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Posted 4/14/09

shieLdembLem wrote:

nnaaahhh...
it's okei if Keito didn't have a scene here~~
'coz I'm still racking my brain on who da hell's Keito is repressing his feeling's to?!?!

and yesh~!
I am so gonna wait for every bit of info on Keito in here~!
*evil laugh*


haha! is that so?
you'd better prepare yourself then, hahahaha!

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DADDY’S GIRL
Kaeru no Ko wa Kaeru!

EPISODE ONE: Part II

EPISODE ONE: Part III
Theme Song: On My Mind (KAT-TUN)


Scene XX.
Kaeru opens her eyes and sees everything white. It’s already morning. She is in a room in the mansion. IchiNi is talking with the doctor on his phone. Hikaru is standing behind Yuuri, who is seated at the edge of the bed. They’re voices seem distant in Kaeru’s ear.

YUURI: Is she going to be alright, oniichama?
HIKARU: Don’t worry about that, she’s in our house after all.
YUURI: Oh my, I really hope she’s not going to die.
HIKARU: Yeah. She looks like she’s so tired of this life.
YUURI: You’re right. Look at those eyebags, and that skin. Do you think she takes a bath?
HIKARU: You can’t tell, ne?
KAERU: (voice over) Am I dead? Is this heaven? Why is everything so white? Where am I? What am I doing here?

Kaeru moves. Yuuri beams and claps his hands.

YUURI: She’s alive! Otoo-chama, look!

IchiNi walks up to the bed and looks at Kaeru. Hikaru smiles and holds Yuuri by the shoulders.

ICHINI: Are you feeling fine?
KAERU: (nods) Where am I?
YUURI: Oh my! Otoo-chama! Is it amnesia?
ICHINI: Amnesia?
HIKARU: You don’t know where you are?
KAERU: No. Where am I?
ICHINI: It is amnesia, after all.

Kaeru frowns.

KAERU: Amnesia?
YUURI: (holds her hand) Don’t worry, Kaeru-chan, we will take care of you until your memory comes back.
KAERU: My memory?
ICHINI: The doctor will be here in a while. You don’t have to worry.
KAERU: You called me Kaeru-chan…
YUURI: (nods) I’m sorry, but we looked at your ID. It seems that you lost your wallet in the accident.
KAERU: I did?
HIKARU: My, my… this is serious. You don’t remember who you are?
KAERU: Who I am?
YUURI: Shh, shh… now, now… that’s alright. You don’t have to force yourself.
KAERU: W-wait! (tries to stand up) You don’t understand…
ICHINI: It’s okay. We will take care of you. And we’re really sorry.
KAERU: I d-don’t understand. What happened to me?
HIKARU: You got bumped by our father’s car.
KAERU: I know that, but…
YUURI: And because of that, you lost your memory. We’re really sorry that this happened.
KAERU: No, you d-don’t…
ICHINI: Don’t worry, my son will apologize to you. And as we said we will take care of you until your memory comes back.
KAERU: But I don’t…
ICHINI: We’re really sorry. But, I have to go now.

Hikaru and Yuuri stand up.

ICHINI: Yuuri-chan, look after Kaeru-chan, okay?
YUURI: Yes, otoo-chama.
ICHINI: Hikaru, don’t cause any trouble.
HIKARU: Yes, sir!
ICHINI: Good. (to Kaeru) Please feel at home, Kaeru-chan. You will feel better if you’re here.
KAERU: H-huh…
ICHINI: I have to go ahead.
HIKARU: Ja, otoo-sama.
YUURI: Itterasshai, otoo-chama.
ICHINI: Ja.

IchiNi starts to walk out of the room. Kaeru looks confused at everything that’s happening.

KAERU: Wait!

IchiNi, Hikaru and Yuuri look at her.

KAERU: Uhm, I’m really sorry but I don’t…
YUURI: No, it’s okay, Kaeru-chan.
KAERU: No! Please listen. I don’t know what’s happening or what you’re thinking but, you see, I don’t…
HIKARU: Huh?
KAERU: I don’t have amnesia…
YUURI: Really? (genuinely happy) You recover fast, Kaeru-chan!
KAERU:Eh? (jaws drop in disbelief)


hehe!
it's just ichini, yuuri and hikaru...
hehehehe!!!
Posted 4/15/09
Nicely written ne Trixie nee~!!
Looking forward to part 4 :]
But I have this feeling that I know it already since I've read it na~ XDD
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Posted 4/15/09
*haha!*
LoLz~~

This is just plain crazy~~!!!
I felt like I'm gonna go insane when I read Chii & HIkaru's lines...
It feels so... err... Wacky?!

