harhar!*
*evil laugh*


what's your guess?
hmmm.... but then, you won't know it by now, ne?
hehe!
woah? stupid chinen?


though it's just a guess, it's kinda in the plot already~~

so I'm guessing it's either:
1)His mother
2)Kaeru
3)maybe one of his brothers??

LoLz!
this fic is pretty messed up and really silly that it makes me laugh~
*harhar!*
it's really good... *thumbs up*
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Posted 4/7/09 , edited 4/7/09

shieLdembLem wrote:

though it's just a guess, it's kinda in the plot already~~

so I'm guessing it's either:
1)His mother
2)Kaeru
3)maybe one of his brothers??

LoLz!
this fic is pretty messed up and really silly that it makes me laugh~
*harhar!*
it's really good... *thumbs up*


hmmm... let's see...
but still: i won't tell you now!
haha, it's not just silly, it's so retarded...
just wait 'til you read the next parts, especially the time when JE people start pouring in it! wahahaha! it's so retarded!
i hope many people will comment though
coz it seems they don't like my retarded ideas?
wahahaha!
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Posted 4/7/09

triccian wrote:


shieLdembLem wrote:

though it's just a guess, it's kinda in the plot already~~

so I'm guessing it's either:
1)His mother
2)Kaeru
3)maybe one of his brothers??

LoLz!
this fic is pretty messed up and really silly that it makes me laugh~
*harhar!*
it's really good... *thumbs up*


hmmm... let's see...
but still: i won't tell you now!
haha, it's not just silly, it's so retarded...
just wait 'til you read the next parts, especially the time when JE people start pouring in it! wahahaha! it's so retarded!
i hope many people will comment though
coz it seems they don't like my retarded ideas?
wahahaha!


looks like "Retarded" is your middle name~!
*haha!*
LoLz~!
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Posted 4/7/09

shieLdembLem wrote:


triccian wrote:


shieLdembLem wrote:

though it's just a guess, it's kinda in the plot already~~

so I'm guessing it's either:
1)His mother
2)Kaeru
3)maybe one of his brothers??

LoLz!
this fic is pretty messed up and really silly that it makes me laugh~
*harhar!*
it's really good... *thumbs up*


hmmm... let's see...
but still: i won't tell you now!
haha, it's not just silly, it's so retarded...
just wait 'til you read the next parts, especially the time when JE people start pouring in it! wahahaha! it's so retarded!
i hope many people will comment though
coz it seems they don't like my retarded ideas?
wahahaha!


looks like "Retarded" is your middle name~!
*haha!*
LoLz~!


of course not!
it's actually my first!
nyahahahahahaha!
sad to say, i am really, really retarded...
imagine seeing me singing NEWS's Happy Birthday in a fastfood chain with Ryuutaro's picture on a chair!
that is retarded.
and that is me.
bwahahahahaha!
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kyaa this is soo hilarious...
just by reading all about the characters and the story..
can't wait for the next part!

hmmmm i think the one on the porsche is NINO!
kya..i just hope there's a role in here that can be yabu's lover!
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kyaa this is soo hilarious...
just by reading all about the characters and the story..
can't wait for the next part!

hmmmm i think the one on the porsche is NINO!
kya..i just hope there's a role in here that can be yabu's lover!


really?! waaaaah! i'm glad you like it!
actually, i gave too much effort in writing those profiles, hehe
so i'm really glad you appreciate it!

3 points for IchiNi!

hehe, the second part is ready, demo, i'm still waiting for readers... hehe!
yup, i just forgot to write it there, but there's one for yabu too...
i'd write it now!
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Posted 4/12/09 , edited 4/14/09
DADDY’S GIRL
Kaeru no Ko wa Kaeru!

EPISODE ONE: Part I

EPISODE ONE: Part II
Theme Song: Rescue (KAT-TUN)


Scene IX.
Inside a Lamborghini, Ichikawa Nino is sitting beside Ryuutaro, 14, who is playing with a hamster. IchiNi looks annoyed at the rodent.

