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uhmm... this fic is made out of love... (it's because I was so touched when I attended a wedding)
that is why I took advantage of my emotional weakness and created this~!
*wootz!*
I hope all of you would like this~~

and yeah, I know, I totally fail writing.. *sniff sniff*
*smacks head on the wall*


Legend:
blue- Nakayama Yuma
red- Midori Kaoru
purple- conversation
italicized- lyrics

The song's called First Time by Lifehouse~~
please do listen to it 'coz it adds to the effect of the story




We're both looking for something
that we've been afraid to find
It's easier to be broken
It's easier to hide


awhile in their teenage years... (15 years old)


Smile beneath the wings of your lips, I part them within my own. The shine of your face under the enlightened candle, how far can our love go? I cannot say so, but I know, that everything's gonna be alright as long as I have you by my side. This is our 1st anniversary as a couple, and here we are, under the moonlit sky. You're skin touching mine, a friction between two lovers in an unknown world.


~ne ~ne... do you know, that whenever I see your shining eyes, the stars above us does not compare how much they shimmer. Nothing is certain whenever you're here by my side. The world has stood its place, it stopped for the reason to watch over us... I've fallen too deep into your embrace. Living in the world of celebrities, I know how much stress you've been burdened. That is why I am here to always take care of you, to give you all myself, to face your fears along with me. I may not be as much as others think, but I would always be there wherever you want me to be.
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Looking at you,holding my breath,
For once in my life,I'm scared to death,
I'm taking a chance,letting you inside.
I'm feeling alive all over again,
As deep as the sky, under my skin

>>...~~+~~...<<

Kaoru: yo Kuma!!! *pats Yuma on the back*
Yuma: sheeesh... it's YUMA, not Kuma...
Kaoru: *hehe* demo, Kuma is better! you look like a cute little teddy BEAR... *giggles*
Yuma: ba-ka... now I really do feel like a bear.. *turns a cold shoulder*
Kaoru: eh?! *pouts* I don't like it when you give me a cold shoulder..
Yuma: then suffer from it! *creases forehead*
Kaoru: *smiles* I know! *hugs Yuma from the back* there... now, can you feel my warmth??
Yuma: *smiles to himself* Un~ I can feel your heart beating too.. *turns her around*
Kaoru: *completely dazzled but confused* your face is too close, Yuma... *blushes*
Yuma: *sly smile* there, remember that name after this.. *kisses her*


Like being in love, she says
For the first time
Well maybe I'm wrong,
But I'm feeling right where I belong
With you tonight
Like being in love
can feel for the first time

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10 years later... (25 years old)


hey, do you know, I've been waiting for a long time to say this to you. I wouldn't mind renting a whole restaurant full of roses, scented candles, harmonic melodies and everything that you could set up for a romantic evening. But this isn't just a normal romantic evening, it's where and when I would ask the most important question of my life. And now, I'm here right in front of you, kneeling, just to be with you for the rest of my life...

I let tears fall... and NO, it's not because Yuma broke my heart, rather, he made me whole... God knows how much I've been waiting for him to ask me this simple question. All these fancy decorations and fancy red ribbons for just one simple question.

The world that I see inside you
Waiting to come to life
Waking me up to dreaming
Reality in your eyes

>>...~~+~~...<<

Yuma: Kaoru, we've known each other for so many years. And damn, God knows how much we've done each other to let our relationship alive and in full blossom. And here, I think it's time for us to build something much more than this...
Kaoru: *eyes misty* Yuma... *puffed cheeks*
Yuma: anou~~ 'ya know.. 10 years were really long to wait for this kind of time, but, I wouldn't mind to make it longer, as long as I have you by my side... Midori Kaoru, I love you so much, with all my life and with all my soul... WILL YOU PLEASE MARRY ME??
Kaoru: *hugs Yuma* Y-yes... YES!!! *kisses Yuma*
Yuma: I promise you, I will always cherish moments with you...*stares deeply into Kaoru's eyes*
Kaoru: wakatta... *stares longingly into Yuma's face*


Looking at you,
Holding my breath,
For once in my life
I'm scared to death,
I'm taking a chance,
Letting you inside.