*haha!*
LoLz~!
XDD!
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gomen for just reading this now triccian chan!....

this is really soo hilarious!
most especially chinen's part!

oh yeah i forgot, i really laughed at the part
where kaeru was walking down the road and
she sung rescue!!!

it fits her mood.

good job!*thumbs up*
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this is really sooooooooooo hilarious!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i laugh all the time...
kyaa!! sugoi ne..triccian-san...

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hehe!!! there's no major changes though... so everything that's going to happen would stay, minus the mother parts!



wacky? hahahaha!!! i'm not gonna mention *that* term anymore...
hehe! thanks for reading!



thanks for reading! hehe,
rescue is really a good song, ne?
hehehe!!!



hahaha! thanks for reading it!!!
and thanks for laughing too!
please wait for the next part ne?
i can promise more of this... hahahaha!!!
Posted 4/15/09 , edited 9/6/09

triccian wrote:

hehe!!! there's no major changes though... so everything that's going to happen would stay, minus the mother parts!

Ooh >w<
So I guess I'll just be waiting for the next episode
*sits in the corner and waits*
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triccian wrote:



thanks for reading! hehe,
rescue is really a good song, ne?
hehehe!!!


no prob!..it is totally!
i got LSS from that song...
you've watched the pv of it right?
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Posted 4/16/09
let me be the one girl who loves Yabu Kota
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hahaha! thanks for reading it!!!
and thanks for laughing too!
please wait for the next part ne?
i can promise more of this... hahahaha!!!


nahh....i will wait for the next chappie....


ouch~!! can i also be the girl who loves inoo kei???????????
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Posted 4/18/09

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let me be the one girl who loves Yabu Kota


really?! sure!!! i'm so happy!

so.. what screen name would you like to use?
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Posted 4/19/09

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nahh....i will wait for the next chappie....


ouch~!! can i also be the girl who loves inoo kei???????????


hehehehe!!!
but there's no girl who loves kei yet...
but when i think about his story and there is... you're on, okay?
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DADDY’S GIRL
Kaeru no Ko wa Kaeru!

EPISODE ONE: Part III

EPISODE ONE: Part IV
Theme Song: Uruwashi no Bad Girl (Nakajima Yuto)


Scene XXI.
Ryosuke enters the room. Kota is calmly drinking tea. Yuuya talks with his girlfriends on his phones. Kei is busy doing something with his laptop. Daiki is drooling over men’s magazines. Keito is reading “Tea”. Yuto is busy tickling Ryuutaro, who is tied up and rotating on a giant hamster wheel. Ryosuke goes straight to the sofa.

KOTA: What are they doing there, Ryosuke?
RYOSUKE: Talking. (looks at Yuto) What are you doing?
YUTO: Tickling Ryuutaro. It’s fun, he keeps on laughing. You wanna try it?
RYOSUKE: Stop that.
YUTO: (puts down the feather and walks to Ryosuke) Where’s Yuuri-chan? I want to have tea.
KOTA: He’s with the girl.
YUTO: I see… Hikaru-niisan, too?
RYOSUKE: Seriously, do you even know what’s happening around? Are you stupid?
KEITO: Don’t say that, Ryosuke. That’s rude. Yuto is not stupid.
YUTO: Oh, Keito-chan! You’re my savior! Ryo-chan is so mean even though I love him so much! (wails, fountain of tears)
KEITO: Don’t cry. Please say sorry to Yuto, Ryosuke.
RYOSUKE: You’re so annoying. (listens to his iPod)
KEI: So, what exactly did you do, Ryuutaro?
RYUUTARO: I told you! Keisha-san jumped from my hand while we were playing! I didn’t know that they would freak out!
DAIKI: Anyone except you would be freaked out with that mouse.
RYUUTARO: She’s not a mouse.
DAIKI: (to Kei) Do you have newer issues?
KEI: In the biology books. Second shelf.

