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Posted 12/22/07
Such a simple word
With such a deep meaning
Like a double edged sword
It is the reason for our being

It captivates the heart
And blinds us from the truth
It strikes us like a dart
Especially us who are the youth

It makes us feel glad
With it’s simple joys
Yet is can make us sad
And revert us back to lost girls and boys

It strike us when we least expect it
And takes us for a ride
The fire in our hearts are lit
A flame that can survive any tide

It can last for eternity
Or even just a day
It keeps us from normality
In what we do or say

It seems almost like magic
A trick that not many know
Yet it can all turn tragic
Landing a deadly blow

Yes, Such a simple word
Able to send us soaring like a dove
Yet so wounding like a sword
So this is what they call love

This is a poem I wrote so what do u think?
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Posted 12/23/07
wo0o0o0o0 i love it imouto~chan!!
you are really good in this...
Posted 12/24/07
hey! I love this poem very much! i dont noe why but i just love it.!!! haha... nice!! lol...!
Posted 12/24/07

LeSLy77 wrote:

wo0o0o0o0 i love it imouto~chan!!
you are really good in this...


Thanx onee-chan X3....this is like the first poem I wrote in 2 years..
Posted 12/24/07

Ripcurl0527 wrote:

hey! I love this poem very much! i dont noe why but i just love it.!!! haha... nice!! lol...!


thanx X3, Glad to hear you like it
Posted 12/24/07
haha.. well...i dont like it ...i LOVE it..! hahahaha...! keep it up! lol..xD
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Posted 12/27/07
Ack!!! It's sooo good! No, it's amazing!!! You have a really good talent! You could make lyrics from poems too, you know ^^
Posted 12/27/07

moonwarrior485 wrote:

Ack!!! It's sooo good! No, it's amazing!!! You have a really good talent! You could make lyrics from poems too, you know ^^


To be honest I never knew that..I always kinda wondered how they came up with lyrics to songs it always seemed so hard to me...besides with my singing voice I considered that as a possibility :sweatingbullets:
Thanx for the review X3
Posted 12/28/07
deep....I love it!!
Posted 12/28/07

Rinako-chan wrote:

deep....I love it!!


thanx glad u liked it
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Posted 1/19/08
It's really nice how it's like....GOD I can't even explain it!!! XD But trust me it's VERY good!
Posted 1/20/08

crazyone wrote:

It's really nice how it's like....GOD I can't even explain it!!! XD But trust me it's VERY good!


thanx X3
Posted 2/11/08

OrangeStarGurl wrote:

itz ok i think
is it a free verse or is it just a poem...


just a poem although some lines don't fit as well as others
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Posted 2/15/08
CONGRATULATIONS!!!...it's so beautiful!!!...u have future in this...:D
Posted 2/16/08

david_k_belanova wrote:

CONGRATULATIONS!!!...it's so beautiful!!!...u have future in this...:D


thanx XD
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