ICHINI: Son, what did I tell you about playing with that mouse when I’m around?

Ryuutaro does not look at him but continues playing.

RYUUTARO: He’s not a mouse. Hamster-san is a hamster.
ICHINI: (shakes his head) Whatever. If something happens to us because of that mouse, I don’t know what I will do with that.
RYUUTARO: Bahala ka.**

Ryuutaro looks at the hamster sadly but nevertheless continues to play. IchiNi is about to say something when his phone rings. His secretary, Tegoshi Yuuya, hands him his phone.

TEGOSHI: Ichikawa-sama. It’s your son. (hands him the phone)
ICHINI: Which one?
TEGOSHI: Kota-sama.

IchiNi takes the phone and answers it.

ICHINI: Hello? Kota.


Scene X.
Kaeru sleepily crosses the street.


Scene XI.
In the mansion’s dining room, the sons are wearing formal clothes. Kota is standing beside a window. Yuuya is drinking red wine, seated on a recaimer. Kei sits cross-legged in a wing chair, reading. Hikaru is playing scrabble with Yuto (a stupid scrabble game where there are no rules). Keito is helping the maid in preparing tea. Ryosuke is leaning forward against the window sill. Yuuri is setting the table in his cute, ruffly maid outfit.

KOTA: I see. (turns the phone off and turns around) They’re coming.

Everyone looks at him and smiles.

YUURI: (claps happily) I’m so excited!


Scene XII.
Inside the car, IchiNi returns the phone to his secretary. On the other hand, Hamster-san suddenly runs away from Ryuutaro’s hands.

RYUUTARO: Eh? Hamster-san? Where are you going?


Scene XIII.
Kaeru crosses the street, singing.

KAERU: I don’t wanna cry alone…
I don’t wanna cry alone…
Help me out, search my light
Please take me back home…


Scene XIV.
Ryuutaro, IchiNi, and Tegoshi are panicking as the hamster runs around. After some time, Hamster-san runs to the driver, Yokoyama, and crawls inside his pants.

YOKOYAMA: Uweeeh?! What’s this?!
RYUUTARO: Oh no.

The driver panics and doesn’t look at the road. From outside, the car swivels.


Scene XV.
From the window, Ryosuke looks out of the window and sees the car.

RYOSUKE: Huh? niisan…
KOTA: Why?
RYOSUKE: I wonder what’s happening there?

Everyone gathers around the window and looks out.

YUURI: Oh my God! What’s happening there? (puts a hand over his mouth, and another on his chest)
HIKARU: Wah! Is Charlie’s Angels shooting in front of our house?
KEI: That’s Otoo-sama with Ryuutaro.
YUTO: Eh? Oyaji and Ryuu-chan are in Charlie’s Angels? Suteki…
DAIKI: No, Yuto. They’re in an accident.
YUTO: Is that a new movie?
HIKARU: No. They might be dying now.
YUTO: Ehhh?
RYOSUKE: Seriously…


Scene XVI.
Kaeru crosses the street and sees the car.

KAERU: Huh?


Scene XVII.
Inside the car, everyone shouts when they see Kaeru in front of the car.


Scene XVIII.
Because of shock, Kaeru couldn’t even move. She gets bumped by the car. After a few moments, IchiNi gets out and runs to her.

ICHINI: Miss? Miss? Are you okay?


Scene XIX.
Individual shots of the boys.

YUUYA: (leans forward and smiles) Maa… maa… omoshiroii ne?
THE BOYS EXCEPT YUUYA AND RYUUTARO: Oh no. (in English)
RYUUTARO: We’re gonna have a new mother.
xXx


To be continued.

ANSWER TO LAST EPISODE'S QUESTION: Ichikawa Kota's secretary, Yamashita Tomohisa.
It can't be Ichikawa Nino because he was riding a Lamborghini. Hehe.



EPISODE ONE: Part III
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nyahahahaah....this is hilarious..
the NEWS members are really into secretary Roles, aren't they?
hahahah... oh my...Ryuu so kawaiii..
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