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Kami-sama, please guide us both from now on... Please give us strength to fight for what we want... Because now, it's my wedding day! Damn... I never felt so nervous like this before... I have done so many concerts and drama and interviews and yet, this is the most nerve-racking for me. I feel like I'm gonna explode anytime now.. and now, I hear distant "oohs" and "aahs" from the crowd. I looked up to where they were looking. Then, I saw the most beautiful human angel, it was the bride, MY bride...


I saw you gleam under the sun-shined altar, you're just there, waiting for me...Like a white knight in shining armor, I smile gleefully at the thought that after our wedding vows, I'm Mrs. Nakayama Yuma... My heart thumps wildly just at the sound of it..

I'm feeling alive all over again
As deep as the sky under my skin
Like being in love, she said, for the first time
Maybe I'm wrong, I'm feeling right
where I belong with you tonight
Like being in love to feel for the first time

>>...~~+~~...<<

Priest: "Do you,Nakayama Yuma, take Midori Kaoru, to be your lawful, caring and gentle wife?"
Yuma: I do..

Kaoru: your deep voice echoes in me...

Priest: "Do you, Midori Kaoru, take Nakayama Yuma, to be your lawful, loving and trusting husband?"
Kaoru: I do...

Yuma: your shrill voice keeps resounding in my ears...


We're crashing
Into the unknown
We're lost in this
But it feels like home

both Yuma and Kaoru:

"I, Yuma/Kaoru,
Take you, Kaoru/Yuma,
To be none other than yourself.
I promise to stand by your side;
To encourage you, and be open and honest with you;
To laugh with you, and cry with you;
To always love and honor you;
Both freed and bound by our love,
For as long as we both shall live."

And with our vows taken, I took out your veil, revealing the loveliest girl I have ever made myself committed to... I kissed her like I've never kissed her before, and no,it doesn't end here, this is just the beginning..

With your sun-streaked face beneath the cathedral windows, you kissed me as if it's our first time...I felt tears streaming down my face, it trickled as it passes down our met lips...so this is what they call "Tears of Joy". Surely this moment is the best thing that has ever happened to a girl in her lifetime..


I'm feeling alive all over again
As deep as the sky under my skin
Like being in love, she said, for the first time
Maybe I'm wrong, I'm feeling right
where I belong with you tonight
Like being in love can feel for the first time

Like being in love she said for the first time
Like being in love can feel for the first time

“From this day on, to live with you and laugh with you; to stand by your side, and sleep in your arms; to be joy to your heart, and food for your soul; to bring out the best in you always, and, for you, to be the most that I can. I promise to laugh with you in good times, to struggle with you in bad; to solace you when you are downhearted; to wipe your tears with my hands; to comfort you with my body; to mirror you with my soul; to share with you all my riches and honors; to play with you as much as I can until we grow old; and, still loving each other sweetly and gladly, our lives shall come to an end.”

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Life has taught us that love does not consist in gazing at each other,
but in looking outward together in the same direction.
~Antoine de Saint-Exupery
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kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!
huhuh
i LOVE it!!!
huhuhuhu!
Yuma ish Very SweeeeeT here!!!!
huhuhu!
i love it!
wiii first to read! =P

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Ohh yeah!
that author,
we have a story of him in our book!
hahaha!
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waah sheito chan! this is soo passionate and soo romantic!

excellent job from my sheito chan~!
and hey...you didn't fail wrting this!
think of the positive side!

once again, ths oneshot of yours is wonderful
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deen22 wrote:

kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!
huhuh
i LOVE it!!!
huhuhuhu!
Yuma ish Very SweeeeeT here!!!!
huhuhu!
i love it!
wiii first to read! =P

Added:

Ohh yeah!
that author,
we have a story of him in our book!
hahaha!


