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Tear Out Your Heart Please
Posted 4/9/09 , edited 5/7/09
"My head layed on his shoulder...



but his mind was focused on my neck. . ."








[ Chapter 01: ]
*pant pant* "Your going to kill me." I admitted selflessly, my voice sounded accepting, but it was breaking. "Myora. Myora." He said quietly amused, pointing his stained blood sword toward me. I eyed him emotionlessly. "Go ahead, DO IT." I commanded strongly, placing my hand to my broken heart. *Giggle*. . . "As you wish." My blood stained beautiful black hair flowed in the brisk wind. "I'm ready!! KILL ME!" I stood my ground independently. But then lost my balance, as I collapsed to the floor. Blood flowing out of my body, my hair sinking in it. [Whoaa..o_O *points @ pic of Myora,, picture matches the description i just made} My pale smooth face was gentle, even in death. My hand still remained to my heart, and a lock of my hair entered my mouth. I could almost taste it. Seems like, he used his invisible strike move on me. There was no time to react, a mere second, and I, am dead. I'm not supposed to feel any sort of pain...I am dead. And yet, I feel a terrible aching in my heart...the sun ray from the sun shined on my pale white skin, my eyes twitched for awhile before I opened my eyes weakly...I saw...red...red...blood! Everywhere I looked; there it was in front of me, more and more blood! "Why...aren't I...dead?" I said successfully enough, my voice felt very weak and damaged, when I spoke my throat hurt badly.

I felt as if my whole body was stone, and it felt so heavy...I couldn't...I couldn't comprehend this, but my heart stopped beating...and my eyes are opened wide...I'm not breathing...but, my eyes are open...? I don't feel my heart beat...I don't hear it beat inside of me...! I panicked, naturally. Feeling a cold wet cloth touch my cheek. I looked to the direction of the figure sitting by me, shaking it's hand as it tried to clean my cheek off with the cloth. "Who..." I tried to finish what I was going to say, but, I decided it was best to not ask any questions, he was helping me that was good enough. Shh. Sleep. He calmly said, I rushed to close my eyes, the cloth seemed to put me to instant sleep, the last thing I saw before I closed my eyes was indeed, his conceiving smile* It was dark now, and my heart ached every time I would exist in this world, If I am in hell, than that proves all this pain. If I would be in heaven, I would forget all my pain...isn't that how it should be? I felt like I was sleeping for years, but after I awoken I felt so much better...I tried moving my hand, and then the rest of my body, just to sit up at least. I was sleeping...on a comfy white bed. Where was I?

I looked out the window and saw a long tree reaching as high as the roof, it was pointy and looked wicked. It was dusk outside...I was caught off guard again when the door in the room opened.
There had walked in a boy, about my age, with short white hair and golden eyes. I felt a breeze in the room now. "Don't say anything." He whispered under his breath. Confusion was now piling up in my mind, I thought instead of talked. I looked at him with big, tender looking eyes. "You shouldn't talk, because your voice will hurt right..?" He whispered picking up a dry cloth. I nodded my head agreeing with a half smile. Watching him soak the dried cloth in a bucket of water...there had seemed to be two buckets, one of them was full of...my blood. Or so it seemed like...now he came closer to my face as he pushed down my body onto the bed, he placed the cold and wet cloth on top of my forehead...at first it was way too close for comfort, but then the cloth became dried so it was fine. I wanted to say my appreciations, but I knew I should just lie down and rest...I felt heart ache...again. Why was it coming back again? I don't understand what's wrong with me...chills were entering my body...and as I remembered, they started as he walked into the room. "I'll tell you something I think you should know." He said striking me surprised, I listened to him as I lost my train of thought.