Daiki gets up and walks to the bookshelf. He gets the men’s magazines that are hidden inside biology book cases.

DAIKI: Sugoi. You’re a real genius, Kei.
KOTA: You caused a big problem, Ryuutaro.
RYUUTARO: But it’s not my fault!
KEI: Still, how many times were you told to dispose of your hamster?
DAIKI: Because of you…

The boys speak aloud, in cold, evil-like voices.

ICHIKAWA BOYS: We might have another sibling.
YUTO: (light bulb) Wait! Isn’t it good? Finally, we’re going to have a real girl sibling here!
KOTA: Huh?
YUTO: That’s right!
DAIKI: Huh?
YUTO: Ryuu-chan! You’re such a genius! Because of you, Yuuri-chan doesn’t have to play girl anymore. Come here, I’ll untie you.

Yuto runs to Ryuutaro and starts to untie him while upside down. Everyone looks at him, puzzled. Ryosuke removes his earphones and walks to him, stopping Yuto from what he’s doing. Yuto stops, leaving Ryuutaro rotating with one leg loose.

RYOSUKE: What do you think you’re doing?
YUTO: I’m freeing him. Because of him, we’re gonna have a new sibling.
KEITO: And you mean?
YUTO: I’m gonna tell oyaji to adopt her!

Yuto starts to run out, leaving Ryuutaro’s leg dangling. Daiki stops him.

DAIKI: What are you thinking, Yuto? Don’t you understand? This is not about otoo-sama adopting that girl.
YUTO: Why? Is she a bad girl?

A video clip of Kaeru as an ero-loli while whipping them as Nakajima Yuto’s “Uruwashi no Bad Girl” is playing in the background.

KOTA: We don’t know. But, otoo-sama will marry her.
YUTO: Marry her? But she’s so young! She’s looks even younger than Ryuu-chan!
KEI: That’s the problem. She’s young.
YUTO: You mean?
KOTA: (stands up and walks to Yuto) Imagine how we were all born.

Yuto starts to imagine.

KOTA: There’s Ichikawa Nino. Ultra-responsible.
YUUYA: Ultra-princely.
KEI: Ultra-intelligent.
DAIKI: Ultra-charming.
KEITO: Ultra-kind.
RYOSUKE: Ultra-perfect.

Scene XXII.
FLASHBACK (note: the babies must really look like how HSJ really looks like now, just imagine that they sort of shrunk). Young Ichini marries Yuuya’s mother. They go to honeymoon. After their first night, IchiNi sees a pretty chambermaid and falls in love with her. As the married couple leaves, the chambermaid cries. His wife shows him a positive pregnancy-test kit. To celebrate, he goes to a bar with friends and sees the woman with those dark eyes. He meets a fan girl and falls in love with her. Months later, the chambermaid shows up before him and hands him a child. While she walks away, she is hit by a truck. Baby Yuuya is born. His wife dies of childbirth. To celebrate his son’s birth, he goes to bar and sees the dark-eyed lady there. She hands him Baby Kei and while she is walking to the dancefloor, she is hit on the head by a man in a rumble with a bottle and dies. He watches the three babies in his nursery. The doorman comes and calls him. He goes to the door and the fan girl from a year ago holds a baby. He points to his nose. The fan girl nods and leaves Baby Daiki to him. She rides a bus. That night, he watches the news and finds out that the fan girl dies in an accident. She meets another girl and marries her. Soon, his second wife is pregnant. Because his second wife is very religious, he looks for another girl and finds a showbiz star. After that escapade, he goes to a pachinko and sees a cute girl. He falls in love again. After that, he goes to a maid cafe and sees Youkou Chinen, Yuuri’s mother. A few months later, the babies grow up and they wait in a hospital with their father. The doctor comes out with the baby and shakes his head. During the funeral of Keito’s mother, he sees the showbiz girl with a baby. He tries to get Baby Ryosuke from her but she refuses. It rains and the woman is hit by a lightning and dies. IchiNi goes to a pachinko house and sees Baby Yuto on a bench. He takes the baby and the pachinko girl sees him. The girl nods, and just then, the pachinko falls on her and she dies. He goes home. He looks for the maid cafe and finds her without work. He takes her and she gives birth to another son, Yuuri. She doesn’t die immediately. Twelve years later, a gusgusin little boy (Ryuutaro)who looks so much like him stands in front of the mansion with a letter from a certain Mao Morimoto. Youkou Chinen dies of heart attack. At first he would not believe that he is his son and tries to send him away. But the kind Yuto gets him inside and plays with him. Finally, he decides to send little Ryuutaro to have a DNA test and proves that he is another son. Finally, he blesses him.