*woohoo!*

yesh, you are the first to read~~
XDD!
thanx for loving it ~ne...
Antoine was the writer of the book called "The Little Prince"...
I love the author that's why I've put a quote from him in here~~



Geh-san wrote:

waah sheito chan! this is soo passionate and soo romantic!

excellent job from my sheito chan~!
and hey...you didn't fail wrting this!
think of the positive side!

once again, ths oneshot of yours is wonderful


*yehey!*
Yaji-chan~! *hugz ya*
~ne ~ne, is it really that passionate and romantic??
*sniff sniff*
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Posted 4/15/09 , edited 4/15/09
shie-chan!!!
you made me so happy!
i wanna get married now...
i'm really so happy
it's so beautiful!

cheers!


Life has taught us that love does not consist in gazing at each other,
but in looking outward together in the same direction. ~Antoine de Saint-Exupery


^my former SO once told me that --- i hated it eventually, and loved it again because of you!

*cries and wails*
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hehe..i read this last night but wasn't able to comment
cause I'm on a rush..

we really should meet in person, shie-chan..
enlighten me more!!!nyahaha...
this one-shot rox!!
you're really good at turning simple events to
extravagant moments...thumb up!!

if i could only do toes up, i will! for this...hehe
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triccian wrote:

shie-chan!!!
you made me so happy!
i wanna get married now...
i'm really so happy
it's so beautiful!

cheers!


Life has taught us that love does not consist in gazing at each other,
but in looking outward together in the same direction. ~Antoine de Saint-Exupery


^my former SO once told me that --- i hated it eventually, and loved it again because of you!

*cries and wails*


*haha!*
you wanna get married already~?!
*haha!*
LoLz~
well thanx for appreciating my OS fic~~
and loving the Antoine quote too~!
YATTA!


blood_15 wrote:

hehe..i read this last night but wasn't able to comment
cause I'm on a rush..

we really should meet in person, shie-chan..
enlighten me more!!!nyahaha...
this one-shot rox!!
you're really good at turning simple events to
extravagant moments...thumb up!!

if i could only do toes up, i will! for this...hehe


really?!

wanna meet me in person?!
*haha!*
I think you would be turned-insane once you get to know me... XDD!
LoLz~!
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shieLdembLem wrote:

*haha!*
you wanna get married already~?!
*haha!*
LoLz~
well thanx for appreciating my OS fic~~
and loving the Antoine quote too~!
YATTA!

yup! yup! it's because of you!
hehehehe!
i love it so much!!
hehehehehe!!!

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triccian wrote:

yup! yup! it's because of you!
hehehehe!
i love it so much!!
hehehehehe!!!



great thanks for loving it~!
*hehe*
demo, I still think it's a bit of a fail... (>__<)~!
because it's too short...
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shieLdembLem wrote:


Geh-san wrote:

waah sheito chan! this is soo passionate and soo romantic!

excellent job from my sheito chan~!
and hey...you didn't fail wrting this!
think of the positive side!

once again, ths oneshot of yours is wonderful


*yehey!*
Yaji-chan~! *hugz ya*
~ne ~ne, is it really that passionate and romantic??
*sniff sniff*


*hugs ya back*...yea it is sheito chan!
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kyaaaaaaaaa !!!!!!!!
I love it .
gomen for reading just only now
I lurrvee yuma !!
arigatou for making this fic *bows*
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iluvnews wrote:

kyaaaaaaaaa !!!!!!!!
I love it .
gomen for reading just only now
I lurrvee yuma !!
arigatou for making this fic *bows*


arigatou for reading it too~!
*hehe*
and ThanX for LoVing YuMa too~!
~kyaa!
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iluvnews wrote:

kyaaaaaaaaa !!!!!!!!
I love it .
gomen for reading just only now
I lurrvee yuma !!
arigatou for making this fic *bows*


arigatou for reading it too~!
*hehe*
and ThanX for LoVing YuMa too~!
~kyaa!


kyaaa !!!!! I made the first ever Yuma group here in CR
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shieLdembLem wrote:

arigatou for reading it too~!
*hehe*
and ThanX for LoVing YuMa too~!
~kyaa!


you don't have to thank me Shie-chan <-- [et-to can I call you that?]

kyaa!! your fic is waaaaaaaaaay as in way cooler than mine .

ne, you can read it and see for yourself
the title is Bench-chan xD
the title is sooo lame
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