"You were dying...luckily I stumbled upon you, and saved you. You were about 5 to 10 minutes from death." He said with a troubled look, his face became pale, like mine. "Why didn't you just leave me to die...!?" I shouted out, forcefully taking my head off my pillow, staring at him, unable to keep quite any longer. He looked surprised. "Quite!" My head fell down sadly, his voice was intentionally caring, despite his loud and daring voice. And that surprised me as well. "You should of...left this girl to die..." I said wearily afraid to speak loudly again. "Now, why would I do that?" He attempted to touch my cheek, but I hesitated and moved my head back. "Because...Death is easy...Life is hard..." I said narrowing my eyes to his gentle looking expression. "You don't have to be afraid." He replied, smiling strangely. "If you lived the life I had lived, you would understand." I answered, moving a strand of hair from covering up my eyes. "Your still living your life..." He corrected my grammar, closing his eyes and smiling.

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[ Chapter 02: ]
I looked back at him, slowly but carefully. "What happened back there anyway? Mind explaining that much to me?" He asks. I pause for a second or two. But I actually couldn't quite understand myself what I was thinking back there...Then I remembered. "Ah, it seems that you've lost your memory...a bit?" He notes, wrong anyway. "No....I remember now...I didn't want to feel this terrible ache in my heart any longer..." I said, feeling a bit of it right now. "What is the reason for this heart ache of yours?" He asks, quite interested. I groaned painfully and collapsed on the bed. "Too many questions...I get it." He whispered, that was the last thing I heard. I struggled to survive, for that one reason...and since I'm still alive thanks to this man, I'll kill Kent...and then myself. I vowed that to myself, no, promised. I dreamt of death. Remorse...and Revenge. Wake up...

A voice whispered inside my head, or from the real world? I took a while to regain contentiousness and re-open my eyes. Wake up...Wake up...now is your chance, FOR REVENGE!! I opened my eyes strongly to Revenge. That was all I needed...to keep me going...My eyes turned a dark red color, I was running...running away somewhere...was all this inside my mind...? Where was that nice man who saved me...? I was still running...but, where? It's like...I saw myself...running...but...I couldn't control myself at all, I had no self control. "KENT!!!!" I shouted in a battle cry, charging at him with fists alone. My eyes still bloody red. "DIE!!" I threw my fist up in the air, clutching my teeth together, I missed a direct hit, and he appeared behind me. The edge of his teeth grazed my flesh, a shiver arched through me. "Just tear out that broken heart of yours...it'll do us all a favor." He said in a whisper, as shivers still crawled onto my skin, I most likely had goosebumps. "Shut up!" His teeth bit into my flesh, and his hunger didn't seem to satisfy him, or was it my blood? He threw me to the floor after his bite. Just like a piece of thrash...He set his foot on top of my stomach...and I layed on the floor...just like before when I thought I would die...He chuckled. Then someone appeared behind him, his eyes stayed on my pale white face, as he stood still, with a shiny blade across his neck..."Get the hell away from her." This persons voice was very strong and straightforward. He increased the pressure to Kent's neck...I chocked my words as I tried to say them out loud, "No...! Don't kill him...I'll be the one doing the killing..." I tried standing up, clumsy of course. My legs shook so bad. I've thought of a way to kill Kent...the idea came to me in a dream actually..."Do it." Said the man.

I smiled for a second. Pleasuring this moment. . .



In the end, all I wanted was someone to acknowledge me, not to use me as a tool...Kent...had used me...I needed to get back at him in some way.

I gave him a slow, but painful death. The man who had rescued me, had become my future husband. I grew happier, day by day. A thought about Kent never occurred in my mind, not even once. I've never really had any real time to learn more about Kent...he was a vampire after all...But, so was my husband...and I was okay with that, I wanted to be with him for the rest of my life...I was seduced by darkness at first...which was Kent. I would live in darkness, but would have eternal life...Kent had bit me, so I am living eternally now. With my husband...I wouldn't say it was a happy ending...more like twisted sounds better. And who knows what will come next in our life? I rested assured, waking up too see my husbands face every morning. . . and when our deaths came. . . I would still rest assured. . .










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