Scene XXIII.
Back to Scene XXII.

KOTA: You see, Yuto, why what Ryuutaro did is a bad thing?
YUTO: Ryuu-chan!!! Onore!!! (attacks Ryuutaro)
RYUUTARO: I’m sorry! I’m sorry!
YUUYA: Shut up! (to his phone) Oh, not you, Haru-chan. You know how much I love hearing your sweet voice. Where were we?
KEITO: Yuto, stop! Stop! Stop hurting Ryuutaro.
YUTO: Why, Keito-chan? You want to have another sibling?
KEITO: No.
KOTA: I hope you now understand why we shouldn’t tolerate this kind of thing happening. Otoo-sama cannot possibly fall in love with that girl.
YUTO: Yes, sir! I understand. It’s all Ryuu-chan’s fault.
RYUUTARO: Inay…
DAIKI: They’re such little boys. (to the girl in the magazine) Nice pose there, Rika.
KEI: Kawaii da ne. (not sure if he pertains to the model, his brothers, or something else)

Hikaru enters as Yuto continues attacking Ryuutaro. Keito is trying to stop him but he won’t be stopped.

HIKARU: Did I miss anything?
KOTA: You’re back.
YUTO: Aniki! (runs to Hikaru) Tell me, is oyaji really marrying that girl?
HIKARU: Huh? What are you talking about? (walks to the table and starts eating a gingerbread) Whoa! This is good! Did Yuuri make these?
KEI: Where’s Yuuri?
HIKARU: (with his mouth full) With Kaeru-chan. They’re already close.
DAIKI: Oh, so she’s trying to be our mother now?
HIKARU: Huh?
YUUYA: How could anyone who could pass as his daughter be his wife anyway?
KEI: Knowing otoo-sama, it’s not impossible.
KOTA: Not impossible.
HIKARU: What are you guys saying? (notices Ryuutaro for the first time) Is that our brother? Are you killing Ryuutaro again?

One of Ryuutaro’s legs is dangling as the wheel rotates due to Yuto’s prior untying of it.

YUTO: Waaah!!! I forgot! I’m sorry, Ryuu-chan! (he runs to Ryuutaro and ties his leg again)
RYOSUKE: (shakes his head) I’ll go play soccer.
YUTO: I’ll go with Ryo-chan! Keito-chan, are you coming with us?
KEITO: Can I?
YUTO: Of course! Ryo-chan won’t mind. Let’s go! Let’s go! Soccer! Let’s go!

Yuto hooks Ryosuke and Keito with his arms and drags them out of the room.

HIKARU: Seriously… Ah! Torebien (tres bien)!
KOTA: I wonder if we can do anything.
HIKARU: With what?
KOTA: Ah, nothing. Our stocks fell by 5% last week because of certain circumstances. (looks at Yuuya)
YUUYA: What?
KEI: (closes the lid of his laptop and stands up) I’ll just go to my room.
HIKARU: Huh? But you don’t have a room. We all sleep here.
KEI: Uhm, yeah. But… (clears his throat) I have one now.

Kei starts to leave.

DAIKI: I’ll… go… see a movie.
HIKARU: Oh, I’ll come with you.
DAIKI: Oh, no. I’d like to see it alone.
KOTA: (to himself) Yappari. I have to do something.
YUUYA: (to himself) Otoo-sama’s charms should have faded. It’s my turn now.
KEI: (to himself) This could be a good experiment.
DAIKI: (to himself) I’m getting myself a girlfriend.
HIKARU: (looks at a gingerbread) This is really good. I’ll have some more.

Hikaru leaves for the kitchen. Kota goes to the home office. Yuuya, Kei and Daiki also leave.

RYUUTARO: As usual, they forgot about me.

xXx

To be continued.

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kinawawa mo si ryuutaro triccian...
ni hindi sya nagaglusan sa fic kop tapos dito???
hahahaha....Inay!!
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